From #modreqs, offered m4m.
[General]
Cute.
Delete .osb file and full submit if you aren't using the storyboard.
Seeing how no other diffs have Bookmarks, remove the one from Easy as well. Not only does this save space (a whole line of text in the .osu file), it also makes things more consistent.
[Easy]
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[Normal]
00:20:078 (1) - Move right to increase spacing to 0.8x. On that note, 00:20:078 (1,2) - has 1.2x spacing. Try to decrease since this is Normal diff.
00:39:888 (1) - Covered by hitburst of 00:38:610 (2) - . Consider replacing 00:39:888 (1,2) - further left, and spacing the next 5 notes.
[eLtigreXXx's Hard]
00:41:805 (4) - Consider NC
00:42:444 (1) - Consider Remove NC if ^
[Don! Ka! Gezo!]
00:27:746 (1,1,1,1) - Feels kinda awkward; might be better if you used more notes like you do in the next "Wow! Wow! Wubbzy!" phrase.
[Insane]
00:06:977 (1,2,3) - Consider moving these to the right to increase spacing from the next pattern; right now (3,1) feels awkwardly close.
[Musty's Ridiculous]
00:11:131 (1) - Hits HP Bar.
00:10:811 (7,8,9) -
00:24:711 (1,2,3) -
00:27:427 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:32:539 (3,4,5,6,1) -
00:35:255 (1,2,3) -
00:37:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - Music doesn't suggest any spacing changes for the above streams, so try to keep them the same distance spacing.
00:41:166 (2,3) - These would be better if they were horizontal; consider (2) at x:356 y:192 and (3) at x:156 y:192
Good luck :3