winber1 wrote:

Dax's

00:41:685 (3) - http://puu.sh/kVni fits better imo well.. kk
00:47:435 (3) - i'd tell you do to something similar to above to follow the vocals, but it ruins symmetry a little :/ but it's still a consideration you can take, perhaps you can think of a different symmetry to make it work out. kk
01:13:490 (6) - new combo? to follow the echo kk
01:14:928 (6) - new combo and remove combo from next note kk
01:16:186 (1) - remove combo and add new combo t onext note kk
01:19:600 (3,4,5,1) - i'd decrease the spacing a little No thanks..
01:23:374 (5) - new combo kk

winber1 wrote:

Insane

00:03:277 (1) - I'd just be more consistent and place this with the other notes. LOL, how the heck does that note is there?, fixed.
00:07:715 (1) - end spinner on red line. Fixed.
00:22:098 (7,1) - this isn't the best use of anti-spacing imo. It's readable but it doesn't really fit. I won't change this one.
00:51:747 (1,2) - move down to here? http://puu.sh/kVjf just my opinion tho Ok.
00:55:341 - the hitnormal is kinda noisy and loud, maybe decrease volume? Ok, decreased by 10%.
00:57:677 (10) - new combo to emphasize jump? Nope.
01:18:342 (1) - would sound better if you ended 1/2 tick earlier and added a note after it imo. http://puu.sh/kVjW Ok.

Guidelines wrote:

The number of maps by any mapper should not exceed the number of maps by the uploader: this means that if you have 2 diffs, no guest mapper can have more than 2 diffs; collaboration maps are exempt from this. Ask a BAT if you're unsure of who should upload the mapset.

Leorda wrote:

Hiii

General
* Your number of diff are few than guest mapper

Guidelines wrote:

The number of maps by any mapper should not exceed the number of maps by the uploader: this means that if you have 2 diffs, no guest mapper can have more than 2 diffs; collaboration maps are exempt from this. Ask a BAT if you're unsure of who should upload the mapset.

* Inconsistent timing section http://puu.sh/maO0
* Make sure the Audio Lead-In is consistent on each diff

Nice job

Darksonic wrote:

Casi 14 paginas tiene esto ya, mother of god no se rankeara nunca mas ;_________;

Darksonic wrote:

Casi 14 paginas tiene esto ya, mother of god no se rankeara nunca mas ;_________;

Kenezz wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
00:19:582 (2) - Considera empezar el combo aqui en vez de aqui 00:19:402. No lo considerare. Lo Hare. ewe Fixed.
00:35:216 (1) - Un whistle no vendría mal aquí, ahora se oye un poco vació. No siento que cambie mucho pero Igual xD Added.
00:46:716 (1) - Lo mismo que el punto anterior, se oye un poco vació, en este caso yo preferiría un finish. Added.
01:20:858 (4,5) - Te sugiero que en esta parte uses un espacio mas cerrado para evitar confusiones por el anterior slider con un sv reducido, http://puu.sh/nste, referido a la confusión por el aceleramiento del cursor y en el gameplay se sienten las notas disparadas, y bien, si quieres agregar algo jumpy te sugiero que lo hagas aquí 01:21:217 (1) pues inclusive la música lo sugiere. Solo lo de acercar notas ewe Kk.
01:24:182 (1) - El finish aquí se oye un poco mal, ademas de que la pista no lo sugiere adelante hay otras dos notas con finish y lo que hace este es opacar el sonido de los otros, eliminalo si quieres. Kk

Kenezz wrote:

[Insane]
00:31:622 (1) - Encuentro el new combo innecesario porque el patrón el básicamente el mismo y obviamente así es mas fácil leerlo.
00:51:747 (1) - Lo mismo que el punto anterior, elimina el new combo, ademas el combo es demasiado corto.
00:52:826 (2) - Elimina el finish del inicio, si quieres puedes cambiarlo por whistle para que no suene vacío.
00:56:779 (6) - Agrega un new combo para ser consitente con la siguiente parte (00:59:654 (1))
00:58:576 (2) - Missing clap al inicio.
01:00:552 (1) - Elimina el new combo, es totalmente innecesario.
01:05:224 (5) - La voz sugiere que el new combo debe iniciar aqui o aqui 01:05:045.
01:26:968 (1) - Cambia el whistle por un finish.
-Bien es todo, la diff no esta mal aunque podría ser mejor, algunas notas encimadas hacen que el espacio luzca un poco sucio pero podrías mejorarlo o/

Darksonic wrote:

todo fixeado, incluyendo la de Verdis.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Dax's Hard:

• 00:35:216 (1) - A finish here would fit rather well. Of course~ Kk
• 01:08:279 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note to stay consistent with 00:56:779 (5). Fixed.
• 01:18:342 (1,2,3) - Yeah, change this to 0.75x. The transition from normal to half speed it super weird. I think no.. Is normal. xD

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Hello~ Fulfilling a promise! (#modreq)

General:

• Insane has a later Audio Lead-in, since they all start at the same time, they should all be the same. Except for Normal (look bellow).

Insane:

• 00:06:943 (5,6,7) - These notes should be a little closer, jumps feel weird when they're slowed down.
• 00:42:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -This seems to be one big confusing mess. It will cause the majority of players to break their combos. Please re-arrange this pattern into something less frustrating and readable.

The only major problem I have with this difficulty is the constant use of patterns like this. Please avoid using patterns like this very often in the future, for they play pretty poorly.

DaxMasterix wrote:

Hello Kiddo. Im dax. Im in your list right? ;_; over 1 month ago... ;_; Some weeks you says ''You're 2 more up'' ;_; and now i think im are 20 more up ;_; awakening is crying

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Send me a PM, please.
I'll mod your map next, sorry I forgot.

Kenezz wrote:

Let's go!

Verdisphena wrote:

YES

Verdisphena wrote:

YES

Verdisphena wrote:

YES

Verdisphena wrote:

YES

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Ignacio's Normal]

00:58:216 (5) - New combo.

[Insane]

00:24:254 (6,7,8) - Space them normally? I don't like this kind of jump.
01:00:552 (5) - New combo due to the spacing change.

Shana Aisaka wrote:

kinda late to said this but.. Omedetou!! >.<"