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MARiA - Aka Hitoha

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Mystica
798 posts
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Topic Starter
Mystica
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月17日 at 12:20:05

Artist: MARiA
Title: Aka Hitoha
Source: Kurousa-P
Tags: Hatsune Miku Megurine Luka lks pokie Vocaloid Vocaloid2 A Red Leaf
BPM: 94
Filesize: 22479kb
Play Time: 03:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.86 stars, 426 notes)
  2. LKs' Normal (4.36 stars, 350 notes)
  3. Pokie's Easy (2.21 stars, 193 notes)
Download: MARiA - Aka Hitoha
Download: MARiA - Aka Hitoha (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[Easy] By Pokie
[Normal] By LKs
[Hard] By Mystica
Last edited by Mystica , edited 26 times in total.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
Timing code is here
SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
3716,638.297872340426,4,1,0,70,1,0
43290,638.297872340426,4,1,0,70,1,0
84141,638.297872340426,3,1,0,70,1,0
99779,638.297872340426,4,1,0,70,1,0
118928,638.297872340426,4,1,0,70,1,0
159779,638.297872340426,3,1,0,70,1,0
175098,638.297872340426,5,1,0,70,1,0
181481,638.297872340426,6,1,0,70,1,0
185311,638.297872340426,7,1,0,70,1,0
189779,638.297872340426,4,1,0,70,1,0

or you can use the .osu XD
當年完全不知道該怎麼把拍子對準,黑歷史阿!!

Download: MARiA - Aka Hinoha (Mystica) [Timing].osu
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
難度名隨意改._.

Download: MARiA - Aka Hinoha (Mystica) [eeeeeasy].osu
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
先做这些 我觉得其实真够了 之后都是重复的
真不够再加
Download: MARiA - Aka Hinoha (Mystica) [Normal].osu
同难度名随意改
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
some random suggestions ..

[Hard]
03:08:582 (14) - 1 grid down ?
00:34:992 (2) - - this part mb change it http://puu.sh/7HJP (fits better with vocal ...imo)
01:50:630 (2) - same ^

[Normal]
01:18:715 (4,5,1) stack mb ?
and i think [Normal] is little bit [Hard] (4.44 stars) xD
Sync
osu! Alumni
1,575 posts
Joined April 2011
Sync
Hi, here for M4M. I'll post the map in your thread and you can also find it in my signature.

Hard:
00:13:928 (1,2,3,4) - This part doesn't really fit the music... I think something like this sounds and feels much better: http://screensnapr.com/e/CZXhaJ.png
00:16:481 (1) - Same deal. Please consider this.
03:05:311 (1) - These jumps don't fit at all and are very, very unpredictable. Add jumps here, but to a lesser extent.
03:19:991 (1) - I get what you were trying to do here, but this part is boring. This can still be a calm section but suggestions regarding this are below
03:20:630 (2) - Add a slider here lasting half a beat.
03:21:268 (3) - Add a hit circle here
03:21:906 (1) - New combo
03:22:544 (2) - Make this one tick longer
03:23:183 (3) - Add a slider here lasting half a beat
03:23:821 (4) - Remove this slider and add a hit circle
03:24:459 (1) - Add a slider here, NC
03:25:098 (2) - Make this a slider and make it last until 3:25:576
03:25:736 (3) - Add a slider here lasting half a beat
03:27:013 (5) - Add a hit circle

LKs' Normal:
-- This is -way- too hard to be considered a normal. Lots of offbeat (blue tick) notes, lots of stacking, and lots of movement. I'll treat this as a hard.
00:33:077 (4) - Add a hit circle
00:43:290 (4) - Remove this
00:43:928 (1) - Place this where (4) was and it it where it originally was.
01:23:183 (2) - This part is a bit much but suitable. Add a hit circle here.
01:32:438 (2) - Make this one tick shorter
01:47:119 (4) - Stack this where (2) was
01:53:981 (6) - Add a slider here that lasts one tick
01:54:300 (7) - Remove this
01:54:459 (7) - Add a hit circle
01:59:247 (1) - Make the slider start here and end it where it originally ends.

Pokie's Easy:
00:13:928 (1) - This part... doesn't fit the music at all. I changed a lot that may be confusing to explain in text, so here's a picture reference: http://screensnapr.com/e/eCKVf0.png
00:41:694 (3) - Add a hit circle
01:25:736 (2) - Add a hit circle
01:30:523 (1) - Make this one tick shorter
01:32:757 (3) - Make this repeat once
01:39:779 (1) - Add a hit circle
01:57:332 (3) - Add a hit circle

Looks like that's it. Good luck, and if you need any clarification PM me.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

[Normal]
01:18:715 (4,5,1) stack mb ? no mb?
and i think [Normal] is little bit [Hard] (4.44 stars) xD i don't really care about diff name, mb okay

Sync wrote:

LKs' Normal:
-- This is -way- too hard to be considered a normal. Lots of offbeat (blue tick) notes, lots of stacking, and lots of movement. I'll treat this as a hard. it's up to you guys and the mapper wether this diff should be called as Normal or Normal+ or Hard- or Hard or anything else. i don't think it is hard though, comparing to Mystica's Hard
00:33:077 (4) - Add a hit circle
00:43:290 (4) - Remove this
00:43:928 (1) - Place this where (4) was and it it where it originally was. not bad idea, but this is not my style, what's more, i intended to make this diff as a Normal, it will be increased difficulty if i do that
01:23:183 (2) - This part is a bit much but suitable. Add a hit circle here.
01:32:438 (2) - Make this one tick shorter
01:47:119 (4) - Stack this where (2) was
01:53:981 (6) - Add a slider here that lasts one tick
01:54:300 (7) - Remove this
01:54:459 (7) - Add a hit circle
01:59:247 (1) - Make the slider start here and end it where it originally ends. ok
Last edited by LKs , edited 1 time in total.
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie

Sync wrote:

Pokie's Easy:
00:13:928 (1) - This part... doesn't fit the music at all. I changed a lot that may be confusing to explain in text, so here's a picture reference: http://screensnapr.com/e/eCKVf0.png
00:41:694 (3) - Add a hit circle
01:25:736 (2) - Add a hit circle
01:30:523 (1) - Make this one tick shorter
01:32:757 (3) - Make this repeat once
01:39:779 (1) - Add a hit circle oops, it will be covered by spinner's hitburst: http://puu.sh/7Ikk
01:57:332 (3) - Add a hit circle
Won't change at this moment, adding notes would raise star rating.
Thanks for your modding.
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Takos
Hi Mystica~
M4M request from your queue.

I always love your hitsounds
All suggestions

General
Shouldn't the Kiai be same in all diffs?
BG size 800x599 lol change it to 800x600

Pokie's Easy
I think you should map the whole song. If you choose not to, remove the useless red timing lines
Use kiai time as other diffs?
00:42:013 (1) - Silence the end as the other diffs do?
01:33:715 (4) - NC
01:37:226 (1) - Ending a spinner on a red tick feels weird


LKs' Normal
Map the whole song? If not, remove the useless red timing lines.
00:56:055 (5) - NC
01:01:162 (5) - NC
01:02:438 (5) - Remove NC
01:59:566 (1) - Start spinner right after 01:58:928 (1) - ? this spinner starts too slow

Hard
00:21:907 (2) - I feel that it would be easier to stream if you remove this note
00:29:886 (2,3,4) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/7I9J
00:34:992 (2,3,4) - ^
00:43:290 (1) - Add a decrescendo to this spinner?
01:03:715 (1) - I feel the hitsound(especially the claps) is too strong starting from here. Maybe lower volume a bit?
01:42:810 - add a note here?
02:30:842 (4,5) - This overlap doesn't look pretty imo (hard to read?)
03:05:311 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This part threw me off while I was playing ;w; This jump is too harsh for a hard diff. I also think you should rethink about the order~. Order suggestion http://puu.sh/7IbO
03:07:225 (1) - Add finish?
03:19:991 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders twice longer? Plays better
03:25:736 - Add note?
03:27:013 - ^
03:48:076 (1) - Decrescendo?

Tried my best.
Nice song and map. I enjoyed playing this
Looking forward for ranked~
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

Takos wrote:


LKs' Normal
Map the whole song? If not, remove the useless red timing lines. removed
00:56:055 (5) - NC ok
01:01:162 (5) - NC ok
01:02:438 (5) - Remove NC ok
01:59:566 (1) - Start spinner right after 01:58:928 (1) - ? this spinner starts too slow fixed
http://puu.sh/7KhK

[attachment=0:6586d]MARiA - Aka Hinoha (Mystica) [LKs' Normal].osu[/attachment:6586d]
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie

Takos wrote:

Pokie's Easy
I think you should map the whole song. If you choose not to, remove the useless red timing lines ok
Use kiai time as other diffs?
00:42:013 (1) - Silence the end as the other diffs do?
01:33:715 (4) - NC
01:37:226 (1) - Ending a spinner on a red tick feels weird
all fixed :D Thanks

Download: MARiA - Aka Hinoha (Mystica) [Pokie's Easy].osu
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Mystica

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

some random suggestions ..

[Hard]
03:08:582 (14) - 1 grid down ? k
00:34:992 (2) - - this part mb change it http://puu.sh/7HJP (fits better with vocal ...imo) leave me think
01:50:630 (2) - same ^ ^

Sync wrote:

Hi, here for M4M. I'll post the map in your thread and you can also find it in my signature.

Hard:
00:13:928 (1,2,3,4) - This part doesn't really fit the music... I think something like this sounds and feels much better: http://screensnapr.com/e/CZXhaJ.png nya
00:16:481 (1) - Same deal. Please consider this. nya
03:05:311 (1) - These jumps don't fit at all and are very, very unpredictable. Add jumps here, but to a lesser extent. ok got changed here
03:19:991 (1) - I get what you were trying to do here, but this part is boring. This can still be a calm section but suggestions regarding this are below comparing to the follow part,this seems more fit....ummmm....
03:20:630 (2) - Add a slider here lasting half a beat.
03:21:268 (3) - Add a hit circle here
03:21:906 (1) - New combo
03:22:544 (2) - Make this one tick longer
03:23:183 (3) - Add a slider here lasting half a beat
03:23:821 (4) - Remove this slider and add a hit circle
03:24:459 (1) - Add a slider here, NC
03:25:098 (2) - Make this a slider and make it last until 3:25:576
03:25:736 (3) - Add a slider here lasting half a beat
03:27:013 (5) - Add a hit circle the follow part take some changes yet..

Takos wrote:

Hi Mystica~
M4M request from your queue.

I always love your hitsounds
All suggestions

General
Shouldn't the Kiai be same in all diffs? cause it contains other mappers,So np
BG size 800x599 lol change it to 800x600 lol fixed later.

Hard
00:21:907 (2) - I feel that it would be easier to stream if you remove this note k.
00:29:886 (2,3,4) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/7I9J think background source,this may better
00:34:992 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:43:290 (1) - Add a decrescendo to this spinner? um...I considered it....
01:03:715 (1) - I feel the hitsound(especially the claps) is too strong starting from here. Maybe lower volume a bit? yeah...actually I add clap,it has compare to the normalhit..you can got it in some part..
01:42:810 - add a note here? sounds bad may...
02:30:842 (4,5) - This overlap doesn't look pretty imo (hard to read?) ahaha....
03:05:311 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This part threw me off while I was playing ;w; This jump is too harsh for a hard diff. I also think you should rethink about the order~. Order suggestion http://puu.sh/7IbO ok use another style..
03:07:225 (1) - Add finish? n-f sounds bad um......may think another to use here
03:19:991 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders twice longer? Plays better k
03:25:736 - Add note? nya
03:27:013 - ^
03:48:076 (1) - Decrescendo? ^

Tried my best.
Nice song and map. I enjoyed playing this
Looking forward for ranked~
Thanks all you guys mod it...M4M may done this weekend
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
http://puu.sh/7KTs
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
试玩了一下 音效美:D
关于NORMAL其实可以换成HARD :D 有几个地方对于NORMAL来说感觉有些难读 第一PC的时候出了很多100 (不过大概是我太弱
[Hard] 良心
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
統一

Download: MARiA - Aka Hinoha (Mystica) [Pokie's Easy].osu
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Mystica
麻烦LKs和Pokie了>W<
updated

_Kiva wrote:

试玩了一下 音效美:D
关于NORMAL其实可以换成HARD :D 有几个地方对于NORMAL来说感觉有些难读 第一PC的时候出了很多100 (不过大概是我太弱
[Hard] 良心
我善良啊
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Request from Queue

ψ(´ڡ`❤)Aoi's Mod

General
  1. 视频略大而且效果不好。如果你有高清的源可以让我来试试
Hard
  1. S:C1的clap音效音量弄得太大了，可以降低30%
  2. 00:14:886 (3) - 和曲子不协调了。改成两个circle+一个1/2beat的滑条试试
  3. 00:22:873 (9) - 滑条结尾的clap加的并不合适
  4. 连打和堆在一起的点有点恶心，其他都还不错
Normal
  1. 确定这是NM么？怎么感觉比Hard还难(◦'﹏'◦)
  2. 作为NM连打的间距太大了
  3. 00:30:205 (3,4,5,6) - 这里我保证死一片
  4. 00:54:779 (3) - 这两个我感觉用1/4beat并不是很好，增加个reverse么
  5. 01:31:800 (1) - finish
  6. 01:39:779 (1) - ^
  7. 02:19:353 (1) - ^
  8. 02:43:608 (1) - ^
  9. 02:51:268 (3) - 开头加finish
Easy
  1. 01:53:821 (2,3,4) - 这几个点要么都叠在一起要么就都分看，现在这样看着不伦不类啊
  2. 很好的排列但是1/2甚至1/4beat太多了
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

AoiX wrote:

Normal[list]
[*]确定这是NM么？怎么感觉比Hard还难(◦'﹏'◦) oh 我哭了
[*]作为NM连打的间距太大了 但这是94bpm的1/4 也就是bpm188的1/2嘛
[*]00:30:205 (3,4,5,6) - 这里我保证死一片 改
[*]00:54:779 (3) - 这两个我感觉用1/4beat并不是很好，增加个reverse么 先不加
[*]01:31:800 (1) - finish 想法不错但finish不适合这歌
Download: MARiA - Aka Hinoha (Mystica) [LKs' Normal].osu
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie

AoiX wrote:

Easy
  1. 01:53:821 (2,3,4) - 这几个点要么都叠在一起要么就都分看，现在这样看着不伦不类啊 呼應上combo, 暫時保留
  2. 很好的排列但是1/2甚至1/4beat太多了 啊哈哈這個無法否認, 越往後就自然塞越多了
kong12345wai
40 posts
Joined February 2011
kong12345wai
that is normal???i don`t feel i was playing normal...i feel i was playing hard-_-
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Mystica

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

ψ(´ڡ`❤)Aoi's Mod

General
  1. 视频略大而且效果不好。如果你有高清的源可以让我来试试
好我哪天找你压制
Hard
  1. S:C1的clap音效音量弄得太大了，可以降低30% s-c1的clap就是原本的hitnormal+了一个 突出重音效果的
  2. 00:14:886 (3) - 和曲子不协调了。改成两个circle+一个1/2beat的滑条试试 我一直觉得这段挺好的啊 保留意见看下几个modder意见
  3. 00:22:873 (9) - 滑条结尾的clap加的并不合适 替换过一次hitsound忘记修改了 fix
  4. 连打和堆在一起的点有点恶心，其他都还不错
啊哈哈 97的1/8确实比较蛋疼就是了
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Modding from #MR, all suggestions

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
Lower SV? you can use "scaling" to resize sliders
02:39:140 (2) - -1 reverse
03:46:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing

[Hard]
00:20:950 (5,6,1) - this?
15
00:27:173 (2) - add note
00:38:184 (3,1) - this? scrn16.png (I lowered AR to make it clear)
16
00:39:939 (4) - add note
01:21:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a star formation?
01:58:289 (4) - this?
17
02:38:502 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - change to a note stream / a slider stream? mixing doesn't play good
03:47:757 (4) - this?
18
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
/me from my Queue

这歌怎么这么大;_;下了我好久

红一叶俺の爱<333

[General]

add Vocaloid and Vocaloid2 in tag

set preview time

目前的kiai time似乎不统一，统一kiai time

按理来说原曲是Luka所以可以删掉Hatsune Miku..不过这个随意了

letterbox in breaks可以关

神音效，我给跪了

[Easy]

00:21:269 (1) - 一般来说建议不叠，后面也是，不过管他呢╮(╯▽╰)╭
01:25:417 (x) - add circle
03:35:151 (1) - 蓝线对Easy来说实在是有点难了O.o, 这里压红线也挺好的，后面也是。

[Normal]

一般来说起始点一样会比较好._.

这绝对是Hard啊亲！Hard！

00:30:843 (6) - NC
00:54:779 (3) - 折返？
00:59:885 (3) - ^
01:33:715 (5) - NC
02:27:013 (6) - ^
02:28:928 (x) - add circle
02:45:523 (5) - NC

[Hard]

01:03:715 (1) - 这里开始的clap+fin音略显响了，建议集体下调
03:07:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - hmmm. 比较猎奇的建议..可以渐低音量来做反差._.
03:24:459 (x) - add circle
03:25:736 (x) - ^
03:27:013 (x) - ^
03:28:608 (x) - ^

好Nazi啊._.
Maya-kira
368 posts
Joined May 2011
Maya-kira
Harro ><
I see this from your mod queue, and I think I'll post. I hope my mod helps ><

-general-
1) um.. when I browse it in youtube and other sources, the title is supposed to be Aka Hitoha. not aka hinoha ><;; but since the last ranked map use the title aka hinoha-- i'm not sure about this T_T;;

2) source : Kuro Usa P

3) why don't add the enligsh translation (A Red Leaf) and the album (Kimi no Iru Keshiki) to the tag?

4) I think preview time is either 208927 or 99141

-easy-

00:15:524- (2) I think it sounds better if you move this 1/2 beat forward.
00:36:907- (4) why don't make this slider symetrical?
00:40:737- (2) remove whistle and change it to finish? (to match with previous finish)
01:30:523- (5) remove nc?
01:37:226- (1) move it 1/2 beat backward?
01:48:076- (1,2) I personally think that this pattern is too hard for easy (although the bpm is small). I suggest you change (1) to 1/2 beat slider, not 3/4 ><
01:56:374- (2) remove whistle and change it to finish? (to match with previous finish)
02:52:225- (2) use finish instead?
03:27:013- (2,3) I personally thinks that this looks tidier at 388,140.
03:27:70- (4,1) follows after ^
03:35:151- (1) I'm not sure with the idea 1/4 beat in easy ... ><;; but this match-- so idk ><

good diff ><!

-normal-
uh.. this looks more like a hard to me ._.;;

00:24:141- (1) use this slider instead?
SPOILER
00:57:970- (4) use grid level 4, move 2 grid to make it linear with the beat before ><
02:20:949- (4) what does this slider follow?
02:28:608- (9) move this 1/2 beat backward to follow lyric.
02:29:247- (10) what does this follow? ><;;
03:16:161- (1) move 1/4 beat earlier?

another good diff ><

-hard-
00:59:087- (2) (nazi) tidy this slider a bit?
SPOILER
01:36:587- (4) add finish in the end of slider to balance with the finish earlier?
01:58:928- (1) move spinner 1/2 beat backward and add a note (finish) here? there's still the drum playing.
03:23:821- (4) I think it sounds better with a single beat?

another great diff T_T;;

------------------
star ^^
I hope this help~
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Mystica

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Modding from #MR, all suggestions

[Hard]
00:20:950 (5,6,1) - this?
15
not mean to under the slider yeah..
00:27:173 (2) - add note k
00:38:184 (3,1) - this? scrn16.png (I lowered AR to make it clear)
16
nya
00:39:939 (4) - add note nya
01:21:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a star formation? nya
01:58:289 (4) - this?
17
nya
02:38:502 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - change to a note stream / a slider stream? mixing doesn't play good just follow the feeling
03:47:757 (4) - this?
18
nya

Megurine Luka wrote:

/me from my Queue

这歌怎么这么大;_;下了我好久

红一叶俺の爱<333

[General]

add Vocaloid and Vocaloid2 in tag yep

set preview time 记得了！

目前的kiai time似乎不统一，统一kiai time 有GD啊所以没问题

按理来说原曲是Luka所以可以删掉Hatsune Miku..不过这个随意了

letterbox in breaks可以关 好

神音效，我给跪了

[Hard]

01:03:715 (1) - 这里开始的clap+fin音略显响了，建议集体下调 感觉是现在最好啊 看看后面人怎么说
03:07:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - hmmm. 比较猎奇的建议..可以渐低音量来做反差._. 这个做起来太猎奇难度各种（其实是我懒了XD
03:24:459 (x) - add circle 这个算了 下面修正了
03:25:736 (x) - ^
03:27:013 (x) - ^
03:28:608 (x) - ^

好Nazi啊._.

Maya-kira wrote:

Harro ><
I see this from your mod queue, and I think I'll post. I hope my mod helps ><

-general-
1) um.. when I browse it in youtube and other sources, the title is supposed to be Aka Hitoha. not aka hinoha ><;; but since the last ranked map use the title aka hinoha-- i'm not sure about this T_T;; yeah waiting for other suggestion.

2) source : Kuro Usa P k

3) why don't add the enligsh translation (A Red Leaf) and the album (Kimi no Iru Keshiki) to the tag? k

4) I think preview time is either 208927 or 99141

-hard-
00:59:087- (2) (nazi) tidy this slider a bit? k
SPOILER
01:36:587- (4) add finish in the end of slider to balance with the finish earlier? k
01:58:928- (1) move spinner 1/2 beat backward and add a note (finish) here? there's still the drum playing. nya.spinner begin with the vocal
03:23:821- (4) I think it sounds better with a single beat? already fixed

another great diff T_T;;

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star ^^
I hope this help~
Thank you all guys mod it .....>w<
spboxer3
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Joined November 2009
spboxer3
有點懶了
說些重點

SPOILER
[genenal]
BG.jpg 為800x599

red line部分:
[Hard]
00:03:716 - BPM of 94.000
00:43:290 - BPM of 94.000
01:24:141 - BPM of 94.000
01:39:779 - BPM of 94.000
01:58:928 - BPM of 94.000
02:39:779 - BPM of 94.000
02:55:098 - BPM of 94.000
03:01:481 - BPM of 94.000
03:05:311 - BPM of 94.000
03:09:779 - BPM of 94.000

但是[LKs' Normal] 還有 [Pokie's Easy] 都有少 需要修改!!

kiai部分 (不一定要修改)kiai不同 希望能夠讓他們都相同

[Hard]
需要all note resnap一次 因為有些的note不在正確的位置上
RinMiku14
34 posts
Joined December 2010
RinMiku14
Shouldn't the title be Aka HiTOHA and not HiNOHA?
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Pokie's Easy:
01:26:055(2,3) - delete the circle and replace it for a slider and end it till 01:26:375 for (2) and delete the repeat and move the slider at 01:26:694. it should be like This if u dont understand.
01:30:523(1) - end it till 01:31:162, and remove the repeat. it should end till 01:30:843
01:48:076(1) - end it till 01:48:396
02:52:225(2) - move it closer to (1). the spacing should be at 2.09 between (1,2)

LKs' Normal:
00:54:779(3) - extend it by 1 tick
00:57:332(3) - ^
00:59:885(3) - ^
01:06:268(5) - NC
01:16:481(6,1) - make (6) a NC and remove the NC for (1)
01:32:438(2) - end it till 01:32:758
01:33:715(5) - NC
01:47:119(4) - stack it on (2) unless this is intentional
01:51:747(6) - delete this note
02:27:013(6) - NC
02:45:523(5) - ^
03:47:438(3,4,5) - spacing

Hard:
00:22:864(9) - resnap this note and this loop could be nicer
01:17:917(4) - hmm this slider looks like its straight a bit. make it more like a curved slider
01:39:141(6) - make it nicer
03:25:098(5) - NC

this is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Mystica

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Hard:
00:22:864(9) - resnap this note and this loop could be nicer now seems more fit
01:17:917(4) - hmm this slider looks like its straight a bit. make it more like a curved slider k.
01:39:141(6) - make it nicer now seems more fit
03:25:098(5) - NC k.
this is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
Pokie
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Pokie
太多mod所以不一一回覆了…

Download: MARiA - Aka Hitoha (Mystica) [Pokie's Easy].osu
LKs
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LKs
http://puu.sh/nQOy
Regou
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Joined July 2010
Regou
M4M~
[Hard]
AR-1,畢竟圖很慢
01:16:003 - 放個note在這裡吧...
01:32:120 (4) - NC?
02:31:322 (5) - 這個這樣搭在02:30:843 (4)後面好像不太好...'
02:55:098 (8) - Finish
02:55:098~03:01:481 加一點whistle吧,就這樣不太好聽
03:07:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 188BPM的stream... :? slider吧
03:24:459 - 加個note?
[LKs' Normal]
我沒看錯吧!?Slider velocity比Hard快,而且spacing也比Hard大...
01:03:715 (1,3) - 不太美觀...
01:42:970 (2) - 1 grid right
01:47:119 (4,1) - 就直接搭在01:46:161 (1,2) 上吧...?
01:50:310 (2) - Delete clap
01:50:310 (2) - 加個Note?
02:53:183 (1) - Finish,Delete NC
[Pokie's Easy]
01:06:907 (3) - NC?
02:33:715 (1) - Delete NC
03:14:885 (3) - NC
03:35:151 (1,2) - 才Easy,最好不要出現這種1/4 note吧...(188BPM的1/2note)
03:37:704 (1,2) - ^
03:40:257 (2,3) - ^
做的很好的Mapset><
y u c a
844 posts
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y u c a
yahho 鬼畜Mystica(・∀・)ﾉ

Pokie's Easy

02:28:928 (1) - remove new combo
02:29:567 (2) - add new combo


LKs' Normal

00:24:141 (1) - add finish
01:39:779 (1) - ^
03:39:460 (2) - remove clap(end of slider) is better sound for me
03:42:013 (2) - ^

Hard

00:30:524 (3) - add finish?
01:46:162 (3) - ^
01:48:716 (1) - ^
01:49:354 (4) - ^
01:49:992 (1) - ^
02:57:970 (8) - should use soft hitsound
03:24:459 (x) - add note
03:37:864 (3) - add finish
03:38:502 (5) - ^


ヾ(*`Д´*)ﾉganbare!
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Mystica

Regou wrote:

M4M~
[Hard]
AR-1,畢竟圖很慢 AR7不好看
01:16:003 - 放個note在這裡吧... 為了壓clap的音啊 加一個就顯得怪異了
01:32:120 (4) - NC? k.
02:31:322 (5) - 這個這樣搭在02:30:843 (4)後面好像不太好... 如果說樣子的話修正了'
02:55:098 (8) - Finish k
02:55:098~03:01:481 加一點whistle吧,就這樣不太好聽 加了whistle反而有點
03:07:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 188BPM的stream... :? slider吧 slider不好按感覺沒note好 看後面modder說法
03:24:459 - 加個note? 沒加 換了種方式
做的很好的Mapset><

y u c a wrote:

yahho 鬼畜Mystica 鬼畜ja nai yo.Baca(・∀・)ﾉ

Hard

00:30:524 (3) - add finish? k.
01:46:162 (3) - ^
01:48:716 (1) - ^
01:49:354 (4) - ^
01:49:992 (1) - ^ some fix
02:57:970 (8) - should use soft hitsound um...I think normal fits....wait for other's mod
03:24:459 (x) - add note changed
03:37:864 (3) - add finish
03:38:502 (5) - ^


ヾ(*`Д´*)ﾉganbare!
Thanks for your mod
Mercurial
Mercurial
Hi, M4M.

General

AIBat wrote:

Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections: http://puu.sh/oKHe
Inconsistency in combo colours: http://puu.sh/oKHs
Inconsistency in Kiai Times: http://puu.sh/oKHE

Easy
00:15:524 (2) I suggest you to close distance this circle from (1).

Normal
00:29:886 (2) In Easy/Normal Diffs, Circles under sliders aren't allowed, they could be confused.
00:36:269 (7) New combo
01:48:077 (2) Same as 00:29:886
01:48:716 (1) ^
01:55:737 (2,3) ^
01:57:013 (2) ^
01:58:290 (2) ^
02:20:950 (4) Is this sliders following something? If It doesn't, please delete it or put something else.
02:28:290 (8) Same as 00:29:886
02:34:035 (4) ^
02:44:886 (3) ^
02:46:641 (7,8) ^
03:25:737 (2) ^
03:27:013 (4) ^

Hard

AIBat wrote:

Some unsnapped circles and sliders: http://puu.sh/oKRN
Unsnapped Green Lines: http://puu.sh/oKSG
Some suggestions but nobody cares suggestions.


Good Luck, posting in your Mod Queue.
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Mystica

iMercurial wrote:

Hi, M4M.

General

AIBat wrote:

Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections: http://puu.sh/oKHe
Inconsistency in combo colours: http://puu.sh/oKHs
Inconsistency in Kiai Times: http://puu.sh/oKHE

Easy
00:15:524 (2) I suggest you to close distance this circle from (1).

Normal
00:29:886 (2) In Easy/Normal Diffs, Circles under sliders aren't allowed, they could be confused.
00:36:269 (7) New combo
01:48:077 (2) Same as 00:29:886
01:48:716 (1) ^
01:55:737 (2,3) ^
01:57:013 (2) ^
01:58:290 (2) ^
02:20:950 (4) Is this sliders following something? If It doesn't, please delete it or put something else.
02:28:290 (8) Same as 00:29:886
02:34:035 (4) ^
02:44:886 (3) ^
02:46:641 (7,8) ^
03:25:737 (2) ^
03:27:013 (4) ^

Hard

AIBat wrote:

Some unsnapped circles and sliders: http://puu.sh/oKRN
Unsnapped Green Lines: http://puu.sh/oKSG
Some suggestions but nobody cares suggestions.


Good Luck, posting in your Mod Queue.
Fix some parts.Thanks
Kitsuneko
709 posts
Joined June 2010
Kitsuneko
Hello Mystica san
not m4m. but I mod yours yay! Mystica san ga suki dakara >n<
all my suggestions~


[General]
00:45:843 - add red time line, I think heavy beats changed here.
01:24:140 - red line with 3/4 rhythm
01:39:778 - red line, back to 4/4 rhythm
02:01:480 - red line here
02:39:777 - red line with 3/4 rhythm
03:09:777 - red line, back to 4/4 rhythm
03:28:925 - red line here
Heavy beats have effects on Kiai Time, so I suggest this. (I prefer timing sections fit for song's beats)
if add lines. don't forget to remove green lines that isn't using.


[Pokie's Easy]
00:24:141 - start Kiai Time (do you have a reason not to use kiai time?)
00:43:290 - and end here
00:42:013 (1) - I suggest spinner's start at 00:43:290, then add any note to 00:42:013 and 00:42:652.
01:57:652 (1) - ^ , and Kiaitime end 01:58:928


[LKs's Normal]
00:24:141 - start Kiai Time here. (do you have a reason not to use kiai time?)
00:43:290 - finish Kiai Time here
01:58:928 - ^
03:48:074 - ^


[Hard]
00:43:290 - toggle off Kiai Time here
01:58:928 - ^
03:48:077 - ^


that's all, good mapset~
good luck :3
Pokie
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Pokie
Download: MARiA - Aka Hitoha (Mystica) [Pokie's Easy].osu
LKs
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Joined August 2009
LKs
Download: MARiA - Aka Hitoha (Mystica) [LKs' Normal].osu

About sliders cover circles: My Normal is not the easiest diff in the whole mapset, it's more tend to be a hard Normal, so the cover(Actually is stack) will not matter.

About Kiai-times, I don't mind change them when necessary
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
  1. Size of the BG 800x599, it shoud be 800x600, change it please
  2. If I were on your place, i would though about diff's names, easy = normal, normal = hard and etc
Pokie's Easy
  1. 00:15:524 (2) - woud be better for the rythm, if you move it to 00:15:205 -
  2. 00:40:737 (2) - spacing
  3. 00:45:843 - so long break D:
  4. 01:03:715 (1,2,1) - you can not change it, but woud be better that will be more easy rythm, mey be 1/1
  5. 01:42:333 - whistle there
  6. 01:48:076 (1,2) - hard place in easy, change it
  7. 01:56:374 (2) - spacing
  8. 02:19:672 (2) - remove 02:21:268 (3) , and replace this slider to 02:19:992 -
  9. 02:22:225 (2,3) - ^
  10. 02:28:289 (3,4) - hard
  11. 02:52:225 (2) - spacing D:
  12. 03:35:151 (1,2) - wha... that is Easy, it's confusing, i think there is no problem to use 1/1 or 1/2
  13. 03:37:704 (1,2) - ^
  14. 03:40:257 (2,3) - ^
  15. 03:42:810 (2,3) - ^
  16. 03:44:247 (1,2,1,2) - naaah
LKs' Normal
Oh god, kinda hard for normal D:
  1. AR = 3 and may be circle size = 3
  2. 01:55:098 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - meeh, it's Normal, yea
Hard
  1. AR = 7
Others is good, but think about the difficulty
Good luck
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