DericeRt wrote:

Rankedなるの楽しみに待ってるで

DericeRt wrote:

Rankedなるの楽しみに待ってるで

akrolsmir wrote:

(I'm here from my queue at the request of mochi.)
Nice, addictive song. Where can I get the full version xD?

AIBat Warnings

These warnings were generated by AIBat v1.0, based on the current ranking guidelines and rules. Some things (like breaks and spinners) can be ignored, but just know that it's generally bad practice.

[All .osu Files]
Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:172, ends on 03:30:009

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:496, ends on 03:30:009

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:496, ends on 03:30:009

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:172, ends on 03:30:009

[Difficulty: Easy]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:090)
01:04:361 (snap to 01:04:388)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:685)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:442)
02:08:091 (snap to 02:07:955)
02:23:983 (snap to 02:23:847)
02:24:631 (snap to 02:24:496)

[Difficulty: Hard]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:35:819 (snap to 00:35:847)
00:58:037 (snap to 00:58:063)
00:59:010 (snap to 00:59:036)
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:253)
01:04:191 (snap to 01:04:226)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:847)
01:36:956 (snap to 01:36:982)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:604)
02:00:307 (snap to 02:00:334)
02:01:279 (snap to 02:01:307)
02:05:496 (snap to 02:05:523)
02:06:469 (snap to 02:06:496)
02:23:983 (snap to 02:24:009)
02:24:631 (snap to 02:24:658)

[Difficulty: Insane]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:12:792 (snap to 00:12:820)
00:13:441 (snap to 00:13:469)
00:34:361 (snap to 00:34:388)
00:36:307 (snap to 00:36:334)
00:58:037 (snap to 00:58:063)
00:59:010 (snap to 00:59:036)
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:253)
01:04:191 (snap to 01:04:226)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:847)
01:36:956 (snap to 01:36:982)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:604)
02:00:307 (snap to 02:00:334)
02:01:279 (snap to 02:01:307)
02:05:496 (snap to 02:05:523)
02:06:469 (snap to 02:06:496)
02:08:091 (snap to 02:08:117)
02:23:983 (snap to 02:24:009)
02:24:631 (snap to 02:24:658)
02:51:062 (snap to 02:51:090)
03:08:902 (snap to 03:08:928)
03:27:226 (snap to 03:27:253)
03:27:875 (snap to 03:27:901)

Breaks:
Consider adding a break before 01:55:031.

Spinner Length:
00:51:090 (1) - This spinner is 649 ms long, which is shorter than 750 ms; check that it gets at least 2000 on auto.

[Difficulty: Normal]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:253)
01:04:361 (snap to 01:04:388)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:847)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:604)
02:08:091 (snap to 02:08:117)

Nothing really to worry about. You might want to sync up kiai times across all diffs, but that's up to you.

[Easy]
00:30:982 (1) - You could get this to wrap around (2) better by moving the center node down 3 grids, the last node left 3 grids, and then the whole thing right 3 grids.
00:34:874 (5) - Make it repeat one more time, so you have something filling up the long white tick?
00:41:361 (1) - Line this up with (5)?
01:04:712 (1) - Not NC for consistency with previous combos
02:01:793 (4) - Again, line this up with (3)? Or move the whole pattern up so it doesn't feel like they were supposed to be aligned.
02:06:982 (4) - Down 2 grids for a symmetric pattern
02:56:280 (1) - Make this symmetric by moving the last node 3 grids right. Then copy+paste for the next slider as well.

Cleanly mapped, the placement and timing of notes made intuitive sense, which is good.

[Normal]
00:10:550 (2) - This curve is a bit too sharp, just use a copy of (3).
00:36:820 (2,3) - Might want to space this out a bit more. Nazi, I know, but it happened to catch my attention.
00:45:253 (8) - Try and make long sliders like this symmetric- see viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
00:47:847 (4) - Move the center node 2 grids right, 1 grid up so it wraps better.
00:52:388 (2) - ^, except 2 grids left, 1 grid up.
00:56:928 (1) - Again, try to make this symmetric. It's not because the last node extends past the end of the slider.
01:18:009 (2) - Looks a bit sharp, flatten the angle and try making it symmetric.
01:22:874 (1) - Line this up with 10
01:39:739 (3) - I caution against curved sliders in an L-shape because they look too sharp; try remaking with 4 or more nodes
02:59:523 (8) - 1 grid right so it's equal between (7,8)
03:26:766 (8) - Adjust so it forms a rhombus pattern? Like:

Or move (6,7,8) all up so that (5,6,7,8) makes a symmetric zig-zag pattern.
03:31:144 (3) - This note feels out of place, delete it?

[Hard]
Even though this is a hard, you should still try and keep distance spacing the same within the same sections of the song. Otherwise the map plays quite confusingly. I'd rework this with a few set distance spacing (i.e. 0.8x for refrain, 1.2x for slowdowns, 1.5x for kiai or something like that) and try and keep to that, because right now it plays awkwardly with the different distance spacing.

00:25:631 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this is the best way to start a new section; I kept on failing to hit these notes at the right time because there wasn't a strong musical cue to tell me where they started. Perhaps replace with a repeating short slider.
00:27:415 (7,8,9) - Space these out evenly
00:56:928 (1) - If you're going to do the whole "slow down" thing for this section, space the notes closer.
01:19:793 (1,2) - I'd delete these notes. Yes, I can here the roll that justifies them, but at the same time the section from 01:18:334 (4) - to 01:22:226 (12) - feels tiresome because of a lack of short breaks.
01:37:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about a star pattern instead?

I'd break up these next few combos, because they're kind of long (going almost to 20), and it's more consistent with previous combos if you put them every 2 measures (8 beats). So new combos here:
01:41:036 (10) -
01:45:901 (6) -
01:51:415 (10) -
And so on.

01:59:523 (1) - This is the example of the kind of spacing you should have had at 00:56:928 (1) -
02:45:577 (1) - The NC should go on the next note, not this one.
02:59:361 (8) - 1 grid right for better spacing
03:09:253 (1) to the end- I really like the way these were mapped, simply using straight and horizontal sliders but making them flow very well. Good job!

[Insane]
Same note about using consistent spacing that I made with Hard.
A lot of the triples and streams seem thrown in at unexpected places- you don't need or want most of them.

00:12:334 (9,10) - Just because this is Insane doesn't mean you have to put in triples where they don't fit. It's nonsensically overmapped here, just remove these two.
00:13:793 (1,2) - Make these symmetric?
00:34:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels like too much of a spike in difficulty level all of a sudden. What with the 6.02x spacing and the spaced out streams. At the least, I"d delete 00:35:604 (2,3,4) because they don't actually fit the music.
00:48:334 (6,7,8,9,10) - Good idea, but perhaps space it closer, like 2.0x
01:48:658 (1,2) - Doesn't give enough time after the spinner, just remove these.
02:19:307 (1,2) - These are too loud, tone down the volume to fit in with the rest of the notes
Actually, the same holds true for the soft custom set 2 in general; the finish is too loud. Perhaps reduce the volume of the .wav file. See also:
03:09:253 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - , 03:11:847 (11) - 03:27:415 (1,2) -

In general:

Don't be afraid to use copy+paste to make notes that are supposed to be identical, identical.
Also, you might want to shy away from patterns that are just squares on easier diffs, because they can get repetitive/ too predictable.
Overall, I think you have a good sense of how to map, so just keep on working on making creative and fun patterns like the end of Hard. Starred!

val0108 wrote:

req mod


[Easy]
00:36:172 - add note?
01:39:090 (4) - new combo
01:47:847 (8) - delete
02:55:631 (6) - シフト押しながら真上に配置して下さい

[Normal]
00:11:847 (4) - ２のスライダーに重なってるので重ならないように置いてください。
00:15:415 (1) - 他の難易度と終わりをあわせてください。
00:54:009 (5) - new combo
01:25:144 (7) - ^
02:22:226 (6) - ^
03:30:334 (2,3,4) - spacing

[Hard]
00:06:334 (5,6) - シフト押しながら真横に配置してください。
01:05:847 - add note
01:13:793 (6) - new combo
01:15:090 (12) - new combo
01:27:901 (1) - spin start 01:28:063 -
01:41:036 (10) - new combo
01:45:901 (6) - ^
01:51:415 (10) - ^
02:01:793 (7) - ^
02:26:604 (7,8,9) - spacing(他にもスペーシングがおかしいところがたくさんありました。Gridlevelを4にして綺麗に置きましょう。)
03:12:172 - 気合タイム
[insane]
00:49:144 (1,2,3) - しっかり重ねる
00:51:090 (1) - アンランクでは無いけど急なスピンだからノートに変えたほうがいいかも。
01:53:766 - 連打入れよう
02:52:550 (6,7) - 近い
03:00:172 (1) - スピン終わり03:01:469 -
03:12:172 - 気合タイム

gogogo

1. Add tag must die, it's album title

1. 00:12:820 (5) - clap at the end?
2. 00:39:090 (4) - as it's an easy level, I think remove this and place a circle at 00:39:415 is better

1. 00:38:117 (5) - use 1/2 slider + reverse here ?

1. 01:25:469 (7) - put it symmetical with (3) ? looks better imo
2. 01:06:009 (6) - new combo here
3. 01:59:199 (9) - why different spacing?
4. 02:24:172 (6) - this note use 60% volume?

1. 01:09:253 (7) - move it to (320,272) ?
2. 02:08:442 (2) - why jump? it's not needed, I think use the same spacing is better
3. 02:56:280 (1) - middle point 1 grid up

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

nice map~ /me ☆~


General

1. Add tag must die, it's album title

Easy

1. 00:12:820 (5) - clap at the end?
2. 00:39:090 (4) - as it's an easy level, I think remove this and place a circle at 00:39:415 is better

Normal

1. 00:38:117 (5) - use 1/2 slider + reverse here ?

Insane

1. 01:25:469 (7) - put it symmetical with (3) ? looks better imo
2. 01:06:009 (6) - new combo here
3. 01:59:199 (9) - why different spacing?
4. 02:24:172 (6) - this note use 60% volume?

Hard

1. 01:09:253 (7) - move it to (320,272) ?
2. 02:08:442 (2) - why jump? it's not needed, I think use the same spacing is better
3. 02:56:280 (1) - middle point 1 grid up

that's all~

Good luck~

Cirno wrote:

Hi there, from my queue upon request by mochi
I was told to skip [Easy] since it exceeded my time limit rule.
你好像能看懂中文所以先用中文道个歉... 因为这首歌铃的图已经入脑了 所以以下恐怕说不出什么太有意义的内容 非常抱歉>_<

[General]
fine

[Normal]
00:33:253 (3) - maybe a bit hard for beginners, doesn't look good either
00:46:550 (1,2) - imo move (1,2) down a bit so that (2) fits with (3)'s curve would be better
01:02:117 (1) - maybe a bit hard for beginners, doesn't look good either
01:23:523 (3) - a bit hard for beginners
01:50:442 (4,5,6,7,1) - why rectangular ._.
02:57:901 (5) - use 1/3 for this and add a repeat
03:31:307 (3) - add a repeat and make 03:32:604 (1) - start 1/4 later, as in other diffs?

[Hard]
AR +1?
00:06:334 (5,6,7) - make a equilateral triangle?
00:08:766 - add note?
00:11:361 - ^
00:36:658 - ^
01:51:901 (2) - imo just make this straight between (1)'s end and (3)
01:52:550 (4) - ^
01:53:199 (6) - maybe remove?
02:01:469 (5,1) - swap combo
02:10:712 (6,7,8) - make a equilateral triangle? also (7,8,9)
03:11:523 (7) - x0.5 here?

[Insane]
your combos go up to 10+. I think you'd better add some new combos to avoid this... Like on 00:06:334 (6) - 00:08:928 (6) - 00:11:523 (6) - etc
00:05:036 - 00:13:469 - maybe change your custom clap pattern to on the third beat of every stanza? currently it sounds random.
00:06:334 (6) - move this right and down a bit so that it fits better with 00:06:172 (5)
00:06:658 (7) - make this from copying (6) and flipping vertically. If objects are meant to be identical, copy/paste is your best choice
00:28:144 (5) - maybe remove this and replace 00:28:226 (6) with a triplet
00:35:036 (6,7,8,1,2) - move this a bit leftwards so that it's symmetric?
00:38:442 (1) - I would replace this with 2 circles, forming a diamond with 00:38:117 (8,9). imo it fits the music and flows better
00:52:388 (3,4) - remove (3), move (4) 1/2 earlier, move 00:53:036 (6) to 00:52:712 and add a copy of (4) at 00:53:036 ? Also again you should create the second slider from copy/paste -> rotate 180
00:55:955 (6) - new combo?
01:32:604 (7) - remove and add a repeat to 01:31:955 (6) ?
01:41:766 (2,5) - move to 01:41:604 - ?
01:52:793 (2,5) - ^
02:57:982 (6,7) - should be 1/3
03:11:847 (11) - x0.5 here?

good luck

Garven wrote:

[General]
Keep an eye on your new combo usage. Try to do groups of two measures with a song like this, since that seems to mostly fit how you've done it anyway. You just have a lot of inconsistent changes still, and it would take forever to point them out individually.

[Easy]
00:34:874 (5,6) - I really don't recommend having a note so soon after a short repeating slider with so many repeats like this in an Easy. Kind hard to tell when it's going to end when it's that short.
00:49:145 (3,4,5) - Forget some htisounds?

[Normal]
01:17:685 (1) - Check your hitsounds. You start here with the whistles on 1 and 3, and claps on 2 and 4, then switch to the opposite at 01:21:901 (9) - . You actually do this a few other times in the map too. Keep your ears peeled and see what you can find.
02:08:928 (8,1) - Bad spacing here
03:31:307 (3) - Strange that you do the notes to finish the phrase, then start the spinner for here and one earlier, but you don't at places like 00:15:415 (1) - Keep it consistent!

[Hard]
00:13:793 (1,2,3) - I'm not feeling the rather large jump into these slow sliders.
00:59:523 (3) - Really not a good place for a stack. Keep this one moving.
The kiai sections still feel really unbalanced. They feel like they're starting really easy, then the second time through the phrase they get a lot harder. Try to keep the balance in check when you design these.
01:51:415 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is this spacing so small suddenly? It's smaller all the way to 01:58:874 -
02:24:496 (7) - "clap"
02:19:307 (1) - Another distance snap change... you really need to go through this and make everything more consistently spaced.

[Insane]
00:38:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Keep aware of how you group your patterns. Right now you have this combo starting one beat too early and it makes it feel off. This song is set up to be grouped into fours or eights. Each group is going to be starting at the tall white ticks in the time line. Try to design your patterns with that in mind so that the grouping feels correct while playing.
01:30:009 (1) - Why map through this part that you made as a break on every other difficulty? It's not even that fast-paced so it feels kind of awkward. You could delete this section and set the tick rate to 2 fairly safely
01:58:226 (6,7) - ctrl+r
02:09:577 (5,1) - This plays kind of awkwardly
02:55:874 (7,8) - Argh soo many rhythms like this. Feels kind of pointless and just kind of there to fill in beats. They're not that fun to play, and they're all over the map. :/
03:26:442 (7) - ctrl + r

Well, it's gotten better, though I think I'm going to start focusing on other maps for now as this still is lacking in a lot of basic things. Keep working at it!

Armin wrote:

[General]
*Please snap correctly your kiai sections on beats
*Your mp3's end is quite... unexpected o.o''
*Are you sure your title is "manima ni" instead of mani mani? I saw different versions and I don't know if yours is the correct one çAç
[Easy]

Whoa, that's okay, but please to reduce your new combos, I think you overused them. done

[Normal]

01:48:009 (4,5,6,7) - 02:08:280 (4,5,6,7,8) - Hitobjects like these ones turn your normal in a Hard, since the BPM and the DS is a bit high too. done

[Hard]

00:13:793 (1) - Personally I don't think velocity changes like these would fit with this part of the song done
00:36:496 (1,2) - same stuff here, this DS would confuse the player because here 00:34:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - you used a higher DS. Dunno if this is intentional, but it's up to you done
02:49:469 (2,3) - Are you sure this jump is really readable? done

[Insane]
02:52:874(x) - I'dd add another circle here, in order to not break the flow and for ryhthm stuff done

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

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1. none~

[Easy]

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1. 沒用到的綠線:
   02:19:549 -
   03:30:009 -

mapping

1. 00:12:820 (5) - NC這個 感覺combo 7在Easy裡有些太長了~
2. 00:34:874 (5) - ^
3. 00:46:550 (7) - finish
4. 00:51:739 (1) - ^
5. 01:09:901 (3) - NC 同樣問題
6. 01:11:847 (7) - finish
7. 01:15:090 (4) - NC~
8. 01:18:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - 恩...這段音效感覺挺奇怪的~不規則也不合背景音樂的感覺 看看要不要改吧
9. 01:40:388 (3,4,5) - 不同的間距 排整齊點吧 ~
10. 01:41:361 (4) - NC? 這個點比較微妙些 所以只是建議
11. 01:46:226 (3) - NC
12. 01:48:172 (8) - 結尾finish
13. 01:54:009 (1) - 開頭finish
14. 02:06:982 (3) - NC
15. 02:09:577 (1) - finish
16. 02:12:172 (4) - NC建議 音樂變換段落 所以我建議加個NC
17. 02:19:955 (1) - finish開頭
18. 02:44:604 (5) - NC
19. 03:12:172 (2) - finish
20. 03:22:226 (1) - ^

音效需要加強!! 這個音效打起來說實話真的沒感覺

[Normal]

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1. 沒用到的綠線:
   02:19:549 -
   03:30:009 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 01:03:090 (2,3) -
2. 03:09:253 (1,3,4) -

mapping

1. 01:17:685 (1) - 從這以後的音效怎麼反過來了 D:?
2. 01:19:955 (6) - NC. 10combo對Normal來說太長了些
3. 01:51:415 (1,2,3,4) - 聽起來應該是屬於同一個部分 但是排法卻有些變化 這樣不是很好的排法(間距部份). 讓人有怪異的感覺
4. 02:11:847 (6) - NC 同樣10↑的combo對Normal來說太長了些
5. 03:17:036 (1) - 音效反過來了...

同樣音效需要多下點功夫 finish一定要放 而且要放對地方 現在這圖音效部分還是太弱了...重音下finish 尤其是一小段的開頭/結尾 找個適合的地方來下...

[Hard]

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   00:15:090 -
   01:36:956 -
   02:19:199 -
   02:19:523 -
   02:23:983 -
   02:24:631 -
   02:50:928 -
   03:01:469 -
   03:30:009 -

mapping

1. 00:40:712 (4) - 變速 加個NC來提醒別人變速
2. 00:52:388 (3,4,5) - 間距不同了D:
3. 00:54:009 (7) - NC在這 不要放在00:55:307 (1) - 這分段的位置也要抓好的...
4. 01:16:388 (3,1,2,3) - 我會建議讓這兩個slider的接觸點完全覆蓋住, 這樣比較好看
5. 01:54:334 (1,2,3) - 間距有些為偏差
6. 03:11:523 (7) - NC 同樣的 因為變速 所以需要加個NC來提醒別人

[Insane]

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mapping

1. 00:12:820 (3) - 變速~NC吧...
2. 00:35:847 (2,2) - 建議覆蓋好~現在這樣感覺蠻亂的
3. 00:56:280 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 這個串把他排好 現在這樣感覺像亂排的,只是為了排出串而排的...
4. 01:48:820 (1) - Bug 需要把這個NC加回去
5. 01:59:199 (9) - NC~不管是因為變速還是因為段落 我認為這地方擺NC會比02:00:172 (1) - 適合很多
6. 02:28:469 (7) - NC
7. 03:11:199 (5,6) - 我想你本來應該是想做對稱的~但是現在並沒有對稱喔

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

音效部分和排列還需要加強的!!!
現在這樣僅僅只是符合規定而已 但是要Rank的標準通常比規定要高很多 畢竟MAT還是有審美觀的 而且會很容易被別人戳... 被戳的那個MAT會很沒面子的 所以map還是要下好些

如果有不懂得或想要問關於map話可以在遊戲中PM我

shanaftw wrote:

really fun map, gl on ranked

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

I totally forgot for this.. sorry for it. Here
offset seems fine.