TicClick wrote:
General stuffEasy
- Remove "ligy" from tags ok
- You have about of 19% unmapped at the beginning and something like 11% in the end. So, you have 29% of mp3 unmapped,it's bigger than recommended percentage (less than 20%) I see
- I advice you to map a little more. Either start from 00:12:978, or from 00:26:149 ok
- You can grab some more tags from this video's description thanks,I added some tags.
- Find Okuu's picture with transparent background and use it as comboburst.png. I think it will look nice, but don't forget about its dimensions: it should be less than 400x700 (big things may distract people from playing) reserve
- You can add three kiai fountains.
Do it in all diffs ok
- 01:24:594 — add here section that turns kiai off. 01:24:685 — and here turn it on again!
- 02:46:545 — turn it off, and 02:46:636 — turn it on
- 02:58:252 — turn it off, 02:58:344 — turn it on and 02:58:435 — turn it off
- Pink colour doesn't fit BG, use orange (close to red) or something like it ok
Nothing more to add, clean but boring, as most of the easy diffs are.
- 00:43:710 (1) - I think, you need to add finish for slider's beginning fixed
- 00:46:636 (3) - same fixed
- 00:49:563 (1) - the same. In short, listen to the track and add finish when it appears in music ok
- 01:11:514 (1) - slider overlaps it a little. Movel this note somewhere else fixed
- 01:11:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - not really good for Easy. 5 is almost hidden by hitbursts and other four notes. Moreover, at 01:12:978 starts kiai (intensive part, yeah), but player has to waaaait for next note. You better place more notes after kiai's start and remove some of them before it. fixed
- 01:18:831 (1) - add finish instead of clap, it fits much more because of new part of lyrics ok
- 01:24:685 (1) - same ok
- 02:33:466 (1) - no. Slider's end mustn't be here, really close to beginning, because player can't see in which direction should he move. I advice you to change it to repeating slider: http://puu.sh/cSn6. Don't forget to add finish for the first and the last repeats fixed
NormalAlso, what if you decrease HP drain by 1 for this diff? ok
- 00:51:758 (5) - it overlaps next slider a little. Not critical, but it's a matter of style fixed
- 01:07:856 (3) - what if you place it under the end of 01:06:392 (4)? fixed
- 01:10:783 (1) - start it 1/1 earlier? I mean, on previos white tick fixed
- 01:12:978 — oh. I wouldn't increase sliders velocity on Normal. Maybe, use 1.1x instead of 1.2x? reserve
- 01:15:173 (2) - clap sounds bad here fixed
- 01:42:246 — why do you continue mapping here? You better do it at 01:48:100 because these notes are so lonely and inconsistent with other diffs ok
- 02:13:710 (1) - oh, bad. Better don't do jumps on normal (even if they're marked with another colour), put this note closer to previous slider fixed
- 02:30:539 (1,2,3,4) - they're too fat, and they look bad Please, fix them fixed
- 02:32:734 (1) - start it 1/1 earlier? fixed
- 02:34:929 — the same comment about sliders velocity reserve
- 02:51:026 (1) - put it closer to previous sliders fixed
HardInsane
- 00:40:783 (1) - remove finish? fixed
- 00:50:844 (3) - it starts from red tick and sounds strange. You better use note + short slider here fixed
- 01:05:478 (4) - same fixed
- 01:42:246 — the same as witn Normal. Start to map later fixed
- 02:45:905 (1,2,3,4) - rotate it by 30 degrees right, and it will look much nicer with previous square ok
Lunatic
- 00:54:685 (3,4) - they look not good enough, please, make them more straight: http://puu.sh/cSsL. Also, why don't you use grid level 3? Press G until you come to "Small", it lets you make more accurate shapes I've never known the way to adjust grid level... Anyway I fixed.
- 01:10:051 — please, remove both lines (red and green), change this slider to something else and remove red line at 01:10:782 fixed
- 02:16:453 (2) - swith to tiny grid and place it under slider's end. Use zero spacing for it ok
Well, few words about hitsounds. These claps don't sound well for me, so if you feel the same, try to find another clap sample.
- 01:00:356 (2) - use the same trick as on Insane to put it under slider's end. It's called "to stack notes" fixed
- 01:05:112 (4) - the same fixed
- 01:45:905 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - what if you make it a little bit curvy? http://puu.sh/cSvc fixed
- 01:48:100 — start break from here. Here's how to do it:http://puu.sh/cSvw (grab it and drag to the white tick). You'll see how does it work in test or play mode fixed
- 02:27:063 (4) - stack it with the end of slider fixed
- 02:56:149 (3,4) - place it a little bit farther from previous sliders (there's no free space between them so they overlap a little bit) fixed
That's all, I hope you'll find more people to help you!
I'm satisfied with the hitsounds, but hope more people to mod for these.
Many many thanks for your great mod I'll think the reservations over and continue making the map better!