Melophobia wrote:

As requested

[General]
volume is really boring and should be more intoned orz
try these volume in all diffs to make more interesting!
00:00:117 - 30%
00:01:727 - 50%
00:24:278 - 60%
00:30:721 - 50%
00:43:606 - 60%
00:59:714 - 70%
01:12:600 - 60%

yea these work. fixed.
00:01:123 ~ 00:13:002 - why no hitsounds? really boooring orz orz i want this to be more like an introduction to the song.
00:31:123 ~ 00:43:606 - ^ the main thing i'm following is the guitar. that's why there's no hitsounds. i only add hitsounds when the parts are upbeat.

it would be better to mute slider slide. it sounds noisy oh i think i have 1 of the sliderslide files so i'll get that.

if you like, use this custom clap. it fits song a lot and makes more sense than default one
[attachment=0:c14bd]soft-hitclap.zip[/attachment:c14bd] yes please tysm

[Easy]
00:05:351 (1,2) - these should be more simple. try this http://puu.sh/vnGN alright. i guess this works.
00:10:989 (1) - 1.5 rhythm will be hard for beginner imo. delete this note and add a repeat to previous slider Fixed.
00:18:237 (1,2,3,1) - try this instead http://puu.sh/vnHr no i felt uncomfortable when i did this.
00:31:123 (1,2,3) - too much 1/1 rhythm is not suitable in easiest diff. i think they can be more simple alright i did something easier.
00:38:170 (2) - sounds weird to me, let this start 1/2 later no i find it unfitting because it won't follow the drums at the end. that's the part i'm focusing on.
00:38:372 (2) - placing at x:168 y:344 is better imo no it'd ruin the DS if i do.

[Normal]
looks fine ...wow i guess this is fine after all

[Hard]
00:07:566 (1,2) - i think these sliders can be more beautiful. try to polish them
http://puu.sh/vnz3 i don't see a difference so i'm not changing.
00:22:868 (1) - start this at 00:22:768 - why not? it's a hard diff after all
00:26:895 (1) - remove unnecessary newcombo nope this is following the drums.
01:04:546 (1,3) - same as Insane i'm following the guitar. i'm only using claps for vocals. whistles however i'm using it for instrumental, and the volume in vocals.
01:22:264 (1,2,3) - try something like this for better flow
http://puu.sh/vnBa sure. i was thinking about doing this after all.

[Insane]
00:03:741 (4,5,1) - this is kinda confusing pattern. since you use larger spacing for (4,5). but for (5,1), you dont i moved some notes a bit but nope i'm not changing. the main reason i mapped this is because i want to try my new mapping style.
00:14:009 (2,1) - i know you follow vocal here but it sounds really weird to me, so i'd suggest to follow percussion here alright. it fits with the song after all.
00:14:210 (1,2) - switch newcombos because previous conbo is too short and melody begins changing here i think i followed what you did. if im wrong, pm me in game.
00:20:955 - add note here to follow music better i don't want to ruin my star jump
00:22:264 (8) - hmm i dont like this placement because direction is suddenly changed at 00:22:264 - it would be better to put stream over 00:21:660 (5) - for better flow nope but i did something else.
00:42:801 - it's better to shift to normal sound at 00:42:801 - ,00:43:103 - .and 00:43:405 -
it'll be easier to pass weird rhythm for players no i find that unfitting to the song.
00:43:103 (6) - using DS is better than stacking for this rhythm
player may get confused with it's 1/4 or 1/2 because they look almost same. no but i reduced the DS
00:48:439 (1) - why not use triplet to follow vocal better?
and this slider is destroying good flow orz no it's not. i don't like the triplets because IMO it doesn't flow to the vocals to my expectations.
00:52:264 (3) - i prefer following drum at the middle of this slider, not only vocal. alright. the slider is too long and easy to clear for players.
00:58:405 (1,2) - after spinner, this rhythm is too hard to read. try this instead http://puu.sh/vnl5 this sounds a lot better. fixed.
01:00:318 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - place them like this for better flow? http://puu.sh/vnlq just to make it smoother, fixed.
01:03:539 (5,6) - looks bad, use 1.0x please oh oops. fixed >.<
01:04:949 (3,6) - why you use whistle instead of clap? sounds weird *points at hard*
01:09:982 (3,4) - before huge jump, you shoudnt use larger spacing with stacking like this
because every jump should be emphasized to make more fun, but these notes are stopping it... alright i fixed it up a bit.
01:14:210 (6,1) - switch newcombos because of symmetrical jump nope im following new combos through vocals and instrumental.
01:15:821 (3) - and add newcombo here because of downbeat ^
01:20:251 (7) - kinda ugly slider.
and flow will be better if this slider is curved nicely
http://puu.sh/vnwF alright i'll make this symmetrical.
01:21:660 (5,6,7,8,9) - i suggest to start stream at 01:21:257 - and it will be easier to follow rhythm for players because it follows vocal better wow not only that but it follows the drums. fixed
01:22:163 - add note fixed. it follows the drums after all.
01:22:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - try something like this pattern http://puu.sh/vnrC no but i did something else.
01:23:472 (5) - i dont think this slider is suitable here
please replace it with circles because finish should be on the beginning of slider or circle alright i did a different pattern.

ok that's all. i'll leave my star here and good luck!

Konei wrote:

From my moding Queue


This color = Advices = Feel free to ignore

This color = You must change = Unrankable

This Color = You are recommend to change it = Not good





Normal


00:33:338 (6) clap? no it wouldn't fit with the song.

00:44:618 these streams of three notes are maybe for people who don't play long confusing? I don't know - think it's fine alright i removed this and added a 1/2 repeat slider.

01:22:368 Maybe is this pattern too difficult (like I said Idk >.<) i'm leaving this because since it's near the end, it wouldn't hurt to put a bit of a challenge for players.

Nice diff - it's fun to play


Hard


OD +1? alright. i increased the HP as well.

Very easy for a hard - I think i agree that it's easy but i want my hard diffs to reach at least 1-1.5m because that's my mapping style.



Insanel


The slider at end sounds a bit noisy to me :/ uh oh i forgot about the sliderslide file. >.<. ill get that file asap.


Totally nice map

I'm sure you get it ranked.

ty for the mod
Good luck to you and your map!

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[easy]
00:01:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - no hitsound?it will be better if you add some whistle (all diff) nope i want this to be like an introduction. the main reason i mapped this is because i want to try out my new mapping style.
00:33:942 (1,3,5,2) - you use soft-hitclap to follow drums here.but I think if you use normal-hitnormal instead.it wil be much better(all diff) oops i forgot to decrease the volume. reduced to by 20%
00:53:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why you suddenly change to whistle?no big change in music here(all diff) the vocals change and it's near the kiai. you can say i want that part to be the climax point.
01:23:674 (1) - stop at 01:26:694 is enough(all diff) no because i want to follow every bit of the song. this follows the guitar fade.

[normal]
00:03:741 delect this beat. it doesn't follow vocal
00:46:627 (1) - I don't think it's a good design,not only one slider includes 3 rebeats but also this ryhthm isn't good here
ehh I don't like this diff..there are a lot of 1/2 notes in this.It's more like a hard diff.and your easy diff is easy.need more work for this diff imo. yup i knew it. i'll get to re-mapping this.

[hard]
fine

[insane]
00:41:794 (1) - clap no i find it unfitting to the song.
01:22:264 (1) - why you change spacing here oops. that was by accident. fixed.

why not use normal-hitnormal as soft-hitclap?..much better imo because i want to use the custom hitsounds for once.

Jupiter wrote:

Hi,Thanks mod request~

[General]
Offset -27 Yay this goes in sync with the finish. ty

[Insane]
00:42:801 (5) - slider end point extend to 00:43:103 -
00:43:103 (6) - remove note. alright i knew this rhythm would be uncomfortable for players.
01:07:566 (1) - NC alright the lyrics change from there.
01:23:774 (1) - change spinner end time 01:28:304 -> 01:26:694 same as easy.

[Hard]
01:23:774 (1) - change spinner end time 01:28:304 -> 01:26:694 same as easy.

[Normal]
01:10:586 (4) - move 01:10:586 -> 01:10:385 and spacing correct ,remove clap. i was thinking that this would be a bad idea because it'd ruin the consistency in claps. oh well i'll do it.
01:10:989 (1) - change spinner start time 01:10:989 -> 01:10:788 since i followed the suggestion above, done.
01:18:841 (6) - NC
01:19:043 (1) - RNC no because i'm following the melody for this.
01:20:251 (3) - NC no but i made (4) a NC
01:23:875 (1) - change spinner end time 01:28:304 -> 01:26:694 same as easy.

[Easy]
01:23:674 (1) - change spinner end time 01:28:304 -> 01:26:694 no i want to follow every bit of the song and this is following the guitar fade.

That's all~
Good Luck!

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there

General:

-00:31:096 ~ 00:43:177 - perhaps hitsound this part? seems kind of quiet without hitsounds... no i want this to have no htsounds mainly because of the guitar. i only add hitsounds to the upbeat parts.
-I think normal-hitnormal as a custom clap would sound better than soft-hitclap perhaps try it out and see what you think? no i want to try out this custom hitsound because i never used a custom hitsound in any of my maps.

Easy:

00:04:922 (5) - add NC yes the lyrics change but then the combo would be too short.
00:17:808 (4) - ^
00:18:210 (1) - remove NC nope the melody changes.
00:19:217 (3) - this slider follows an odd rhythm IMO, perhaps try it like this? http://puu.sh/wgH2 i promised myself that i won't overuse the1/1 rhythm. but just for this purpose, fixed.
00:39:553 - add note? no i'm following the vocals, not the instrumental.
01:09:351 (1) - (nazi) perhaps make a better blanket? http://puu.sh/wgIw did something similar to this.
01:22:237 (4) - add NC? OMG FINALLY. back to this. you saw that this is following the guitar. fixed

Normal:

00:27:069 - add note? alright just to keep the rhythm going.
00:41:767 - ^ nope following vocals.
00:42:774 (2) - end 1/4 later? it's a slider so it shouldn't be too hard for normal alright ill see what other modders say about this.
00:59:687 (3) - add NC alright to keep it consistent.
01:20:828 (1) - here you're using a lot more 1/2s than usual, so perhaps remove this note? alright. i realized that this is too hard to do for players.

Hard:

00:22:741 (1) - end 1 beat earlier with normal-hitnormal like in normal diff? i ended the spinner like in the normal diff, but i added the soft hitsound.
00:26:868 (1) - remove NC? no it's following the drums.
00:46:801 (5) - add NC... also, add finish?
00:47:002 (1) - remove NC i did the NC but i ignored the finish. i find it unfitting and too loud.

Insane:

00:14:083 (2) - perhaps try this to follow vocal? http://puu.sh/wgwa nope not following vocals. just the guitar.
00:22:741 (1) - same as hard *points at hard's reply*
00:26:264 (7) - add NC? no it's following the guitar.
00:26:868 (1) - remove NC? also, too close to 7 where do you see that?
00:27:472 (1) - too close to (5) this is intentional i want this to follow the default DS for this part.
00:42:371 (4) - ctrl+r for better flow? (if you do this, fix the spacing after ) no you're ruining my mapping style if i do this.
00:44:183 (5,6,7) - spacing is too close o.o this is intentional. i want this to follow the default DS.
00:44:787 (8) - same as 00:42:371 (4) same as 00:42:371.
00:46:801 (3) - add finish? same as hard.
00:48:412 (1) - ^ ^
00:50:626 (4,5,6,7,8) - too close i'm not gonna ruin the flower pattern
00:58:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ kept the pattern but move the notes around
01:11:969 (6,7,8,1) - ^ i did this because after the star jump, i want the spacing to be close since the jump will most likely make people nervous.
01:15:392 (2) - same as 00:42:371 (4) same as 00:42:371.
01:13:378 ~ end - this section seems to have a lower spacing than the rest of the map o.o, IMO it doesn't make much sense since the song doesn't sound softer. perhaps space this the same as the rest of the map? alright. i was thinking about this for a while.

nice map

1. Offset : 120
2. The length of last spinner - I suggest 01:27:069 for end point. It's just reverberation after 01:27:069

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi, I'm here.


[General]

1. Offset : 120 no then the finishes would sound too late to the song.
2. The length of last spinner - I suggest 01:27:069 for end point. It's just reverberation after 01:27:069 nope the guitar fade is still going from there. i want to follow every bit of the song for this.

[Insane]
00:02:707 (1) - Remove NC
00:03:311 (2) - NC ahh right the lyrics change from here. fixed.
00:06:532 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistles to them, would be nice no i find it unfitting with this part.
00:12:975 (1) - Add clap to end
00:14:083 (2) - Add claps to both points alright it follows the drums after all.
00:20:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Add claps to every circle DONE. it sounds a lot nicer.
00:53:445 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Is this stream really necessary? I found that to follow vocal would be better. Because you have used clap before this part, but you changed it to whistle at this part. We can feel lack of hitsound easily when miss custom clap. But soft-whistle doesn't make feeling weird as custom clap does. even you...alright since so many people mentioned this, i'll replace the whistles for claps.
00:58:076 (1,2,4) - Add claps did this...
01:18:412 (4,5,6) - ^ ...and this...
01:19:016 (2,5,7) - ^ but not this...the claps sound unfitting for me with the finish.
01:20:224 (7) - Remove whistle from head no then it'll ruin the consistency in whistles.
01:20:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Add claps alright. also reduced the volume to 40%.
01:23:043 (3) - Add whistle ahh i see what whistle pattern you're going for, but i'm not gonna do it. patterns like that aren't part of my mapping style at all.


[Hard]
Most hitsound suggestion of Insane also could be applied. i'll get to that.
01:18:814 (3) - NC
01:19:016 (1) - Remove NC nope focusing on the melody on this.
01:20:626 (4) - NC alright. the lyrics change from here.


[Normal]
00:04:318 (4) - NC. Bcuz I think your newcomboing pattern follows lyrics mostly. yup that's correct. fixed.
00:58:881 (1,2) - Add claps hmm alright. it follows the drums after all.
01:18:814 (6) - NC same as hard's 2nd suggestion.


[Easy]
I guess it's fine

ykcarrot wrote:

I don't care others, but current offset is obviously wrong.

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi 249 , here's my mod from queue

Easy
00:21:059 (1,2) - two notes with out any finish isn't fit with the background of song , I'd say , add finish at the start both slider ? i was thinking about this. alright just to make it consistent with my other diffs.
00:56:495 (1) - spin with clap sounds very nice~
00:58:911 (1) - clap at the start ? , I suggest it from background of music :3 DONE.

Normal
00:22:267 (3) - change to slider like 01:19:046 (1,2,3) - no it'd look bad during gameplay. in this part i added a circle because ik that the guitar would do a slight pause. but in 01:19:046, there's 3 sliders because of the guitar. it keeps going.
00:22:670 (1) - remove it , it's very short , hard to spin for this diff no i think the spinner is fine. after i want to keep it consistent with the other diffs.
00:23:878 (4) - then add note and clap here instead from ^ , will be better much imo i disagree. the repeat slider follows every bit of the guitar
00:56:495 (1) - as I mentioned in Easy diff , add clap would be better same as easy.
01:10:388 (4) - feel empty , finish or whistle are good I think no since the other diffs don't have a hitsound here i'm not gonna do it here. i focus on consistency more than the song.
01:18:844 (6) - emm, I think it's better to new combo here and remove next note. no i'm following the melody for this.

Hard
00:17:234 (1) - with this note , adding clap at the last is very appropriate at the end? sure. next time please specify which part of the slider. it could be the beginning, repeat arrow or at the end to avoid the confusion.
00:53:274 (3) - since this note until 00:56:093 (2) - , I think you can add whistle at every red line , It would be great for emotion of this part it took a while for me to get used to this. alright then added.
01:07:771 (7) - change this to slider will be better while playing and the sound is going with well no i don't want to ruin the shape im forming.

Insane
00:17:636 (3) - clap here , it's necessary alright. it follows the drums.
00:17:838 (4) - new combo because the vocal changed a bit yes that's true but that's not what i'm following. right when the song hits the long pause, that's when i make the note a NC.
00:21:864 (6) - this jump is a bit weird (it should be at (1)) if you don't want to change , new combo this at least 00:21:864 (6) - alright made (6) a NC.
00:26:898 (1) - should at clap because the snare stared here alright add a clap at (5) to give it a nice effect.
00:38:576 (6) - I will make jump here cuz the accent is obvious more than other position , this slider doesn't match well with 00:39:180 (7) -
different taste and emotion but same note ._.'' no i want this part to be easy. after all this part isn't upbeat until 00:43:609.
00:39:985 (2,3,4) - ^ but this isn't high recommend ^
00:48:844 (2) - move right 2 grid for better spacing between (1) and (3) (it's a bit left from my aspect) alright. usually i don't accept nazi modding like this.
00:52:468 (5) - also add clap here for better sound with this song DONE. it sounds a lot better.
00:53:274 (3) - same as hard diff , adding whistle every red line will be good ! same as hard.
00:56:093 (2,3) - I would make jump here instead of this note cuz you use many 1/4 before but this distracted a bit while playing oh a jump? ok i can handle that.
00:59:314 (4) - I like it with finish i don't . i find it unfitting and too loud.
01:14:213 (6) - new combo here cuz vocal alright to keep it consistent.
01:20:858 (1) - clap alright. i'm gonna have to move my timing point back if i do this...

it's ok for me now , take my star and
Good luck for ranking ! 249

dragonxcz wrote:

Request from my modding queue.
[General]

Offset is bad. Try 90 wait what? i'm confused....

[Insane]
00:12:975 (1) - Remove NC no it follows the long pause.
00:22:640 (12) - Whistle no it'll ruin the consistency if i do this.
00:55:459 (1,2,3) - Jump fits better there I think fixed it on the last mod.
01:07:942 (1,2,3) - Make triangle from this it is a triangle if you look carefully.

[Normal]

Use blanketing! sorry blanketing isn't my style when i map.

[Easy]

Same problem like Normal and same as normal.

Laurier wrote:

hi
from my qeue

General
I think you need more timing point
00:01:126 ~00:01:730 is not fit vocal.
put timing point at about 00:01:086? and put second point at 00:01:730 ? alright. after doing this, i realized that it flows a lot smoother.


Easy
00:07:771 (1) - try this? http://puu.sh/ytEm sound better for me. did you delete it?
00:38:375 (2) - move 1 tick right. please follow vocal. the lain thing i'm focusing is the drums. that's why this slider ends there.
00:39:784 (1) - 1 tick left. ^ it is. if you listen carefully, it follows kakaekomu.

Nromal
00:10:791 - add note or http://puu.sh/ytIM same as 00:07:771, and if i do, the the pattern would play weird for players.
01:08:777 - same as 00:10:791 -^
01:17:234 (4,5) - I think this rhythm is better http://puu.sh/ytKH same as 00:07:771

Hard
00:39:784 (1) - nazi: stack on just 00:39:180 (5) end alright just to make it nice.

Insane
00:37:670 - 00:37:871 put 2 notes and make stream. that'd be overmapping for me. i'm focusing on the guitar for this part.

that's all

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q ^.^

INSANE

00:01:328(2,4) - stack better alright to make it neat.
00:14:012 - add note here no it'll play weird if i do that.
00:17:737 - ^ nope doing something like that isn't my mapping style at all.
00:26:093 - ^ it'd be considered overmapping. it follows the sudden pauses in the guitar.
00:34:549(4,5) - stack better same as 00:01:328.

HARD

00:18:240 - i think this sound better http://puu.sh/ywCs i disagree. the sliderticks are following the vocals for thie loop and itdon't want to ruin this blanket at all.
00:24:482 - add note here? that'd be overmapping because it follows the guitar and it follows the sudden pauses in the guitar.
00:33:341 - make this slider double and put on white tick same as above but following the vocals.
00:39:180(5,1) - stack better fixed it on the last mod.
01:14:415 - end slider on red tick and add note on 01:15:422 i don't want to ruin my loop

NORMAL

00:06:562 - add note nope focusing on vocals for this.
00:08:173 - maybe make so http://puu.sh/ywJf sound better hmm alright. fixed.
00:15:824 - make symetric slider http://puu.sh/ywJS (1 grid down) this is intentional. doing symmetric sliders constantly isn't my mapping style.
00:41:797 - add note alright. i was thinking about this for a while.
00:47:435 - make this slided shorter and put on white ticks it'd ruin the flow in vocals if i do. i don't want to overuse the 1/1 lines.

EASY

00:11:395(1,2) - make this sliders identical and put on white ticks that would ruin the flow in vocals if i do.

It's all for me) - good luck~~

1. 00:04:952 (5) - NC ?
2. 01:02:938 (1) - Out of mapping window... , 00:19:247 (3) - do like this in Normal diff.
3. 01:23:677 (1) - End spinner with silence here ? 01:27:099

1. 00:22:267 (3) - Remove this note and add reverse x3 ?
2. 00:28:307 (3,4) - Change to 1/2 slider ?
3. 01:23:878 (1) - like Easy diff.

Netsukawa wrote:

My lazy =w="

[Easy]

1. 00:04:952 (5) - NC ? no the combo would be too short.
2. 01:02:938 (1) - Out of mapping window... , 00:19:247 (3) - do like this in Normal diff. no. this is 1 of the main reasons i like to map. if i get rid of this, it wouldn't feel like a 249 diff at all.
3. 01:23:677 (1) - End spinner with silence here ? 01:27:099 no i want to follow every bit of the guitar for this.

[Normal]

1. 00:22:267 (3) - Remove this note and add reverse x3 ? alright. i guess adding the circle is overdoing it for players.
2. 00:28:307 (3,4) - Change to 1/2 slider ? no then the rhythm would look weird. they have to hold, then tap, and then hold again for the 2 sliders.
3. 01:23:878 (1) - like Easy diff. same as easy.

That's all. orz

HellDawn wrote:

Easy

01:02:938- It would be better if slider move to 148-116 hmm alright. it flows a lot smoother after all.
01:20:656- ^ 128-140 tbh it wouldn't make that much of a difference since i'm moving it to the left a bit.

Insane

00:08:575- add a note nope following vocals. it'd be overmapping if i do this.
00:09:381- ^ ^

Nice mapset

1. all diff last spinner gradually lower the volume
2. why tags4? osu doesn't work one word

1. 00:20:454 (4) - (3)copy&paste then ctrl+h? its jump good
2. 00:42:804 (5) - start and end clap i like
3. 00:56:294 (3) - x212 y209?

1. 00:36:159 (2) - add note x188 y72
2. 00:42:804 (4) - same as insane
3. (Nazi)01:07:569 (6) - x244 y19
4. (Nazi)01:07:771 (7) - x304 y74
5. (Nazi)01:07:972 (8) - x364 y139 placement is good

1. 01:23:073 (2) - maybe repeat end 01:23:676 this line? I think next slider no need

1. Nice*
   

S o r d a wrote:

from queue

[overall]:

1. all diff last spinner gradually lower the volume sure i'll do that. if the guitar fades out, i'll gradually decrease the volume.
2. why tags4? osu doesn't work one word "4" is to show that it's the 4th opening in the anime.

[Insane]:

1. 00:20:454 (4) - (3)copy&paste then ctrl+h? its jump good yea i was worried about this. fixed.
2. 00:42:804 (5) - start and end clap i like sure it goes well with the guitar.
3. 00:56:294 (3) - x212 y209? it'll ruin the blanket if i do this.

[Hard]:

1. 00:36:159 (2) - add note x188 y72 nope i think it'd be overmapping since i'm following the guitar.
2. 00:42:804 (4) - same as insane DONE
3. (Nazi)01:07:569 (6) - x244 y19 it won't make a difference if i do that.
4. (Nazi)01:07:771 (7) - x304 y74 ^
5. (Nazi)01:07:972 (8) - x364 y139 placement is good i see a difference but it'll ruin the flow if i do that.

[Normal]:

1. 01:23:073 (2) - maybe repeat end 01:23:676 this line? I think next slider no need no way. it's near the end and i want to challenge players.

[Easy]:

1. Nice*
   

good luck!

Atema wrote:

Hi ! From my modding queue

General

- I think you should make your Easy and Normal diffs start at the same point as your Hard and Insane diffs, starting it when she starts singing in all diffs sounds more logical for me no it'd be too hard for players if i do that.

Easy

00:27:501 (1) - Remove NC ? nope the tone of the guitar changes.
00:59:717 (1) - ^ nope vocals start here.
00:59:717 - Here I see a Kiai Time for one tick ?! it's fine. this is a kiai burst if you don't know.
01:06:159 (1) - Remove NC ? And same about the Kiai time for a tick ^^ ^
01:12:602 (1) - ^ for both remarks ^
01:20:656 (3) - 2 grids left to put it in the middle ? nope this is intentional. i meant to put that slider there.

Normal

- Same as the easy diff about the Kiai ticks it's a Kiai burst.

00:04:952 (1) - Remove NC ? no the melody of the song changes.
00:15:422 (1) - Move the last point of this slider 1 grid down to make it more symmetric ? tbh i don't see that much of a difference of the map so no, and also it's a nazi mod and i rarely follow them.
00:15:422 (1,2) - Why not putting them both in the middle so it would look more esthetic ? because i wanted to avoid the middle for once. i've been relying on the middle too much i have to move this close to the middle.
00:17:838 (1) - Remove NC ? nope because of new lyrics.
00:19:247 (3) - Align this one with the 2 ? nope this is intentional. it'd ruin the flow if i do align this note with (2).
00:41:797 (5) - Set the NC here ? same as 00:04:952
01:15:824 (1) - Remove NC ? same as 00:17:838.
01:18:844 (6) - NC ? same as 00:04:952.

Hard

- ^ Kiai same as normal.

00:06:562 (1) - Remove NC ? nope this is following the guitar.
00:27:502 (1) - ^ nope the guitar riff starts all over again. the previous note is following the drums.
00:35:556 (1) - ^ same as 00:06:562.
01:17:435 (1) - ^ ^

Insane

- ^ Kiai same as normal.

00:26:294 (8) - Maybe make this one straight or more symmetric ? if you look carefully, it's blanketing (3,7)


Of course these are only suggestions, feel free to follow them or not
Nice mapset, good luck !

LunarSakuya wrote:

Wow huge improvement on Insane, I really like it!!!

those wrote:

Then replace "4" with "OP4".

1. Audio lead-in 1000ms in Easy & Normal diff may be better.

1. 00:04:952 (5) - NC here?

1. 00:04:348 (1,2,3) - i'd like to select a reverse slider here...
2. 00:38:777 (3,4) - note a good stack for prev score burst..
3. 01:22:066 (4,1) - i suppose (4) is more suit to start the slider (1)
   

1. 00:12:401 (5) - out of screen :<
2. 00:50:858 (3,4,5,6) - the shape here looked weird a bit...try to change it?
   

1. 00:44:817 (8) - ctrl+r for better flow...?
2. 01:23:677 (6) - place it at 220:132?

GiNa wrote:

[General]
-I don’t think the “4” in your Tags is needed because people can’t search just with a 4. I know it means the 4th opening btw. There are some other maps which are the 2nd opening or sth like that, but they only put “opening” in the Tags

[Easy]
00:21:059 (1) – I think this sounds better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342967 i applied the 2/1 repeat slider, but i moved the spinner to the red tick. moving it at the blue tick will surprise them.

[Normal]
00:04:348 (1,2,3,1) – maybe unstack them, usually is just 3 together, but you have 4, which makes it harder to play/read … imo you know what i've been thinking about this...for now i'll keep it. i want to hear other modders' opinions about this.
00:41:999 (1,2) – try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342971 yes it follows the guitar, but i think that this would be too hard for players. i want this normal as easy as possible and this is how it turned out.

[Hard]
Love this !

[Insane]
00:21:260 (3,4,5,1,2) – make the star looks better? Here’s what I got: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342973

The codes for the star are

00:21:059 (2) – x:304 y:360
00:21:260 (3) – x:140 y:248. 00:22:066 (2) has the same one
00:21:462 (4) – x:340 y:248
00:21:663 (5) – x:172 y:360
00:21:864 (1) – x:140 y:148

alright i guess i'll apply this to make it nice.
00:28:106 (2,3,4,5,6) – I think this (and the ones after) can be improved too, well … anyways xD i moved the notes around to make it better.
00:43:408 (1) – you can add clap on this too ! alright since it matches with the guitar, i added a clap on (2) for more effect.

Good luck !
Also leave a star here

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from my queue~

[General]

1. Audio lead-in 1000ms in Easy & Normal diff may be better. i thought the lead must be the same for 1 mapset besides the taiko diff.

[Easy]

1. 00:04:952 (5) - NC here? then the combo would be too short if i do that.

[Normal]

1. 00:04:348 (1,2,3) - i'd like to select a reverse slider here... alright i was thinking about this for a while.
2. 00:38:777 (3,4) - note a good stack for prev score burst.. i unstacked it to make it easier.
3. 01:22:066 (4,1) - i suppose (4) is more suit to start the slider (1) nope (4) is to follow the vocals. (1) is to follow the guitar.
   

[Hard]

1. 00:12:401 (5) - out of screen :< no it's not. i think you're talking about the grid.
2. 00:50:858 (3,4,5,6) - the shape here looked weird a bit...try to change it? whoops that was my fault. i didn't do what you applied but i moved some notes around.
   

[Insane]

1. 00:44:817 (8) - ctrl+r for better flow...? no my mapping style will be ruined if i do that.
2. 01:23:677 (6) - place it at 220:132? it'll lead to a bad overlap if i do that.

that's all~~nothing much to say~~good luck with rank

Behonkiss wrote:

All difficulties:
Why does everything up to 00:13:005 have no hitsounds? because i want this part to represent the introduction to the song.

Easy:
00:28:709 (2) - Maybe get rid of this and move the spinner into its place? no it wouldn't feel right as i'm focusing on the guitar for this.

Normal:
01:18:844 - This whole section with the sliders bunched together seems a bit difficult for a Normal. that's the point. since it's near the end, i want to challenge players if they can clear this.

No big problems with the other diffs. Good job.

CDFA wrote:

It's 11:24, everyone is up partying, playing Leauge of Legends while enjoying themselves on Vent

. . . and I'm modding

ALLRIGHT LET'S DO THIS

Overall:
00:01:126 - This timing point is unneccesary
00:01:730 - ^ nope this is to follow "Kasana"
00:58:105 - ^
00:59:715 - ^ same as above but the bass. i think by doing this, it'll flow smoother if there's timing points.


Insane:
00:11:395 (3) - Make this a bit more symmetrical no it looks fine as it is.
00:12:401 (5) - Make this curve more notable oh fine i'll fix it.
00:22:066 (2) - This jump feels weird o-o hmm i knew someone would say this. alright moved (1) somewhere else.
00:50:455 (3) - ^ this one however i don't think it's weird. if i follow the DS for (1-4), it'd look boring for an insane diff.
00:59:113 (3) - This note isn't snapped hmm? i don't see that...but i fixed it anyways.
01:11:999 (6) - NC for Jump alright and for vocals.
01:15:824 (3) - Make this curve more notable same as 00:12:401.

Hard:
00:59:113 (3) - Unsnapped note! same as insane.
00:53:274 (3) - Make this curve more notable nope it looks fine as it is.
00:56:093 (2) - Make this parallel to (1)? no i don't want to ruin my blanket for (1,2).
01:16:227 (1) - Make this symmetrical. The end sliderpoint is lower then the beginning no. 1 slider can ruin my whole mapping style.

Normal:
00:24:281 (1) - Make this curve more notable same as 00:53:274 on hard.

Easy:
00:50:052 (1) - Make this curve more notable alright moved it around a bit.
01:06:160 (1) - ^ ^
01:12:603 (1) - Not really symmetrical ;~; this is intentional. i don't want to ruin the blanket for (3).

desu