those wrote:

First!

Random modpost :3

[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties. i don't see a reason why i should because it's a small file.

[Easy]
00:01:690 (1) - Being nazi and saying this slider isn't symmetrical; I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical. alright. i rarely accept nazi modding so if it bothers players that much, i'll make it symmetrical.
00:38:132 (2,3) - Seeing how these follow vocals, 00:39:945 (1) - doesn't fit very well. alright i did something else.
00:54:441 (4) - Replace with Clap, as with 00:56:052 (6) - . no because i added a finish on (1) to represent the change in vocals.
00:58:870 - note here get going with the music; probably somewhere around x:112 y:52 would do. no but i added a 1/1 slider to foloow the bass.
01:09:341 (5) - NC to be consistent with previous phrase. alright since the vocals change i might as well.

[Normal]
00:03:904 (5,1) - Newer players may click (1) too early (you've got 00:25:448 (2,3,4) - at twice the pace). Consider not stacking. no but i unstacked (2,3,4) to make it easier.

[Hard]
00:26:857 (1) - shorten kickback once or extend once. You choose. alright added another repeat.

[Insane]
Consider tick rate 2. no because i want all diffs to have a slider tick rate of 1.
00:13:971 (1) - RNC no the lyrics start here.
00:14:777 (3) - NC following the long pause so no.
00:26:857 (1,2,3,4) - No matter how many times I listen to this, it still feels like there needs to be 5 notes. Alright i thought i heard another drum on that.
00:38:938 (6) - Though you've mapped to the vocals here for all diffs, it'd be nice if you didn't have almost a second of a break between this note and the next. I'd consider following the guitar using a combination of notes and sliders; nothing is too hard for your hardest diff on a map. alright i added a 1/2 slider and a circle to follow the guitar.
00:45:179 (9) - As above. Throw in a triple and a slider or something. nope but added a 1/1 slider to follow the instrumental.

Good luck :3

those wrote:

I don't see why you shouldn't delete .osb if you aren't using it.

popner wrote:

[Timing]

Try this:
bpm: 149
offset: 117
The vocal is a little off rhythm at the beginning, but the instrument track is right.

LunarSakuya wrote:

Gintama hnnnnnnnnnngggggggg

General
- The tag "4" feels unnecessary actually it is. the 4 represents the 4th opening in gintama

Easy
00:07:768 (1) - It bothers me how it's off the screen like this, so move 00:05:955 (2) further right or something then that would ruin the blanket.
00:19:244 (3) - Start this slider at 00:19:445, limit the 1/2 patterns in easy nope following the long pause.
00:32:130 (2) - Replace this area with single notes then it'll be boring if i do this.
00:37:566 (1) - Extend slider to 00:38:170, and delete (2) no listen to the vocals again. (2) is following "meta"
00:56:090 (6) - Move up a bit so it's not off the grid no i don't think it'd make that much of a difference.
00:58:908 (1) - Delete? nope following the bass.
01:05:351 (2) - ^ nope following guitar.
01:12:600 (1) - end is off-grid so? it won't make that much of a difference.
01:20:653 (3) - NC and delete NC on the next note no the vocals are still going for (3) and (1) is following the guitar.
01:22:264 (1) - ^ I'm sure you can place this in a better spot nope i like it at this spot.
01:23:875 (1) - Lower volume at the end of the spinner oh crap forgot to re-snap this.

Normal
- dude this is 4.3 star rating and this has a 4.47 star rating. you should know that there are normal diffs that have over 4 stars.

00:04:345 (1) - Don't stack why? give me a reason.
00:17:231 (3) - NC nope then the combo would be too short.
00:25:687 (3) - Move up like 3 grids so it's less boring no i don't think it'd make that much of a difference, and plus, i want this to be easy for players.
00:28:707 (4,5) - Make a slider to lower difficulty no i want to challenge players doing this.
00:33:338 (1) - Delete NC? idk oops i forgot to do that. fixed.
00:44:613 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Refrain from these streams in Normal did something else.
00:51:056 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ you can make something easier same as 00:28:707.
00:59:915 (2) - Delete note, stupid reason but gives time to recover from the reverses then what would the end of the slider follow?
01:10:989 (4,5,6,7) - Don't stack under (3), and NC maybe to indicate timing change ignored the stacks. there's a few maps that have stacks like this, but followed the NC since it follows the guitar.
01:22:063 (5) - Delete nope following "ge"
01:23:875 (1) - Same as Easy, lower volume at end same as easy.

Hard
- I sometimes feel like you're restricting yourself to distance snap which can decrease the creativity for this diff well i want my hards to be easy. if you look at humming girl, i barely used DS for that song.

00:18:237 (3) - Flip this vertically so 00:19:445 (4) doesn't have to be off-screen no because i don't want to ruin the blanket between (3,4) and isn't off-screen if you look carefully.
00:27:499 (1) - Move out more? won't make that much of a difference so no.
00:37:566 (1) - Extend to white tick screw the vocals no it sounds weird if i do that.
00:54:580 (5) - NC the vocals are still going so no.
01:23:875 (1) - Same as other diffs

Insane
-Again, I feel you're using distance snap a lot if you say so alright i'll try to do more jumps.

00:05:351 (5) - instead of doing linear patterns, vary it http://puu.sh/qiTM fine i'll do it.
00:17:029 (10) - Place in the middle between (8, 9) Fixed.
00:22:264 (8) - NC the vocals are still going so no.
00:24:680 (1) - maybe move this up more so it's not in the middle no because it won't make that much of a difference.
00:37:163 (6) - Add whistle no because i want this part to be with no hitsounds.
00:39:781 (1) - Start combo further away nope but i did something else.
00:45:217 (9) - NC, you did it in the future combo alright fixed.
01:21:660 (5,6,7,8,9) - Make this stream straight/even adjusted properly.
01:23:875 (1) - same as other diffs Fixed.

Good luck Byaku-NYAN

cacipan wrote:

hi, from modreqs

[Hard]
00:54:479 - add note no because i'm not following the drums. the vocals is what i'm following.

Mythol wrote:

hi~

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046 Fixed. idk how that happened
00:27:096 - Add note? Feels too empty with all the drums no because these sliders are focusing on the guitar. not the drums.

[Normal]
SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046 same as easy.
AR - 4? alright it flows a lot better with AR4.
00:04:345 (1) - Space this? Might feel rushed into hitting the slider since the repeat before alright since people have mentioned this, i might as well.
00:42:801 - How about mapping that guitar sound with a repeat? no because i'm following the vocals for this.
00:46:627 (1) - Change to note + repeat? no because it'd be hard for players since they have to hit and then hold. you just have to hold on this kick slider.
00:59:110 (1) - ^ ^
01:07:768 (3) - ^ ^
01:21:861 (4,5) - This stack plays really bad imo alright stacked it on (1).

[Hard]
00:03:338 (6) - Doesn't fit. Try a note + 1/2 repeat? but but i added 2 1/2 sliders no follow vocals.
00:37:566 (1) - = = you know.. fix orz i don't think it'd make that much of a difference so no.
00:43:002 (5) - Move to next blue tick. alright since it's following vocals, the blue tick is spot on.
01:04:546 (1) - Clap on end? no because the whistle is already there.
01:05:754 (5) - Clap? Not sure why you replaced these with whistles, feels really empty it's because i want the claps to follow vocals and the whistles to follow the guitar for this part.

[Insane]
This diff is the exact same as the hard diff with increased SV and random flow-breaking sliders.. needs a lot of work imo
00:03:338 (2) - Same as hard too easy for an insane diff, but i added 4 circles and made a jump for it.
00:37:566 (1) - ^
Not really impressed with this diff.. = = i knew someone would say that. ik that this isn't my best insane but this is the best i can come up with.

GL~

ertyukjh010 wrote:

hello 249

[Easy]

00:05:955 (2) - I don't suggest to use 1/2 beat in EASY. It's very hard for new player. Add a note at 00:06:358 and instead it? if i keep all notes at 1/1 then it'd look boring.
00:10:788 (1) - ^, Add a note at 00:10:989 to instead 00:10:788 (1). ^
00:19:043 (2) - ^, Delete it, Move 00:19:244 (2) to 00:19:043 ^
00:31:123 (1) - End at 00:31:727 no then it'll flow weird. i'm following "Shita omoii"
00:32:130 (2) - End at 00:32:533 same as above.
00:37:566 (1,2,3) - okay I don't know how to change but It very difficult, It's not suitable. alright did something else.
01:09:378 (1) - Reply at 01:09:982 will be better for me. What do you think? alright fixed.

[Normal]

00:04:345 (1) - Don't stack. Mess for new player..... fixed on the last mod.
00:26:291 (5) - Remove clap at beginner, and add a clap at end. It followed your rule. fixed. also added a clap at (2) and removed it on the end of (1).
00:45:821 (7) - Don't stack. too hard for players? alright.
01:10:989 (1,2,3,4) - Oh...It had a 1/1 beat and 1/2 beat in the stack. It's not good idea. Move out.
Also, I don't suggest put a many 1/2 beat in Normal...... It's like a "Hard" diff orz i replace this for 2 1/1 sliders

[Hard]

00:03:338 (6) - Cancel reply and end at 00:03:942 did something else on the last mod.
00:37:566 (1) - End at 00:37:969 is okay. Osu is a game only, isn't playing musical instruments wwwww fixed. gave some thought about it.
00:53:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Insane in hard diff. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/296152 alright did the 1st 3 notes but did something else at the end.

[Insane]

00:08:573 (6) - Delete alright. i thought it'd be a good idea if i added another circle but i'd be overmapping.
00:09:378 (9) - ^ ^
01:22:264 (1) - Finish at beginner. alright since it matches with the guitar, i'll do it on the other diffs as well.


That all

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod

default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General

1. .png file is recommend to use when your image has transparent part.so .jpg is the best choice as BG,and it has less file size.

no because in my other maps i saved it as a jpg file, problem is that when i tried to update it, it doesn't show in the beatmaps directory.
Insane

1. 00:14:210 (2) - change it to a 3/4 slider and add circle i knew this would be bad. did something else.
2. 00:22:264 (8,9,10,11,12) - turn off grid snap then adjust it with distance snap Fixed.
3. 01:03:539 (5) - stack Fixed.
4. 01:19:043 (2) - finish no i think the finish sounds bad at this part.
5. 01:23:875 (1) - end at 01:27:096,it's enough nope you'll still hear the guitar fade.
   >>ack of hitsound,and soft hitsound sample don't fit the song well i disagree. i like the soft sample set more than the normal sample set. IMO the normal wouldn't feel right in my POV.
   >>I just can't understand how you put clap sound.because they are not coherently

i put the soft sample set because i don't like putting the normal sample set. it'd feel weird if i add the normal sample set

Hard

1. 00:26:291 (5,1) - NC on 5 and remove NC on 1 no because (1) is following the drums where as (5) is following the guitar.
2. 01:23:875 (1) same as insane.
   >>same as insane

Normal

1. N/A

Easy

1. too much 1/2 beat patterns the reason is because i want this diff to be fun. if i overuse the 1/1 lines, then it'll be a boring easy diff.

um...I think you need think more about hitsound i'll try. hitsounds arent my thing when i map

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

Megurine Luka wrote:

/Queue

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

[General]

*Try use a sliderslide like http://puu.sh/qny9 . O_O Lower the volume ty but i don't want to use custom hitsounds on my map.
*01:23:875 (1) - stop at 01:27:096 or 01:27:700 no because the guitar is still fading.

[Easy]

00:28:707 (2) - hmmm try somewhere else like followed the 2nd screenshot because it's near the middle and beginners would spin in time.

or


[Normal]

00:54:076 (4) - del? no but i did something else.
01:09:378 (2) - 2 grids left no this is intentional.



Good Luck~

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General
your BG is way too big... so maybe try to make it smaller. here is one I ps and it look the same and only take you 200KB, so maybe try it.

SPOILER

[attachment=0:ebe63]BG.jpg[/attachment:ebe63]

hmm alright i'll use it. ty

combo colour on hard dif is different from other diffs, maybe try to make them the same. Fixed.

I think 1000 lead-in time is enough, 2000 is a little too much for me. i disagree because 1000 looks a bit too sudden for players since the offset is at 117.


[Easy]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:10:989 (1,2) - keep the distance consistent plz. wrong spacing here. OMG how did i miss that. fixed.


[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:24:278 (1) - very far away from the center of the screen for a slider right after the spinner. Fixed. remapped that whole part.


[Hard]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:48:640 (6) - try not to overlap this slider with note3, it looks really ugly. Fixed.


[Insane]
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:03:741 (6,7,8,1) - I don't know why your spacing is just a little larger then before at here, because imo it didn't look good. Fixed.


nothing wrong really. no offense but this map can be much better if you improve your mapping skills. such as new ways of using hitsounds, and new patterns or new slider shapes etc. if you say so, alright i'll try to do some self changes on this mapset. the main reason i mapped this is because i want to try out my new mapping style. i guess it needs more work after all

• 00:07:566 - add note?
  00:54:882 (5) - like this x:212 y:240
  01:23:875 (1) - start this at 01:23:674 -

• 00:16:828 (3) - i prefer to add note.
  00:56:291 (4) - like this x:132 y:280

• 00:26:895 (1) - remove new combo
  
  00:42:801 (4) - add note then 00:43:405 (1) - remove new combo. 00:43:405 (1) - I prefer to stream at triple. then the third circle add new combo.
  00:52:868 - add note?
  00:59:714 (1) - why don't stacking here?

• 00:42:801 (5) - end this at 00:43:103 -
  00:50:855 (5) - add new combo
  01:03:741 (6) - spacing

R a r e wrote:

From my queue
All suggestions~
You can ignore if you don't like it.

Easy

• 00:07:566 - add note? no that would be too hard for beginners.
  00:54:882 (5) - like this x:212 y:240 hmm alright. it makes a nice triangle.
  01:23:875 (1) - start this at 01:23:674 - no because if i add it there, it won't follow the guitar at all.

Normal

• 00:16:828 (3) - i prefer to add note. no i'm following the vocals, not the drums.
  00:56:291 (4) - like this x:132 y:280 no i don't want to ruin this pattern.

Hard

• 00:26:895 (1) - remove new combo no this is intentional. i'm following the drums for this.
  00:42:801 (4) - add note then 00:43:405 (1) - remove new combo. 00:43:405 (1) - I prefer to stream at triple. then the third circle add new combo. the note is already there. i tired to understand what you were trying to say but now i understand. fixed.
  00:52:868 - add note?
  00:59:714 (1) - why don't stacking here? aww crap i missed that >.<. fixed.

Insane

• 00:42:801 (5) - end this at 00:43:103 - it's already there.
  00:50:855 (5) - add new combo no because the vocals are still going.
  01:03:741 (6) - spacing hmm? i don't see any spacing errors. it doesn't have to be at the exact number but close to the Default DS.

nice map

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Byakugan249 ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. 01:22:264 - KIAI time end point should to here. if that's the case, i'm gonna have make this a kiai burst.

[Insane]

1. 00:42:801 (5,6) - This part should like this rhythm. no but i added a circle at the blue tick. i want this to follow both the vocals and guitar.
   
2. 00:43:808 (4,5,6,7,8) - This part looks no flow and spacing wrong,try remap this part. this is my new mapping style in insane diffs but i changed it up a bit.
3. 00:45:620 (3) - Move to here X:108 Y:232 looks better. It won't make that much of a difference so no.
4. 00:56:492 (1) - End to here 00:57:700,and Add a note to here 00:58:103. no the long pause in vocals is still going from there.

[Hard]

1. AR+1 much better with play.agreed. fixed.

[Normal]

1. 00:28:506 (3) - Move to here X:200 Y:104 looks better.hmm alright. i guess that since it flows a lot better. i might as well.

That's all ~

Good luck ~

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hello~
Sorry for delay. I'm quite busy these days. oh dw about that. i'm a patient person.

[General]
Why 4 in tags? because this song is 4th OP in the anime.

[Easy]
00:06:559 - Add a note? no then that'd be too hard for beginners.
00:31:123 (1) - Sounds weird. Maybe circles at 00:31:123 and 00:31:526? ^
00:38:170 (2) - Sounds weeeeeird. :/ i did something else, but i kept the slider.
00:54:479 (4) - Why not a clap? :/ because the vocals change. if i add claps on this, it'd sound bad and it wouldn't fit with the map.
00:56:090 (6) - ^ ^
01:20:653 (3) - Add finish to the beginning. alright. i thought about this but i didn't like it, but since you mentioned it, i'll do it.
01:23:875 (1) - Move to 01:23:674. alright. i think someone mentioned this but i ignored it.
And don't forget to remove those tons of useless timing points. everytime i hear this, it offends me. there's a reason why i added the timing points.

[Normal]
00:06:559 - Add a note? no the intro looks hard enough. i don't want to overdo it.
00:43:002 (5) - How about: [attachment=0:9b18c]asdasa.PNG[/attachment:9b18c] nope i'm focusing on vocals for this, not the guitar. it'd be too hard for players to hit that.
00:46:425 - Add a note? i'm following the vocals, not the drums.
01:23:875 (1) - Move to 01:23:774. no i dont the spinner to appear so suddenly for players.

[Hard]
00:01:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds. In easy and normal they are fine though.
You should at least to add some whistles... i want this part to represent the introduction since it has no hitsounds.
00:29:110 (1) - Move to 00:29:009. alright. the guitar continues from there.
00:31:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hitsounds. the main thing that i'm following is the guitar since the volume of it is low.
01:10:989 (1) - Move to 01:10:888. this one no because not only i'm following the guitar, but i'm following the drums as well.
01:20:653 (4) - Add finish. it doesn't fit with the song IMO.
01:21:257 (7,8) - Finish on both beginning. ^
01:23:875 (1) - Move to 01:23:774. since this is a hard diff, i'll do it. i want to keep everything balanced.

[Insane]
00:22:667 (12) - Finish. alright. since it goes well with the guitar, it sounds a lot better.
00:29:110 (1) - Move to 00:29:009. same as hard.
01:23:875 (1) - Move to 01:23:774. ^
And don't forget to add some hitsounds. same reason as hard.

Good luck. :3

1. Difficulty Setting: +1 all =w= (except circle size). seems too low imo
2. 00:01:727 (1) - for beginning the song, I'm suggest to add whistle in slider's begin. that's more give a sense imo
3. 00:39:982 (1) - too close from (2), this will make players click it earlier then got 100, use normal spacing for this.
4. 00:47:231 (2) - add clap in here for following drum sound and sure, for consistent hitsounding.
5. 00:48:439 (5) - ^ but in the end
6. 00:52:063 (4) - add clap
7. 00:53:674 (2) - whistle or clap (but I'm very suggest to add clap)
8. 00:54:479 (4,6) - why this is whistle sound? I think this sound same with before drum sound. change into clap sound for consistent. weird to change something but same as before.
9. 00:59:714 (2) - add new combo in here. kiai time usually begin from new combo. this is make better effect when kiai come imo
10. 01:02:935 (1) - add clap in slider's end
11. 01:05:754 (3) - same as 00:54:479
12. 01:22:264 (1) - remove this new combo. the new combo should added in 01:20:653 (3) imo

1. 00:01:727 (1) - same as I'm mentioned in the Easy difficulty
2. 00:48:439 (4) - add new combo in here, too long combo set in here..
3. 00:51:660 (5) - ^
4. 01:04:949 (1,4) - same as 00:54:479 on easy
5. this normal seems too hard. star rating is high too. reduce some 1/2 notes I guess that more better way. well, just my opinion

1. 00:01:727 (2) - add whistle in slider's beginning
2. 00:26:895 (1) - this repeater slider is weird :/ change to 1/2 slider and repeat it or something
3. 00:55:486 (1) - remove this new combo, new combo should added in 00:54:882 (6) =w=
4. 01:04:546 (1,3) - same as 00:54:479 on easy difficulty
5. 01:14:412 (4) - add whistle in slider's end

1. 00:01:727 (4) - add whistle in slider's end. then, new combo in here >_>
2. 00:32:734 (6) - add new combo in here
3. 01:04:949 (3,6) - same as 00:54:479 on easy difficulty
4. 01:07:566 (8) - add new combo

Yasora-chan wrote:

hi, sorry for delay

Easy

1. Difficulty Setting: +1 all =w= (except circle size). seems too low imo alright. i guess im making this too easy for beginners.
2. 00:01:727 (1) - for beginning the song, I'm suggest to add whistle in slider's begin. that's more give a sense imo no this part i dont want to have hitsounds. you can say it's more like an introduction to the song.
3. 00:39:982 (1) - too close from (2), this will make players click it earlier then got 100, use normal spacing for this. OMG how did that happen D:. fixed >.<
4. 00:47:231 (2) - add clap in here for following drum sound and sure, for consistent hitsounding. alright i wanted the claps to be at every 3rd downbeat but i realized it sounds bad.
5. 00:48:439 (5) - ^ but in the end ^
6. 00:52:063 (4) - add clap ^
7. 00:53:674 (2) - whistle or clap (but I'm very suggest to add clap) alright a whistle it is. i want this part to be whistle mainly because of the tone of the singer.
8. 00:54:479 (4,6) - why this is whistle sound? I think this sound same with before drum sound. change into clap sound for consistent. weird to change something but same as before. because since the vocal's tone changes, i want this part to be whistles. it'd sound weird if i add claps and i don't find it fitting.
9. 00:59:714 (2) - add new combo in here. kiai time usually begin from new combo. this is make better effect when kiai come imo ohh right. (1) is following the bass and (2) is where the vocals start.
10. 01:02:935 (1) - add clap in slider's end nope adding a whistle
11. 01:05:754 (3) - same as 00:54:479 it's because i'm following the guitar for the whistles. if i add claps, it won't fit with the song and that completely ruins my mapping style when it comes to hitsounds.
12. 01:22:264 (1) - remove this new combo. the new combo should added in 01:20:653 (3) imo nope following the guitar for this.

Normal

1. 00:01:727 (1) - same as I'm mentioned in the Easy difficulty and same as easy
2. 00:48:439 (4) - add new combo in here, too long combo set in here.. nope the vocals are still going.
3. 00:51:660 (5) - ^ ^
4. 01:04:949 (1,4) - same as 00:54:479 on easysame as 00:01:727.
5. this normal seems too hard. star rating is high too. reduce some 1/2 notes I guess that more better way. well, just my opinion ik. i'm trying to find several ways to decrease the star rating.

Hard

1. 00:01:727 (2) - add whistle in slider's beginning same as easy.
2. 00:26:895 (1) - this repeater slider is weird :/ change to 1/2 slider and repeat it or something nope this kick slider represents the drums.
3. 00:55:486 (1) - remove this new combo, new combo should added in 00:54:882 (6) =w= nope i'm following "Hitotsu janai" for this.
4. 01:04:546 (1,3) - same as 00:54:479 on easy difficulty and same as easy
5. 01:14:412 (4) - add whistle in slider's end Fixed. i guess i missed that >.<

Insane

1. 00:01:727 (4) - add whistle in slider's end. then, new combo in here >_> *points at easy's reply*
2. 00:32:734 (6) - add new combo in here i'm focusing on the guitar on this so no.
3. 01:04:949 (3,6) - same as 00:54:479 on easy difficulty yea you know what i'm gonna say
4. 01:07:566 (8) - add new combo nope vocals are still going.

That's all
Good luck :3

arien666 wrote:

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[General]
01:12:600 - Delete this Kiai? There's no highlight point on here... actually there is. the highlight points are the vocals and the finish.

[Easy]
00:54:076 (3,4) - [Suggestion] Like this :3? Shaped pick seems little weird compared with other combos. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/315529 hmm alright. i knew it wouldn't flow right.

[Hard]
Combo1 color seems different from other diffs. Why don't you make them same :3? oops. fixed >.<
00:26:895 (1) - Delete NC? nope this follows the drums.
00:42:197 (3,4) - Spacing ;_; i thought i double checked it. fixed.
00:43:405 (5,6,1) - Use slider return instead? Although BPM149 is slow but it seems little hard on [Hard] sure why not.

:p

1. Inconsistency in combo colours in diff Hard,here is the correct code:
   

   Combo1 : 192,192,192 
   Combo2 : 255,128,128 
   Combo3 : 170,170,255

• - 01:02:935 (1) - Much better if you move this slider in the center
  - 01:22:264 (1) - I don't think this is a good idea about the new combo,so remove please

• -- Lol, nice

• - 00:26:895 (1) - Remove this new combo because i think is useless

• - 00:28:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - You should probably move those notes in the center

MoodyRPG wrote:

Drop it

General

1. Inconsistency in combo colours in diff Hard,here is the correct code:
   

   Combo1 : 192,192,192 
   Combo2 : 255,128,128 
   Combo3 : 170,170,255

   i swear i thought i fixed that. this time Fixed >.<

Easy

• - 01:02:935 (1) - Much better if you move this slider in the center nope the spacing would be inconsistent if i do that.
  - 01:22:264 (1) - I don't think this is a good idea about the new combo,so remove please alright. since a few people mentioned about this, i'll remove it.

Normal

• -- Lol, nice really? this is why i've been asking for mods. it's mainly because of the normal diff.

Hard

• - 00:26:895 (1) - Remove this new combo because i think is useless nope this combo is following the drums for this.

Insane

• - 00:28:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - You should probably move those notes in the center sure why not? i guess i can extend the spacing for this star jump.

Poor mod sorry. Good luck Byakugan

Melophobia wrote:

As requested

[General]
volume is really boring and should be more intoned orz
try these volume in all diffs to make more interesting!
00:00:117 - 30%
00:01:727 - 50%
00:24:278 - 60%
00:30:721 - 50%
00:43:606 - 60%
00:59:714 - 70%
01:12:600 - 60%

yea these work. fixed.
00:01:123 ~ 00:13:002 - why no hitsounds? really boooring orz orz i want this to be more like an introduction to the song.
00:31:123 ~ 00:43:606 - ^ the main thing i'm following is the guitar. that's why there's no hitsounds. i only add hitsounds when the parts are upbeat.

it would be better to mute slider slide. it sounds noisy oh i think i have 1 of the sliderslide files so i'll get that.

if you like, use this custom clap. it fits song a lot and makes more sense than default one
[attachment=0:c14bd]soft-hitclap.zip[/attachment:c14bd] yes please tysm

[Easy]
00:05:351 (1,2) - these should be more simple. try this http://puu.sh/vnGN alright. i guess this works.
00:10:989 (1) - 1.5 rhythm will be hard for beginner imo. delete this note and add a repeat to previous slider Fixed.
00:18:237 (1,2,3,1) - try this instead http://puu.sh/vnHr no i felt uncomfortable when i did this.
00:31:123 (1,2,3) - too much 1/1 rhythm is not suitable in easiest diff. i think they can be more simple alright i did something easier.
00:38:170 (2) - sounds weird to me, let this start 1/2 later no i find it unfitting because it won't follow the drums at the end. that's the part i'm focusing on.
00:38:372 (2) - placing at x:168 y:344 is better imo no it'd ruin the DS if i do.

[Normal]
looks fine ...wow i guess this is fine after all

[Hard]
00:07:566 (1,2) - i think these sliders can be more beautiful. try to polish them
http://puu.sh/vnz3 i don't see a difference so i'm not changing.
00:22:868 (1) - start this at 00:22:768 - why not? it's a hard diff after all
00:26:895 (1) - remove unnecessary newcombo nope this is following the drums.
01:04:546 (1,3) - same as Insane i'm following the guitar. i'm only using claps for vocals. whistles however i'm using it for instrumental, and the volume in vocals.
01:22:264 (1,2,3) - try something like this for better flow
http://puu.sh/vnBa sure. i was thinking about doing this after all.

[Insane]
00:03:741 (4,5,1) - this is kinda confusing pattern. since you use larger spacing for (4,5). but for (5,1), you dont i moved some notes a bit but nope i'm not changing. the main reason i mapped this is because i want to try my new mapping style.
00:14:009 (2,1) - i know you follow vocal here but it sounds really weird to me, so i'd suggest to follow percussion here alright. it fits with the song after all.
00:14:210 (1,2) - switch newcombos because previous conbo is too short and melody begins changing here i think i followed what you did. if im wrong, pm me in game.
00:20:955 - add note here to follow music better i don't want to ruin my star jump
00:22:264 (8) - hmm i dont like this placement because direction is suddenly changed at 00:22:264 - it would be better to put stream over 00:21:660 (5) - for better flow nope but i did something else.
00:42:801 - it's better to shift to normal sound at 00:42:801 - ,00:43:103 - .and 00:43:405 -
it'll be easier to pass weird rhythm for players no i find that unfitting to the song.
00:43:103 (6) - using DS is better than stacking for this rhythm
player may get confused with it's 1/4 or 1/2 because they look almost same. no but i reduced the DS
00:48:439 (1) - why not use triplet to follow vocal better?
and this slider is destroying good flow orz no it's not. i don't like the triplets because IMO it doesn't flow to the vocals to my expectations.
00:52:264 (3) - i prefer following drum at the middle of this slider, not only vocal. alright. the slider is too long and easy to clear for players.
00:58:405 (1,2) - after spinner, this rhythm is too hard to read. try this instead http://puu.sh/vnl5 this sounds a lot better. fixed.
01:00:318 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - place them like this for better flow? http://puu.sh/vnlq just to make it smoother, fixed.
01:03:539 (5,6) - looks bad, use 1.0x please oh oops. fixed >.<
01:04:949 (3,6) - why you use whistle instead of clap? sounds weird *points at hard*
01:09:982 (3,4) - before huge jump, you shoudnt use larger spacing with stacking like this
because every jump should be emphasized to make more fun, but these notes are stopping it... alright i fixed it up a bit.
01:14:210 (6,1) - switch newcombos because of symmetrical jump nope im following new combos through vocals and instrumental.
01:15:821 (3) - and add newcombo here because of downbeat ^
01:20:251 (7) - kinda ugly slider.
and flow will be better if this slider is curved nicely
http://puu.sh/vnwF alright i'll make this symmetrical.
01:21:660 (5,6,7,8,9) - i suggest to start stream at 01:21:257 - and it will be easier to follow rhythm for players because it follows vocal better wow not only that but it follows the drums. fixed
01:22:163 - add note fixed. it follows the drums after all.
01:22:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - try something like this pattern http://puu.sh/vnrC no but i did something else.
01:23:472 (5) - i dont think this slider is suitable here
please replace it with circles because finish should be on the beginning of slider or circle alright i did a different pattern.

ok that's all. i'll leave my star here and good luck!

Konei wrote:

From my moding Queue


This color = Advices = Feel free to ignore

This color = You must change = Unrankable

This Color = You are recommend to change it = Not good





Normal


00:33:338 (6) clap? no it wouldn't fit with the song.

00:44:618 these streams of three notes are maybe for people who don't play long confusing? I don't know - think it's fine alright i removed this and added a 1/2 repeat slider.

01:22:368 Maybe is this pattern too difficult (like I said Idk >.<) i'm leaving this because since it's near the end, it wouldn't hurt to put a bit of a challenge for players.

Nice diff - it's fun to play


Hard


OD +1? alright. i increased the HP as well.

Very easy for a hard - I think i agree that it's easy but i want my hard diffs to reach at least 1-1.5m because that's my mapping style.



Insanel


The slider at end sounds a bit noisy to me :/ uh oh i forgot about the sliderslide file. >.<. ill get that file asap.


Totally nice map

I'm sure you get it ranked.

ty for the mod
Good luck to you and your map!

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[easy]
00:01:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - no hitsound?it will be better if you add some whistle (all diff) nope i want this to be like an introduction. the main reason i mapped this is because i want to try out my new mapping style.
00:33:942 (1,3,5,2) - you use soft-hitclap to follow drums here.but I think if you use normal-hitnormal instead.it wil be much better(all diff) oops i forgot to decrease the volume. reduced to by 20%
00:53:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why you suddenly change to whistle?no big change in music here(all diff) the vocals change and it's near the kiai. you can say i want that part to be the climax point.
01:23:674 (1) - stop at 01:26:694 is enough(all diff) no because i want to follow every bit of the song. this follows the guitar fade.

[normal]
00:03:741 delect this beat. it doesn't follow vocal
00:46:627 (1) - I don't think it's a good design,not only one slider includes 3 rebeats but also this ryhthm isn't good here
ehh I don't like this diff..there are a lot of 1/2 notes in this.It's more like a hard diff.and your easy diff is easy.need more work for this diff imo. yup i knew it. i'll get to re-mapping this.

[hard]
fine

[insane]
00:41:794 (1) - clap no i find it unfitting to the song.
01:22:264 (1) - why you change spacing here oops. that was by accident. fixed.

why not use normal-hitnormal as soft-hitclap?..much better imo because i want to use the custom hitsounds for once.

Jupiter wrote:

Hi,Thanks mod request~

[General]
Offset -27 Yay this goes in sync with the finish. ty

[Insane]
00:42:801 (5) - slider end point extend to 00:43:103 -
00:43:103 (6) - remove note. alright i knew this rhythm would be uncomfortable for players.
01:07:566 (1) - NC alright the lyrics change from there.
01:23:774 (1) - change spinner end time 01:28:304 -> 01:26:694 same as easy.

[Hard]
01:23:774 (1) - change spinner end time 01:28:304 -> 01:26:694 same as easy.

[Normal]
01:10:586 (4) - move 01:10:586 -> 01:10:385 and spacing correct ,remove clap. i was thinking that this would be a bad idea because it'd ruin the consistency in claps. oh well i'll do it.
01:10:989 (1) - change spinner start time 01:10:989 -> 01:10:788 since i followed the suggestion above, done.
01:18:841 (6) - NC
01:19:043 (1) - RNC no because i'm following the melody for this.
01:20:251 (3) - NC no but i made (4) a NC
01:23:875 (1) - change spinner end time 01:28:304 -> 01:26:694 same as easy.

[Easy]
01:23:674 (1) - change spinner end time 01:28:304 -> 01:26:694 no i want to follow every bit of the song and this is following the guitar fade.

That's all~
Good Luck!