Hello there ~
[General]
- Use tick rate 1 on all diffs?
- I think it would sound better if you started fade out at 03:20:349 and finish at 03:27:062.
- Your spinner isn't symmetrical check here to make it better.
[Stranger]
- The grey/silver combo colour blends in with the BG too much here. Can you choose a different colour or just remove this one?
- The slider velocity on this diff is very slow, I think it'd be more fun if you used a faster slider velocity and came up with some more patterns.
- You also use a lot of returning sliders like 00:19:090 (1) - and 00:24:964 (1) - I think it'd be more interesting if you used less of these. You might want to consider using longer sliders for example.
01:38:810 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:43:006 (1) - ^
03:10:279 (1) - ^
03:14:475 (2,3) - The 1/1 spacing is very close together and doesn't really follow the rest of the map. I think it's better to end 03:13:216 (1) - at 03:13:635 then respace.
03:20:768 (3) - Delete this and start 03:21:188 (1) - here instead.
03:21:188 (1,1,1) - Hmm this isn't very interesting. You might want to consider mapping the first spinner.
Overall there's nothing technically wrong with this map but I think you could make it more fun by creating some interesting patterns by using less returning sliders and a faster slider velocity.
[Friend]
- The distance spacing is confusing here. The 1/1 spacing is very small and the 1/2 spacing at places like 00:30:629 (2) - is very small and cramped. With this slider velocity I'd recommend respacing the whole map with a higher distance snap maybe enough so 1/2 doesn't overlap.
01:26:223 (4) - This "jump" isn't very intuitive on normal, it's confusing.
02:52:656 (1) - Spacing? You've spaced this like 1/1 when it's 1/2.
02:53:076 (2) - Follow the vocal here and start at 02:52:866 - it's a better rhythm imo.
02:58:950 (1) - Overlaps like these are very ugly, try to avoid them.
03:22:447 (1,1,2,3,1) - Like I said on Stranger, this isn't very interesting. I think you should map the first spinner.
With increased spacing this map would play much better, it might be a lot of work but please consider it.
[True Love]
- OD +1-2 please.
- Grey/Silver combo colour blends into this BG too, try to find another colour or remove it.
- I think you could improve the presentation of some of the sliders here I've pointed out the ones I noticed most when playing but this guide may or may not help you improve others.
- I think you could use less 1/2 stacks and replace them with patterns in this diff to make it more interesting.
00:20:768 (1) - This slider shape is quite ugly, just copy 00:18:251 (4) - and rotate it anti clockwise?
00:27:062 (1,2) - These wave shapes are also ugly, try to improve them.
00:34:824 (2) - Also ugly, try copying 00:18:251 (4) - again since it's a similar shape.
00:57:272 (6) - ^
01:02:097 (2) - Move this so it doesn't overlap with 01:01:468 (1) -
01:27:901 (5) - Move this so it's in the same position as 01:26:223 (1) - I think it makes the pattern look better.
01:35:663 (8,9,10) - Spacing? I would be better to keep it the same.
01:43:321 (4) - Delete? Doesn't really follow the song.
01:44:160 (7) - ^
01:44:684 (9) - Move this down a bit so it's like 01:43:845 (6) - it will look neater.
01:53:496 (3) - Down 2 (grid 3)
01:54:335 (5) - Up 2 (grid 3) ~ looks and plays better imo.
01:55:384 (2,3) - Don't stack this and make a pattern out of 01:55:174 (1,2,3,4) - it will flow better.
01:59:370 (7) - Remove this slider and have a note at 01:59:789 - instead? It follows the song better.
02:03:566 (5) - Maybe delete this and start 02:04:615 (1) - earlier so that it follows the background vocal more.
02:20:349 (3,1) - Spacing? Was this anti jump intentional?
02:25:384 (2,3) - Try to create a better pattern with 02:25:174 (1,2,3,4) - instead of just stacking.
02:49:300 (6) - Instead of a slider here I think it would be better to use circles to follow the vocal like 02:48:041 (3,4,5) -
02:53:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be better to move this further away from 02:53:076 (4) - I think, the spacing is strange.
02:54:754 (3,4,5) - I think it would be better if you didn't stack this, try to make a pattern or use another slider?
03:01:468 (3) - Flip this anti clockwise and respace, it will look better and be more intuitive ^_^
03:20:349 (1) - This slider is ugly, but imo you should try to draw one that doesn't overlap with 03:19:510 (2) -
03:22:237 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - As I said on the other difficulties this isn't very interesting so I think you should map the first spinner.
03:31:258 (1) - I think this should start where 03:30:419 (5) - is to follow the background vocal like the other diffs.
This diff plays nicely but I think you can improve the presentation of some of the sliders and try to come up with some more interesting patterns where you stack notes a lot.
Overall I definitely think you can improve the easier difficulties by remapping some of it and then just alter some of your patterns in the harder diff. If you have any questions feel free to ask me. ^_^