1. Easy (1.2 stars, 55 notes)
2. Sawa's Hard (3.16 stars, 140 notes)
3. Tsukasa's Insane (4.36 stars, 223 notes)
4. Winber1's Normal (1.85 stars, 83 notes)

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Hm...i can help you in this with a guest diff?

MeowcenariesJP wrote:

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Hm...i can help you in this with a guest diff?

Sure Which difficulty did you want to make?

1. First map? Let's see...

1. The star rating on this makes the map very.. not-easy. Consider these following suggestions to help lower it.
2. Starting off, your slider velocity is way too fast for an easy. It doesn't fit in with the low AR/OD, the current SV is more suited for a Hard.
3. Contact me for an example + call me when you actually finish it.

• [General]

1. Delete that .osb file in your folder. It's not necessary since you're not using any SB's. You're using a video.
2. Kiai times aren't consistent on all diffs. They must be all the same.
3. Offset isn't consistent too. They must be all the same. Winber1's offset sounds just right. Use 1350 as your offset to all diffs.
4. Music Track Lead-In's aren't consistent too. They must be all the same as much as possible. Use 1.5 seconds for your Lead-In, it feels just right imo.
5. Preview Points must be set on all diffs and must be consistent! It's usually set on the start of the chorus. Just go ahead and apply what Winber1 and thenewearth did in their diffs.
   
   [Easy]
6. Spacing: lol I can see many issues on spacing, which Aimod can't even see, idk why it can't.
   There are jumps here in this diff, which isn't nice. As much as possible, you must have no spacing infringements on an easy/normal diff or in case you really do need to have, the maximum is 1. I'll give you examples,
   look at 00:18:277 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - You are using x0.8
   and suddenly on 00:23:218 (3) - the Distance spacing changed into x0.6 which is not right.
   Also look on 00:25:335 (3,1) - the Distance Spacing suddenly changed into x1.2 turning this part into a jump. Easy and Normal diffs must have no jumps, not even one, or else they cannot be ranked.
   
   You must use only one distance spacing and remap this, or move the notes one by one if you like. I suggest you to use x0.8. But of course you must still have the flow of your map going well. Don't forget the design too~
   
   Design
7. 00:04:865 (2,3) - These notes are quite hard to play especially for beginners (Even I had a wrong reading on these notes on my first try). Replace these notes with a slider.
   
   [Winber1's Normal]
8. What happened to the video on this diff? How come it's not put in this one? Add it lol.
   Open this diff's .osu file in notepad> Add this line Video,0,"PSP Lucky Star Net Idol Meister ED Ending HD (HQ)~1.avi" below //Background and Video events and above 0,0,"lucky-star.jpg"
9. 00:18:820 (1,2) - Fix the spacing between these two notes.
10. 00:19:702 (2,3) - ^
11. 00:33:820 (2) - Split this slider into two. In other words turn this thing into two sliders, I really don't like to have more than 1 reversal for a slider on normal diffs.
12. 00:42:114 (4) - This slider looks kinda weird. Turn it into something better if you can.
13. 00:45:114 (3) - same with 00:33:820 (2)
14. 01:01:349 (2) - ^
    
    [Sawa's Hard]
15. 00:03:277 (7) - Add NC
16. 00:13:335 (6) - ^
17. 00:14:041 (8,9,10,11) - Creating these stream sound (1/4 note) here sounds weird. I suggest you to use only 1/2 note on this part.
18. 00:26:747 (5) - Add NC
    
    [TNE]
19. 00:15:276 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is too far for a jump, please use a quite normal jump. I suggest you to move all these notes 2 grids towards the center.
20. 00:42:276 (1,5,9,13) - Try adding claps on these.
21. 00:43:334 (13) - Remove finish on this notes.
22. 00:48:012 (1) - Make this spinner start at "00:47:924" and still end it to "00:48:982". Also replace the "finish" on this with "clap".

That's all~ I hope this helps
Star!~

•Delete that .osb file in your folder. It's not necessary since you're not using any SB's. You're using a video.
•Kiai times aren't consistent on all diffs. They must be all the same.
•Offset isn't consistent too. They must be all the same. Winber1's offset sounds just right. Use 1350 as your offset to all diffs.
•Music Track Lead-In's aren't consistent too. They must be all the same as much as possible. Use 1.5 seconds for your Lead-In, it feels just right imo.
•Preview Points must be set on all diffs and must be consistent! It's usually set on the start of the chorus. Just go ahead and apply what Winber1 and thenewearth did in their diffs.

[Easy]
•Spacing: lol I can see many issues on spacing, which Aimod can't even see, idk why it can't.
There are jumps here in this diff, which isn't nice. As much as possible, you must have no spacing infringements on an easy/normal diff or in case you really do need to have, the maximum is 1. I'll give you examples,
look at 00:18:277 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - You are using x0.8
and suddenly on 00:23:218 (3) - the Distance spacing changed into x0.6 which is not right.
Also look on 00:25:335 (3,1) - the Distance Spacing suddenly changed into x1.2 turning this part into a jump. Easy and Normal diffs must have no jumps, not even one, or else they cannot be ranked.

Design
•00:04:865 (2,3) - These notes are quite hard to play especially for beginners (Even I had a wrong reading on these notes on my first try). Replace these notes with a slider

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

[Winber1's Normal]
[*]What happened to the video on this diff? How come it's not put in this one? Add it lol.
Open this diff's .osu file in notepad> Add this line Video,0,"PSP Lucky Star Net Idol Meister ED Ending HD (HQ)~1.avi" below //Background and Video events and above 0,0,"lucky-star.jpg" mmk
[*]00:18:820 (1,2) - Fix the spacing between these two notes. are you seriously naziing that much? >_> no one is going to be able to tell any difference from a .02x spacing difference lol, nor would a beginner. but whatever. fixed.
[*]00:19:702 (2,3) - ^
[*]00:33:820 (2) - Split this slider into two. In other words turn this thing into two sliders, I really don't like to have more than 1 reversal for a slider on normal diffs. Fits music and should be fine. It's a normal diff, not an easy diff. Secondly, having more than 1 repeat is fine even in the easy difficulties as long as they make sense and are consistent throughout, which mine are.
[*]00:42:114 (4) - This slider looks kinda weird. Turn it into something better if you can. personal opinions. i find it looks quite nice.
[*]00:45:114 (3) - same with 00:33:820 (2)
[*]01:01:349 (2) - ^

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

[TNE]
[*]00:15:276 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is too far for a jump, please use a quite normal jump. I suggest you to move all these notes 2 grids towards the center. <-- Most people can do this jumps. I don't thing it's too much of a jump
[*]00:42:276 (1,5,9,13) - Try adding claps on these. <-- it follows the drums no need for the claps
[*]00:43:334 (13) - Remove finish on this notes. <-- you can hear the "cymbal like" sound here
[*]00:48:012 (1) - Make this spinner start at "00:47:924" and still end it to "00:48:982". Also replace the "finish" on this with "clap".<-- i HONESTLY didn't notice this...[/list]
That's all~ I hope this helps
Star!~

[Easy]
Timing Points
remove the inheriting point at 00:01:350 (Done)
change the volumes, if possible for all diffs or as long as they're close enough to each other
00:01:350 around 65% to 70% (Done)
00:32:408 around 75% to 85% (Done)
00:57:820 around 65% to 70% (Done)
Mapping
00:01:350 (1) - add a finish to this slider end (Done)
00:03:467 (1) - add a whistle for entire slider (Done)
00:06:997 (1) - add a finish for this slider end (Done)
00:11:761 (3) - whistle for this slider end (Done)
00:12:997 (1) - clap for this slider end (Done)
00:18:291 (1) - finish (Done)
00:23:938 (1) - move three grids left using distance snap ( Done), add a finish. (Done) adjust the rest of the notes using distance snap afterwards (Done)
00:26:757 (2) - clap (Done)
00:33:467 (2) - whistle for entire slider (Done)
00:34:879 (3) - clap (Done)
00:36:291 (4) - whistle for this slider end (Done)
00:36:644 (5) - whistle (Done)
00:37:349 (6) - clap (Done)
00:38:055 (1) - finish (Done)
00:39:997 (2) - whistle for this slider end (Done)
00:40:526 (3) - move to 00:40:879 , adjust spacing using distance snap (Done)
00:41:232 (4) - move to 00:41:585 , adjust spacing using distance snap (Done)
00:41:938 (1) - finish (Done)
00:45:820 (3) - clap (Done)
00:54:997 (1) - finish (Done)
01:02:408 (4) - finish for this specific slider end (Done)
[Winber1's Normal]
why is the tick at 2? I THINK it should be at 1 (No need to change :3)

1. Updated it from my mod.
2. Updated from OTO's mod.
3. Got rid of all unsnapped notes
4. 00:11:232 (6,7) - Added more symmetry.
5. 00:31:879 (8,9) - Turned it into a slider.
6. 00:39:467 (5,6,7,8) - Turned it into 2 sliders.
7. 00:42:291 (1) - Made it start at 00:42:114.
8. 00:56:408 (1) - Made it start at 00:56:232.
9. 00:58:173 - Got rid of this break and put 2 hitcircles.
10. 01:01:173 (6) - Added NC
11. 00:32:232 - Set as preview point. Please be consistent with the other diffs. Make them all use this preview point, it's better.

Easy:

Go to the Timing tab and click on Resnap All Notes.
00:08:938 - I think you should put this circle at 00:08:761
00:21:820 - I think it would be better if you change the place of the slider #2 and circle #3.
00:29:585 - Extend the spinner to 00:32:585, remove the circle 1, put the slider at 00:33:114. Put another circle at 00:34:349.
00:35:408 - Move this slider to 00:35:232
00:40:879 - Move both circles #3 and #4, 2 snap before.

[Easy]

Please unify DS　0.8x.

Winder1's Normal

00:50:408 (4) - 1grid up

Easy:

00:04:879 (2) - fix Spacing error to this exactly X:352 Y:200
That way prev:0.78x
And Next: 0.78x
Are exactly to those standards, i found it because AIMod could not