I found your map in my collection. It means I wanted to mod it some day, so here we go.
yuca
yuca
- 00:11:210 (1) - place its beginning in center because there's spinner before it, and it looks better when circle lies exactly in center
- 00:54:224 (2,3) - use SHIFT to make straight line here: turn spacing on and move note while holding SHIFT. First, do it for (2), then for (3)
- ...no breaks?
- 00:25:548 (3,6) - remove whistles?
- 00:43:416 (1) - it overlaps next slider a little. Move 00:43:857 (2) down
- 00:50:033 (1,3) - don't look well for me, maybe because they are too fat
- 00:50:916 (3) - and yes, I thought it has 3 repeats (as the previous slider), not 4
- 01:00:621 (3) - looks like it touches HP bar, move it down a little or rotate its end
- 01:04:372 (3,6) - remove whistles?
- 01:17:386 (4) - shouldn't it have 3 repeats? It's too sudden, in my opinion
- 00:03:269 (5) - it sounds off because vocals start a little bit earlier than the beat. You better re-do that part (for example, start slider from 00:02:827 (1/1 earlier))
- 00:22:680 (3) - use whistle here instead of finish, three finishes in a row sound too noisy
- 00:30:180 (5) - use whistle here, better place finish on 00:30:622 (1)
- 01:12:092 (3) - too close to slider?
- 01:17:386 (1,2,3,4) - if you rotate these notes by -15 degrees, they will look better, as I see them
- 00:56:761 (6,7) - looks bad, maybe you should "continue" slider with these notes
- 01:18:269 (1) - I love you. But please, make warning on SB more noticeable (make arrow curvy), so people could know in which direction should they move. Now it looks as an usual arrow saying "Hey guys, look! I have a flower!"
- 01:23:563 (1,1,1,1) - do you really need these 1/8 repeat sliders?
- I feel like you should add -10 to your offset. Do it on every diff, then select all the inherited (green) lines in Timing panel and move 'em by -10: http://puu.sh/df3v. To make it easier, select the first green line, then hold SHIFT, scroll down to the last line and click on it