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Birdy

Darcsol wrote:

2nnt wrote:

Update

Sorry about the bad quality again, but this is the best I can do with 20 mb limit.

But well, my excuse is the length of the song
Even with the file size reduced, it's still exceeds the total file limit. I appreciate you for trying.
Ah well, better luck next time.
TicClick
:3

General
  1. 01:18:299 ~ 01:19:237 and two other parts between kiai: why do you stop kiai here? I don't see a reason for it :(
lovhin's Easy
  1. 00:30:487 (1,3) - I would make "beat blanket" here instead of it: http://puu.sh/erdn
  2. 00:39:862 (1) - unsymmetrical a little, but it's ok
  3. 00:54:393 — note?
  4. 02:48:299 (5) - forgot to put finish on the end?
  5. 03:23:924 (1) - unsymmetrical a liiiittle again
  6. 03:46:893 — add note between sliders?
  7. 04:36:112 (2) - remove finish?
Normal
  1. 00:37:987 (1) - 1 grid left to keep the same distance between notes
  2. 00:56:268 (5) - finish?
  3. 01:02:830 — I would put a note here
  4. 01:35:643 ~ 01:37:987 — hmm... ok, ok
  5. 03:26:971 — start break right after the note, not here
  6. 04:41:737 (1) - forgot finish
Hard
  1. 00:42:440 (2) - stack it using zero spacing (disable grid first)
  2. 00:52:283 — note?
  3. 01:04:002 (1) - remove nc?
  4. 01:08:221 (2) - did you want to stack it or not? I don't get it
  5. 01:29:315 (7) - the same about stack
  6. 01:30:252 (9) - and again
  7. 01:45:838 — note?
  8. 01:48:416 (12) - stack again :(
  9. 01:49:354 — place one note here and move next 1/4 later
  10. 02:22:283 — note!
  11. 02:34:002 (1) - remove nc?
  12. 02:53:924 (3) - stack it, oh
  13. 02:59:315 (8) - ^
  14. 03:00:487 (1) - ^
  15. 03:24:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make note-only stream instead?
  16. 03:33:299 — why did you drag break's end? It makes no sense here
  17. 03:56:502 (1) - remove nc?
  18. 04:20:643 (4) - stack it
  19. 04:22:518 (9) - ^
  20. 04:23:221 (2) - I think it's close to scorebar
Now is the sad thing: bitrate of your mp3 is 320 kbps. If you aim for rank, lower it down to 192 kbps at least (no less than 128), then fix the offset (usual it's something near +30ms; check on test mode), re-set the preview time and do full submit.

Good luck with map!
lovhin456
My diificulty
Download: IOSYS - Alice-Dere (Darcsol) [lovhin's Easy].osu
192kbps mp3 (+30 offset like TicClick said)
http://puu.sh/ete5
Video (I think it's fine but let's see what you think)
http://puu.sh/etbs
wowshakhov
Really good map! Haven't seen such a good flow for quite a while. I enjoyed it very much, keep up the good work.
Topic Starter
Darcsol

TicClick wrote:

General
  1. 01:18:299 ~ 01:19:237 and two other parts between kiai: why do you stop kiai here? I don't see a reason for it :( It's for style. I like to break the choruses to parts if possible.
Normal
  1. 00:37:987 (1) - 1 grid left to keep the same distance between notes Fixed.
  2. 00:56:268 (5) - finish? Added.
  3. 01:02:830 — I would put a note here I think it's fine without it.
  4. 01:35:643 ~ 01:37:987 — hmm... ok, ok ...
  5. 03:26:971 — start break right after the note, not here Added.
  6. 04:41:737 (1) - forgot finish Fixed.
Hard
  1. 00:42:440 (2) - stack it using zero spacing (disable grid first) Fixed.
  2. 00:52:283 — note? I think it's fine.
  3. 01:04:002 (1) - remove nc? It's a personal style of mine. I always add a combo before kiai time.
  4. 01:08:221 (2) - did you want to stack it or not? I don't get it :\ Meh, it won't be stacked.
  5. 01:29:315 (7) - the same about stack
  6. 01:30:252 (9) - and again The two above will stay the same.
  7. 01:45:838 — note? Added.
  8. 01:48:416 (12) - stack again :( I think it's fine.
  9. 01:49:354 — place one note here and move next 1/4 later Added.
  10. 02:22:283 — note! Again I think it's fine.
  11. 02:34:002 (1) - remove nc? Again, for style.
  12. 02:53:924 (3) - stack it, oh
  13. 02:59:315 (8) - ^
  14. 03:00:487 (1) - ^ I think all of them are fine.
  15. 03:24:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make note-only stream instead? I think it's fine.
  16. 03:33:299 — why did you drag break's end? It makes no sense here Fixed. There's little significance to it anyway.
  17. 03:56:502 (1) - remove nc? Again, style.
  18. 04:20:643 (4) - stack it I think it's fine.
  19. 04:22:518 (9) - ^ Slightly fixed.
  20. 04:23:221 (2) - I think it's close to scorebar I agree. Fixed.
Now is the sad thing: bitrate of your mp3 is 320 kbps. If you aim for rank, lower it down to 192 kbps at least (no less than 128), then fix the offset (usual it's something near +30ms; check on test mode), re-set the preview time and do full submit. Thanks lovhin456 for your services.
Good luck with map!
TicClick
Meh, it won't be stacked.
Even when you turn grid snapping off?
Topic Starter
Darcsol

TicClick wrote:

Even when you turn grid snapping off?
I've made different changes instead.
Backfire
spboxer3
from #request :P

[general]


  • Settings
  1. Inconsistency PreviewTime in Backfire's Taiko
  2. Inconsistency red line in Backfire's Taiko
  3. suggest use same kiai time

[lovhin's Easy]


  • Settings
  1. Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
    03:56:743 - to 04:10:829 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 02:55:829 (5,1) -
mapping
  1. 02:45:517 (3) - suggest newcomco this because It's easy diff 02:43:642 (2,3) - have 2 measure spacing It's too long for Easy

[Normal]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:43:642 (1,2,3) -
mapping
  1. 00:41:767 (7) - NC at this way. because (9) combo It's too much for Normal~
  2. 01:53:017 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Umm... where's clap hitsound? add clap for this part?[IMO]
  3. 02:10:829 (6,7,1) - spacing issue~ because...↓
  4. 02:11:063 (7) - unsanp slider (end)
  5. 03:47:392 (3) - unsanp slider (end)

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. suggest AR use 8
mapping
  1. 02:27:704 (4,5,6,1) - spacing issue~
  2. 04:13:876 (6,8) - could you stack them? It's pretty then now :P~
  3. 04:20:204 (3,4) - ^

[Backfire's Taiko]


  • Settings
  1. Draining Time:4:37 I remember over 4:30 It's unrankable ;_;
mapping
  1. 00:06:112 (1) - spinner end at 00:07:752 - ? 1/4 rhythm It's not fit at this way include It's spinner in Taiko

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

that's all
good luck :P
lovhin456
Did all the suggestions, thanks
Download: IOSYS - Alice-Dere (Darcsol) [lovhin's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Darcsol

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]


  • Settings
  1. Inconsistency PreviewTime in Backfire's Taiko
  2. Inconsistency red line in Backfire's Taiko
  3. suggest use same kiai time
All fixed.

[Normal]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:43:642 (1,2,3) -
mapping
  1. 00:41:767 (7) - NC at this way. because (9) combo It's too much for Normal~
  2. 01:53:017 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Umm... where's clap hitsound? add clap for this part?[IMO]
  3. 02:10:829 (6,7,1) - spacing issue~ because...↓
  4. 02:11:063 (7) - unsanp slider (end)
  5. 03:47:392 (3) - unsanp slider (end)
All fixed.

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. suggest AR use 8
I think it's fine.

mapping
  1. 02:27:704 (4,5,6,1) - spacing issue~ This is on purpose.
  2. 04:13:876 (6,8) - could you stack them? It's pretty then now :P~
  3. 04:20:204 (3,4) - ^
The first suggestion I'll fix but not the second one.

[Backfire's Taiko]


  • Settings
  1. Draining Time:4:37 I remember over 4:30 It's unrankable ;_;
mapping
  1. 00:06:112 (1) - spinner end at 00:07:752 - ? 1/4 rhythm It's not fit at this way include It's spinner in Taiko
All fixed by Backfire.

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

that's all
good luck :P
WVSagi
Hello again!
#modreqs.
Let's go.

Normal
[Normal]
01:33:329 (6) - add whistle?
01:55:360 (4) - add clap (front).
01:57:235 (2) - add clap.
01:57:704 (3) - add clap (reverse arrow).
02:00:282 (1) - add whistle (front), and add finish (end).
02:30:517 (1) - add finish at the end.
02:33:329 (1) - add clap (end), and remove the whistle at the end of the slider, it's weird.
02:37:548 (7) - remove finish?
03:12:704 (2) - add whistle (front).
03:13:642 (3) - add whistle (front + repeater 2).
03:15:517 (1) - add whistle (front)
03:16:454 (2) - add whistle (front)
03:17:392 (3) - same like 03:13:642 (3).
03:51:610 (4) - remove the whistle.
03:53:017 (1) - add finish (spinner end).
------------
Hard
[Hard]
01:00:517 (1) - add finish (spinner end).
01:34:267 (1) - same ^
03:04:267 (1) - same again ^
-----------------
That's it :3c
don't kudos this if it isn't help~
Goodluck! :oops:
Topic Starter
Darcsol

WVSagi wrote:

Normal
[Normal]
01:33:329 (6) - add whistle?
01:55:360 (4) - add clap (front).
01:57:235 (2) - add clap.
01:57:704 (3) - add clap (reverse arrow).
02:00:282 (1) - add whistle (front), and add finish (end).
02:30:517 (1) - add finish at the end.
02:33:329 (1) - add clap (end), and remove the whistle at the end of the slider, it's weird.
02:37:548 (7) - remove finish?
03:12:704 (2) - add whistle (front).
03:13:642 (3) - add whistle (front + repeater 2).
03:15:517 (1) - add whistle (front)
03:16:454 (2) - add whistle (front)
03:17:392 (3) - same like 03:13:642 (3).
03:51:610 (4) - remove the whistle.
03:53:017 (1) - add finish (spinner end). Most of them fixed/added.
------------
Hard
[Hard]
01:00:517 (1) - add finish (spinner end).
01:34:267 (1) - same ^
03:04:267 (1) - same again ^ I think all of it is unnecessary.
Thanks again. :D
Low
• Background image must be 800 x 600. Resize it using an image editor.
• Kiai times in Backfire's Taiko are unsnapped.
• Unsnapped timing sections at:
01:04:237
01:18:299
01:19:237
01:34:237
02:34:237
02:48:299
02:49:237
03:04:237
03:56:737
04:10:799
04:11:737
04:26:737

from #modreqs
Topic Starter
Darcsol

Jacob wrote:

• Background image must be 800 x 600. Resize it using an image editor. The maximum size for a background image is 1024 x 768. The majority of maps have backgrounds in this size and it looks better.
• Kiai times in Backfire's Taiko are unsnapped.
• Unsnapped timing sections at:
01:04:237
01:18:299
01:19:237
01:34:237
02:34:237
02:48:299
02:49:237
03:04:237
03:56:737
04:10:799
04:11:737
04:26:737 That doesn't matter much. Oh well, fixed.
Asakichi
[Hard]
There are many over 10 combo
I think half combo interval is best.

for example,
00:17:392 (6) - NC
00:21:142 (5) - NC
00:24:892 (5) - NC
00:28:642 (6) - NC

I am sorry for poor English.
Topic Starter
Darcsol

Asakichi wrote:

[Hard]
There are many over 10 combo
I think half combo interval is best.

for example,
00:17:392 (6) - NC
00:21:142 (5) - NC
00:24:892 (5) - NC
00:28:642 (6) - NC
I think it's fine, mostly because of personal preference. Technically the maximum combos you can have is 16 (I think). There are a few maps that went over the limit.
Ch1ka
Hi, Darcsol. I'm a fan of "Malice" and love this song, so I'm here.

[General]
Nothing found, except BG. There is so many beautiful pictures with Alice and Marisa, why didn't you choose a better one?

[lovhin's Easy]
01:29:110 (1) - Remove NC
02:32:860 - Add a note?
02:34:735 - ^
02:38:485 - ^

[Normal]
00:52:313 - Add a note? A-Aah~
01:18:798 (1) - Remove NC

[Hard]
01:04:032 (1) - Remove NC
01:16:454 (3) - Stack with 01:15:048?
01:18:798 (1) - Remove NC
02:34:032 (1) - ^
02:49:032 (1) - ^
03:56:532 (1) - ^
04:11:532 (1) - ^

[Backfire's Taiko]

Only one suggestion - maybe make all this Aaah and A-aaah moments with Big Kat, not Big Don?

That's all. Pretty good map and song.
GL and bye.
Agka
So pretty solid beatmap, let me give you some suggestions.

{Overall}
Check offset. Not sure about it. BPM is correct though.

[Normal]
HS size +1 (bigger)?
00:37:548 (5) - nc
00:38:017 (1) - remove nc
00:38:485 (2) - nc

[Hard]
01:36:775 - this empty space is empty, not even part of the break. D:
02:34:032 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:38:251 - Insert beat?
03:05:673 - Timing section, 5% soft?
03:11:767 - Timing section if previous applied, back to previous settings.
03:24:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Shape these like an U sides left right and bottom. Ask me via PM if you don't understand what I mean.
01:04:032 (1) - Remove nc?
01:04:735 (2,5) - Make more clap patterns with these 2nd and 4th beats of a measure with a clap where you don't do whistles?
02:32:392 - Timing section 5% soft?... then recover previous vol.

this was a quickie, done at 2AM in the morning so I might have overlooked plenty. :p
Topic Starter
Darcsol

Ch1ka wrote:

[General]
Nothing found, except BG. There is so many beautiful pictures with Alice and Marisa, why didn't you choose a better one? My diff's BG is only a placeholder, unless if change my mind. I'm open for any suggestions, but I'm a picky person. :P

[Normal]
00:52:313 - Add a note? A-Aah~ Added.
01:18:798 (1) - Remove NC It's my mapping style; I tend to include a NC right before a kiai time.

[Hard]
01:04:032 (1) - Remove NC
01:16:454 (3) - Stack with 01:15:048? Fixed.
01:18:798 (1) - Remove NC
02:34:032 (1) - ^
02:49:032 (1) - ^
03:56:532 (1) - ^
04:11:532 (1) - ^ Again all of this is just my personal mapping style. If enough people opposes them, I might remove it.

Agkaemon wrote:

{Overall}
Check offset. Not sure about it. BPM is correct though. I'm not good at timing. Hopefully other modders can check it.

[Normal]
HS size +1 (bigger)? I think it's fine.
00:37:548 (5) - nc
00:38:017 (1) - remove nc
00:38:485 (2) - nc I think it's fine.

[Hard]
01:36:775 - this empty space is empty, not even part of the break. D: Problem? Either way, it does no harm other than delaying the break to hit that specific beat.
02:34:032 (1) - Remove new combo? Like I said to the other modder, It's a mapping style of mine. I tend to include a NC right before a kiai time.
02:38:251 - Insert beat? I think it's fine.
03:05:673 - Timing section, 5% soft? I think it's fine. I might do additional sound adjustments later on.
03:11:767 - Timing section if previous applied, back to previous settings.
03:24:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Shape these like an U sides left right and bottom. Ask me via PM if you don't understand what I mean. I understand what you meant, but I will have to reject it. My mapping style is against something like that. I might make adjustments later on.
01:04:032 (1) - Remove nc? Once again, personal preference.
01:04:735 (2,5) - Make more clap patterns with these 2nd and 4th beats of a measure with a clap where you don't do whistles? Forgot to add them. Fixed.
02:32:392 - Timing section 5% soft?... then recover previous vol. Again I think it's fine.
Ch1ka
Sure. For example:
lovhin456
Did just one, the first one
Download: IOSYS - Alice-Dere (Darcsol) [lovhin's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Darcsol

Ch1ka wrote:

Sure. For example:
Sorry but I'm going to reject all of them.
Agka
Hey, giving a round around here, You MIGHT want to check out this. I made a bit of a cleanup to backfire's taiko.
Tell backfire himself though. ;)

http://puu.sh/mqpy
DaxMasterix
Change the offset to ' 545 ' (+28) & Resnap all..
and the Timing Points too
in all the diffs~
nokds
- celesse -
YAY i love this song! star :3
qwv803
Is this beatmap going to be ranked eventually? I would love that, well done on the beatmap its working as far as I can see.
Saten
Did you finish polishing Hard? It's still WIP it says

[General]
Wow the song is 4:45 and the video file size is less than 15MB, good job!

[Normal]
00:30:069 (1) - Finish on end
00:34:288 (1) - whistle on end
00:44:600 (6) - ^
01:18:819 (1) - why New Combo? should really be avoided unless it's longer than a 1/1 beat
01:45:069 (1,1) - You can remove that one as well. But since the next object is 1/1 away from the previous object, this looks okay
01:53:038 (1) - finish on start
02:22:803 (1) - 1 grid right
02:34:756 (2) - clap
02:48:350 (5) - clap on end
03:26:788 (1) - this NC is kinda unnecessary

[lovhin]
00:19:756 (2) - 3rd point 1 grid left
00:34:288 (3) - remove finish from start?
00:39:913 (1) - 3rd point 1 grid up
02:13:663 (1) - 2nd 1 grid down and 1 grid left, 3rd 1 grid down and 1 grid left, last 2 grid down and 1 grid left
02:16:006 (1) - clap
02:19:288 (1,2) - looks better if these are either centered or non-overlapped
03:01:944 (1) - I'd prefer it you move this 1/1 beat away and put a hit-circle here instead
03:38:975 (1) - this clap at the start doesn't really fit here imo. Fits on the tail more
04:24:913 (3) - move it 1 grid left and down and make a more symmetric slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/426637


Good luck~
Topic Starter
Darcsol

Saten wrote:

Did you finish polishing Hard? It's still WIP it says The Hard diff is now playable but currently it needs hitsounds.

[Normal]
00:30:069 (1) - Finish on end
00:34:288 (1) - whistle on end
00:44:600 (6) - ^ All added.
01:18:819 (1) - why New Combo? should really be avoided unless it's longer than a 1/1 beat I think it's fine.
01:45:069 (1,1) - You can remove that one as well. But since the next object is 1/1 away from the previous object, this looks okay It will stay.
01:53:038 (1) - finish on start Added.
02:22:803 (1) - 1 grid right I have made a different adjustment instead.
02:34:756 (2) - clap
02:48:350 (5) - clap on end Both added.
03:26:788 (1) - this NC is kinda unnecessary I think it's fine.
-Baby Strawberry-
such a cute song~!
giO-
Hello, from #modreqs for Mod for Mod with Renard - Smoke Tower http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38149


General

Resized BG to 1024x768


lovhin's Easy

00:24:913 (3) - remove repeat and make it finish on 00:25:381 - , then add 2 beats on 00:25:850 - and 00:26:319 - http://puu.sh/14QhR and add claps on end of the slider and on beat you will place here 00:26:319 -
00:28:663 (3) - ^
00:38:975 - add note?
01:52:100 (3) - is a bit out of the screen
02:34:288 (1) - ^
02:45:538 (1) - http://puu.sh/14QoR ?

Normal

00:10:850 (5) - stack this better
00:19:756 - add clap
00:24:444 - ^
00:25:381 (4) - ^
01:11:319 (6) - ^
01:59:131 (4) - ^
02:00:069 - ^
02:24:444 (1) - ^

Hard

00:22:686 (10) - i would delete this
00:29:834 (10) - this one finish on blue tick, remove 1 repeat http://puu.sh/14QED
01:23:741 (3) - stack this better
01:25:616 (7) - ^
01:34:053 (11) - replace with 1 beat
02:01:944 (3) - stack better
02:06:631 (6) - ^
02:37:803 (9) - ^
02:52:569 - clap
04:16:944 (4) - ^
04:41:670 (6) - delete?

Good luck! ;)
Topic Starter
Darcsol

giO- wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs for Mod for Mod with Renard - Smoke Tower http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38149


General

Resized BG to 1024x768
Added.


Normal

00:10:850 (5) - stack this better
00:19:756 - add clap
00:24:444 - ^
00:25:381 (4) - ^
01:11:319 (6) - ^
01:59:131 (4) - ^
02:00:069 - ^
02:24:444 (1) - ^ All added/fixed.

Hard

00:22:686 (10) - i would delete this The slider is replaced by a circle.
00:29:834 (10) - this one finish on blue tick, remove 1 repeat http://puu.sh/14QED I think it's fine.
01:23:741 (3) - stack this better
01:25:616 (7) - ^ Both fixed.
01:34:053 (11) - replace with 1 beat I think it's fine.
02:01:944 (3) - stack better
02:06:631 (6) - ^
02:37:803 (9) - ^
02:52:569 - clap
04:16:944 (4) - ^ All added.
04:41:670 (6) - delete? I think it's fine.

Good luck! ;)
Agka
oh my god darcsol

playteseted it and it was so much more fun.

not much to say, very minor details that as a player I can deal with.

very good job.
lovhin456
Did most of what Saten said and none of giO-
Thanks both
http://puu.sh/17ny6
EveOfTheNight
Hi~ Saw your request on #modreqs
Normal
Add Whistle Noise To All Of The Following:
00:48:819
00:56:319
01:11:319
01:17:413
02:09:444
02:13:194
02:18:350
02:37:569
03:03:819
04:00:069
04:00:303
04:09:444
04:09:678
04:22:803 - for this one also put a "finish" sound

These are all just suggestions, so don't feel obligated to apply them :P Love the song by the way, you get a star from me~ (that is, if i could :oops: )
(I'm a stickler for whistle noises, as i believe them to be annoying, but this was one of the few instances where more sounded good :oops: )
Topic Starter
Darcsol

EveOfTheNight wrote:

Hi~ Saw your request on #modreqs
Normal
Add Whistle Noise To All Of The Following:
00:48:819
00:56:319
01:11:319
01:17:413
02:09:444
02:13:194
02:18:350
02:37:569
03:03:819
04:00:069
04:00:303
04:09:444
04:09:678 This is the only hitsound I'll add.
04:22:803 - for this one also put a "finish" sound
Most of your suggestions are merely personal preference, as the hitsounds you suggested barely had any significance.
EveOfTheNight

Darcsol wrote:

EveOfTheNight wrote:

Hi~ Saw your request on #modreqs
Normal
Add Whistle Noise To All Of The Following:
00:48:819
00:56:319
01:11:319
01:17:413
02:09:444
02:13:194
02:18:350
02:37:569
03:03:819
04:00:069
04:00:303
04:09:444
04:09:678 This is the only hitsound I'll add.
04:22:803 - for this one also put a "finish" sound
Most of your suggestions are merely personal preference, as the hitsounds you suggested barely had any significance.
Sorry, i just realized that the skin i'm using makes all of the sounds normal, no soft noises. At least one helped though :P .
lCloud
Alice ♥

I love this song :)
lUmbreon
*o*
neonat
Rhythm suggestions orz

Hard

00:37:334 - add a note
00:37:452 - ^
00:38:741 (2) - slider shorten, repeat slider at 00:38:858 and it ends at 00:38:975
00:39:327 - add a note
01:10:967 (9) - shorten slider to end at 01:11:084 and either repeat the slider or put another note at 01:11:202
01:18:467 (9) - shorten to end at 01:18:702 and add a note at 01:18:819
01:25:967 (8) - shorten to 01:26:202 and add a note at 01:26:319
02:08:858 - add a note
02:14:834 - shorten to 02:14:834 and add notes at 02:14:952 and 02:15:069
02:22:217 (5) - shorten to 02:22:452 and add a note at 02:22:569
02:32:881 - you could add a slider here that ends at 02:33:233
02:48:467 (8) - shorten to 02:48:702 and add a note at 02:48:819
02:55:967 (8) - ^
03:18:467 (5) - slider start at 03:18:584 end at 03:18:819 and add a note at 03:18:467
03:55:381 - could also add a slider here, end at 03:55:733
04:03:467 (9) - shorten to 04:03:702 and add a note at 04:03:819
04:35:928 (4,1) - swap places, slider before circle and add a note at 04:36:866
04:41:788 (1) - end at 04:42:959
04:43:428 - add a circle with finish
04:43:545 - start a spinner here and end at 04:45:538

Normal

01:04:991 (2) - start from 01:05:225 end at 01:05:459
01:10:147 (3) - ^
01:12:491 (3) - ^ (simpler rhythm, these are really really optional though)
04:13:428 (4) - shift to 04:13:194

overall the off beats make it quite halting and a little confusing for flow, at least that is what I feel.

Easy

00:24:913 (3) - the 1 1/2 beat sounds funny, better to end slider with no repeat at 00:25:850 and add a note at 00:26:319
00:28:663 (3) - ^
00:33:819 (2,3) - remove and make 00:30:538 (1) - first repeat at 00:32:413 and ends at 00:34:288
then add a slider from 00:35:225 to 00:36:163 and add a note at 00:37:100
00:39:913 (1) - first repeat at 00:40:850 and end at 00:41:788 and add a note at 00:42:725
01:30:069 (5) - replace with a slider from 01:29:600 to 01:30:069 with finish sound on the tail end
01:33:819 (3) - replace with slider from 01:33:350 to 01:33:819
01:46:006 (2,3,4) - why not the same as 00:15:538 (1,2,3,4) - ? the earlier part sounds more natural
02:41:788 (1,2) - I don't think the distance spacing between these 2 is 1.0x, same with 02:45:538 (1) - it should be equal with the rest of the map
04:36:163 (2) - start from 04:35:928 end at 04:37:100

Good Luck`~
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