As requested
[General]
volume is really boring and should be more intoned orz
try these volume in all diffs to make more interesting!
00:00:117 - 30%
00:01:727 - 50%
00:24:278 - 60%
00:30:721 - 50%
00:43:606 - 60%
00:59:714 - 70%
01:12:600 - 60%
00:01:123 ~ 00:13:002 - why no hitsounds? really boooring orz orz
00:31:123 ~ 00:43:606 - ^
it would be better to mute slider slide. it sounds noisy
if you like, use this custom clap. it fits song a lot and makes more sense than default one
Download:
soft-hitclap.zip[Easy]
00:05:351 (1,2) - these should be more simple. try this
http://puu.sh/vnGN00:10:989 (1) - 1.5 rhythm will be hard for beginner imo. delete this note and add a repeat to previous slider
00:18:237 (1,2,3,1) - try this instead
http://puu.sh/vnHr00:31:123 (1,2,3) - too much 1/1 rhythm is not suitable in easiest diff. i think they can be more simple
00:38:170 (2) - sounds weird to me, let this start 1/2 later
00:38:372 (2) - placing at x:168 y:344 is better imo
[Normal]
looks fine
[Hard]
00:07:566 (1,2) - i think these sliders can be more beautiful. try to polish them
http://puu.sh/vnz300:22:868 (1) - start this at 00:22:768 -
00:26:895 (1) - remove unnecessary newcombo
01:04:546 (1,3) - same as Insane
01:22:264 (1,2,3) - try something like this for better flow
http://puu.sh/vnBa[Insane]
00:03:741 (4,5,1) - this is kinda confusing pattern. since you use larger spacing for (4,5). but for (5,1), you dont
00:14:009 (2,1) - i know you follow vocal here but it sounds really weird to me, so i'd suggest to follow percussion here
00:14:210 (1,2) - switch newcombos because previous conbo is too short and melody begins changing here
00:20:955 - add note here to follow music better
00:22:264 (8) - hmm i dont like this placement because direction is suddenly changed at 00:22:264 - it would be better to put stream over 00:21:660 (5) - for better flow
00:42:801 - it's better to shift to normal sound at 00:42:801 - ,00:43:103 - .and 00:43:405 -
it'll be easier to pass weird rhythm for players
00:43:103 (6) - using DS is better than stacking for this rhythm
player may get confused with it's 1/4 or 1/2 because they look almost same.
00:48:439 (1) - why not use triplet to follow vocal better?
and this slider is destroying good flow orz
00:52:264 (3) - i prefer following drum at the middle of this slider, not only vocal.
00:58:405 (1,2) - after spinner, this rhythm is too hard to read. try this instead
http://puu.sh/vnl501:00:318 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - place them like this for better flow?
http://puu.sh/vnlq01:03:539 (5,6) - looks bad, use 1.0x please
01:04:949 (3,6) - why you use whistle instead of clap? sounds weird
01:09:982 (3,4) - before huge jump, you shoudnt use larger spacing with stacking like this
because every jump should be emphasized to make more fun, but these notes are stopping it...
01:14:210 (6,1) - switch newcombos because of symmetrical jump
01:15:821 (3) - and add newcombo here because of downbeat
01:20:251 (7) - kinda ugly slider.
and flow will be better if this slider is curved nicely
http://puu.sh/vnwF01:21:660 (5,6,7,8,9) - i suggest to start stream at 01:21:257 - and it will be easier to follow rhythm for players because it follows vocal better
01:22:163 - add note
01:22:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - try something like this pattern
http://puu.sh/vnrC01:23:472 (5) - i dont think this slider is suitable here
please replace it with circles because finish should be on the beginning of slider or circle
ok that's all. i'll leave my star here and good luck!