Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
[General]
replace the red combo color for a sky blue combo color. the sky blue combo color fits with the song as she's singing about if she'll be loved by someone which is a sad thing.
[Easy]
00:26:712 (1) - hmm how about flipping it like this? as it stands the path would be hard for beginners to get to the next note. doing this makes it easier for beginners.
00:34:607 (1) - a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume. i think a finish here fits with the song.
00:45:133 (3) - maybe make this a NC because the lyrics change?
00:49:344 (3) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals. if you say it's too loud, add a green line to reduce the volume of the finish.
01:10:396 (1) - same as above but replace the whistle for a finish. if you ignore this, then add a finish with the whistle.
01:25:265 (1) - space out this spinner because this might surprise beginners.
[Normal]
try a slider tick rate of 2? i think it flows to the song as there some ticks that follow vocals and instrumental.
00:09:344 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume to 20% to match the piano?
00:17:765 (5) - ^
00:33:028 (1) - remove the NC because the lyrics are still going.
00:34:607 (3) - if you follow the suggestion above, make this a NC because of new lyrics.
01:09:870 (1) - add a finish at the end. it feels empty without a finish and it matches with the vocals.
01:25:265 (1) - same as easy.
[Hard]
here too. try a slider tick rate of 2? same reason as before.
00:43:028 (7) - align this to (5) so that (4-7) is shaped like a diamond.
00:43:554 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this? i see that it's a triangle, but IMO the last note looks like it's just placed there. i think doing this make it a fun and a gives a nice challenge for players.
00:57:765 (6) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:23:554 (5) - make this a NC because the lyrics change.
i guess that's it. Star and GL
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
[General]
replace the red combo color for a sky blue combo color. the sky blue combo color fits with the song as she's singing about if she'll be loved by someone which is a sad thing.
[Easy]
00:26:712 (1) - hmm how about flipping it like this? as it stands the path would be hard for beginners to get to the next note. doing this makes it easier for beginners.
00:34:607 (1) - a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume. i think a finish here fits with the song.
00:45:133 (3) - maybe make this a NC because the lyrics change?
00:49:344 (3) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals. if you say it's too loud, add a green line to reduce the volume of the finish.
01:10:396 (1) - same as above but replace the whistle for a finish. if you ignore this, then add a finish with the whistle.
01:25:265 (1) - space out this spinner because this might surprise beginners.
[Normal]
try a slider tick rate of 2? i think it flows to the song as there some ticks that follow vocals and instrumental.
00:09:344 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume to 20% to match the piano?
00:17:765 (5) - ^
00:33:028 (1) - remove the NC because the lyrics are still going.
00:34:607 (3) - if you follow the suggestion above, make this a NC because of new lyrics.
01:09:870 (1) - add a finish at the end. it feels empty without a finish and it matches with the vocals.
01:25:265 (1) - same as easy.
[Hard]
here too. try a slider tick rate of 2? same reason as before.
00:43:028 (7) - align this to (5) so that (4-7) is shaped like a diamond.
00:43:554 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this? i see that it's a triangle, but IMO the last note looks like it's just placed there. i think doing this make it a fun and a gives a nice challenge for players.
00:57:765 (6) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:23:554 (5) - make this a NC because the lyrics change.
i guess that's it. Star and GL
