Hi, here for M4M. I'll post the map in your thread and you can also find it in my signature.
Hard:
00:13:928 (1,2,3,4) - This part doesn't really fit the music... I think something like this sounds and feels much better:
http://screensnapr.com/e/CZXhaJ.png00:16:481 (1) - Same deal. Please consider this.
03:05:311 (1) - These jumps don't fit at all and are very, very unpredictable. Add jumps here, but to a lesser extent.
03:19:991 (1) - I get what you were trying to do here, but this part is boring. This can still be a calm section but suggestions regarding this are below
03:20:630 (2) - Add a slider here lasting half a beat.
03:21:268 (3) - Add a hit circle here
03:21:906 (1) - New combo
03:22:544 (2) - Make this one tick longer
03:23:183 (3) - Add a slider here lasting half a beat
03:23:821 (4) - Remove this slider and add a hit circle
03:24:459 (1) - Add a slider here, NC
03:25:098 (2) - Make this a slider and make it last until 3:25:576
03:25:736 (3) - Add a slider here lasting half a beat
03:27:013 (5) - Add a hit circle
LKs' Normal:
-- This is -way- too hard to be considered a normal. Lots of offbeat (blue tick) notes, lots of stacking, and lots of movement. I'll treat this as a hard.
00:33:077 (4) - Add a hit circle
00:43:290 (4) - Remove this
00:43:928 (1) - Place this where (4) was and it it where it originally was.
01:23:183 (2) - This part is a bit much but suitable. Add a hit circle here.
01:32:438 (2) - Make this one tick shorter
01:47:119 (4) - Stack this where (2) was
01:53:981 (6) - Add a slider here that lasts one tick
01:54:300 (7) - Remove this
01:54:459 (7) - Add a hit circle
01:59:247 (1) - Make the slider start here and end it where it originally ends.
Pokie's Easy:
00:13:928 (1) - This part... doesn't fit the music at all. I changed a lot that may be confusing to explain in text, so here's a picture reference:
http://screensnapr.com/e/eCKVf0.png00:41:694 (3) - Add a hit circle
01:25:736 (2) - Add a hit circle
01:30:523 (1) - Make this one tick shorter
01:32:757 (3) - Make this repeat once
01:39:779 (1) - Add a hit circle
01:57:332 (3) - Add a hit circle
Looks like that's it. Good luck, and if you need any clarification PM me.