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Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.)

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Yasora
Sorry for very late mod. I really forgot to mod this TAT;;

swish
01:20:389 (1) I don't think this slider is easy to read by beginner. Since the vocal is beginning in before white tick. Maybe, they will click it when vocal in the white tick is begin. Consider to start this slider in 01:20:212

Normal
01:17:742 (1) I think for better flow-pattern-song , I suggest to make this slider is blanket like this

MiLu
00:26:565 (8) make this note same spacing with before? Since this note in the same timeline and combo with (1-7)?
00:34:330 (2) add clap for following drum sound
00:40:859 (8) I think add whistle in slider's beginning isn't bad too
00:43:859 (1) add finish in slider's beginning?
00:56:389 (4,5,1) I feel this is make confused for read imo. because (1) is stacked by (4) slider's reverse and after that go to (5). that more easy too read by players if change the direction of slider's reverse to right imo. oh, because my english is bad to explain that, here I give the picture lol
01:21:447 (5) add new combo?
01:23:389 (1) add finish in slider's beginning?

Insane
00:47:036 (2) I think this jump is weird orz. too far from (1). maybe, put in x:112 y:212 for easier read
01:00:094 (6) add new combo?

That's all
Good luck (:
shot my last kudosu~
MiLu

Yasora-chan wrote:

MiLu
00:26:565 (8) make this note same spacing with before? Since this note in the same timeline and combo with (1-7)? no change
00:34:330 (2) add clap for following drum sound add
00:40:859 (8) I think add whistle in slider's beginning isn't bad too no
00:43:859 (1) add finish in slider's beginning? no
00:56:389 (4,5,1) I feel this is make confused for read imo. because (1) is stacked by (4) slider's reverse and after that go to (5). that more easy too read by players if change the direction of slider's reverse to right imo. oh, because my english is bad to explain that, here I give the picture lol okay changed
01:21:447 (5) add new combo? no
01:23:389 (1) add finish in slider's beginning? fixed
thank you~

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [MiLu].osu
Topic Starter
Melophobia
> Yasora-chan

ヽ(*´∀`)ノ thanks for mod and star!

all fixed :D
swish

Yasora-chan wrote:

swish
01:20:389 (1) I don't think this slider is easy to read by beginner. Since the vocal is beginning in before white tick. Maybe, they will click it when vocal in the white tick is begin. Consider to start this slider in 01:20:212
ok. change like this

thanks for modding~

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [swish].osu
KanaRin
Garven
[swish]
00:12:624 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an Easy.

[Normal]
00:01:153 (1) - This starts in such an odd place musically. Might be better to start mapping at 00:00:977 -
00:12:624 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for a Normal. Hm..

[Insane]
00:51:624 (3,4,5,6) - Strange rhythm to use

[Taiko]
Volume is way too loud ><

Get a couple mods on the taiko and call me back~
swish

Garven wrote:

[swish]
00:12:624 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an Easy. hmm.. spinner end to 00:11:389...
thanks :)

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [swish].osu
Topic Starter
Melophobia
> Garven
fixed all, thanks
aabc271
As requested by Kana, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

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[Kana's Taiko Oni]

Hitsounds can be reduced a bit as they cover the music imo ~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:09:800 ( 10 ) - Add finish ?

Well, I can mod more, but those suggestions will be too minor. So I'll just leave it for now ~

The map is nicely-mapped ~

I like the use of hitsounds, and the finishes before kiai ~

Good job :)

Rating : 9.5/10 ( Hitsounds +1, patterns +0.5, Good use of finishes +0.5 )

Star and good luck ~ ;)

No need to kds this ~
KanaRin

aabc271 wrote:

As requested by Kana, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

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[Kana's Taiko Oni]

Hitsounds can be reduced a bit as they cover the music imo ~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:09:800 ( 10 ) - Add finish ?

Well, I can mod more, but those suggestions will be too minor. So I'll just leave it for now ~

The map is nicely-mapped ~

I like the use of hitsounds, and the finishes before kiai ~

Good job :)

Rating : 9.5/10 ( Hitsounds +1, patterns +0.5, Good use of finishes +0.5 )

Star and good luck ~ ;)

No need to kds this ~
Thanks, Fixed!
Topic Starter
Melophobia
> aabc271, Kana-chan

thanks alot~ T-T
Garven
Sorry for the long wait.

[Insane]
00:48:624 (2,3,4,5,6) - Compare spacing to 00:50:742 (1,2,3,4,5) -

[Kana]
I still think the taiko is too loud compared to the song. q:
KanaRin
Topic Starter
Melophobia
fixed (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Garven
Bubbled~
Topic Starter
Melophobia
thanks a lot <3
wmfchris
ahhh too late to watch taiko diff, anyway it's good =w=
wmfchris
-> The BG is quite large (1MB), so it'll be nice if you compress it a bit, but that's no big deal.

[Insane]
00:08:918 - try to make it gradually louder on 00:08:918 - and 00:09:800 - to fit vocal's emotional change?
00:21:800 (3) - In this combo the accents comes every 1.5 beat (X x x X x x X---) so the pervious sounding logic may not work. Remove whistle at the end may sounds better

[MiLu]
00:12:094 (7) - maybe you will want a NC here to make the stacking clearer? You've NC similar position at 00:23:389 (1) - , so you may want to do the same thing as well.
00:28:330 (4) - NC since this is a new sentence?
01:07:683 (4) - clap at the ending
01:19:859 (8) - similarly NC here?

[Normal]
00:24:094 ~ 00:46:330 - imo claps in this sections are too loud(especially when you compare with [insane]), you may want to make it bit softer

[Taiko]
00:09:094 - better move 1/2 eariler. This retains the notes density, but you may want to add one at 00:09:447 - as well.
00:34:683 (156) - sounds kinda odd to me, vocal should be 3/4
also, 00:24:094 ~ 00:46:330 - still sounds a bit loud to me. Try like N 60%...

That's it. Fix them and we will make it bubbled again~
Topic Starter
Melophobia

wmfchris wrote:

-> The BG is quite large (1MB), so it'll be nice if you compress it a bit, but that's no big deal. fixed

[Insane]
00:08:918 - try to make it gradually louder on 00:08:918 - and 00:09:800 - to fit vocal's emotional change? ok, fixed and do it Normal diff as well.
00:21:800 (3) - In this combo the accents comes every 1.5 beat (X x x X x x X---) so the pervious sounding logic may not work. Remove whistle at the end may sounds better sure, also changed clap at the beginning of 00:22:330 (5) to a finish.

[Normal]
00:24:094 ~ 00:46:330 - imo claps in this sections are too loud(especially when you compare with [insane]), you may want to make it bit softer fixed

That's it. Fix them and we will make it bubbled again~
also fixed newcombo at 00:24:447 and 00:25:506 in [Insane] by myself

thanks for modding
MiLu

wmfchris wrote:

[MiLu]
00:12:094 (7) - maybe you will want a NC here to make the stacking clearer? You've NC similar position at 00:23:389 (1) - , so you may want to do the same thing as well.
00:28:330 (4) - NC since this is a new sentence?
01:07:683 (4) - clap at the ending
01:19:859 (8) - similarly NC here?
all fixed~
thx :oops:

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [MiLu].osu
KanaRin

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
00:09:094 - better move 1/2 eariler. This retains the notes density, but you may want to add one at 00:09:447 - as well. It's fine now imo.
00:34:683 (156) - sounds kinda odd to me, vocal should be 3/4 I don't really get what you mean but anyway, I added a note and it seems fine now, Fixed
also, 00:24:094 ~ 00:46:330 - still sounds a bit loud to me. Try like N 60%... Fixed
~
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [Kana's Taiko Oni].osu
wmfchris
There you go, re-bubbled!
-s u i r e n-
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Topic Starter
Melophobia
ありがとーう
Garven
Ranked~
Akemi_Homura
Gratz~! :3
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ome!
Topic Starter
Melophobia
thanks Garven and Akemi_Homura ><

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