Harro ><
I see this from your mod queue, and I think I'll post. I hope my mod helps ><
-general-
1) um.. when I browse it in youtube and other sources, the title is supposed to be Aka Hi
toha. not aka hinoha ><;; but since the last ranked map use the title aka hinoha-- i'm not sure about this T_T;;
2) source : Kuro Usa P
3) why don't add the enligsh translation (A Red Leaf) and the album (Kimi no Iru Keshiki) to the tag?
4) I think preview time is either 208927 or 99141
-easy-
00:15:524- (2) I think it sounds better if you move this 1/2 beat forward.
00:36:907- (4) why don't make this slider symetrical?
00:40:737- (2) remove whistle and change it to finish? (to match with previous finish)
01:30:523- (5) remove nc?
01:37:226- (1) move it 1/2 beat backward?
01:48:076- (1,2) I personally think that this pattern is too hard for easy (although the bpm is small). I suggest you change (1) to 1/2 beat slider, not 3/4 ><
01:56:374- (2) remove whistle and change it to finish? (to match with previous finish)
02:52:225- (2) use finish instead?
03:27:013- (2,3) I personally thinks that this looks tidier at 388,140.
03:27:70- (4,1) follows after ^
03:35:151- (1) I'm not sure with the idea 1/4 beat in easy ... ><;; but this match-- so idk ><
good diff ><!
-normal-
uh.. this looks more like a hard to me ._.;;
00:24:141- (1) use this slider instead?
00:57:970- (4) use grid level 4, move 2 grid to make it linear with the beat before ><
02:20:949- (4) what does this slider follow?
02:28:608- (9) move this 1/2 beat backward to follow lyric.
02:29:247- (10) what does this follow? ><;;
03:16:161- (1) move 1/4 beat earlier?
another good diff ><
-hard-
00:59:087- (2) (nazi) tidy this slider a bit?
01:36:587- (4) add finish in the end of slider to balance with the finish earlier?
01:58:928- (1) move spinner 1/2 beat backward and add a note (finish) here? there's still the drum playing.
03:23:821- (4) I think it sounds better with a single beat?
another great diff T_T;;
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star ^^
I hope this help~