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Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size)

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Miya
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Miya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 Mei 2012 at 16:49:05

Artist: Nazuka Kaori
Title: Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size)
Source: Amagami SS
Tags: Ending Ayatsuji Tsukasa HeatKai
BPM: 114
Filesize: 5141kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,56 stars, 80 notes)
  2. Hard (4,67 stars, 197 notes)
  3. HeatKai's Taiko (4,76 stars, 293 notes)
  4. Normal (3,46 stars, 121 notes)
Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size)
Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size) (no video)
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Amagami SS Ayatsuji Tsukasa ED.
Enjoy with the tiny size video :)

All std diff is mapped by me~
Taiko is mapped by HeatKai

Thank you for playing :D

If you download this map before 04/29, please redownload for taiko bg~
Last edited by Miya , edited 6 times in total.
HeatKai
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HeatKai
can I make the taiko :3?
Virrus
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Virrus
Hi
00:27:766- whistle? (Only for the end of the slider)
00:29:883- whistle? (Only for the end of the slider)
00:31:985- whistle? (Only for the start of the slider)
00:34:080- whistle? (Only for the end of the slider)
00:36:185- whistle?
00:38:310- whistle?
00:44:082- Add reverse slider? (Although, any is fine)
Miya
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Miya
for what diff your is your mod?

@baka HeatKai : you told that someone will ask a taiko diff.. lol, so its you. Okay,if it is what you want :)
Yasora
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Yasora
mbak miya \:D/
Miya
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Miya
Yasora :3
HeatKai
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HeatKai
done!



I will make the taiko bg later

Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size) (Miya) [HeatKai's Taiko].osu
Miya
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Miya
ok, thank you HeatKai :)
ertyukjh010
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ertyukjh010


Hello, :)

[General]

Inconsistency Lead-In. Change it to 1500 of taiko diff.

[Easy]

01:22:509 (3) - Unsnap
01:23:035 (1) - Unsnap at Slider and end
01:24:614 (2) - Unsnap
01:25:140 (3) - Unsnap
01:25:272 (1) - Unsnap at Slider and end

[Normal]

Fine

[Hard]

Okay

that all
Miya
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Miya
oh god, i didn't notice that unsnapped note. Thank you for the mod and the star (i didn't notice it before, orz) :D
suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
Star, i love this music
Miya
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Miya
thank you for the star :D
regenz
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Joined November 2009
regenz
This is very nice clam song

General
use soft-sliderslide.wav plz

http://puu.sh/rE8S

and Add heatkai to tag?

Easy
Fine

Normal

01:00:922 (2) - whistle like hard?

Hard
Fine

can't point anything much map is close to perfect word for me :D
Miya
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Miya
Thank you so much for the mod and the star :D
Lol, i'm still forget about the tags, and baka HeatKai didn't mention it too, so i'm double forget.
Fixed all regenz ;)
Starry_old
Starry_old
[Easy]

00:59:870 (1) - I suggest you curve this. http://puu.sh/rI9m
01:04:080 (3) - Can you whistle the beginning?
01:06:186 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:28:817 (5) - Remove new combo
00:29:870 (1) - Put it here.
01:03:554 (4) - Same as in Easy
01:06:186 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:40:922 (6) - Do you mind putting this below the note before to keep the rhythm consistent?
01:03:554 (4) - Same as in Easy
01:06:186 (1) - ^
01:23:554 (5) - New Combo


Good map.
Good luck on rank :D
HeatKai
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HeatKai

Miya wrote:

Thank you so much for the mod and the star :D
Lol, i'm still forget about the tags, and baka HeatKai didn't mention it too, so i'm double forget.
Fixed all regenz ;)
wahahaha I forgot too, sorry!

EDIT: I fix something!

Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size) (Miya) [HeatKai's Taiko].osu
Last edited by HeatKai , edited 2 times in total.
Melophobia
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Melophobia
hi ;)

[Easy]
the current SV is 0.900000005960464, fixed it plz~
00:43:028 (5,1) - switch newcombos
00:45:133 (2) - add newcombo

[Hard]
00:09:344 ~ 00:26:186 - volume is too loud imo, use 50% plz (all diffs)
00:41:186 - add a note here
00:41:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - increase volume step by step?
01:18:422 - add a note?
01:22:501 (4) - this finish doesnt fit well imo ><

that's all p_q
Miya
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Miya
Thank you for the mod Melo, Starry. Fixed some :3
And uploaded HeatKai update too!
JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
Hi.
Some suggestions:

[General]
Seems fine.

[Easy]
00:46:186 (4,1) - Spacing.
00:59:870 - Move the timing point to 01:01:844.
01:15:133 (1,2) - Change those whistles into claps.

[Normal]
01:00:922 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:59:870 - Move the timing point to 01:01:844.
01:17:765 (1,2) - Remove claps from (1)'s beginning and (2), add clap to (1)'s end.

[Hard]
00:13:817 (1) - Remove this one could be better...for me.
00:40:133 (4) - Ctrl+R could make this more interesting.
00:59:870 - Move the timing point to 01:01:844.
01:04:344 (1) - Make it a circle and move to 01:04:607.
01:13:817 - Add a note.

Smooth map, can't find major problems.
Good luck.
Miya
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Miya
Thank you for your mod JauiPlaY. Fixed some :D
Kuria
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Kuria
Coming here from here
hope i can found something here^^

General:
looks fine here and there, just some suggestion.
Ini think it will be ok if you set the AudioLeadIn for 1000 instead of 1500 on all diff (especially easy and normal), since the intro are just begin on 00:00:923, and it was quite long for the player to prepare before play :)

Easy:
looks fine here and there too, so i just give some fix for a small parts
00:38:817 (1,2,3) - move (3) above a bit, the problem is the position of (2) to (3) are kinda too narrow since you suddenly must move your movement back after moving straight, and this is kinda hard for some kind of player (back jump? if i'm not wrong).
it should be looks like this later:
SPOILER
01:17:765 (1) - make this a normal curved slider instead of custom curved? it seems that the pattern kinda off if you make it that way
01:25:133 (3) - same with what i mention above, i think move this to up a bit would be better since for the newbie player, a kind of back jump/tapping are kinda hard to play.
SPOILER

Normal:
00:09:344 (1) - make this into fixed curved like 00:10:396 (2)? The pattern are kinda off on that part/whole map since only that slider have a different shape compared with others
00:15:659 (3) - make it less curving? so it will be looks more to wide V than tight V
01:18:554 (2,3) - move this 2 down a bit, make the (3) on a symmetrical position with (1) and place (2) right on the middle of that 2 slider, it can make the pattern flow better, it should be looks like this:
SPOILER

Hard:
nice :3

sorry can't mod taiko since i'm not understand taiko orz

i think that's all, good luck Miya!
here's a star, as promised^^
wmfchris
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wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
+500 ~ 1000 lead-in

00:00:396 - kkd here (remove the d at the beginning) sounds more natrual
00:06:975 (22) - I don't see the reason to put finish here orz
00:40:396 - K
00:46:975 - k d?
01:25:133 - try to make the spinner softer.

I appreciate pretty much how you put the patterns and dd---------k / dd---d---k are nice idea.
The biggest problem is you'll need a taiko BG seriously >: 3 recently the head of the character in the BG is "cut" by the taiko playing bar.
Miya
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Miya
@Envi : Thank you for your mod and star. Well, suggestion for your next mod. Don't often do nazi mod. Many people don't like nazi mod, unless you notice some pattern that break map aesthetical. Search for another thing, like hitsound, flow, spacing, general thing, etc.

@wmf : thank you for your taiko mod. Waiting for HeatKai response. About bg, HeatKai said he will make it, but he not make it until now. =3=
HeatKai
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HeatKai

Miya wrote:

@wmf : thank you for your taiko mod. Waiting for HeatKai response. About bg, HeatKai said he will make it, but he not make it until now. =3=
hehe sorry :p
I'll get to it soon! :D
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
hi ~
from our queue.

[Easy]

00:19:344 (2) - maybe this?
00:21:975 (4) - 1 grid left => 00:22:501 (1) - too
00:55:659 (1) - maybe this?

[Normal]

00:55:659 (4) - put on the middle?

[Hard]

00:46:449 (4,5) - put on the middle?

nyan.
very good and cute map ~
star and good luck :3
Miya
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Miya
thank you for your mod and star ryu :3
fixed some of your mod~
hillaryzx
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hillaryzx
Hello, start greeting with nyan~ :3

General

- nothing to say, skip this...

Easy

00:09:344(1) - moved this circle to 00:09:607?
00:41:975(4) - ok, this will be long. First, delete this note from here. Then make a slider starting from 00:41:449 to 00:42:501
01:17:765(1) - remove clap here and replace it with whistle. It should be better.

Normal

Maybe AR -1?
00:14:607(2) - I don't think repeated slider suits here. Just a normal slider would Ok.

Hard

00:16:449(2) - remove this circle?

For taiko diff., I'm sorry to say but I not an expert in taiko mod T.T

anyway, good map you have, Miya...
well, I'll take my leave...
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.

[General]
replace the red combo color for a sky blue combo color. the sky blue combo color fits with the song as she's singing about if she'll be loved by someone which is a sad thing.

[Easy]
00:26:712 (1) - hmm how about flipping it like this? as it stands the path would be hard for beginners to get to the next note. doing this makes it easier for beginners.
00:34:607 (1) - a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume. i think a finish here fits with the song.
00:45:133 (3) - maybe make this a NC because the lyrics change?
00:49:344 (3) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals. if you say it's too loud, add a green line to reduce the volume of the finish.
01:10:396 (1) - same as above but replace the whistle for a finish. if you ignore this, then add a finish with the whistle.
01:25:265 (1) - space out this spinner because this might surprise beginners.

[Normal]
try a slider tick rate of 2? i think it flows to the song as there some ticks that follow vocals and instrumental.
00:09:344 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume to 20% to match the piano?
00:17:765 (5) - ^
00:33:028 (1) - remove the NC because the lyrics are still going.
00:34:607 (3) - if you follow the suggestion above, make this a NC because of new lyrics.
01:09:870 (1) - add a finish at the end. it feels empty without a finish and it matches with the vocals.
01:25:265 (1) - same as easy.

[Hard]
here too. try a slider tick rate of 2? same reason as before.
00:43:028 (7) - align this to (5) so that (4-7) is shaped like a diamond.
00:43:554 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this? i see that it's a triangle, but IMO the last note looks like it's just placed there. i think doing this make it a fun and a gives a nice challenge for players.
00:57:765 (6) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:23:554 (5) - make this a NC because the lyrics change.

i guess that's it. Star and GL :D
HeatKai
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HeatKai
ahhh the background =w= I forgot again

Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size) (Miya) [HeatKai's Taiko].osu
Miya
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Miya
Thank you for the mod guys and the star 249 :D
Fixed some of the mod :3

lol, you forgot again about bg, baka HeatKai
HeatKai
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HeatKai
jeng jeng >:3
Miya
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Miya
yay +8, please ask some MAT HeatKai :P
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