Thank you for modding and star so much !!Byakugan249 wrote:
Alright lets see what I can find.
General:
CLEAR!
Normal:
00:12:361 (4,5) - to follow the instrumental accurately, do this or to make it easier make (5) repeat once. you can use this as a reference if you ignore this. in other words you can do something similar to this did something similar to this
00:16:743 (1) - replace this for a 1/2 slider to follow instrumental? ok it really follows !
00:18:260 - add a circle? same reason as above. It's hard for beginner I think
00:37:979 (3) - I think adding a finish here would sound nice but at the same time, reduce the volume if you do so. I think half of 80% should be fine, or 40% if you don't know. if you do this, add another green line to go back to the default volume which is 80%.
00:46:069 (1) - ^ I know that is 40 -..-'' ok ! , this part should be 40 %
01:04:946 (4,1) - I think (4) should be a NC because of new lyrucs. yes (3) follows "o" while (4) follows "to" but at the same time the tone of the voice raises. Remove the NC for (1) if you follow the NC for (4) as the vocals are still going. fixed
01:21:125 (4,1) - hmm try this? i think this follows the instrumental accurately. again you can use this as a reference if you ignore what i did there. It's fine imo
02:00:226 (2,3) - maybe to make this easier, remove (3) and add a repeat on (2)? oOh ! I haven't thought that fixed
02:01:743 (1) - this spinner should end till 02:04:440 to follow the long pause fixed but I think 02:04:271 would be better
02:11:013 (3) - the repeat arrow looks slightly so to make it easier, remove the repeat and add a circle at 02:12:361. I think it follows the vocal much , it's fine
02:17:923 (1,1) - this spinner should end at 02:22:811 is and also replace (1) for a circle at 02:22:148 to follow the guitar. it's sudden for me. I think spin end my point follow sound though
03:00:564 (2) - replace the whistle for a finish to match the vocals. I think it's good but sorry I don't like finish too much :<
Lunatic:
00:16:069 (5,6) - how about extending the jump like this to make it fun and challenging? It's good but I don't like twice jump like this. I like jumping by full stacking :O
00:44:721 (2,3,4) - same as hard. It's fine since I want player to prepare for next jump
01:21:125 (1) - ooh just make it a wave slider. the end just ruins the look of this slider because IMO it looks ugly. LOL ! but I think it follows the vocal though also I feel better gameplay when I make this one
01:56:182 (1) - remove the finish because it doesnt fit with the drums. if you ignore this, then reduce the volume of the finish. I suggest 40% as it's not that loud and it matches with the cymbals IMO fixed but used 45% instead also fixed on other part and diff
02:50:114 (1) - ^ ^
03:08:485 (3) - move this to the right for an anti-triangle jump? nope I follow this slider 03:07:811 (5) - for encirclement
03:20:788 (3,4) - same as 00:16:069 same
this is the best I can do. i was expecting a touhou eurobeat map from you but to me this doesnt sound like it. oh well as long as this is a touhou arrangement map i'll take it.have a Star and GL
EDIT : Changed Background !