Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.
General:When I start to play the map it showed like this:
I am not sure what the reason but I guess your video have a wrong scale for the length and the width, it seems your video is for super wide screen...#_# try to make it 16:9 ... or something else? .. I guess
and, your mp3 is only 1min 37seconds, but the video is over 2 minutes, I am not sure why, but it didn't feel good, any chance to find a mp3 that fit the video?
Soft whistle fit this song pretty much imo, maybe try to add some during the kiai of somewhere? anyway hitsound is a personal style thing, only claps are okey too.
And the last, YAO KUSUNOKI is really cute...
Swish:Beatmap design/suggestion00:09:800 (1) - Actually I think this spinner stops at a not very comfortable time, why not let it stops at 00:12:094? vocal ends here and drum starts here, so I think it is a better place to stop the spinner.
Normal:Beatmap design/suggestion00:09:800 (1) - same as Swish diff. and I think it is better to silence the end of the spinner like Swish diff, cuz the sound at the end of the spinner seems a little odd.
00:21:271 (1) - and I suggest to stop this spinner at 00:23:389, of course yours is okey too, but comparing the two guitar sound of the music here, the first sound is stronger so I think it would fit more if the spinner stops there.
01:10:683 (4,5) - not quite comfortable about the sliders here...although I know they are trying to follow the vocal, just didn't give me a very good feeling about them. Maybe try like this?
Hitsound00:51:624 (2) - Different with 00:57:271 (2), I think it is a little early to use 2 claps at here, so I think it is better to remove the clap on the head of the slider, cuz 01:02:918 (2) - you didn't use double claps at here too O.O
MiLu:Beatmap design/suggestion I think your distance is not very consistent, sometimes you were using 1.0, but sometimes change to 1.3, I am not quite understand your reason of doing that, so let me just give some examples:
00:21:271 (1,2,3,4) - I think you are following the guitar here, but I didn't feel the guitar sounds stronger or something else after 2, so I didn't quite understand why 1 2 is 1.0 spacing but 2 3 4 changed to 1.3 spacing.
00:30:800 (3,4,5,6) - and here, music is quite normal here, so I didn't get why it is 1.3 spacing instead of 1.0.
Anyway I didn't quite understand the way you map those spacing, So I think I am not gonna to nazi of that^^; sorry.
00:38:036 (6) - a little hidden by the comboburst of 4.
Insane:Hitsoundmaybe make kiai volumn a little louder?
So much for now I think. good luck!
