Okay, here we go. I decided to spend some time right now.
General stuff- Remove "ligy" from tags
- You have about of 19% unmapped at the beginning and something like 11% in the end. So, you have 29% of mp3 unmapped,it's bigger than recommended percentage (less than 20%)
- I advice you to map a little more. Either start from 00:12:978, or from 00:26:149
- You can grab some more tags from this video's description
- Find Okuu's picture with transparent background and use it as comboburst.png. I think it will look nice, but don't forget about its dimensions: it should be less than 400x700 (big things may distract people from playing)
- You can add three kiai fountains.
- 01:24:594 — add here section that turns kiai off. 01:24:685 — and here turn it on again!
- 02:46:545 — turn it off, and 02:46:636 — turn it on
- 02:58:252 — turn it off, 02:58:344 — turn it on and 02:58:435 — turn it off
Do it in all diffs - Pink colour doesn't fit BG, use orange (close to red) or something like it
Easy- 00:43:710 (1) - I think, you need to add finish for slider's beginning
- 00:46:636 (3) - same
- 00:49:563 (1) - the same. In short, listen to the track and add finish when it appears in music
- 01:11:514 (1) - slider overlaps it a little. Movel this note somewhere else
- 01:11:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - not really good for Easy. 5 is almost hidden by hitbursts and other four notes. Moreover, at 01:12:978 starts kiai (intensive part, yeah), but player has to waaaait for next note. You better place more notes after kiai's start and remove some of them before it.
- 01:18:831 (1) - add finish instead of clap, it fits much more because of new part of lyrics
- 01:24:685 (1) - same
- 02:33:466 (1) - no. Slider's end mustn't be here, really close to beginning, because player can't see in which direction should he move. I advice you to change it to repeating slider: http://puu.sh/cSn6. Don't forget to add finish for the first and the last repeats
Nothing more to add, clean but boring, as most of the easy diffs are.
Normal- 00:51:758 (5) - it overlaps next slider a little. Not critical, but it's a matter of style
- 01:07:856 (3) - what if you place it under the end of 01:06:392 (4)?
- 01:10:783 (1) - start it 1/1 earlier? I mean, on previos white tick
- 01:12:978 — oh. I wouldn't increase sliders velocity on Normal. Maybe, use 1.1x instead of 1.2x?
- 01:15:173 (2) - clap sounds bad here
- 01:42:246 — why do you continue mapping here? You better do it at 01:48:100 because these notes are so lonely and inconsistent with other diffs
- 02:13:710 (1) - oh, bad. Better don't do jumps on normal (even if they're marked with another colour), put this note closer to previous slider
- 02:30:539 (1,2,3,4) - they're too fat, and they look bad Please, fix them
- 02:32:734 (1) - start it 1/1 earlier?
- 02:34:929 — the same comment about sliders velocity
- 02:51:026 (1) - put it closer to previous sliders
Well, I don't mind copypaste. Also, what if you decrease HP drain by 1 for this diff?
Hard- 00:40:783 (1) - remove finish?
- 00:50:844 (3) - it starts from red tick and sounds strange. You better use note + short slider here
- 01:05:478 (4) - same
- 01:42:246 — the same as witn Normal. Start to map later
- 02:45:905 (1,2,3,4) - rotate it by 30 degrees right, and it will look much nicer with previous square
Nothing more to add here.
Insane- 00:54:685 (3,4) - they look not good enough, please, make them more straight: http://puu.sh/cSsL. Also, why don't you use grid level 3? Press G until you come to "Small", it lets you make more accurate shapes
- 01:10:051 — please, remove both lines (red and green), change this slider to something else and remove red line at 01:10:782
- 02:16:453 (2) - swith to tiny grid and place it under slider's end. Use zero spacing for it
I like this diff more than others!
Lunatic- 01:00:356 (2) - use the same trick as on Insane to put it under slider's end. It's called "to stack notes"
- 01:05:112 (4) - the same
- 01:45:905 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - what if you make it a little bit curvy? http://puu.sh/cSvc
- 01:48:100 — start break from here. Here's how to do it:http://puu.sh/cSvw (grab it and drag to the white tick). You'll see how does it work in test or play mode
- 02:27:063 (4) - stack it with the end of slider
- 02:56:149 (3,4) - place it a little bit farther from previous sliders (there's no free space between them so they overlap a little bit)
Not bad.
Well, few words about hitsounds. These claps don't sound well for me, so if you feel the same, try to find another clap sample.
That's all, I hope you'll find more people to help you!