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yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

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JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年4月4日 at 20:04:52

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)
Source: Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags: pokie shinki ending yanagi nagi
BPM: 131
Filesize: 4786kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.01 stars, 72 notes)
  2. Insane (4.96 stars, 216 notes)
  3. Pokie's Hard (4.57 stars, 155 notes)
  4. Shinki's Normal (2.55 stars, 80 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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How about to travel across the galaxies?
Let us go tonight shall we?


My 16th map.
褲擼開大雞 初濕就開擼Wtf is this lol...

Shinki's Normal by Shinki.
Pokie's Hard by Pokie.
I really love you my friends, thank you.
Shinki
XD
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ JauiPlaY ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove 'ed' in tags,not need add this.

[Hard]


  1. 00:18:963 (3,4) - Change a 1/1 slider will be better with me.
  2. 00:37:284 (1,2) - ^

[Pokie's Normal]


  1. AR 6 a bit hard for normal diff,try -1.
  2. 00:21:711 (5) - Try move to here 00:21:940.
  3. 00:48:734 (5) - Add new combo.
  4. 01:10:261 (2) - Add new combo to here,Vocal start to here,and Remove 01:10:032 (1).

[Shinki's Easy]


  1. 00:15:528 (2) - Remove this note,a bit hard for start.

That' all ~ Nice mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~
;)
xsrsbsns
~ :)
Pokie
:roll:
LKs
:idea: L.E.D
spboxer3
~

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 有skin需要加入sliderborder
  2. Letterbox不統一
  3. 01:01:101我不懂為什麼這邊的SB load 會變成3.00 其他的地方都是2.00 可以的話修正一下吧

[Shinki's Easy]



  • mapping
  1. 00:29:955 (1,3) - 說實話這個slider並不是很好看 :(
  2. 01:18:505 (3) - 超出視窗的slider tick

[Pokie's Normal]



  • mapping
  1. 00:17:131 (4,1) - 間距和別的地方比起來好像過短了些

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. 多餘的綠線:
    00:59:383 -
mapping
  1. 00:45:299 (1) - Bug 需要加入NC

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議
Garven
Aaah why are you forcing default skin? D:
Edit: Nevermind, had default skin selected from update, I think.

(also letterbox hard)
popner
新手mod :) 好歌

[Easy]

00:15:299 (1,2,3) - 有点难;删掉(2) / 改滑条?
01:13:925 (1,2) - 交换一下(1) (2)?
01:16:673 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这一串我喜欢这样,只要改下圈和滑条的位置就行了。



[Normal]

00:26:291 (3,4,5) - ↓
00:28:123 (1,2,3) - 排成这样
00:29:039 (1,2,3) - ^
00:31:559 (3,4,5,6) - 移到00:31:330
00:33:162 - ^如果这样改的话,这里加一个note
00:34:765 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 移到00:34:994,并在00:34:765加一个note
00:44:383 (1) - 移到00:44:612并在00:44:383加一个note?
00:44:612 (1) - 头部加finish
01:21:482 (2,3) - 不要叠住
01:26:749 (1,2,1,2) - 做成放射状?和前面一样有些单调



[Hard]

00:19:421 (4,5) - 改成一个滑条或者不要stack后面的00:20:108 (6,7)
00:23:085 (2,3) - ^
00:26:291 (1) - nazi - 这样稍微调整一下红点的位置?
00:33:162 (3,4,1) - 这样
01:06:139 (4,5,1) - ^
716 Girl
M4M
Why begin of song not mapped?
  • Easy

00:29:955 (1,3) - i think ugly
00:57:436 (1) - remove nc?
  • Normal

00:15:757 (2,3) - small overlap
00:17:131 (4,1) - ^
00:19:421 (1,2) - ^
00:34:765 (2,3,1,2) - make just straight
00:50:566 (2) - repeat
00:51:711 (2) - ^
0:59:995 - add note
01:03:391 (2) - repeat
01:21:482 (2,3) - overlap
00:48:734 (5) - nc
01:08:429 (1) - remove nc
01:11:635 (1) - ^
01:23:543 (1) - ^
01:28:581 (1) - finish hit sound
  • Hard

00:17:131 (7) - maybe straight?
00:26:291 (1) - looks ugly
00:33:162 (3,1) - overlap
00:53:772 (3) - looks not good
01:04:307 (4,1) - overlap
01:06:139 (4,1) - ^
01:19:765 (5) - delete
Nagae-Iku
[general]
褲擼開大雞 初濕就開擼快自重

[Shinki's Easy]
AR+1
00:15:528 (2) - 删除该note

[Pokie's Normal]
00:17:589 (1) - 間距有些近
01:23:543 (1) - 取消nc
01:25:833 (1) - ^
01:27:665 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:26:291 (1) - slider形状吐槽不能
00:51:940 (5) - ^
01:09:345 (1) - nc

nice map & good luck ;)
yeahyeahyeahhh
Hello ^^

Hard:
00:57:436 (1) - Maybe use Normal hitsound at 20% volume here too?

oh this is perfect lol, this is all.. orz
Tomicorelend
mod req via QQ

[Hard]
SPOILER
感觉最主要的问题就是叠……
00:19:421 (4) -
00:20:795 (1) -
这种,同样是叠但是是1/2和1/4...Hard难度的话就别这样坑人了...把1/4的叠note都挪出去一点点吧
虽然这些1/4的确很好听...

同理
00:23:085 (2) -
00:30:413 (6) -
00:32:131 (5) -
00:37:742 (2) -
00:36:826 (5) -
00:37:742 (2) -
00:52:398 (6) -

而像
00:37:742 (2) -
00:40:833 (5) -
01:02:818 (5) -
01:06:482 (5) -
01:21:139 (4) -
这样的就没关系...

(个人感觉)

00:33:620 (1) - 有点被00:33:162 (3) - 挡住的感觉,不过影响不大
00:54:459 (1,1,1) - 这NC感觉好违和
00:58:352 (1) - 和后边的(1)只差1/8...以1/4作图的话...大丈夫...?

[Pokie's Normal]
SPOILER
看起来是个Hard..

没问题wwww!

[Shinki's Easy]
SPOILER
没问题wwww!

Nice Map~! Star!
DerekMcD
These suggestions are helpful and if you don't like it, don't fix it and move on to a next one.

~Normal~

00:49:879 (8) - Spacing?

~Hard~

00:20:795 (1) - Move to x:93 y:229.
00:26:978 (2,3,4) - Highlight all of them... Move a little bit close to (1)?
00:30:413 (6) - Move to x:267 y:53.
00:33:162 (3) - Move to x:81 y:150.
00:51:253 (5) - Move to x:212 y:14.
00:52:398 (6) - Move to x:415 y:149.
01:18:734 (3) - Move to x:92 y:275.

That's all I can think of.
Good luck.
Pokie
Feedbacks
Those I didn't list are fixed issue :D

SPOILER

popner wrote:

[Normal]

00:26:291 (3,4,5) - ↓
00:28:123 (1,2,3) - 排成这样 不太適合
00:29:039 (1,2,3) - ^
00:31:559 (3,4,5,6) - 移到00:31:330
為何? 這兩種擺放方式節奏都是一樣的, 而且移動的話音效也會亂掉
如果單純是覺得紅線開始的slider不妥的話…我個人是覺得沒有問題

00:33:162 - ^如果这样改的话,这里加一个note
00:34:765 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 移到00:34:994,并在00:34:765加一个note 和00:31:559同理
00:44:383 (1) - 移到00:44:612并在00:44:383加一个note? 這麼密集的節奏聽著舒服嗎…在這一段
00:44:612 (1) - 头部加finish
01:21:482 (2,3) - 不要叠住 不會造成任何讀圖困難, 以及再往上移就超出屏幕了

3er123 wrote:

  • Normal

00:15:757 (2,3) - small overlap ??? I don't see any problem here. They're already stacked
00:17:131 (4,1) - ^ What do you mean?
00:19:421 (1,2) - ^ Already stacked, too
00:34:765 (2,3,1,2) - make just straight huh..? Why just here
00:50:566 (2) - repeat 00:46:902 (2,3,4) - Check these rhythm please
00:51:711 (2) - ^
0:59:995 - add note No
01:03:391 (2) - repeat No
01:21:482 (2,3) - overlap As the previous mod, it's sight reading
01:08:429 (1) - remove nc No
01:11:635 (1) - ^
01:23:543 (1) - ^

palmolive wrote:

[general]
[Pokie's Normal]
01:23:543 (1) - 取消nc 可以給我個原因嗎, 總收到nc mod但完全不給理由…這讓mapper怎麼改 >_<
01:25:833 (1) - ^
01:27:665 (1) - ^

Tomicorelend wrote:

[Pokie's Normal]
看起来是个Hard.. jpy說讓我做個Normal+..嘛確實有點難就是-v-

LKs wrote:

as pre request via a canal

General
:o

Easy

shinki下低难度的hitsounds都下出自己的套路了 不按照节奏下 我有点不太想提 因为违和感不大
然后我发现不写音效就没得写了
试试00:33:162 (1) - NC或者slider3加NC

Pokie's Normal

00:35:681 (1) - 这里我看位置推测的是没有1/2一路打 直到我膝盖中了一箭 err :(
00:42:551 (1) - why no clap 48% 來一發

Thanks all :D

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size) (JauiPlaY) [Pokie's Normal].osu
LKs
as pre request via a canal

General
:o

Easy

shinki下低难度的hitsounds都下出自己的套路了 不按照节奏下 我有点不太想提 因为违和感不大
然后我发现不写音效就没得写了
试试00:33:162 (1) - NC或者slider3加NC

Pokie's Normal

00:35:681 (1) - 这里我看位置推测的是没有1/2一路打 直到我膝盖中了一箭
00:42:551 (1) - why no clap

Hard

:o
Banana
easy
我可以吐槽开头的连打吗- -
00:54:688 (2) - 这段时间用了十分多的两拍空挡,应该是准备在kiai段之前体现欲扬先抑的效果,不过我觉得空档有点多,建议这里改成00:54:230 - 起手的一拍往返滑条,而且在这一点原曲是没有音的,击打效果也不太好。
01:18:505 (2) - 这个开头可以whistle,然后把01:20:337 (2)的whistle改到01:20:795 (3),后面都是三白线whistle,个人感觉这样过渡比较自然。

normal
找不到问题,十分

hard
01:17:131 (4,5,1) - 这个就它和前面的整体效果来看应该再上去两格,前两个都是滑条第二个转弯指向上一个滑条的圈的
01:21:711 (2) - 我不喜欢这个结尾的whistle,而且这个combo开头的finish现在还有声音,建议去掉

就看出来这么多- -撤退了
Frostmourne
Hi ~ JauiPlaY

From my mod queue :D (You don't need to follow all of my mod because it just be a suggestion)

Shinki's Easy
fine


Pokie's Normal
fine


Hard
just mention here
01:19:650 (x) - add note. For better flow and I see you place 3streams in every other point in kiai part , feel weird something like that.


other all , I can't find anything to have solve



Good luck :)
Nymph
General:
SB看起来略不对劲 我建议2个小白线为一个周期震什么的 不要像现在一个半啊 不好看感觉

纵观所有diff 我比较建议变成normal hard和insane 326的diff不是最大号圈 波奇姐又有小jump(可以改下难度设置变hard=3=) 感觉换下名字比较好 大概


Shinki's Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:15:528 (2) - easy难度我强烈建议砍这个note 这不应该是easy的节奏吧
00:46:444 (3) - 节奏略怪 因为vocal是拉长音的 如果是我估计就前面用note后面接长slider 后面同

Hitsound
00:17:131 (1) - 音效略混乱 前面用了3白线的whistle 这里突然又变成2白线了 想好一种一直用下去吧 我觉得24白线whistle就很好 没必要用3


Pokie's Normal:
Hitsound
没啥好挑的 不过kiai是不是考虑大点声音量?感觉有点静


Hard:
没啥好挑的
DarknessAngel
request from #modreq ~ :)



Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

General

  1. 在最後,噴兩次煙火總覺得不太需要...(逃

Hard



  • 都是建議orz,MOD不多,只是很多廢話而已不用放在心上lol
    橘色的字 : 如果粉紅色的沒改的話就直接無視吧
  1. 00:19:421 (4) & 00:20:795 (1) - 有個1/4的note疊在slider底下,另一個是1/2,對於判斷來說稍嫌煩人了
    我建議把統一把1/2的疊在底下,然後1/4的不要重疊,這樣會比較舒服(我考量到你1/4疊的比較多)
    也不是什麼必須改的東西,只是覺得這樣的重疊不會增加有趣度,卻增加了遊玩上的困難
    這不是relaxing map所樂見的
  2. 00:48:276 (1) - 這滑條的箭頭上加個clap ? 有個滿明顯的聲音在音樂中,而且我覺得加上去比較有變化
  3. 00:50:566 (2) - 同[00:20:795 (1)]
  4. 00:54:459 (1) - ^
  5. 01:04:078 (3) - 你會不會預想到我挑你這個重疊 ? 其實沒有要挑的意思,只是想說明下為什麼這重疊沒關係
    因為那個很明顯可以推斷出什麼時候點擊(因為1/4相對於1/1的閉合速度很容易判斷)
    上面挑出來的則否(1/4和1/2的差異沒有1/4和1/1明顯)。就這樣
  6. 01:10:948 (2) - 同[00:20:795 (1)],改成這樣 ?
  7. 01:19:765 (5,1) - 考慮一下把這移到更遠(相對於[01:19:192 (4)]尾部)的地方 ? 稍微幫助玩家判斷,要不然可能會打快了
  8. 01:23:085 (1) - 箭頭上的clap感覺不是很合適,用whistle替代,然後刪掉尾部的whistle ?
  9. 無疑是個好圖

Pokie's Normal

  1. 00:21:711 (5) - 在尾部加個whistle感覺還不錯(從歌曲的起始點開始聽的話)
  2. 01:00:184 (2,3) - 我覺得這兩個whistle有點古怪,反而是在[01:02:475 (4)]加個soft-whistle比較合適
    可是那裏被normal音效替代而無從用起啊lol
  3. 01:14:841 (1,2) - 同[01:00:184 (2,3)] lol
  4. 01:27:665 (1) - 我都不知道原來normal能用跳
  5. 不愧是神Mapper

Shinki's Easy

  1. whistle怎麼有時(1,3)有時(2,4)的 ? 聽起來不舒服啊lol
  2. 01:06:597 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 就是這裡了orz
  3. 原來shinki老爺也會作圖lol


不好意思我MOD廢話那麼多-.-
可以的話想請你回應一下改了什麼東西lol


超好聽的歌耶
我最近總是mod到好聽的歌,感覺真不錯
圖很好,我想很快就能ranked了吧 ?
S.T.A.R ! ! !

:)
Pokie

DarknessAngel wrote:

Pokie's Normal

  1. 00:21:711 (5) - 在尾部加個whistle感覺還不錯(從歌曲的起始點開始聽的話) 改了
  2. 01:00:184 (2,3) - 我覺得這兩個whistle有點古怪,反而是在[01:02:475 (4)]加個soft-whistle比較合適 也改了, (2)刪 (3)留 以及加在(4)的結尾
    可是那裏被normal音效替代而無從用起啊lol
  3. 01:14:841 (1,2) - 同[01:00:184 (2,3)] lol 同上
  4. 01:27:665 (1) - 我都不知道原來normal能用跳 唔, 其實easy你想跳也是行的, 只要用的不突兀
  5. 不愧是神Mapper 哭瞎了我是普通mapper
謝謝=w=
No_Gu
0.0
我感觉skin的圈好像没在正中间,不过我也不太懂这个就是了

[easy]
00:15:299 (1,2,3) - 开头1/2没问题?
00:23:543 (3) - ctrl+J之后这样比较顺手 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/257489 orz虽然后面不太好看就是了
00:34:994 (1) - finish太吵
01:23:085 (2) - 加个finsih?

[normal]
01:21:482 (2,3) - 低难度的话overlap还是改改吧。。
01:23:543 (1) - 为啥NC..
normal这么多1/2没问题吗。。感觉都可以当hard了

[hard]
01:11:864 (4,5,1) - 这什么猎奇排放
01:23:085 (1,2) - 鬼畜毁灭世界

总感觉这张图会被吐槽diff spread
不太确定这artist...和麻枝淮合作的那张曲子BK是这样的。。
好 酱油mod完事
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Hi guys, thank you for your modding! I've fixed some issues already.
And here is a list about what I've fixed:
SPOILER

spboxer3 wrote:

有skin需要加入sliderborderFixed.
Letterbox不統一Fixed.
[Hard]
多餘的綠線:
00:59:383 - Fixed.
00:45:299 (1) - Bug 需要加入NCFixed.

Garven wrote:

(also letterbox hard)Fixed.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Hard:
00:57:436 (1) - Maybe use Normal hitsound at 20% volume here too?Ok.

Tomicorelend wrote:

00:54:459 (1,1,1) - 这NC感觉好违和Fixed.
00:58:352 (1) - 和后边的(1)只差1/8...以1/4作图的话...大丈夫...?嘛這個先保留

Nymph wrote:

SB看起来略不对劲 我建议2个小白线为一个周期震什么的 不要像现在一个半啊 不好看感觉

纵观所有diff 我比较建议变成normal hard和insane 326的diff不是最大号圈 波奇姐又有小jump(可以改下难度设置变hard=3=) 感觉换下名字比较好 大概都有點道理 先保留

DarknessAngel wrote:

在最後,噴兩次煙火總覺得不太需要...(逃其實只有一次
Hard
00:19:421 (4) & 00:20:795 (1) - 有個1/4的note疊在slider底下,另一個是1/2,對於判斷來說稍嫌煩人了
我建議把統一把1/2的疊在底下,然後1/4的不要重疊,這樣會比較舒服(我考量到你1/4疊的比較多)
也不是什麼必須改的東西,只是覺得這樣的重疊不會增加有趣度,卻增加了遊玩上的困難
這不是relaxing map所樂見的
是故意這樣的啦 下同
00:48:276 (1) - 這滑條的箭頭上加個clap ? 有個滿明顯的聲音在音樂中,而且我覺得加上去比較有變化聲音太大
00:50:566 (2) - 同[00:20:795 (1)]
00:54:459 (1) - ^
01:04:078 (3) - 你會不會預想到我挑你這個重疊 ? 其實沒有要挑的意思,只是想說明下為什麼這重疊沒關係
因為那個很明顯可以推斷出什麼時候點擊(因為1/4相對於1/1的閉合速度很容易判斷)
上面挑出來的則否(1/4和1/2的差異沒有1/4和1/1明顯)。就這樣
01:10:948 (2) - 同[00:20:795 (1)],改成這樣 ?
01:19:765 (5,1) - 考慮一下把這移到更遠(相對於[01:19:192 (4)]尾部)的地方 ? 稍微幫助玩家判斷,要不然可能會打快了現在是按照0.9的DS排的
01:23:085 (1) - 箭頭上的clap感覺不是很合適,用whistle替代,然後刪掉尾部的whistle ?這裏大改過了
Again, thanks for your work! Updated for now.

@沒屁股 你的mod下次改
@波奇姐&神器君 改了直接QQ我就好 不用post
Leorda
NI HAO

Shinki's Easy
00:51:024 (x) - Add note here for better flow?


Pokie's Normal
* AR 6 are high for normal diff, lower a bit

01:22:856 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern
01:27:665 (1) - This jump is making beginners is diffcult to face this jump. Because it's too far for normal diff


Hard
00:19:650 (5,6,7) - This seems hard to read for me I guess. Beause you had an object on (5) and there are stacks with 1/2 click on (6,7). I suggest you to add note between (5) and (6) or something else
00:23:314 (3,4,5) - ^
00:26:978 (2,3,4) - ^
00:33:620 (1) - Hard to read because the slider length is hard to predict since it overlapped by 00:33:162 (3)
00:37:971 (3,4,5) - Same issue as 00:19:650 (5,6,7)
00:45:299 (1,2,3) - Overlapped by hitbursts, so you can't read the stacks
00:58:352 (1) - Remove 1 repeating slider for make a perfect timing for clicking 00:59:268 (1)


Good luck!!!
Stefan
Modding~~ I took definitly too long for the Requests..
I'm really really sorry for being so late. ;.;

Let's see what I found:

[Shinki's Normal]:
Approach +1
01:07:971 (2) - At the End Point, you should set Whistle.
01:09:345 (3) - And then you should remove Whistle. Btw look it sounds with Whistle at End Point. You might like it. :3
01:15:757 (1) - Whistle gets off of the Rhythm IMO.

[Pokie's Hard]
01:21:482 (2) - Is it not possible to place it where it doesn't overlap (3)?

[Insane]
HP+ 1
00:55:375 (3) - I would set a NC.


For that, my Mod came very late, I found almost nothing. Next time if you post a Map, I'll be faster. ;_;
phonic

[General]

  1. remove "ed" of Tags (Two characters do not make a hit for a search)
  2. Disable letterboxing during breaks for all difficulties
  3. If this is TV Size, I want a video
JoJo
...

好吧.. TAT
B2IN
[General]
nothing
[Shinki's Normal]

nothing
[Pokie's Hard]

00:57:436 (1) - end the slider till 00:58:810 (add note 00:59:268)
[Insane]
00:48:276 (1) - finish head of slider

good luck ^^
lovhin456
Hello and sorry for the really late mod! My school and everything orz really sorry ><

General:
- Umm, I strongly suggest you make an Easy diff for novice players and players who are just starting to not just enjoy but also practice their skills, it will be helpful in many ways so please consider this also the song is pretty short and easy to map imo so there won't be any big problems in doing it
- Disable letterbox for all diffs

Shinki's Normal:
- AR +1 ?
- 00:43:238 >> Add a soft default finish

Pokie's Hard:
- The slider velocity seems a little low considering that the Insane's velocity is much higher :/
- HP Drain +1 and AR +1 ?
- 00:15:299 >> Add finish ?
- 00:37:284 >> ^
- 00:43:238 >> ^
- 01:14:841 >> Remove new combo

Insane:
- Nothing wrong that I could see

* ヽ(*・ω・)ノ
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