Hello
[General]
AR and OD -1
AR -1
Consider adding normal sounds as in other diffs. I see you used soft finishes sometimes, but they sound awful, imo ><
[General]
- Add mahou shoujo to the tags.
- Consider adding [Easy] diff, because you have 2 insanes. You need balance in diff spread, so you need Easy.
- There are some unused files: default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, default-x.png. They are used only for score counting. Delete them.
- Remove white combo color. It's not recommended because players cannot see ticks.
- Suggestion: you can use default slidertick.png, because if someone uses other skin, they can look ugly ><
- 01:11:210 - strange place for kiai time..
- 00:00:622 ~ 00:08:563 - I suggest you to decrease the volume in normal sections, they are too loud.
- 00:51:798 (3,4) - align
- 01:21:798 (1) - why silence in the end?
- 01:25:327 (1) - ^
- 01:27:974 (5) - ^ silence is unrankable D: (except spinners)
- 01:30:621 (2) - end slider here 01:31:063 -
AR and OD -1
- 00:00:622 (1) - finish?
- 00:00:622 ~ 00:08:563 - I suggest you to decrease the volume in normal sections, they are too loud.
- 00:07:680 (1) - end spinner here 00:10:769 -
- 00:11:210 (1) - finish
- 00:24:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - unexpected big jumps in Hard ><
- 00:27:533 (2) - reduce slider to 00:27:974 -
- 00:28:195 (x) - add a note
- 00:32:386 (2) - finish
- 00:35:916 (1) - ^
- 01:03:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ><
- 01:05:916 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 01:20:916 (5) - remove note and add a repeat to (4)
- 01:30:621 (1,2,3) - watch your spacing D: (2) is too close to (1)
AR -1
Consider adding normal sounds as in other diffs. I see you used soft finishes sometimes, but they sound awful, imo ><
- 00:11:210 (1) - finish
- 00:39:445 (1) - ^
- 00:49:592 (5,6) - I suggest not to stack
- 01:02:386 (5) - finish
- 01:11:651 (2,3) - ugly overlap
- 01:13:416 (2,3) - ^
- 01:25:327 (1,2,3) - slowdown jumps in that kind of music.. Just no.
- 01:29:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - no no no no. Just no. Change these jumps.
- 00:00:622 ~ 00:08:563 - I suggest you to decrease the volume in normal sections, they are too loud.
- 00:00:622 (1) - finish
- 00:01:504 (2,3) - double normal hits sound awkward here D:
- 00:05:916 (3,4) - because of osu! bag, stacking doesn't occur here,so you have to make a manual stack by moving one of the objects for some pixels or 1 grid (lvl4) off or you may change them in another way
- 00:11:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^ you have al lot of such objects through all the map, I'm not sure if you're willing to change them all,so you might want to ask some BATs about it
- 00:40:327 (3) - ugly slider, make slider till 00:40:769 - and add a note to a red tick
- 00:43:416 (1,2) - ugly overlap
- 01:06:357 (5) - meh
- 01:18:269 (1) - JUST WOW
- 01:29:739 (2,1,2,3) - fix spacing