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Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Miya
oh god, i didn't notice that unsnapped note. Thank you for the mod and the star (i didn't notice it before, orz) :D
suzutsukikanade
Star, i love this music
Topic Starter
Miya
thank you for the star :D
regenz
This is very nice clam song

General
use soft-sliderslide.wav plz

http://puu.sh/rE8S

and Add heatkai to tag?

Easy
Fine

Normal

01:00:922 (2) - whistle like hard?

Hard
Fine

can't point anything much map is close to perfect word for me :D
Topic Starter
Miya
Thank you so much for the mod and the star :D
Lol, i'm still forget about the tags, and baka HeatKai didn't mention it too, so i'm double forget.
Fixed all regenz ;)
Starry_old
[Easy]

00:59:870 (1) - I suggest you curve this. http://puu.sh/rI9m
01:04:080 (3) - Can you whistle the beginning?
01:06:186 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:28:817 (5) - Remove new combo
00:29:870 (1) - Put it here.
01:03:554 (4) - Same as in Easy
01:06:186 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:40:922 (6) - Do you mind putting this below the note before to keep the rhythm consistent?
01:03:554 (4) - Same as in Easy
01:06:186 (1) - ^
01:23:554 (5) - New Combo


Good map.
Good luck on rank :D
HeatKai

Miya wrote:

Thank you so much for the mod and the star :D
Lol, i'm still forget about the tags, and baka HeatKai didn't mention it too, so i'm double forget.
Fixed all regenz ;)
wahahaha I forgot too, sorry!

EDIT: I fix something!

Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size) (Miya) [HeatKai's Taiko].osu
Melophobia
hi ;)

[Easy]
the current SV is 0.900000005960464, fixed it plz~
00:43:028 (5,1) - switch newcombos
00:45:133 (2) - add newcombo

[Hard]
00:09:344 ~ 00:26:186 - volume is too loud imo, use 50% plz (all diffs)
00:41:186 - add a note here
00:41:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - increase volume step by step?
01:18:422 - add a note?
01:22:501 (4) - this finish doesnt fit well imo ><

that's all p_q
Topic Starter
Miya
Thank you for the mod Melo, Starry. Fixed some :3
And uploaded HeatKai update too!
JauiPlaY
Hi.
Some suggestions:

[General]
Seems fine.

[Easy]
00:46:186 (4,1) - Spacing.
00:59:870 - Move the timing point to 01:01:844.
01:15:133 (1,2) - Change those whistles into claps.

[Normal]
01:00:922 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:59:870 - Move the timing point to 01:01:844.
01:17:765 (1,2) - Remove claps from (1)'s beginning and (2), add clap to (1)'s end.

[Hard]
00:13:817 (1) - Remove this one could be better...for me.
00:40:133 (4) - Ctrl+R could make this more interesting.
00:59:870 - Move the timing point to 01:01:844.
01:04:344 (1) - Make it a circle and move to 01:04:607.
01:13:817 - Add a note.

Smooth map, can't find major problems.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Miya
Thank you for your mod JauiPlaY. Fixed some :D
Kuria
Coming here from here
hope i can found something here^^

General:
looks fine here and there, just some suggestion.
Ini think it will be ok if you set the AudioLeadIn for 1000 instead of 1500 on all diff (especially easy and normal), since the intro are just begin on 00:00:923, and it was quite long for the player to prepare before play :)

Easy:
looks fine here and there too, so i just give some fix for a small parts
00:38:817 (1,2,3) - move (3) above a bit, the problem is the position of (2) to (3) are kinda too narrow since you suddenly must move your movement back after moving straight, and this is kinda hard for some kind of player (back jump? if i'm not wrong).
it should be looks like this later:
01:17:765 (1) - make this a normal curved slider instead of custom curved? it seems that the pattern kinda off if you make it that way
01:25:133 (3) - same with what i mention above, i think move this to up a bit would be better since for the newbie player, a kind of back jump/tapping are kinda hard to play.

Normal:
00:09:344 (1) - make this into fixed curved like 00:10:396 (2)? The pattern are kinda off on that part/whole map since only that slider have a different shape compared with others
00:15:659 (3) - make it less curving? so it will be looks more to wide V than tight V
01:18:554 (2,3) - move this 2 down a bit, make the (3) on a symmetrical position with (1) and place (2) right on the middle of that 2 slider, it can make the pattern flow better, it should be looks like this:

Hard:
nice :3

sorry can't mod taiko since i'm not understand taiko orz

i think that's all, good luck Miya!
here's a star, as promised^^
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
+500 ~ 1000 lead-in

00:00:396 - kkd here (remove the d at the beginning) sounds more natrual
00:06:975 (22) - I don't see the reason to put finish here orz
00:40:396 - K
00:46:975 - k d?
01:25:133 - try to make the spinner softer.

I appreciate pretty much how you put the patterns and dd---------k / dd---d---k are nice idea.
The biggest problem is you'll need a taiko BG seriously >: 3 recently the head of the character in the BG is "cut" by the taiko playing bar.
Topic Starter
Miya
@Envi : Thank you for your mod and star. Well, suggestion for your next mod. Don't often do nazi mod. Many people don't like nazi mod, unless you notice some pattern that break map aesthetical. Search for another thing, like hitsound, flow, spacing, general thing, etc.

@wmf : thank you for your taiko mod. Waiting for HeatKai response. About bg, HeatKai said he will make it, but he not make it until now. =3=
HeatKai

Miya wrote:

@wmf : thank you for your taiko mod. Waiting for HeatKai response. About bg, HeatKai said he will make it, but he not make it until now. =3=
hehe sorry :p
I'll get to it soon! :D
ryuu
hi ~
from our queue.

[Easy]

00:19:344 (2) - maybe this?
00:21:975 (4) - 1 grid left => 00:22:501 (1) - too
00:55:659 (1) - maybe this?

[Normal]

00:55:659 (4) - put on the middle?

[Hard]

00:46:449 (4,5) - put on the middle?

nyan.
very good and cute map ~
star and good luck :3
Topic Starter
Miya
thank you for your mod and star ryu :3
fixed some of your mod~
hillaryzx
Hello, start greeting with nyan~ :3

General

- nothing to say, skip this...

Easy

00:09:344(1) - moved this circle to 00:09:607?
00:41:975(4) - ok, this will be long. First, delete this note from here. Then make a slider starting from 00:41:449 to 00:42:501
01:17:765(1) - remove clap here and replace it with whistle. It should be better.

Normal

Maybe AR -1?
00:14:607(2) - I don't think repeated slider suits here. Just a normal slider would Ok.

Hard

00:16:449(2) - remove this circle?

For taiko diff., I'm sorry to say but I not an expert in taiko mod T.T

anyway, good map you have, Miya...
well, I'll take my leave...
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.

[General]
replace the red combo color for a sky blue combo color. the sky blue combo color fits with the song as she's singing about if she'll be loved by someone which is a sad thing.

[Easy]
00:26:712 (1) - hmm how about flipping it like this? as it stands the path would be hard for beginners to get to the next note. doing this makes it easier for beginners.
00:34:607 (1) - a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume. i think a finish here fits with the song.
00:45:133 (3) - maybe make this a NC because the lyrics change?
00:49:344 (3) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals. if you say it's too loud, add a green line to reduce the volume of the finish.
01:10:396 (1) - same as above but replace the whistle for a finish. if you ignore this, then add a finish with the whistle.
01:25:265 (1) - space out this spinner because this might surprise beginners.

[Normal]
try a slider tick rate of 2? i think it flows to the song as there some ticks that follow vocals and instrumental.
00:09:344 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume to 20% to match the piano?
00:17:765 (5) - ^
00:33:028 (1) - remove the NC because the lyrics are still going.
00:34:607 (3) - if you follow the suggestion above, make this a NC because of new lyrics.
01:09:870 (1) - add a finish at the end. it feels empty without a finish and it matches with the vocals.
01:25:265 (1) - same as easy.

[Hard]
here too. try a slider tick rate of 2? same reason as before.
00:43:028 (7) - align this to (5) so that (4-7) is shaped like a diamond.
00:43:554 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this? i see that it's a triangle, but IMO the last note looks like it's just placed there. i think doing this make it a fun and a gives a nice challenge for players.
00:57:765 (6) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:23:554 (5) - make this a NC because the lyrics change.

i guess that's it. Star and GL :D
HeatKai
ahhh the background =w= I forgot again

Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size) (Miya) [HeatKai's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Miya
Thank you for the mod guys and the star 249 :D
Fixed some of the mod :3

lol, you forgot again about bg, baka HeatKai
HeatKai
jeng jeng >:3
Topic Starter
Miya
yay +8, please ask some MAT HeatKai :P
HeatKai

Miya wrote:

yay +8, please ask some MAT HeatKai :P
I will try but isn't it too fast? XD
later got some people angry or something =w= wait 2 more days ok ;p ?
Topic Starter
Miya
ok ok, no need to rush :3
HeatKai
here :P

remove video from taiko x)

Topic Starter
Miya
of course, thank you HeatKai :D
Nichiyouki


Hi, Miya

My mod from request

General

  1. Nothing

Easy

  1. 00:55:659 (1,2) - Move 2nd point of (1) to down 3 grids, and move (2) to right 1 grid, will be more beautiful.

Normal

  1. 00:50:396 (1,2,3) - Move (1,2) to up 2 grids, and move (3) to left and up 1 grid.

Hard

  1. 00:02:238 (3,5) - Move (3) to right and down 1 grid, and move (5) to up and right 1 grid.

That's all, that I can find them.
nice song and map.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Miya
Thank you for mentioning the minor stuff. Fixed them all :D
Mystica
here comes my mod.

[Easy]
01:15:133 (1,2) - clap also on this two?
01:25:265 (1) - consider to reduce the volume not just from the beginning (all diff

[Normal]
01:18:817 (3) - about clap on the beginning?

[Hard]
00:23:291 (3) - whistle at end
00:23:817 (4) - ^

Good map XD
Topic Starter
Miya
Thank you for the mod, fixed some :D
Backstep
from Bakastep's modding queue. >3

Easy

01:15:133 (1,2) - Remove whistle. (For same Hard difficulty)

Normal

01:15:133 (1,2) - Remove whistle. (Same above)

Hard

00:12:765 (x) - Add note here ?
00:58:817 (2) - 1 grid right.
01:00:396 (1) - Remove whistle.
01:01:186 (4) - ^

HeatKai's Taiko Oni

00:40:922 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - ddkdkkk

I suggest you should use only one sound for one note. (When I listen, I feel weird.)

Good luck Miya :oops:
Topic Starter
Miya
Thank you for the mod bakastep :P

Fixed some~
a32
Hi~ :)
[General]
Nothing found~
[Easy]
Also nothing~
[Normal]
00:28:817(1,2,3,4) - put them like this may make more sense?
[Hard]
00:32:238(6) - add a reverse here?
00:35:396(2) - add a whistle?
00:50:396(4) - ^
00:54:870(4) - ^
Well...Nice map~I can't find many things.I think you may use more whistle to make the hitsound much interesting~Good luck to you~
Topic Starter
Miya
sorry, but i'm not fan of mixing clap and whistle. >.<
Thank you for your mod~
Leorda
Hey

[Easy]
00:45:133 (3) - New combo?


[Normal]
00:49:344 (5,1) - Swap new combo?


That's all I got orz
Topic Starter
Miya
Thank you for the mod leo. Fixed all. :)
S o r d a
request from queue

[overall]:
  1. Nothing wrong here.
[Hard]:
  1. 00:05:133 (4) - whistle
  2. 00:24:607 (1) - ^
  3. 01:10:396 (3) - finish
[Normal]:
  1. 00:05:133 (1) - beginning whistle
  2. 01:09:870 (1) - end finish
[Easy]:
  1. Fine
Over all nice map
Nothing find problem
Good luck ranked soon :P
Topic Starter
Miya
Thank you for the mod. :D

I think this map is really ready for a MAT check >.<
kosiga
hi Miya :3

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. fine
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:133 (4) - add clap instead to whistle to start of the slider. I thought that clap matched than a whistle here :D as other diff
  2. 00:43:554 (2) - add whistle instead to clap to end of the slider. i prefer whistle here like other diff :3
  3. 01:13:554 (4) - my suggestion form pattern: http://puu.sh/sRnJ code↓
    256,176,73554,2,0,B|276:220|256:264|236:308|256:352,1,180,2|0
[Normal]
  1. 01:00:922 (2) - one gird left. (little nazi) Symmetric form.
  2. 01:11:975 (1) - remove NC ( short NC ) Is this intentional?

    others fine. but only this diff 00:09:344~00:26:186 - Placement of the whistle is different from the other diff. Is this intentional o.o?
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:659 (1,4) - one grid left. Symmetric form.
  2. 00:24:607 (1) - add whistle ?
  3. 00:25:396 (4,5) - one grid left and down. ( nazi ) Square form
  4. 00:41:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - my suggest hitsound pattern ↓
    00:41:449 (1,3,4,6) - none. 00:41:712 (2) - whistle. 00:42:501 (5) - clap
  5. 01:23:554 (5) - add NC ?
only nazi mod ..orz
Please do not throw kudosu Unless you want to change :P

Good map & Star ☆~ ;)

Good luck~ :oops:
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