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t/81512General:
Inconsistency of the kiai time use? Since i saw that in normal diff it's end 02:32:756 while in the hard and insane diff it was 02:32:256, make it same for consistency of the kiai timing, same goes for 03:37:673 on all diff.
you have some big part of unused outro here 03:39:090, and it applied for all diff, i recommend to cut some of that unused part so it can reduce the file size that unused in the song folder.
Normal:
I think it was pretty ok here and there, just:
00:57:590 (1,2,3,4) - i think fast paced pattern like this are still a bit hard for a pretty normal player(although it blend well with the song orz), reduce the slider length? so it can make a spaced tick between each sliders.
02:32:256 - stop the spinner end here? Since the other's diff are also have the end note at that part, moving the spinner end there can also fix the kiai time by fixing the timing point for the slider end.
02:48:923 - I don't see the reason why you should give a spaced part after that spinner? I think adding the break there would be better.
Hard:
OD-1
01:05:173 (6,7) - i think move this 2 notes down with DS 0,7 would be better, it will be look like this:
03:03:256 (5,1) - make a jump spacing on this 2 notes like what you did for 03:03:756 (1,2) so it will make a consistency in the jump pattern on that part.
03:04:090 (3,4) - same goes for this as above.
03:15:923 (2,3,1) - fix the spacing here, make it same as 03:15:756 (1,2)
Insane:
wow, i love this one, honestly.
AR-1 will be better imo, the mapset doesn't really suit with AR9 while the song are somewhat soft yet catchy.
00:46:757 (2) - move this one under (1) instead right of (1), the jump pattern are sems too narrow if you put (2) there.
00:56:423 (10,11,12) - fix the spacing here, make it same as 00:56:257 (9,10) too keep the jump spacing consistent
01:25:923 (6) - down a bit to make it symmetry with (4)
02:12:256 (6,7) - fix the spacing here, i think it's not really suited if you make the jump even farther on that part
02:53:423 (7,1) - spacing, make it same as previous spacing, also i think it was better too if you did it on 02:53:590 (1,2,3,4,5) too
03:15:257 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - not a really good pattern position here, why you don't make it like 03:13:923 (4,5,6,7,8,9)?
I think that was what i can found, really a good map
good luck!