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Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL

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phonic
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phonic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月21日 at 22:00:45

Artist: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo
Title: SUPERORBITAL
Source: SoniComi
Tags: Cilvery Ryafuka spboxer3 sherrie__fay NSS Nitroplus Nitro Headphone Communication With Sonico
BPM: 176
Filesize: 3129kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cilvery's Normal (4.09 stars, 147 notes)
  2. Easy (1.53 stars, 72 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 285 notes)
  4. Ryafuka's Hard (4.99 stars, 224 notes)
  5. Sp3's Taiko (4.94 stars, 545 notes)
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#7

Mapset:

[Easy] - 100% by Me
[Cilvery's Normal] - 100% by Cilvery
[Sp3's Taiko] - 100% by spboxer3
[Ryafuka's Hard] - 100% by Ryafuka
[Insane] - 100 by Me
[SB] - 100% by sherrie__fay
Last edited by phonic , edited 77 times in total.
spboxer3
Global Moderator
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spboxer3
may I make a Taiko diff for your map?

yeah~ Taiko diff Done~

Taiko BG

Download: SUPER SONICO - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Sp3's Taiko].osu
Last edited by spboxer3 , edited 2 times in total.
phonic
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phonic

spboxer3 wrote:

may I make a Taiko diff for your map?

ok, Thnak you ~
DerekMcD
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DerekMcD
Take the title from this. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35551
phonic
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phonic

kokoroanime wrote:

Take the title from this. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35551

ok~
thank you
Last edited by phonic , edited 1 time in total.
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Baka's new map <3
phonic
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phonic

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Baka's new map <3
Arigato <3
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
http://www.mediafire.com/?q8x8efxzzitjku3

SB here <3

kira~ri ☆
phonic
1,068 posts
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phonic

sherrie__fay wrote:

http://www.mediafire.com/?q8x8efxzzitjku3

SB here <3

kira~ri ☆
Thanks for making the sb :3/
sb you make is always nice <3

kira~ri ☆
MRMR_old
44 posts
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MRMR_old
Star~(๑•́ ω •̀๑)
phonic
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phonic

MRMR wrote:

Star~(๑•́ ω •̀๑)

arigato~!
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
SB fixing :D
not need KDS

edit: fix(2)



Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic).osb
Ryafuka
840 posts
Joined May 2010
Ryafuka
おまたせ～
タグは追加してないのでphonicさんのほうでお願いします :D

Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Ryafuka's Hard].osu
phonic
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phonic

Ryafuka wrote:

おまたせ～
タグは追加してないのでphonicさんのほうでお願いします :D
はーい　了解です（●´ﾟωﾟ｀●）ゞ
SonicFan344
159 posts
Joined July 2011
SonicFan344
Ooooh....another SUPERORBITAL........Love the song <3 one of my fave
A suggestion............Change the genre into "Video Game (Japanese)"?
and add "Communication with Sonico" to the tags?
NO NEED KDS
phonic
1,068 posts
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phonic

SonicFan344 wrote:

Ooooh....another SUPERORBITAL........Love the song <3 one of my fave
A suggestion............Change the genre into "Video Game (Japanese)"?
and add "Communication with Sonico" to the tags?
NO NEED KDS
nope :o
-s u i r e n-
237 posts
Joined May 2011
-s u i r e n-
こんばんはphonic :)

参考にならなかったらごめんなさい！


Easy
✩指摘する場所がなかった・・orz....



Cilvery's Normal
✩00:08:611(3)-個人的な意見になるんだけど・・ここ折り返しsliderにして次単発とかどう？
✩00:19:520(2)-ここのsliderの短さがリズムが・・って感じな気がするんだけど、どうなんでしょうか？w
✩00:20:714(5)-Add NC?
✩00:29:407(8)-^
✩01:02:475(6)-^
✩01:23:611(10)-^

はい！おしま～い！いいMOD出来なくてごめんね！

star~ Ranked待ってる！応援してる～頑張ってね～
phonic
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phonic

suirenn05 wrote:

こんばんはphonic :)

参考にならなかったらごめんなさい！


Easy
✩指摘する場所がなかった・・orz....


はい！おしま～い！いいMOD出来なくてごめんね！

star~ Ranked待ってる！応援してる～頑張ってね～

お星さまとmodありがとおおおおおヽ(ﾟ∀ﾟ*)ﾉ
Melophobia
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Melophobia
As requested via twitter lol

[General]
full verが存在するのでshort ver必要だと思います

[Easy]
00:05:543 - 01:13:725 - ここの音量を考えると70%でも良いかと
01:05:543 (1) - remove newcombo and 始点finish
01:10:998 (1) - 始点＆終点finish
01:29:236 (1) - spinner-osuに重なるので動かした方がいいかもです～

[Cilvery's Normal]
00:05:202 (4) - 終点finish
00:09:634 (5) - sliderで隠すのはおすすめしないです
00:13:725 (1) - ちょっとRandomかなっておもいます
00:17:645 (5) - repeat追加で00:17:475 - に移動
00:23:100 (1) - ^
00:30:941 (10) - こんな感じに http://puu.sh/smhp
00:38:100 (4) - finish置くなら00:38:270 -
00:51:055 - 不要な緑線
00:57:361 (5,7) - こういうSlider同士が重なるパターンはNormalでは推奨されません～～
01:00:089 (1) - finish
01:05:202 (1) - 小さめでfinishあると良いと思います
01:12:361 (3) - 終点finish
01:18:498 (3) - 終点finish
01:21:907 (8) - 始点finish
01:23:611 (10) - finish
01:28:384 - 緑線不要

[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:10:657 (4,1) - 4のfinishの音量落として1の始点にfinish
あと00:10:827 - 00:10:912 - にclap
00:21:907 (3,4,5) - 5にちゃんと乗せた方が綺麗　http://puu.sh/smje
00:27:020 (1,2) - 後続がCircleだとHardにしては難しいと思うので
sliderに変える or 2を消してrepeatを1回増やす
00:51:055 (1,2) - softにしませう
00:57:361 (3) - 始点finish
00:58:384 - add note
01:06:225 (4) - 終点finish
01:09:123 (4,5) - もう少し広く
01:12:361 (1) - 始点finish
01:18:839 (6,1) - 00:10:657 (4,1) - に同じ

[Insane]
00:05:714 - 不要な緑線
00:10:998 (1) - 始点finish
00:51:907 (1) - ^
01:04:861 (3) - 終点finish
01:05:543 (1) - 始点finish
01:08:270 (1) - ^
01:12:361 (1) - ^
01:13:725 - 音量-10%
01:13:725 (1) - softのfinishとnormalのwhistleは合わないと思います～

☆ミ
phonic
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phonic

Melophobia wrote:

As requested via twitter lol

[General]
full verが存在するのでshort ver必要だと思います んー、少し保留で

[Easy]
00:05:543 - 01:13:725 - ここの音量を考えると70%でも良いか
01:05:543 (1) - remove newcombo and 始点finish
01:10:998 (1) - 始点＆終点finish
01:29:236 (1) - spinner-osuに重なるので動かした方がいいかもです～

[Insane]
00:05:714 - 不要な緑線
00:10:998 (1) - 始点finish
00:51:907 (1) - ^
01:04:861 (3) - 終点finish
01:05:543 (1) - 始点finish
01:08:270 (1) - ^
01:12:361 (1) - ^
01:13:725 - 音量-10%
01:13:725 (1) - softのfinishとnormalのwhistleは合わないと思います～

☆ミ
easy insane fixed

ありがとうございます！
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Cilvery

suirenn05 wrote:

こんばんはphonic :)

参考にならなかったらごめんなさい！


Easy
✩指摘する場所がなかった・・orz....



Cilvery's Normal
✩00:08:611(3)-個人的な意見になるんだけど・・ここ折り返しsliderにして次単発とかどう？
✩00:19:520(2)-ここのsliderの短さがリズムが・・って感じな気がするんだけど、どうなんでしょうか？w
✩00:20:714(5)-Add NC?　Fixed
✩00:29:407(8)-^　Fixed
✩01:02:475(6)-^　Fixed
✩01:23:611(10)-^　Fixed

はい！おしま～い！いいMOD出来なくてごめんね！

star~ Ranked待ってる！応援してる～頑張ってね～
modありがと！
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Cilvery

Melophobia wrote:

As requested via twitter lol

[General]
full verが存在するのでshort ver必要だと思います

[Easy]
00:05:543 - 01:13:725 - ここの音量を考えると70%でも良いかと
01:05:543 (1) - remove newcombo and 始点finish
01:10:998 (1) - 始点＆終点finish
01:29:236 (1) - spinner-osuに重なるので動かした方がいいかもです～

[Cilvery's Normal]
00:05:202 (4) - 終点finish　Fixed
00:09:634 (5) - sliderで隠すのはおすすめしないです
00:13:725 (1) - ちょっとRandomかなっておもいます
00:17:645 (5) - repeat追加で00:17:475 - に移動　Fixed
00:23:100 (1) - ^　Fixed
00:30:941 (10) - こんな感じに http://puu.sh/smhp
00:38:100 (4) - finish置くなら00:38:270 -
00:51:055 - 不要な緑線　Fixed
00:57:361 (5,7) - こういうSlider同士が重なるパターンはNormalでは推奨されません～～　Fixed
01:00:089 (1) - finish　Fixed
01:05:202 (1) - 小さめでfinishあると良いと思います
01:12:361 (3) - 終点finish　Fixed
01:18:498 (3) - 終点finish　Fixed
01:21:907 (8) - 始点finish　Fixed
01:23:611 (10) - finish　Fixed
01:28:384 - 緑線不要　Fixed

[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:10:657 (4,1) - 4のfinishの音量落として1の始点にfinish
あと00:10:827 - 00:10:912 - にclap
00:21:907 (3,4,5) - 5にちゃんと乗せた方が綺麗　http://puu.sh/smje
00:27:020 (1,2) - 後続がCircleだとHardにしては難しいと思うので
sliderに変える or 2を消してrepeatを1回増やす
00:51:055 (1,2) - softにしませう
00:57:361 (3) - 始点finish
00:58:384 - add note
01:06:225 (4) - 終点finish
01:09:123 (4,5) - もう少し広く
01:12:361 (1) - 始点finish
01:18:839 (6,1) - 00:10:657 (4,1) - に同じ

[Insane]
00:05:714 - 不要な緑線
00:10:998 (1) - 始点finish
00:51:907 (1) - ^
01:04:861 (3) - 終点finish
01:05:543 (1) - 始点finish
01:08:270 (1) - ^
01:12:361 (1) - ^
01:13:725 - 音量-10%
01:13:725 (1) - softのfinishとnormalのwhistleは合わないと思います～

☆ミ
modありがと！
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Cilvery
とととと

Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Cilvery's Normal].osu
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Removed double copy due to a submission mistake.
phonic
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Topic Starter
phonic

osuplayer111 wrote:

Removed double copy due to a submission mistake.
thanks >v<!
Ryafuka
840 posts
Joined May 2010
Ryafuka

Melophobia wrote:

[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:10:657 (4,1) - 4のfinishの音量落として1の始点にfinish
あと00:10:827 - 00:10:912 - にclap
00:21:907 (3,4,5) - 5にちゃんと乗せた方が綺麗　http://puu.sh/smje
00:27:020 (1,2) - 後続がCircleだとHardにしては難しいと思うので
sliderに変える or 2を消してrepeatを1回増やす りぴーとふやしましたー
00:51:055 (1,2) - softにしませう
00:57:361 (3) - 始点finish
00:58:384 - add note
01:06:225 (4) - 終点finish
01:09:123 (4,5) - もう少し広く
01:12:361 (1) - 始点finish
01:18:839 (6,1) - 00:10:657 (4,1) - に同じ
all ok
thanks melochan

Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Ryafuka's Hard].osu
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. Found this on #modreqs.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. just putting this for fun :P

[General]
Use a light grey combo color instead of a white combo color. it'd be hard for players to know weather the slider repeats or not depending on the skin.

[Easy]
with a BPM this high, increase the AR by 1. it flows a lot smoother during gameplay and it fiits with the song IMO.
00:10:998 (1) - the clap should be at the end, adding it at the repeat arrow ruins the consistency in claps.
01:02:134 - maybe add a 1/1 slider to follow vocals?
not bad but there's a couple things that bothered me: there's too many straight sliders. no offense but beginners might not find this diff not very exciting to play, so i suggest curving some of the straight sliders to flow properly and to make it fun for beginners, and at some parts, there's too many 1/1 gaps. don't be afraid to add more notes if necessary. it'd be fun and challenging for beginners if you do this.

[Cilvery's Normal]
i think AR4 is perfect for a normal diff. it goes at the right speed to the point that players can keep up.
00:05:884 (5) - make this a NC because the guitar riff changes.
00:08:611 (3,4,5,6) - personally i find this pattern confusing, especially for experienced players who play this on their 1st try. re-arrange this pattern because it looks messy IMO.
00:17:134 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - ^
00:21:907 (7) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
00:22:930 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. the lyrics are still going for this.
00:24:293 (7) - this should be a NC because the end is there the lyrics change.
00:25:998 (1) - same as 00:22:930 but the guitar is still going.
00:27:361 (8) - same as 00:21:907.
00:30:430 (2) - this is touching the Hp bar. i don't mind if it's slightly touching it but this is a problem. this might get players nervous as the bar goes down slowly.
00:33:498 (3) - why is this s 4 point slider when the 1st 2 sliders are 3 point sliders. the combo doesn't flow properly as 1 of the sliders look uneven, so make this a 3 point slider like the 1st 2 sliders on this combo. it flows a lot better if you do this IMO.
00:49:265 - add a spinner here and end it till 00:51:225. it'd make a nice start before the kiai.
00:57:361 (5) - same as 00:21:907.
01:02:816 (7) - ^
01:19:180 (4) - same as 00:05:884.
01:21:566 (4) - ^
01:23:952 - add a 1/1 slider to continue the flow of the guitar.
this map has potential, but the problem is that it's clumped up and messy. use a DS of either 0.8 or 1.0 so that it's be cleaner and easier for players to read.

[Rya-chanRyafuka's Hard]
try OD6. i think OD5 is a bit too easy for players at the hard level.
00:38:611 - maybe this to follow the guitar?
01:08:100 - add a circle here to follow vocals.
i felt a bit uncomfortable when i saw this, but overall this is a nice diff.

[Insane]
00:04:182 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest doing this because it looks fun due to the jump and it puts a nice challenge for players.
00:14:748 (6) - Try Ctrl+R? i think it flows a lot smoother to the next note.
00:30:429 (1) - why is this stacked? i was expecting this note to be here because it forms a star. it doesn't feel right if the star is incomplete IMO
this diff could be better but overall i like it.

I guess that's it. GL :D
Ryafuka
840 posts
Joined May 2010
Ryafuka

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Rya-chanRyafuka's Hard]
try OD6. i think OD5 is a bit too easy for players at the hard level.
00:38:611 - maybe this to follow the guitar?
01:08:100 - add a circle here to follow vocals.
i felt a bit uncomfortable when i saw this, but overall this is a nice diff.
all okay :)
thanks modding 249! :3

Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Ryafuka's Hard].osu
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Found this on #modreqs.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. just putting this for fun :P

[General]
Use a light grey combo color instead of a white combo color. it'd be hard for players to know weather the slider repeats or not depending on the skin.

[Easy]
with a BPM this high, increase the AR by 1. it flows a lot smoother during gameplay and it fiits with the song IMO. fixed
00:10:998 (1) - the clap should be at the end, adding it at the repeat arrow ruins the consistency in claps. fixed
01:02:134 - maybe add a 1/1 slider to follow vocals? fixed
not bad but there's a couple things that bothered me: there's too many straight sliders. no offense but beginners might not find this diff not very exciting to play, so i suggest curving some of the straight sliders to flow properly and to make it fun for beginners, and at some parts, there's too many 1/1 gaps. don't be afraid to add more notes if necessary. it'd be fun and challenging for beginners if you do this.

[Insane]
00:04:182 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest doing this because it looks fun due to the jump and it puts a nice challenge for players.
00:14:748 (6) - Try Ctrl+R? i think it flows a lot smoother to the next note. fixed
00:30:429 (1) - why is this stacked? i was expecting this note to be here because it forms a star. it doesn't feel right if the star is incomplete IMO
this diff could be better but overall i like it.

I guess that's it. GL :D
thanks mod ~
NewRulerNA
1,301 posts
Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
hai

[Easy]
プレイに支障はありませんがSliderMultiplierが0.999999999999999なので1に修正で

[Cilvery's Normal]

00:08:611 (3,4,5,6) - いろいろとごちゃごちゃした配置なように思えます
00:09:634 (5)を上手く上側に持っていく感じにしたほうが見た目的にも良くなると思います

00:10:316 (7) - 細かいですがこのスライダーが00:09:975 (6)のアプローチサークルと並べてみると微妙に歪んでいます

00:18:839 (1) - 00:17:475 (5,7)と被り見た目が悪いです

00:19:520 (2) - 00:18:157 (6,7)のヒットバーストが被り見にくいです

00:22:930 (1,2) - 1がターンしていて、進行方向とは逆に2が来ているのが不自然で汚いです

00:30:430 (2) - HPバーに触れています

00:33:498 (3) - 00:32:134 (1,2)が触れていないことを考えると、(1,3)で触れないように位置調節で

00:35:543 (7) - 00:37:248 (2) わざとかぶせていますが、もしかしたら他の人がUnrank扱いで指摘してくるかも

00:53:270 (4) - 歪んでいるスライダー


[Ryafuka's Hard]

00:17:816 (5,1) - Hardであることを考えると、スライダーの始点が隠されているこの配置は分かりにくいように感じました
00:29:407 (1,3) - ^


[Insane]

00:07:589 (3) - このスライダーが歪んでいます
以下これのコピペスライダー
00:08:952 (3) -
00:11:679 (3) -
00:15:089 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:17:816 (1) -
00:19:520 (2) -
00:24:634 (1) -
00:27:361 (1) -
00:40:998 (1) -
00:42:361 (1) -
00:53:270 (1) -
00:53:952 (3) -
01:01:452 (7) -
01:05:543 (1) -
01:10:998 (1) -
01:12:361 (1) -
01:13:043 (2) -
01:17:134 (3) -

00:09:805 (1) - 00:08:782 (2)とスタックさせるか被らない位置へ
全体見る限りでは前者のほうがいいように思えます

大きな問題もなく細かな指摘のみです

good luck!
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
Cilvery' Normal

00:19:520 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/vmVS　こっちの音取りのほうがいいかも？

00:30:430 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/vmWM　こっちもこんな感じに？

Insane

00:30:259 (7) - add note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/319243　音はいってないけど流れて的にこんな感じにしてみては・・？

ごめんなさい！！！　他は見つかりませんでした・・・orz
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

NewRulerNA wrote:

hai

[Easy]
プレイに支障はありませんがSliderMultiplierが0.999999999999999なので1に修正で fixed

[Insane]

00:07:589 (3) - このスライダーが歪んでいます fixed
以下これのコピペスライダー
00:08:952 (3) -
00:11:679 (3) -
00:15:089 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:17:816 (1) -
00:19:520 (2) -
00:24:634 (1) -
00:27:361 (1) -
00:40:998 (1) -
00:42:361 (1) -
00:53:270 (1) -
00:53:952 (3) -
01:01:452 (7) -
01:05:543 (1) -
01:10:998 (1) -
01:12:361 (1) -
01:13:043 (2) -
01:17:134 (3) -

00:09:805 (1) - 00:08:782 (2)とスタックさせるか被らない位置へ fixed
全体見る限りでは前者のほうがいいように思えます

大きな問題もなく細かな指摘のみです

good luck!

Quilt wrote:

Insane

00:30:259 (7) - add note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/319243　音はいってないけど流れて的にこんな感じにしてみては・・？ no change

ごめんなさい！！！　他は見つかりませんでした・・・orz
thx!!
Cilvery
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Cilvery

Quilt wrote:

Cilvery' Normal

00:19:520 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/vmVS　こっちの音取りのほうがいいかも？

00:30:430 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/vmWM　こっちもこんな感じに？　Fixed･･･この通りに変えたか分からないけど一応変えましたｗ

Insane

00:30:259 (7) - add note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/319243　音はいってないけど流れて的にこんな感じにしてみては・・？

ごめんなさい！！！　他は見つかりませんでした・・・orz
ありがとう！

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