"I'm living out my life until the day I die..." that made me lol. Anyway I have some suggestions for you ~
General:
- Move "This is the one" from source and put it in tags. Album should never be the source =P
- Slider velocity changes on [Hard] and [On-And-On] seem random at times, but I guess it's playable.
Easy:
00:00:415 (1) - Seems too loud, try 25-35% volume, or gradual volume increase. Also add finish?
00:06:861 - Add note with clap?
00:10:828 - ^
00:49:975 (1) - to 01:02:867 (3) - whistle tick is too loud. 50-60% seems like a good volume for these.
01:21:710 (1) - to 01:41:545 (1) - ^
01:37:578 (1) - Move this left a bit? It makes 01:39:561 (2) - looks better.
01:53:446 (6) - Delete?
Normal:
00:00:415 (1) - Too loud, try 25-35% volume or maybe gradually increase the volume? Also add finish?
00:51:710 (3) - Lower the volume to around 50-60% on that whistle tick? It sounds strange right now.
00:55:677 (3) - ^
00:59:644 (5) - ^
00:59:644 (5) - ^
01:27:413 (3) - ^
01:30:388 (3) - ^
01:31:379 (4) - Add whistle to the start? And same thing about tick volume.
01:34:355 (3) - Same about tick volume.
01:47:495 (1) - Remove clap from the return?
01:52:950 (5) - Remove the return? Also move it down a little, looks ugly so close to the hp bar.
Hard:
- + 1 HP Drain and Overall difficulty?
00:23:472 (5,6,7,1) - Looks clustered. Increase the spacing?
00:32:646 (1) - Clap the start.
00:49:629 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe use another returning slider here, it feels too similar to [On-And-On] right now.
01:53:446 (9) - Delete? Also right now the stacking looks strange.
Nice.
On And On:
00:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think this is a pretty bad way to start a map. The jumps aren't really intuitive and are unexpected. I suppose it's technically fine but I think it'd be better if you came up with a new pattern.
00:24:092 (6) - Stack under 00:23:720 (5) - ? I think it looks and plays better.
00:49:134 (1,2,3) - Why not make this part of a stream instead of stacking?
01:04:975 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Why's the 1/4 spacing bigger than 00:49:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the music is exactly the same!
01:28:156 (1,2) - These sliders ruin the flow of the stream, imo it would be better as all circles.
01:29:148 (1,2) - This jump makes no sense to me.
01:53:446 (8) - Delete?
I like this difficulty but at parts it seems you've decided "it's not hard enough, time to make it harder!" And these things ruin the flow for me.
That's all from me, good luck with this. ^_^
this pause won't kill everybody
