This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年9月20日 at 20:08:30

Artist: yuikonnu
Title: Souzou Forest
Tags: vocaloid3 IA vocaloid mythol kosiga jin Nico Nico Douga
BPM: 180
Filesize: 21347kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:

1. Insane (5 stars, 681 notes)
2. kosiga's Normal (3.02 stars, 220 notes)
3. Mythol's Hard (4.98 stars, 511 notes)

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest
Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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- 迷ったときは、ここで待っているから -


Insane 　100% by me
Hard　 　100% by Mythol
Normal　 100% by Kosiga





morisita!

hi

no kds plz
がんばって～ :3

ありがとう！
頑張りますヽ(´ー｀)ノ

donpen~<3 <3 <3

Star~

おりごとう

good map

~

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (donpen) [Hard~].osu

02:58:590 (10) ずれてるぞー

nokudos

Quilt wrote:

02:58:590 (10) ずれてるぞー

nokudos

やらかしてた・・・・
うん

Finish~
no hitsounds yet..

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (donpen) [Hard~].osu

Mythol wrote:

Finish~
no hitsounds yet..

Thank you!
I am waiting for hitsound

Here you go~

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (donpen) [Hard].osu

Mythol wrote:

Here you go~

thank you!!

If you're going to add my name, please change to "Mythol's Hard"

gogo

Mythol wrote:

If you're going to add my name, please change to "Mythol's Hard"

oh

Normal :3

お願いします~

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (donpen) [kosiga's Normal].osu

kosiga wrote:

Normal :3

お願いします~

ありがとうございます！

いろいろ頑張ります

すべて提案なので、気に入らなければ聞き流してください～

Insane

• 00:40:590 (7) - 終点に重ねる（以下略）(x:270 y:303)
  00:54:007 (13) - (x:310 y:303)
  00:55:590 (7) - (x:111 y:130)
  00:57:257 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/qJea
  01:20:756 (9) - (x:263 y:245)
  01:28:590 (2) - (x:33 y:144)
  02:01:256 (4) - (x:162 y:279)
  02:17:423 (3) - (x:179 y:336)

とても楽しかったです(*´ω｀*)
kudosuは無くてもOKです～

jamxx wrote:

すべて提案なので、気に入らなければ聞き流してください～

Insane

• 00:40:590 (7) - 終点に重ねる（以下略）(x:270 y:303)
  00:54:007 (13) - (x:310 y:303)
  00:55:590 (7) - (x:111 y:130)
  00:57:257 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/qJea
  01:20:756 (9) - (x:263 y:245)
  01:28:590 (2) - (x:33 y:144)
  02:01:256 (4) - (x:162 y:279)
  02:17:423 (3) - (x:179 y:336)

とても楽しかったです(*´ω｀*)
kudosuは無くてもOKです～

ありがとうございます！
たぶん全部変更できました

from #modreqs

[Insane]
この曲にNormalのwhistle、というかNormalのhitsoundは合わない気がします

00:22:423 (1) - ちょっと煩いです　終点のclapを外し、
音量を60%に変更して(2)からまた80%へ
00:22:923 (2) - 始点finish
00:33:590 (1) - ^
00:41:590 - add note.
00:44:090 (1) - 始点finish
00:52:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - clap無い方が音に合うかと思います
00:54:423 (2,3,4) - backの音に対してclapがかなり煩いです、50~60%くらいに～
00:54:673 - add note
00:54:757 (5) - 始点finish
01:00:257 (5) - ^
01:02:757 (14) - ^
01:05:590 (1) - ^
01:10:923 (8) - finishあってないです。
01:21:923 - vocalはないんですがここにnoteがあると
clapをコンスタントに置けて違和感が少ないです
01:25:256 - ^
01:28:256 (1) - 始点finish
01:49:423 (1) - ^
02:02:090 (8,1) - spacing
02:05:590 (5) - 始点finish
02:06:923 (7) - newcombo
02:10:923 (1) - finish
02:21:590 (1) - ^
02:27:256 - add note
02:29:923 - ^
02:32:256 - ^
03:12:257 (1) - 始点finish
03:15:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 音量-30%
03:16:257 (1) - 始点finish
03:35:256 - add note
03:37:257 (5) - 終点に音量低めのfinishがあるといいかなって思います

良い譜面！頑張れ～　(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆

Melophobia wrote:

from #modreqs

[Insane]
この曲にNormalのwhistle、というかNormalのhitsoundは合わない気がします

00:22:423 (1) - ちょっと煩いです　終点のclapを外し、
音量を60%に変更して(2)からまた80%へ
00:22:923 (2) - 始点finish
00:33:590 (1) - ^
00:41:590 - add note.
00:44:090 (1) - 始点finish
00:52:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - clap無い方が音に合うかと思います
00:54:423 (2,3,4) - backの音に対してclapがかなり煩いです、50~60%くらいに～
00:54:673 - add note
00:54:757 (5) - 始点finish
01:00:257 (5) - ^
01:02:757 (14) - ^
01:05:590 (1) - ^
01:10:923 (8) - finishあってないです。
01:21:923 - vocalはないんですがここにnoteがあると
clapをコンスタントに置けて違和感が少ないです
01:25:256 - ^
01:28:256 (1) - 始点finish
01:49:423 (1) - ^
02:02:090 (8,1) - spacing
02:05:590 (5) - 始点finish
02:06:923 (7) - newcombo
02:10:923 (1) - finish
02:21:590 (1) - ^
02:27:256 - add note
02:29:923 - ^
02:32:256 - ^
03:12:257 (1) - 始点finish
03:15:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 音量-30%
03:16:257 (1) - 始点finish
03:35:256 - add note
03:37:257 (5) - 終点に音量低めのfinishがあるといいかなって思います

良い譜面！頑張れ～　(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆

ありがとうございます！
normalからsoftというところで躓いてますが頑張ります・・・

Coming here from t/81512

General:
Inconsistency of the kiai time use? Since i saw that in normal diff it's end 02:32:756 while in the hard and insane diff it was 02:32:256, make it same for consistency of the kiai timing, same goes for 03:37:673 on all diff.
you have some big part of unused outro here 03:39:090, and it applied for all diff, i recommend to cut some of that unused part so it can reduce the file size that unused in the song folder.

Normal:
I think it was pretty ok here and there, just:
00:57:590 (1,2,3,4) - i think fast paced pattern like this are still a bit hard for a pretty normal player(although it blend well with the song orz), reduce the slider length? so it can make a spaced tick between each sliders.
02:32:256 - stop the spinner end here? Since the other's diff are also have the end note at that part, moving the spinner end there can also fix the kiai time by fixing the timing point for the slider end.
02:48:923 - I don't see the reason why you should give a spaced part after that spinner? I think adding the break there would be better.

Hard:
OD-1
01:05:173 (6,7) - i think move this 2 notes down with DS 0,7 would be better, it will be look like this:
03:03:256 (5,1) - make a jump spacing on this 2 notes like what you did for 03:03:756 (1,2) so it will make a consistency in the jump pattern on that part.
03:04:090 (3,4) - same goes for this as above.
03:15:923 (2,3,1) - fix the spacing here, make it same as 03:15:756 (1,2)

Insane:
wow, i love this one, honestly.
AR-1 will be better imo, the mapset doesn't really suit with AR9 while the song are somewhat soft yet catchy.
00:46:757 (2) - move this one under (1) instead right of (1), the jump pattern are sems too narrow if you put (2) there.
00:56:423 (10,11,12) - fix the spacing here, make it same as 00:56:257 (9,10) too keep the jump spacing consistent
01:25:923 (6) - down a bit to make it symmetry with (4)
02:12:256 (6,7) - fix the spacing here, i think it's not really suited if you make the jump even farther on that part
02:53:423 (7,1) - spacing, make it same as previous spacing, also i think it was better too if you did it on 02:53:590 (1,2,3,4,5) too
03:15:257 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - not a really good pattern position here, why you don't make it like 03:13:923 (4,5,6,7,8,9)?

I think that was what i can found, really a good map
good luck!

Envi wrote:

Normal:
I think it was pretty ok here and there, just:
00:57:590 (1,2,3,4) - i think fast paced pattern like this are still a bit hard for a pretty normal player(although it blend well with the song orz), reduce the slider length? so it can make a spaced tick between each sliders. I do not want to change >< so I hear the opinion of other people.
02:32:256 - stop the spinner end here? Since the other's diff are also have the end note at that part, moving the spinner end there can also fix the kiai time by fixing the timing point for the slider end. I match here with a vocal. Other diff puts it in the rhythm. so I think this is not a problem. and when I change it, spinners are short in normal x3
02:48:923 - I don't see the reason why you should give a spaced part after that spinner? I think adding the break there would be better. to change depending on other mod ,so that over star rating orz

thank you~

Envi wrote:

01:05:173 (6,7) - i think move this 2 notes down with DS 0,7 would be better, it will be look like this:

SPOILER

03:15:923 (2,3,1) - fix the spacing here, make it same as 03:15:756 (1,2)

Fixed these~

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (donpen) [Mythol's Hard].osu

Hello

[kosiga's Normal]
* AR +1? Your current AR is seems slow

00:49:590 (2) - Add clap at end
01:13:256 (3) - Add clap
02:46:256 (1,1) - Add break time between this object. So the players are notcie that the object will appear ahead
02:53:590 (2) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug. Otherwise, the hitbursts will show "300" instead of "Geki"
03:01:590 (5) - The head slider is almost offscreen (just a warning)
03:15:923 (2) - Same issue as 02:53:590 (2)
03:34:923 (1) - Same issue as 03:01:590 (5)


[Mythol's Hard]
01:23:590 (4) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning)
01:27:590 (6) - New combo for new stanza?
02:10:423 (1) - This slider is totally overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts. It could be hidden for players after spinning the spinner


[Insane]
01:47:590 (1) - Add clap at end
01:48:256 (2) - ^
01:49:256 (7) - Add clap
02:00:090 (1) - Add finish at start
02:29:923 (7,1) - Swap new combo?

Good luck

Envi wrote:

Insane:
wow, i love this one, honestly.
AR-1 will be better imo, the mapset doesn't really suit with AR9 while the song are somewhat soft yet catchy. reserve
00:46:757 (2) - move this one under (1) instead right of (1), the jump pattern are sems too narrow if you put (2) there. Fixed
00:56:423 (10,11,12) - fix the spacing here, make it same as 00:56:257 (9,10) too keep the jump spacing consistent Fixed
01:25:923 (6) - down a bit to make it symmetry with (4) Fixed
02:12:256 (6,7) - fix the spacing here, i think it's not really suited if you make the jump even farther on that part Fixed
02:53:423 (7,1) - spacing, make it same as previous spacing, also i think it was better too if you did it on 02:53:590 (1,2,3,4,5) too reserve
03:15:257 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - not a really good pattern position here, why you don't make it like 03:13:923 (4,5,6,7,8,9)? reserve

I think that was what i can found, really a good map
good luck!

thank you

Leorda wrote:

[Insane]
01:47:590 (1) - Add clap Fixed
01:48:256 (2) - ^ Fixed
0:49:256 (7) - Add clap Fixed
02:00:090 (1) - Add finish at start Fixed
02:29:923 (7,1) - Swap new combo? Fixed

Good luck

Thank you

Leorda wrote:

[Mythol's Hard]
01:23:590 (4) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning) fixed
01:27:590 (6) - New combo for new stanza? ok
02:10:423 (1) - This slider is totally overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts. It could be hidden for players after spinning the spinner should be fine..

thx for mod~

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (donpen) [Mythol's Hard].osu

Leorda wrote:

[kosiga's Normal]
* AR +1? Your current AR is seems slow ok. changed

00:49:590 (2) - Add clap at end This is intentional. but ok. changed
01:13:256 (3) - Add clap sorry, no clap
02:46:256 (1,1) - Add break time between this object. So the players are notcie that the object will appear ahead ok.. change it
02:53:590 (2) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug. Otherwise, the hitbursts will show "300" instead of "Geki" fixed?
03:01:590 (5) - The head slider is almost offscreen (just a warning) fixed
03:15:923 (2) - Same issue as 02:53:590 (2) fixed
03:34:923 (1) - Same issue as 03:01:590 (5) ^

thank you~

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (donpen) [kosiga's Normal].osu

Above all

remove "vocaloid" or "vocaloid3" in tags


kosiga's Normal

00:55:256 - reduce the volume to 55%

01:15:590 - remove whistle
if so
01:15:923 - add whistle hitsound

01:16:256 -it's a little loud(Because you use soft hitsounds before this section),so turn down the volume to 55%

01:46:756 - turn up volume of the circle,it's almost silent,
imo it'd better to turn volume up to 45%
01:49:423 - change this slider's pattern into a smooth shape
02:03:423 - ^

02:20:932 - remove whistle
if so
02:21:256 - add whistle

02:21:590 - reduce the volume to 55%

Mythol's Hard

01:28:276 - move middle waypoint's position to x:292 y:136 hence it looks much more symmetric
02:53:590 - remove timing

Insane

00:52:340 - remove timing
03:00:840 - ^

01:06:923 - move 1 grid down
01:15:923 - x:412 y:316
01:18:756 - move 1 grid left
01:28:590 - stack with 01:28:756(3)? make a joyful jump

02:14:256~02:15:090 - make a pentagon pattern

02:58:756 - much farther,need to adjust spacing


good luck!

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Above all

remove "vocaloid" or "vocaloid3" in tags


kosiga's Normal

00:55:256 - reduce the volume to 55% why? I do not think this is loud sound

01:15:590 - remove whistle This is intentional
if so
01:15:923 - add whistle hitsound

01:16:256 -it's a little loud(Because you use soft hitsounds before this section),so turn down the volume to 55% I do not think this is loud sound.

01:46:756 - turn up volume of the circle,it's almost silent, change to vol40%
imo it'd better to turn volume up to 45%
01:49:423 - change this slider's pattern into a smooth shape no change
02:03:423 - ^ ^

02:20:932 - remove whistle ^
if so
02:21:256 - add whistle

02:21:590 - reduce the volume to 55% ^

thank you~

Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (donpen) [kosiga's Normal].osu