OnosakiHito wrote:

うん、良いです。でも僕は日本語をまだまだ出来ます。w
まぁ、太鼓ヂッフは今作りましたー。　僕はSBも作ります。
使うでお願いします。

Acceptをありがとうございました！

>DOWNLOAD<

P.s.:　ああ、そうだ。僕の名前じはTAGに使うでもお願いします。Updateを見えます。

Hanyuu wrote:

please rank now ♥

TicClick wrote:

I will mod it when I have enough free time, I promise. Really. For now, take these stars from me.

1. Remove "ligy" from tags
2. You have about of 19% unmapped at the beginning and something like 11% in the end. So, you have 29% of mp3 unmapped,it's bigger than recommended percentage (less than 20%)
   
   1. I advice you to map a little more. Either start from 00:12:978, or from 00:26:149
3. You can grab some more tags from this video's description
4. Find Okuu's picture with transparent background and use it as comboburst.png. I think it will look nice, but don't forget about its dimensions: it should be less than 400x700 (big things may distract people from playing)
5. You can add three kiai fountains.
   
   1. 01:24:594 — add here section that turns kiai off. 01:24:685 — and here turn it on again!
   2. 02:46:545 — turn it off, and 02:46:636 — turn it on
   3. 02:58:252 — turn it off, 02:58:344 — turn it on and 02:58:435 — turn it off
   Do it in all diffs
6. Pink colour doesn't fit BG, use orange (close to red) or something like it

1. 00:43:710 (1) - I think, you need to add finish for slider's beginning
2. 00:46:636 (3) - same
3. 00:49:563 (1) - the same. In short, listen to the track and add finish when it appears in music
4. 01:11:514 (1) - slider overlaps it a little. Movel this note somewhere else
5. 01:11:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - not really good for Easy. 5 is almost hidden by hitbursts and other four notes. Moreover, at 01:12:978 starts kiai (intensive part, yeah), but player has to waaaait for next note. You better place more notes after kiai's start and remove some of them before it.
6. 01:18:831 (1) - add finish instead of clap, it fits much more because of new part of lyrics
7. 01:24:685 (1) - same
8. 02:33:466 (1) - no. Slider's end mustn't be here, really close to beginning, because player can't see in which direction should he move. I advice you to change it to repeating slider: http://puu.sh/cSn6. Don't forget to add finish for the first and the last repeats

1. 00:51:758 (5) - it overlaps next slider a little. Not critical, but it's a matter of style
2. 01:07:856 (3) - what if you place it under the end of 01:06:392 (4)?
3. 01:10:783 (1) - start it 1/1 earlier? I mean, on previos white tick
4. 01:12:978 — oh. I wouldn't increase sliders velocity on Normal. Maybe, use 1.1x instead of 1.2x?
5. 01:15:173 (2) - clap sounds bad here
6. 01:42:246 — why do you continue mapping here? You better do it at 01:48:100 because these notes are so lonely and inconsistent with other diffs
7. 02:13:710 (1) - oh, bad. Better don't do jumps on normal (even if they're marked with another colour), put this note closer to previous slider
8. 02:30:539 (1,2,3,4) - they're too fat, and they look bad Please, fix them
9. 02:32:734 (1) - start it 1/1 earlier?
10. 02:34:929 — the same comment about sliders velocity
11. 02:51:026 (1) - put it closer to previous sliders

1. 00:40:783 (1) - remove finish?
2. 00:50:844 (3) - it starts from red tick and sounds strange. You better use note + short slider here
3. 01:05:478 (4) - same
4. 01:42:246 — the same as witn Normal. Start to map later
5. 02:45:905 (1,2,3,4) - rotate it by 30 degrees right, and it will look much nicer with previous square

1. 00:54:685 (3,4) - they look not good enough, please, make them more straight: http://puu.sh/cSsL. Also, why don't you use grid level 3? Press G until you come to "Small", it lets you make more accurate shapes
2. 01:10:051 — please, remove both lines (red and green), change this slider to something else and remove red line at 01:10:782
3. 02:16:453 (2) - swith to tiny grid and place it under slider's end. Use zero spacing for it

1. 01:00:356 (2) - use the same trick as on Insane to put it under slider's end. It's called "to stack notes"
2. 01:05:112 (4) - the same
3. 01:45:905 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - what if you make it a little bit curvy? http://puu.sh/cSvc
4. 01:48:100 — start break from here. Here's how to do it:http://puu.sh/cSvw (grab it and drag to the white tick). You'll see how does it work in test or play mode
5. 02:27:063 (4) - stack it with the end of slider
6. 02:56:149 (3,4) - place it a little bit farther from previous sliders (there's no free space between them so they overlap a little bit)

TicClick wrote:

General stuff

1. Remove "ligy" from tags　ok
2. You have about of 19% unmapped at the beginning and something like 11% in the end. So, you have 29% of mp3 unmapped,it's bigger than recommended percentage (less than 20%)　I see
   
   1. I advice you to map a little more. Either start from 00:12:978, or from 00:26:149　ok
3. You can grab some more tags from this video's description　thanks,I added some tags.
4. Find Okuu's picture with transparent background and use it as comboburst.png. I think it will look nice, but don't forget about its dimensions: it should be less than 400x700 (big things may distract people from playing) reserve
5. You can add three kiai fountains.
   
   1. 01:24:594 — add here section that turns kiai off. 01:24:685 — and here turn it on again!
   2. 02:46:545 — turn it off, and 02:46:636 — turn it on
   3. 02:58:252 — turn it off, 02:58:344 — turn it on and 02:58:435 — turn it off
   Do it in all diffs　ok
6. Pink colour doesn't fit BG, use orange (close to red) or something like it　ok

Easy

1. 00:43:710 (1) - I think, you need to add finish for slider's beginning　fixed
2. 00:46:636 (3) - same　fixed
3. 00:49:563 (1) - the same. In short, listen to the track and add finish when it appears in music　ok
4. 01:11:514 (1) - slider overlaps it a little. Movel this note somewhere else　fixed
5. 01:11:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - not really good for Easy. 5 is almost hidden by hitbursts and other four notes. Moreover, at 01:12:978 starts kiai (intensive part, yeah), but player has to waaaait for next note. You better place more notes after kiai's start and remove some of them before it.　fixed
6. 01:18:831 (1) - add finish instead of clap, it fits much more because of new part of lyrics　ok
7. 01:24:685 (1) - same　ok
8. 02:33:466 (1) - no. Slider's end mustn't be here, really close to beginning, because player can't see in which direction should he move. I advice you to change it to repeating slider: http://puu.sh/cSn6. Don't forget to add finish for the first and the last repeats　fixed

Nothing more to add, clean but boring, as most of the easy diffs are.

Normal

1. 00:51:758 (5) - it overlaps next slider a little. Not critical, but it's a matter of style　fixed
2. 01:07:856 (3) - what if you place it under the end of 01:06:392 (4)?　fixed
3. 01:10:783 (1) - start it 1/1 earlier? I mean, on previos white tick　fixed
4. 01:12:978 — oh. I wouldn't increase sliders velocity on Normal. Maybe, use 1.1x instead of 1.2x?　reserve
5. 01:15:173 (2) - clap sounds bad here　fixed
6. 01:42:246 — why do you continue mapping here? You better do it at 01:48:100 because these notes are so lonely and inconsistent with other diffs　ok
7. 02:13:710 (1) - oh, bad. Better don't do jumps on normal (even if they're marked with another colour), put this note closer to previous slider　fixed
8. 02:30:539 (1,2,3,4) - they're too fat, and they look bad Please, fix them　fixed
9. 02:32:734 (1) - start it 1/1 earlier?　fixed
10. 02:34:929 — the same comment about sliders velocity　reserve
11. 02:51:026 (1) - put it closer to previous sliders　fixed

Also, what if you decrease HP drain by 1 for this diff?　ok

Hard

1. 00:40:783 (1) - remove finish?　fixed
2. 00:50:844 (3) - it starts from red tick and sounds strange. You better use note + short slider here　fixed
3. 01:05:478 (4) - same　fixed
4. 01:42:246 — the same as witn Normal. Start to map later　fixed
5. 02:45:905 (1,2,3,4) - rotate it by 30 degrees right, and it will look much nicer with previous square ok

Insane

1. 00:54:685 (3,4) - they look not good enough, please, make them more straight: http://puu.sh/cSsL. Also, why don't you use grid level 3? Press G until you come to "Small", it lets you make more accurate shapes　I've never known the way to adjust grid level... Anyway I fixed.
2. 01:10:051 — please, remove both lines (red and green), change this slider to something else and remove red line at 01:10:782 　fixed
3. 02:16:453 (2) - swith to tiny grid and place it under slider's end. Use zero spacing for it　ok

Lunatic

1. 01:00:356 (2) - use the same trick as on Insane to put it under slider's end. It's called "to stack notes"　fixed
2. 01:05:112 (4) - the same　fixed
3. 01:45:905 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - what if you make it a little bit curvy? http://puu.sh/cSvc　fixed
4. 01:48:100 — start break from here. Here's how to do it:http://puu.sh/cSvw (grab it and drag to the white tick). You'll see how does it work in test or play mode　fixed
5. 02:27:063 (4) - stack it with the end of slider　fixed
6. 02:56:149 (3,4) - place it a little bit farther from previous sliders (there's no free space between them so they overlap a little bit)　fixed

Well, few words about hitsounds. These claps don't sound well for me, so if you feel the same, try to find another clap sample.

That's all, I hope you'll find more people to help you!

　I'm satisfied with the hitsounds, but hope more people to mod for these.

eikkaleyd wrote:

☢CAUTION!!☢CAUTION!!☢CAUTION!!☢

Nice map~ come for star~

And here is an interesting MP3 for Okuu~
[attachment=0:01d3d]CAUTION.mp3[/attachment:01d3d]

☢CAUTION!!☢CAUTION!!☢CAUTION!!☢

TicClick wrote:

Normal

1. 01:12:978 — oh. I wouldn't increase sliders velocity on Normal. Maybe, use 1.1x instead of 1.2x?　fixed
2. 02:34:929 — the same comment about sliders velocity　fixed

ligy wrote:

But I don't know how to use the sound

eikkaleyd wrote:

Ummm maybe gos or applause?

Mustaash wrote:

Hai ligy, from Elly's and Musty's Modding Queue.

[General]

Is it just me or the mp3 is cut?

Yes. original music is so long that it would be "approved" if not cut.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FnlS-n9fjh4

[Easy]

00:26:149 (1) - I think here you should add a finish at the beginning of the slider because of the melody fixed
00:32:002 (1) - ^ fixed
01:58:344 (4,1) - This kind of spacing is really confusing for beginners fixed
02:33:466 (1) - Remove new combo because the rhythm you follow isn't finished fixed
02:58:435 (T) - Remove this useless timing section ( only if you want ) I think the section makes the timing line visually neat.

Nice Easy, just minor issues

[Normal]

00:26:149 (1) - You should add a finish at the beggining of this slider because of the melody fixed
00:29:075 (1) - Here too fixed
00:32:002 (1) - ^ fixed
00:34:929 (1) - ^ fixed
00:37:856 (1) - ^ fixed
00:45:905 (5,1) - omg, this pattern is really HARD to read for beginners i was suprised about this too >> fixed
01:12:978 (1,2,1) - This pattern is kind of problems because of readability essentially. Try to arrange them like this? http://puu.sh/dAAn fixed
01:21:758 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about this pattern too it seems more readable like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/221413 fixed
01:24:319 (3,1) - This anti-jump is not even readable for beginner players try to arrange the spacing? fixed
02:34:929 (1,2,1) - exactly the same as 01:12:978 (1,2,1) - fixed
02:40:051 (4,5,6,1) - Because of the low approach rate, it really confuses me i would prefer something like this : http://puu.sh/dABq fixed
02:58:435 (T) - Remove this useless timing section ( only if you want )

Nice Idea with this difficulty more minor issues than the Easy but it's great overall !

[Hard]

The 4 first inherited sections are useless, because there is a spinner and a spinner can't have a lower speed fixed

00:26:149 (1) - You should add a finish at the beggining of this slider because of the melody fixed
00:29:075 (1) - Here too fixed
00:32:002 (1) - ^ fixed
00:34:929 (1) - ^ fixed
00:37:856 (1) - ^ fixed
00:49:563 (1) - Grid Lv3 down 1 grid fixed
01:00:905 (3,1) - Confusing Spacing fixed
01:03:831 (8,1) - ^ fixed
02:16:270 (3,4) - Random Spacing is confusing fixed
02:57:978 (3,4,5) - Don't really like it it would be fine if you make a consistent pattern like this : http://puu.sh/dADw or something similar not overalaped fixed
02:58:435 (T) - Remove this useless timing section ( only if you want )

Nice Hard, nice idea to map with a low SV i really enjoyed it

[Insane]

Maybe OD+1? fixed
02:01:088 (5,6,7) - I don't like this spacing change fastly fixed
02:14:990 (2) - This note is better placed here : http://puu.sh/dAEF fixed

Ok Really fine difficulty

[Ono's Taiko]

HP-1 and it would be fine~. I'll get in touch with him later!

[Lunatic]

01:36:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - I think so many MAT/BAT will told you about this part because it's the only standard diff who you make something here and then you put a break, try to make breaks at same timing in each diffs and the same count of breaks ( on each diffs too )
So the break here 01:48:100 should be mapped and the notes i told you should be removed. ;3

ok.. I removed the part and added new part same as other diffs.

i hope you understand what i mean, btw awesome Lunatic, having fun and enjoyed it a lot!
Keep your great work !

Thank you for helpful modding!

ligy wrote:

[Ono's Taiko]
HP-1 and it would be fine~. I'll get in touch with him later![/color]

zerozaber wrote:

not only 3L but mariapolo too

xiceyx wrote:

Really cool map! I hope gets ranked! Great job

[Colours]
Combo1 : 241,198,22
Combo2 : 250,79,5
Combo3 : 228,28,5
Combo4 : 252,140,39

NoHItter wrote:

General
Is the mp3 really cut off like that?

Original mp3 is below.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCubA3oltGM

There are two .osb files. Normally you only have to delete one, but as they do nothing, just delete them both.

Deleted both.

Skin
Just as suggestion:
Make your hitcircleoverlay.png something like this (excuse the fail photo editing since I was in a rush to make it, but you can just make one without the yellow borders).
It's too hard to erase the line neatly by my photo editing skill...
Maybe cool even if the line stays XD.

Make your hitcircle.png be the default one.
OK.
Under the [General] section of the .osu files, add OverlayPosition: Below
The result is this and this.
Added in all of .osu.


Easy
00:36:392 (4,5) - Perhaps you could unstack these? fixed.
01:24:685 (1) - You could follow the pattern at 01:12:978 (1,2) for consistency. fixed.
01:32:002 (2,3) - Perhaps you could unstack these? fixed.
02:34:929 (1) - Make this into a repeat slider like in the first chorus? fixed.
02:46:636 (1) - Again, you could follow the pattern at 02:34:929 (1,2) for consistency. fixed.

Normal
00:55:417 (1) - [nazi] Maybe move this, so it will not overlap with 00:53:954 (3)? fixed.
01:08:588 (1,2) - I'm not sure about the readability of this. Fair enough I guess. fixed.
01:17:368 (1,2,3,4) - IMO it would be better if the repeat slider comes before the triple notes. The rhythm will be introduced first. fixed.

Hard
02:26:149 (1,2,3) - I really suggest that you move this elsewhere. Don't place it under the slidertrack.
fixed.

Insane
01:22:214 (3) - Unsnapped note. Resnapped all notes.
01:51:758 (5,6) - Unstack them? Stacked sliders look ugly IMO, but it's up to you if you wanna change. fixed.
02:02:458 (10) - Unsnapped note. Resnapped all notes.
02:17:092 (5) - Unsnapped note. Resnapped all notes.

Lunatic
02:10:966 (4) - Spacing? I don't see anything to indicate a spacing change. fixed.

Overall, great map!

thanks

Edit:
Oh and if you do follow through with my skin suggestion, I suggest you use these combo colors:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 241,198,22
Combo2 : 250,79,5
Combo3 : 228,28,5
Combo4 : 252,140,39

OK.

NewRulerNA wrote:

Mod reqより

[General]
Lead-inを全難易度で統一
tagの「maria polo」が重複してるので削除

修正しました。

[Easy]
OD-1

修正

00:42:246 (2,1) - Distance
00:49:563 (1,2,3,4) - 全体的に離れ気味
01:02:734 (3,4) - (1,2)と位置を揃える
01:12:978 (1,2) - Distance
01:29:075 (5,1) - ^
01:59:075 (5,1) - ^
02:04:197 (2,1) - ^
02:11:514 (1,2,3,4) - ここも距離が離れ気味なのでもっと中央に寄せる
02:24:685 (3,4) - (1,2)と位置を揃える
02:51:026 (5,1) - Distance

DSを統一しました。それに併せる形で位置について言及されていた部分を修正。

[Normal]
NormalではDSの変更とスライダーの速度変更はされるべきではありません
部分的に指摘すると譜面のバランスが崩れてしまうので指摘は今回はしません

00:38:588 (2) - 00:37:124 (5)とクロスさせるとNormalとしては見にくいです　修正しました。
02:00:539 (2) - 01:59:075 (1) - ^　修正しました。

[Hard]
AR-1or-2　　修正しました。

01:10:783 - この緑線の必要性を感じられません、またこの直後にある緑線は01:11:514 (1)の位置まで移動　修正しました。
01:35:844 (3,4) - なぜこの2つのスライダーは形が微妙に違います　修正しました。

[Insane]
一点のみ
HP+1or+2　修正しました。

[Lunatic]
これも一点のみ

01:08:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 形が歪んでいて汚いです、また01:09:502 (6,8)にCtrl+Rで叩くタイミングを逆に　修正しました。


あくまでも個人的にですが、譜面として見るとInsaneとHardに連打以外に大きな差が見つからず、似た難易度が2つあるように思えました
Insaneの方のスペーシングを部分的に難易度が上がり過ぎない範囲で広げてみては？

初期のころから散々指摘されてきたことですね…音取りを変えようと思うと今までのMODがすべて無駄になってしまいますし、やはり配置で差別化するしか無いですね。ささやかに一部分スページングを変えてみましたが、もう少し譜面とにらめっこして変化させようと思います。

それ以外では気になったところはありません
nice song.