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Shiraishi Ryoko - Sorairo no Tsubasa

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anonymous_old
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Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
General
Another win map by ztrot. \:D/

Normal
SS's on my first try (and I've never heard the song), so this map is pretty intuitive. ;D
Most of your sliders have minor spacing issues.

00:17:20 (5) - Space evenly between (4) and (1).
00:21:20 (3) - Space evenly between (2) and (4).
00:24:63 (7) - Space evenly...
00:26:91 (4) - Space evenly...
00:28:06 (6) - Space evenly (just a smidgen here).
00:31:49 (4) - Have end above 00:33:20 (7) for proper distance spacing between (4) and (5).
00:45:20 (4) - Space evenly.
00:55:49 (9) - Space evenly.
01:04:63 (9) - Sounds like a note should be here. Maybe a slider to fill the break?
01:10:34 (2) - Too close to (1).
01:18:34 (4) - Have end above 01:21:49 (2).
01:19:49 (5) - Move left.
01:22:63 (4) - Space evenly (probably by moving (4,5) right).
01:22:91 (5) - Redo timing here.

01:08:06 (1,2,3,1) - Add whistle.
01:10:34 (2) - Finish on end.
01:13:77 (5) - Whistle, and finish on end.
etc. etc.
Basically you gotta add hit sounds for this part.

Hard
00:46:35 (6) - Weirdbend is weird.
01:22:92 (1) - Looks kinda weird here, too.
01:25:50 (1) - Replace with notes to match the drum.
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Ryuukun
[Hard]
00:09:77 (1,2,3) - put them 1 grid higher (grid level 3)
[Normal]
00:50:34 (1,2,3) - put them 1 grid higher so that they are on one line with 00:51:49 (4)

also this map lacks tags and Hard even lacks the Source.

Its the kind of map osu is lacking.
Easy songs playable for beginners :)
Nazo_old
137 posts
Joined December 2008
Nazo_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Really great job, I love the sliders and overall notes in Normal mode, Hard mode is very fast paced and fun and spinners and sliders are placed nicely, and overall notes are good.
fufe
284 posts
Joined September 2008
fufe
Normal:
00:14:918 (x) really sounds wierd to me without the hit here.
00:32:91 (6) - - nazi spacing...ish..maybe manual move so it doesnt look so cramped and attached to 7 [theres other nazi spacing post opportunities but its not worth the trouble imo]
01:00:63 (4,5,6) - for sake of consistency consider flipping and putting somewhere where else where it wouldn't be overlapped by next slider when fading out.
01:04:34 (8) - make this a hit and start the slider at next white full beat imo >.>

Hard:
looks fine. Could be harder on the overall difficulty if u want.

Nothing really wrong here. Just pure suggestions posted
Sowelu_old
6 posts
Joined August 2008
Sowelu_old
Normal:
01:00:20 - Only real grouse is the overlap, seems a little more confusing than it could be.

Hard:
01:18:35 - Seems like the slider ticks could be lined up better in this slider.
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
Almost forgot your star.
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
random star ^^ keep up
Rapidlslayer
48 posts
Joined August 2008
Rapidlslayer
sweet map, couldnt find anything wrong :D

its's star time!
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Starred as requested(?)

I think this map needs a kiai time.
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran
:)
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
Eh, I got 7,504 ms as the offset.
As for the map itself, I have no real problems!
Starred.
Last edited by Takuma , edited 1 time in total.
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Nazi stuff! ^^

Normal:
01:19:49 (5) - Too close to 4.

Hard:
00:36:91 (10) - I think this would look better where 8 is. Move the following notes accordingly if you do this.

Awesome map + song :)! Star!
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
Yeah, uh, I'm pretty sure the title should have (TV Size) included in it.
Daru
osu!painter
866 posts
Joined August 2008
Daru
" Forgot prende asked for highly pressing package of power plant profit projections for Pete Porter in Pasadena. Priority? Precisely. "


PandaCath
89 posts
Joined April 2009
PandaCath
[Normal]
Awesome.

[Hard]
00:20:061 (8) Line this up with the end of (7).
00:29:204 (7) Line this up with the end of (6).
00:30:347 (3) (4) (5) First raise (5) up one notch in Level 3, then move (3) around without Grid Snap to line it up with (4) and (5).
00:32:347 (6) (7) Line these up with end of (5) using no grid-snap.

Star!
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,723 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
Barely any errors at all now.

[Normal]:
Radical.

[Hard]:
00:10:56 (4) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.
00:11:77 (5) - Move 1 down on Grid Level 3.
00:36:63 (9) - Same as above.

The spinner looks strange since it's the same face as the background. x_X

Star~
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
- Normal:
Please consider going over this difficulty and distance snapping everything again.

00:23:49 (3) - This is pretty minor, but it's not properly spaced like the others. It seems like the reason for this is because you wanted it stacked with 00:22:34 (4). There were a few like this, but I'm only picking out the ones I see in play.

- Hard:
01:27:20 (10) - New combo?

Bubbled!
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Overall:
Add a hitcircleoverlay.png. Some skins make the hitcircle look crappy otherwise
Add a spinner-background and a spinner-metre.png. See above, why.

That is all.
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
[Normal]

00:52:91 (2) - Spacing



Aesthetics~

The following beats spacing is correct, but you might consider moving them slightly.

00:18:34 (3) -
00:33:49 (8) -
00:42:63 (4) -
01:06:63 (3,4) -
01:12:34 (2) -


[Hard]

00:18:34 (5) - new combo


I think adding an extra beat color wouldn't hurt.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Okay, super minor modding on IRC, Since the bubble was popped nothing major happened so here, have a heart! <3
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