karenying wrote:

Please look at this mod before MAT or BAT 's mod

General
- Please use this for spinnerbonus.wav and soft-sliderslide.wav.Don't use 0 bytes .wav file for blank hitsound
- There is two .osb file in the folder, delete one please.Every map should have only one .osb file in folder.
- remove countdown of [True Love]
- Unite kiai time of every diff please

Friend
00:55:803 (1) - Unsnapped
02:28:950 (3) - ^
02:53:286 (2) - ^
02:58:111 (3) -

True Love
02:03:154 - Unsnapped timing section,you should snap it bcz of kiai time

regenz wrote:

Irc mod

SPOILER

23:17 <Yuki-kun> : hello regenz
23:17 <regenz> : hello
23:17 <Yuki-kun> : long time i dont see you
23:17 <regenz> : oh sorry
23:17 <regenz> : my pc broken
23:17 <Yuki-kun> : lol
23:17 <Yuki-kun> : that's why you had offline so long
23:17 <regenz> : yes
23:18 <regenz> : my hardisk broken
23:18 <regenz> : all gone :C
23:18 <Yuki-kun> :
23:18 <Yuki-kun> : sorry about that
23:18 <Yuki-kun> :
23:19 <Yuki-kun> : anyway, if you free, can you help me check my map?
23:19 <regenz> : now i can quick look
23:19 <regenz> : but can't deep check
23:19 <Yuki-kun> : ok
23:19 <Yuki-kun> : just a fast look
23:19 <Yuki-kun> :
23:19 <regenz> : link then
23:19 *Yuki-kun is listening to (Toyama Nao - Love Call)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/32042]
23:20 <Yuki-kun> : btw: your map
23:20 *Yuki-kun is listening to (Rita - Alicemagic (Blasterhead Remix))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15780]
23:20 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:20 <Yuki-kun> : so hard
23:20 <regenz> : lol
23:20 <Yuki-kun> : but i like this
23:21 <Yuki-kun> : and about the map
23:21 *Yuki-kun is listening to (Hashimoto Miyuki - TIME (FULL Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/20220]
23:21 <Yuki-kun> : are you really drop it?
23:21 <Yuki-kun> :
23:23 <regenz> : no sb left
23:23 <regenz> : my work gone
23:24 <regenz> : :C
23:24 <regenz> : cut pic gone
23:24 <regenz> : hardisk broken can;t recover
23:24 <Yuki-kun> : hmm
23:24 <Yuki-kun> :
23:24 <Yuki-kun> : i have that in my pc but that's map SB
23:24 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:24 <regenz> : i mean non upload pic
23:25 <Yuki-kun> : yeah
23:25 <Yuki-kun> : i though so
23:29 <regenz> : hmm
23:30 <regenz> : some point
23:30 <Yuki-kun> : after some modding from other player then my map become that xD
23:30 <regenz> : it's hard
23:30 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:34 <regenz> : last slider have special meaning?
23:34 <Yuki-kun> : yes
23:34 <Yuki-kun> : that's one of my favourite symbol
23:35 <regenz> : for this difficult i suggest
23:35 <regenz> : - 1 od
23:35 <regenz> : + 1 app
23:35 <regenz> : + 1 drain
23:35 <Yuki-kun> : oh ok
23:36 <regenz> : and replace slower slider with normal speed slider
23:36 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:36 <regenz> : normal difficult is not suit for slower slider
23:36 <regenz> : but it's up to you
23:36 <regenz> : it just my comment
23:37 <Yuki-kun> : that's because i learned from my friend
23:37 <regenz> : and i think app 6 is
23:37 <Yuki-kun> : then i tried to apply to my map
23:37 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:37 <regenz> : fine for this
23:37 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:37 <regenz> : i'll test easy
23:38 <Yuki-kun> : oh
23:41 <regenz> : ok easy enough
23:43 <regenz> : ok
23:43 <regenz> : there are some point thai suit for finish sound
23:43 <Yuki-kun> : where are those?
23:44 <regenz> : 01:32:726 (4) - this is bad point
23:45 <regenz> : right point is
23:45 <regenz> : 01:32:936
23:45 <regenz> : 01:33:775 (6) -
23:45 <regenz> : 01:34:615 (1) -
23:46 <Yuki-kun> : whistle?
23:46 <regenz> : no no finish
23:46 <Yuki-kun> : oh ok
23:47 <regenz> : i think there are another part
23:47 <regenz> : but there are same
23:47 <Yuki-kun> : well, i'm very bad about add hitsounds xD
23:49 <regenz> : 02:14:894 (1,2) -
23:50 <regenz> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156122
23:50 <regenz> : add note here with both finish sound
23:50 <regenz> : 02:19:090 you miss important note here
23:51 <Yuki-kun> : oh
23:52 <regenz> : 03:00:209 (7) - finish
23:52 <regenz> : 03:01:048 (9) - same
23:53 <regenz> : 03:01:468 (10) - at tail
23:54 <regenz> : oh and
23:54 <regenz> : make sure all difficult end at same point
23:54 <Yuki-kun> : wha...?
23:54 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:55 <regenz> : 03:26:223
23:55 <regenz> : this is easy end point
23:55 <regenz> : 03:27:062this is normal end point
23:55 <regenz> : 03:28:740 (1) - this is hard end point
23:56 <Yuki-kun> : hmm
23:56 <regenz> : you need to end all difficult with same spot
23:56 <Yuki-kun> : about easy end point
23:56 <Yuki-kun> : i think that 3:27:062?
23:57 <regenz> : 03:27:062
23:57 <regenz> : i think end this point here all difficult
23:57 <regenz> : is good
23:58 <Yuki-kun> : ok.
23:58 <regenz> : oh it's a bit long point
23:58 <regenz> : i think i can request for kudosu
23:58 <regenz> : lol

good luck

kazumikos wrote:

Hey~
deeply sorry for being late ._. I was quite busy and nearly totally forgot about this, sorry again ;_;
[General]

SPOILER

Well I was about to make a big mod about hitsound from the last time i saw this, but u changed it urself( lol), but still, too much whistles (u overused it) u should seriously consider to reduce them
However i still slightly disagree with sv in [True love], it's not really fast (for a hard diff), not really slow (for a soft song), it's just.. in the middle lol (for me this is the main problem of the whole map, w/o this ur map will remain only some minor issues left) It's up to u not to change it though

[True love]

SPOILER

well, combos r quite messy =/ and due to the fact that it will make this post incredibly long, u should fix it urself or pm me IG i'll be glad to help
00:30:629 (4) - remove whistle?
00:38:601 (1) - ^ ( at the end)
00:49:300 (1) - i dont think there should be a KIAI fountain here, remove it?
00:53:286 (4) - remove whistle
01:03:985 (1) - remove whistle at the start and the reverse
01:05:663 (4,5) - remove whistle
01:09:020 (2,3) - ^ (at the end)
01:58:111 (4) - remove whistle
01:59:370 (8,9) - ^
02:18:251 (3) - ^
02:24:125 (3) - add whistle
02:26:013 (1,2,3,4,5,) - remove whistle
02:36:922 (3) -remove whistle, add whistle at 02:36:712 (2) -
02:45:943 (4) - remove whistle
02:57:272 (1,3) - ^
03:06:503 (10) - ^ at the end

[Friend]

SPOILER

if u wanna add whislte to create sound for sliders only, just add whistle for the whole slider then remove whiistle at the start and the end, dont keep them, they sound horrible ;_;
00:15:733 (1) - add whistle
00:19:090 (2) - remove whistle at the end
00:22:447 (1) - ^
00:30:629 (7) - remove whistle
00:36:293 (4) - remove whistle at the end
00:50:768 (3) - ^
00:51:398 (4) - add whistle at the end
00:57:272 (3) - remove whistle at the end
01:03:985 (3) - ^
01:06:503 (1) - ^
01:13:216 (6) - remove whistle at the 1st reverse O_o
01:23:496 (4) - remove whistle at the start
01:24:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove whistle
01:28:321 (1,2,4,5,1,2) - ^
01:36:712 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - ^
01:43:216 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:22:866 (2,4) - ^
02:21:608 (1,3) - add whistle at the end
same with after 02:50:139 reduse whistle
same problem with combo

[Stranger]

SPOILER

this actually is the most comfortable diff among all, my ears r really relax when i play this diff
00:24:125 (4) - remove whistle
00:29:999 (1) - ^ at the end
00:34:195 (3) - ^
00:35:873 (1) - add whistle at the end
00:40:069 (2) - remove whistle
02:24:125 (3) - ^ at the end
02:35:873 (1) - remove whistle at the end, add at the reverse
02:50:139 (3) - forgot finish at the start?

sorry for long post (blame on the long song) xD
here da star and good luck ^^

Makar8000 wrote:

Recheck requested so here I am :3

[General]
Use a Stack Leniency of 6?

[Stranger]
00:29:999 (1,2) - Spacing
01:01:887 (2) - I think you should just straighten the slider like this http://puu.sh/6WE3
01:22:866 - You should make the volume louder in Kiai (90%-100%?). It sounds better imo.
01:27:901 (2) - Remove finish and use whistle instead?
01:28:740 (3) - Add a whistle on the repeat of the slider?
02:02:307 (2) - Remove the repeat?
02:03:985 - The the spinner start here and end at 02:06:503 ?
02:04:824 - Remove the Kiai Time here? It doesn't fit imo. (Be sure to change Kiai in the other difficulties if you do this)
02:19:929 (1) - Add a whistle on the first repeat?
02:25:803 (1) - Add a whistle at the start and the second repeat?
02:50:139 - Make the volume louder here like I suggested with the first Kiai?
03:08:601 (3) - Remove a repeat? Using more than 1 repeat on a short slider like this is not recommended for Easy.
03:14:475 (2) - Shorten the slider to end at 03:14:894 - ?
03:18:670 (2) - Finish at the end?

[Friend]
-In general I think your circle size and slider velocity are too high for a normal
00:50:559 (3,4) - I don't think you should stack these. It's a little confusing.
01:15:104 (1,2) - Spacing
02:35:454 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You use 0.5 spacing here when it's supposed to be 0.6
03:07:342 (3,4,5) - Spacing
03:08:601 (5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - You switch to 0.5 spacing here again D:
03:27:901 (1,1) - These notes don't fit imo. You should remove them and maybe extend the spinner?

[True Love]
-In general I think the slider velocity is a little bit too high and unfitting for the song. It doesn't seem like much of a problem but if you feel like it I think it would be better if you lowered it a bit.
00:33:356 (6) - If you are going to change the slider velocity here, you should use a different looking slider so it's not as hard to predict
01:11:118 (2) - Not a proper stack
02:32:097 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - The 1/2's have bigger spacing than the 1/1s. This isn't a good idea :s. Fix the spacing please so its more friendly
02:53:915 (5,6,7,8,9) - Not a proper stack
03:27:062 (1,1,1) - As said in the other difficulty, I don't think these notes fit. Remove and adjust spinner?

[A u t o] wrote:

This is my moding

00:25:594~00:25:803 (2,3) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
00:26:433~00:26:642 (5,6) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
00:30:209 (3) : Delete note
00:45:524~00:45:943 (2,3,4) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
01:06:293 (4) : Delete note and
01:06:053 : Add note (84, 336)
01:09:649 (4) : Delete note
01:15:104~01:15:314 (5,6) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
01:16:363 (1) : Move spin start point (01:16:153) and move spin end point (01:19:510)
01:22:866 (6) : New Combo
01:23:076 (7[2]) : Delete note
01:55:384~01:55:803 (2,3,4) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
03:01:468 (7) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x

Good luck!

Barney Stinson wrote:

I'm doing an hard diff

Mod Request

SPOILER

SPOILER

Barney Stinson wrote:

I'm doing an hard diff

Well, Nice map. That's all, Good Luck with your beatmap

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request

Stranger:
HP Drain Rate: -1
Overall Difficulty: -1
00:40:908 (3): Delete the slider and add a note
00:41:747 (x): And add a Slider here that ends in 00:42:587
00:50:978 (4): I think that slider sound better if ends in 00:51:293 (blue tick) and after that add a Reverse Arrow (if you think that you have have to make a lot of changes, don't make it)
02:02:097 (x): Add a Note
02:03:566 (spin): A whistle sound better than finish
02:43:006 (spin): ^^
02:55:174 (1): Whistle at the end
03:10:279 (4): New Combo

Friend:
Circle Size: -1 (Is to big Normal Size to Normal diff)
Overall Difficulty: -1
00:20:768 (4): New Combo
00:59:370 (4): ^^
01:16:363 (spin): Remove the finish and add a whistle
01:23:496 (4): New Combo
01:49:929 (1,2): Try something like this to avoid confusion

SPOILER

01:57:272 (3): New Combo
02:02:307 (2): Don't decrease the slider speed in Normal, is quite unpredictable
02:18:251 (3): Soft hitfinish for consistency
02:19:929 (5): ^^
03:17:202 (3,4): To avoid confusion:

SPOILER

03:28:740 (1): Remove New Combo and for consistency with Stranger and True Love, replace hitfinish to whistle

True Love:
00:16:363 (x): Add a Note for consistency
00:17:831 (5): New Combo
00:47:622 (5): Delete this note
00:48:041 (6): New Combo
01:41:118 (x): Add a Note
01:41:328 (10): Clap
01:47:202 (5): New Combo
02:22:237 (x): Add a Note
02:43:006 (5): New Combo
02:54:335 (6): Move this Note to 02:54:230
02:54:545 (7): This one to 02:54:335
02:54:754 (x): Add a Note
03:27:062 (1,1,1): This sequence is unnecesary. Is better if you make (1,2,3)

Barney Stinson wrote:

I'm doing an hard diff

@Barney Stinson I think that you have to make an Insane difficulty, because true love is quite easy to be an Insane

Well, Nice map. That's all, Good Luck with your beatmap

Genkishi wrote:

Hi
from my queue

Stranger
01:48:880 (1)-spacing
01:50:139 (2)-spacing
02:02:097 (2)-new combo
01:03:146 (x)-remove kiai
03:13:216 (2)-new combo
03:20:346 (x)-remove kiai
03:28:740 (1)-delete note
03:20:768 (1)-meke this spinner up to 03:28:740

Friend
01:32:517 (3)-remove finish in the tail of the slider and add a reverse arrow
01:50:139 (2)-remove reverse arrow
02:03:146 (x)-remove kiai
03:21:200 (x)-remove kiai

True Love
01:39:649 (4)-new combo
02:03:146 (x)-remove kiai
03:20:349 (x)-remove kiai


That's all

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
kiai time seems fine. but kiai fountains are not the same in all diffs..
LetterboxInBreaks in True Love diff is different from other diffs
combo color in all diffs are different , too

[skin]
you need :
reversearrow.png
pinner-approachcircle.png
and approachcircle.png's size is 128x128 , spinner-circle.png's size is 666x666

[Stranger]
stack leniency 0.2 is too small , nearly unrankble
02:02:097 (1,2) - too hard to play

[Friend]
SV is too high
I see you use Normal custom hitsound in this diff , so please copy soft-sliderslide.wav and rename it to normal-sliderslide.wav then put it into song folder
01:43:216 (1,2,3,4) - this has no problem if your SV is low and the DS is 1.0x , but now this is too hard to read and play with such a high SV and 0.6x DS
03:19:929 (3) - this slider sound odd , the repeat is not following music at all..
some suggestion here , low BPM song shouldn't use such a high SV imo , and with DS 0.6x it is too hard to read..
and you follow the vocal too much , many sliders and circles start at red line , this is kinda hard to read , too

[True Love]
HD+1 ,OD-1 , remember that OD>AR is not good
SV is too high , too
00:31:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is too confusing , confusing anti-jump and stack , and suddenly a 0.5x slider..
01:53:496 (2,3,4) - spacing
02:01:887 (1) - start at 02:02:097
02:19:719 - add note
02:53:915 (5,6,7) - too hard to play
03:21:188 (1) - delete this , make 03:20:349 (5) end at 03:21:188 is better
03:29:580 - I suggest add a note here
03:30:419 - and here

that's all
good luck

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

From some random modding queue

[Skin]

转盘挺好看的= =

[TL]

00:31:677 (2) - ctrl+shift+r 7 degrees clockwise
00:54:335 (3,4) - spacing?
01:23:286 (2) - 1 reverse, add a note
01:27:062 (3) - only whistle on the end
01:28:740 (2) - whistle
01:43:006 (3,4,5,6,7) - make a 1/4 slider with a lot of reverses here?
01:49:719 (3) - not symmetrical
01:50:978 (1,2) - change to reverse slider
01:55:803 (4) - slider?
02:26:223 (1) - +1 reverse?
03:01:468 (7) - go down? = =
03:10:489 (1) - ^

[Friend]

00:26:642 (1) - remove new combo?
00:28:321 (2) - make it symmetrical
00:34:824 (1,2) - stack?
01:00:838 (2) - slider?
01:08:181 (2) - split into 2 sliders?
01:48:880 (1) - not symmetrical? (=.=)
02:57:272 (5,6) - follow the arc of 1,2,3,4?
03:19:300 (1,2) - stack?

[Stranger]

03:16:153 (1) - a little touching the HP bar? (maybe it's because of my skin?)

Fine

1. osb. file deletion

1. HP-1?
2. 00:15:733 (1) - add slider head finish?
3. 00:17:202 (x) - add note?
4. 00:18:880 (x) - ^
5. 00:33:356 (7) - add new combo
6. 02:17:831 (4) - ^
7. 02:40:069 (8) - ^
8. 02:40:489 (1) - remove new combo
9. 03:20:349 (5) - add new combo?

1. 00:15:733 (1) - add finish?
2. 02:03:566 (1) - ^

1. 00:15:733 (1) - add slider head finish?
2. 00:41:747 (4) - add slider tail finish?
3. 01:34:615 (4) - remove slider tail finish
4. 02:03:566 (1) - add finish
5. 02:43:006 (1) - ^

• ~Friend~
  00:16:153 - Add a note or a slider at can end at 00:16:573?
  00:17:831 - ^

219,107,199929,2,0,B|160:120|120:160|120:160|72:120|0:136,2,239.999980926514,2|2|2

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

3:30 - 2 diffs

[friend]
00:24:125 (1) - x50 y181
00:29:580 (1) - keep away from last 4
00:43:216 (3) - x212 y320
01:40:069 (4) - NC
02:02:307 (2) - x260 y304
02:56:852 (4) - NC
03:19:929 (3) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184072

219,107,199929,2,0,B|160:120|120:160|120:160|72:120|0:136,2,239.999980926514,2|2|2

[true love]
00:59:370 (4) - NC
02:18:670 (4,5,6) - make them and 1,2,3 be symmetrical
03:27:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a pentagram

1. 00:32:517 (4) - Whistle
2. 00:35:663 (3) - Ending of slider ^
3. 00:40:908 (4) - ^
4. 02:38:391 (2) - Not stacked properly --> (414,138)

1. 00:33:356 (7) - Unexpected slowing down slider velocity.
2. 02:47:202 (1) - Stack onto 02:45:943 (5) ?
3. 02:54:230 (6) - nazi --> (222,215)
4. 03:00:629 (5) - New combo
5. To such a slow song, straight style doesn't fit much imo...

476,325,19090,6,0,B|451:348|420:360|383:347|365:320,2,119.999990463257

128,228,110139,6,0,B|76:284|127:335,1,119.999990463257,2|2

Sync wrote:

General
--Delete hit50k.png. There is no need for it

True Love
-- Combos are bit off
00:16:573 (3) - Consider adding a whistle at the start of this slider
00:17:412 (4) - New combo
00:17:831 (1) - Remove combo
00:19:090 (5) - New combo
00:19:510 (1) - Remove combo
00:37:132 (1) - Remove combo
00:38:810 (3) - New combo
01:05:973 (x) - Unsnapped inherited timing section. Snap it to the correct offset.
02:53:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole pattern is unreadable. Also, it doesn't fit the rest of the map very well. I'd advise you to not stack like that under sliders as regardless of user's skill level, it's hard to predict and hard to see.

Friend
00:51:398 (4) - Difficult to see
01:58:531 (1) - Remove all of these repeats; they don't make much sense.
01:59:789 (2) - Add a hit circle
02:00:209 (3) - Add a hit circle
02:22:866 (2) - The position of this hit circle slightly misguided me -- perhaps move it over like this? http://ssync.us/images/sg777u.png
02:23:286 (3) - New combo
02:24:545 (2) - Make this hit circle into a long slider. It feels empty with the way it is now.
02:41:538 (4) - Move this elsewhere - i'd advise to never stack sliders under hit circles like this, especially on a normal difficulty.
02:44:684 (4) - Same case here. Difficulty to see, the hit circle would disorientate the normal player and would likely result in a miss.
03:22:447 (1) - This spinner is very long. Consider shortening to an area you'd see fit.
03:29:580 (1,1) - Even if you didn't follow the suggestion above, this is certainly not a way to end your map -- especially after a very long spinner like that. It's very hard to predict these notes, so I'd remove them.

Stranger
-- The hit circles are incredibly difficult to see. I'd use a different background that isn't so bright. If you insist on keeping it, change the combo colors to something darker. If you do this, make sure to change all of the other combo colors on the other 2 difficulties. They must be consistent.

Looks like that's it. Good luck, hope I helped. Forum-PM me for clarification if necessary.

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi :d

4th mod from own queue

Stranger

00:28:321 (2) - whistle on start of slider
00:35:873 (2) - ^
00:40:908 (3) - whistle?
00:49:300 (1) - no finish?
01:05:244 (2) - whistle on start of slider
01:07:761 (1) - whistle on repeat of slider, no whistle on end of slider
01:11:957 (1) - whistle on start of slider, no whistle on end of slider
01:20:768 (1) - no whistle on start and end of slider, only on repeat
01:22:027 (2) - no whistle on repeat
01:24:545 (1) - no whistle on start and end of slider, surprising 2/1 whistle >:
01:27:901 (3) - no whistle
01:28:740 (1) - whistle on start and end of slider, no whistle on repeat
01:31:258 (2) - no whistle
01:32:097 (3) - whistle on start, finish on end of slider
01:34:615 (4) - finish on start of slider
01:38:810 (1) - whistle on start and end of slider, no whistle on repeat
01:41:328 (2) - whistle on end of slider
01:48:880 (1) - ^
01:50:139 (2) - ^
01:53:915 (2) - whistle instead finish for keep the 2/1 whistle
01:56:433 (1) - no whistle
02:16:573 (1) - no finish¿
02:29:160 (2) - no whistle on repeat

=v= sleepy song, Im sure I lost some hitsounds

Friend

00:32:517 (4) - whistle
00:38:391 (2) - whistle
00:38:810 (3) - whistle on 3rd repeat instead 2nd
00:41:747 (1) - wistle
01:02:726 - set a normal 30% volume sounset here then..
01:03:146 - back to soft 65%
01:22:866 - normal sounset
01:23:496 (1) - back to soft soundset
01:59:789 (2) - 15% volume?

nice usage of 2 soundset, soft and normal, but sounset changes feels a bit random, make it moar constant on your next maps, also you can add a custom "soft-hiclap.wav" with the file "normal-hitnormal.wav" it give the same effect, and you have not to use so many timing sections

True Love

- high spacing @v@

00:45:314 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/aucT ? :d
02:29:160 (2) - delete repeat and extend to 02:29:370 (red tick)
02:49:300 (6) - make it curved? since you have used many curved sliders on the mapset
03:02:936 (3) - delete repeat and extend to red tick

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue~~

Nice map~~ i think it's fine enough for being bubbled~~

so just some advices:)

General:
I dont know why but ur slider ball is not "roll"...there maybe something wrong with ur skins..or my osu...

Easy:
00:43:006 - Break start here? and then 00:47:622 - break hp bar in here?

02:10:279 - the second break is suggested to start here


Normal:
00:43:216 (3) - it may better to select a slider here (to 00:43:635 )

01:58:531 (1) - try to remove sliderslide sound here


Hard:
OD-1

00:32:936 (5) - NC here?

03:30:314 - three green line for only a spring...?



that's the best I can do~~nice map~~and good luck:)

CDFA wrote:

Desu!~.

Hard:
00:39:649 (3) - Kinda boring pattern ;~~;

Normal:
00:38:810 (3) - Also boring ;~;
02:58:950 (1) - ^

Easy:
00:19:090 (1) - Nou!~.
00:24:964 (1) - ^
00:52:656 (4) - ^
01:11:957 (1) - ^
02:19:929 (5) - ^
02:25:803 (1) - ^
02:58:531 (5) - ^

Desu.

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haiitharr~ ;D
You requested in my queue.

Stranger
-01:52:237 (1) - Remove new combo.
-02:00:209 (4) - ^ Same thing.

Friend
-00:17:412 (3) - Remove new combo.
-00:20:768 (1) - ^ Same thing.
-00:24:124 (1) - ^
-00:48:461 (6) - Remove it.
-02:23:286 (1) - Remove new combo.

True Love
-01:30:838 (1) - Remove new combo.

The skin and song is pretty ^^
Star~

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 128,0,255
Combo3 : 5,5,240
Combo4 : 255,0,255
Combo5 : 128,0,128

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

Combo1 : 249,253,200

SPOILER

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HakuNoKaemi wrote:

You did request so :3

• [General]

1. The placing of Kiai is inconsistent. Please make all diffs have same placing of Kiai's.
   
   [Stranger]
2. Approach Rate: +1
   
   [Friend]
3. 00:30:629 (2) - Fix spacing.
   00:38:810 (3) - Too many repeats.
   
   [True Love]
4. 00:27:062 (1,2,3) - Why is the end of slider (1), hit circle (2), & start of slider (3) all stacked together? I find it ugly so try to spread them out
5. 01:23:915 (3,4) - Try moving them here (as shown on the pic below)
   
6. 01:44:684 (7) - Try to move this hit circle here (as shown on the pic below)
   
7. 01:45:104 - Insert Break Time.
8. 01:45:943 (1,2) - Delete these hit circles.
9. 01:46:363 - Add NC
10. 01:47:202 - Remove NC
11. 02:29:370 (2) - Remove "whistle".
12. 02:29:789 (4) - ^
13. 02:54:754 (3,4,5) - Try moving them here (as shown on the pic below)
    
14. 03:02:936 (3) - Remove "whistle".
15. 03:03:041 (3) - ^
16. 03:11:642 (4) - ^
17. 03:11:747 (4) - ^

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~ Here's my mod (a request from my queue)

• [General]

1. The placing of Kiai is inconsistent. Please make all diffs have same placing of Kiai's.
   
   [Stranger]
2. Approach Rate: +1
   
   [Friend]
3. 00:30:629 (2) - Fix spacing.
   00:38:810 (3) - Too many repeats.
   
   [True Love]
4. 00:27:062 (1,2,3) - Why is the end of slider (1), hit circle (2), & start of slider (3) all stacked together? I find it ugly so try to spread them out
5. 01:23:915 (3,4) - Try moving them here (as shown on the pic below)
   
6. 01:44:684 (7) - Try to move this hit circle here (as shown on the pic below)
   
7. 01:45:104 - Insert Break Time.
8. 01:45:943 (1,2) - Delete these hit circles.
9. 01:46:363 - Add NC
10. 01:47:202 - Remove NC
11. 02:29:370 (2) - Remove "whistle".
12. 02:29:789 (4) - ^
13. 02:54:754 (3,4,5) - Try moving them here (as shown on the pic below)
    
14. 03:02:936 (3) - Remove "whistle".
15. 03:03:041 (3) - ^
16. 03:11:642 (4) - ^
17. 03:11:747 (4) - ^

Thats all!~
Nice map and good luck!~ :3

Touche wrote:

Well, my combos and general map >w<

[STRANGER]

01:01:887 : New combo
01:03:566 : Delete new combo
01:23:705 : New combo
01:24:545 : Delete new combo
01:43:006 : New combo
01:52:237 : ^
02:25:803 : Delete new combo
02:29:160 : New combo
02:30:838 : Delete new combo
02:56:852 : New combo

[FRIEND]

01:50:139 : Delete new combo

[TRUE LOVE]

No mods o_o!!!!!

[OPINION]

Slow song, nice diffs, nice BGS, nice timing, i love the TRUE LOVE diff :3 Gratz!

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello,

[General]

Kiai inconsistent.

[Stranger]

01:43:845 - Useless inherited poimt

[Friend]

01:52:237 - Useless inherited poimt

[True Love]

01:13:216 - Useless inherited poimt
01:27:901 - ^
01:33:356 - ^
01:43:006 - ^
01:45:943 - ^
01:55:803 - ^
02:33:359 - Unsnap, -3ms
02:36:712 - Useless inherited poimt
02:58:950 - ^
03:07:342 - ^
03:27:062 (1) - NC bug

that all

ertyukjh010 wrote:

NC bug,,, umm

This means is you cancel the Nc after spinner or the break. You must add NC there.

AIBat v2.0 wrote:

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Friend] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:866, ends on 01:44:684
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:50:139, ends on 03:03:356
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:03:461, ends on 03:11:957
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:20:349, ends on 03:30:419

- [Stranger] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:866, ends on 01:44:684
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:50:139, ends on 03:11:957
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:20:349, ends on 03:28:635
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:28:740, ends on 03:28:845

- [True Love] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:866, ends on 01:44:684
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:50:139, ends on 03:11:957
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:20:349, ends on 03:30:314
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:30:419, ends on 03:30:524

popner wrote:

I'll mod this afterward

• 01:21:188 (1) - remove whistle of the sliderslide
  03:13:216 (1) - like this pattern
  
  03:20:978 (1) - start this at 03:21:188 - then 03:20:768 - add note.

• 00:33:775 (1) - remove new combo
  01:23:496 (4) - remove new combo then next note of the add new combo
  02:02:307 (2) - more curve slider
  02:24:964 - do you like?
  img]http://puu.sh/wKXa [/img]

• AR+1
  00:22:447 (1) - add whistle to the end slider then 00:24:545 (6) - replace the whistle of the slider.
  00:26:642 (6) - add whistle
  02:29:160 (2) - remove whistle to repeat slider
  02:29:580 (3) - remove whistle

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Friend] : Nagakawa Kanon
- [Stranger] : Nakagawa-Kanon
- [True Love] : Nagakawa Kanon

wmfchris wrote:

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Friend] : Nagakawa Kanon
- [Stranger] : Nakagawa-Kanon
- [True Love] : Nagakawa Kanon

You used N:C1 but there isn't normal custom hitsound in it, make sure this is what you're expected

[True Love]
00:23:915 (4) - whistle here (with the instrumental note in the music), also whistle on ending of (6)?
01:12:796 (7) - there's an accent but don't feel like you need a finish here (you didn't add finish in similar position either
01:54:125 (3,4) - right 1 grid at the same time so (2,4) looks curving around (3) better
02:02:726 (3) - I don't see why the break has to end here specifically
02:29:160 (2) - the whistle stream sounds too loud

[Friend]
AR+1?
00:33:775 (3) - the ending sound is a bit excessive, you may want make the ending softer
01:12:796 (5) - same as [true love]
01:26:223 (4) - left a bit so that it's well curved by (3)
02:53:915 (3,4) - not suggested in a normal, it's hard to determine when the slider ends (and 3-4 is rare)

[Stranger]
AR-1

A pretty good trial. Something that you would like to improve it that the soft normal hit is appearing everywhere and sometimes it sounds good without them.

1. Use tick rate 1 on all diffs?
2. I think it would sound better if you started fade out at 03:20:349 and finish at 03:27:062.
3. Your spinner isn't symmetrical check here to make it better.

1. The grey/silver combo colour blends in with the BG too much here. Can you choose a different colour or just remove this one?
2. The slider velocity on this diff is very slow, I think it'd be more fun if you used a faster slider velocity and came up with some more patterns.
3. You also use a lot of returning sliders like 00:19:090 (1) - and 00:24:964 (1) - I think it'd be more interesting if you used less of these. You might want to consider using longer sliders for example.

1. The distance spacing is confusing here. The 1/1 spacing is very small and the 1/2 spacing at places like 00:30:629 (2) - is very small and cramped. With this slider velocity I'd recommend respacing the whole map with a higher distance snap maybe enough so 1/2 doesn't overlap.

1. OD +1-2 please.
2. Grey/Silver combo colour blends into this BG too, try to find another colour or remove it.
3. I think you could improve the presentation of some of the sliders here I've pointed out the ones I noticed most when playing but this guide may or may not help you improve others.
4. I think you could use less 1/2 stacks and replace them with patterns in this diff to make it more interesting.

Shulin wrote:

Hello there ~

[General]

1. Use tick rate 1 on all diffs?
2. I think it would sound better if you started fade out at 03:20:349 and finish at 03:27:062.
3. Your spinner isn't symmetrical check here to make it better.

[Stranger]

1. The grey/silver combo colour blends in with the BG too much here. Can you choose a different colour or just remove this one?
2. The slider velocity on this diff is very slow, I think it'd be more fun if you used a faster slider velocity and came up with some more patterns.
3. You also use a lot of returning sliders like 00:19:090 (1) - and 00:24:964 (1) - I think it'd be more interesting if you used less of these. You might want to consider using longer sliders for example.

01:38:810 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:43:006 (1) - ^
03:10:279 (1) - ^
03:14:475 (2,3) - The 1/1 spacing is very close together and doesn't really follow the rest of the map. I think it's better to end 03:13:216 (1) - at 03:13:635 then respace.
03:20:768 (3) - Delete this and start 03:21:188 (1) - here instead.
03:21:188 (1,1,1) - Hmm this isn't very interesting. You might want to consider mapping the first spinner.

Overall there's nothing technically wrong with this map but I think you could make it more fun by creating some interesting patterns by using less returning sliders and a faster slider velocity.

[Friend]

1. The distance spacing is confusing here. The 1/1 spacing is very small and the 1/2 spacing at places like 00:30:629 (2) - is very small and cramped. With this slider velocity I'd recommend respacing the whole map with a higher distance snap maybe enough so 1/2 doesn't overlap.

01:26:223 (4) - This "jump" isn't very intuitive on normal, it's confusing.
02:52:656 (1) - Spacing? You've spaced this like 1/1 when it's 1/2.
02:53:076 (2) - Follow the vocal here and start at 02:52:866 - it's a better rhythm imo.
02:58:950 (1) - Overlaps like these are very ugly, try to avoid them.
03:22:447 (1,1,2,3,1) - Like I said on Stranger, this isn't very interesting. I think you should map the first spinner.

With increased spacing this map would play much better, it might be a lot of work but please consider it.

[True Love]

1. OD +1-2 please.
2. Grey/Silver combo colour blends into this BG too, try to find another colour or remove it.
3. I think you could improve the presentation of some of the sliders here I've pointed out the ones I noticed most when playing but this guide may or may not help you improve others.
4. I think you could use less 1/2 stacks and replace them with patterns in this diff to make it more interesting.

00:20:768 (1) - This slider shape is quite ugly, just copy 00:18:251 (4) - and rotate it anti clockwise?
00:27:062 (1,2) - These wave shapes are also ugly, try to improve them.
00:34:824 (2) - Also ugly, try copying 00:18:251 (4) - again since it's a similar shape.
00:57:272 (6) - ^
01:02:097 (2) - Move this so it doesn't overlap with 01:01:468 (1) -
01:27:901 (5) - Move this so it's in the same position as 01:26:223 (1) - I think it makes the pattern look better.
01:35:663 (8,9,10) - Spacing? I would be better to keep it the same.
01:43:321 (4) - Delete? Doesn't really follow the song.
01:44:160 (7) - ^
01:44:684 (9) - Move this down a bit so it's like 01:43:845 (6) - it will look neater.
01:53:496 (3) - Down 2 (grid 3)
01:54:335 (5) - Up 2 (grid 3) ~ looks and plays better imo.
01:55:384 (2,3) - Don't stack this and make a pattern out of 01:55:174 (1,2,3,4) - it will flow better.
01:59:370 (7) - Remove this slider and have a note at 01:59:789 - instead? It follows the song better.
02:03:566 (5) - Maybe delete this and start 02:04:615 (1) - earlier so that it follows the background vocal more.
02:20:349 (3,1) - Spacing? Was this anti jump intentional?
02:25:384 (2,3) - Try to create a better pattern with 02:25:174 (1,2,3,4) - instead of just stacking.
02:49:300 (6) - Instead of a slider here I think it would be better to use circles to follow the vocal like 02:48:041 (3,4,5) -
02:53:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be better to move this further away from 02:53:076 (4) - I think, the spacing is strange.
02:54:754 (3,4,5) - I think it would be better if you didn't stack this, try to make a pattern or use another slider?
03:01:468 (3) - Flip this anti clockwise and respace, it will look better and be more intuitive ^_^
03:20:349 (1) - This slider is ugly, but imo you should try to draw one that doesn't overlap with 03:19:510 (2) -
03:22:237 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - As I said on the other difficulties this isn't very interesting so I think you should map the first spinner.
03:31:258 (1) - I think this should start where 03:30:419 (5) - is to follow the background vocal like the other diffs.

This diff plays nicely but I think you can improve the presentation of some of the sliders and try to come up with some more interesting patterns where you stack notes a lot.

Overall I definitely think you can improve the easier difficulties by remapping some of it and then just alter some of your patterns in the harder diff. If you have any questions feel free to ask me. ^_^

Yuki-kun wrote:

Can i ask you via in-game pm?

LKs wrote:

hi

since this is your 1st map, you may learn more if I convey you conception rather than concrete suggestions

aesthetic
is a important issue of a map. people judge a map from looking on it and playing it. here are two things that affect the both sides of map's aesthetic.

1.slider:

your sliders are not good-looking. it's because you didn't have such mature mapping conception in your mind. here are two tutorials teaching your how to make good sliders.

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/117425 chinese tutorial if you can read

True Love
00:15:733 (1) - http://puu.sh/24nTS
00:18:251 (4) - http://puu.sh/24nUs
00:19:929 (4) - http://puu.sh/24nVx
00:20:768 (5) - http://puu.sh/24nW0
02:53:915 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/24ofk

tips:
remember to keep the last node placed on the center of sliderend
slidertick is always good reference

2.flow

flow decides whether your maps are fun to play or not.

first your map should be looked fun. such as creative patterns, revolutionary designs or interesting spacing changes etc. various gradient of slider and notes alignment are also elements improve your map's playability.

for instance. in friend diff. you used these at the beginning: 00:15:733 (1,2,3,4) - and these play boring, even tho it's normal diff.
00:20:768 (2,3,1) - mention this, and all the other patterns. your mapping logic is simply straight lines parallel to x or y axis, or endless right angle turns.

fortunately we have a tutorial for this. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/86329. refer to it and more good maps to accumulate your experience.

however I'm not saying your map is bad. it looks, hmm not really poor as 1st map so just keep going