Zurrrr wrote:

heyhey,

after i was able to get some sleep after beeing up for like 36hours i replayed the map a little more.

wanted to point out some things that throw me off on Silver+Emdyion's Silver

-Silver:
well im actually able to SS the map until 1:19:644
after those 3x4stacked halfs it kinda starts feeling awkward to play to me.
the up+down stream (1:19:644-1:20:811) are fine, but the following combos are kinda... i dont know how to express it properly.... maybe "confusing?" everytime i play that i insta-fail on that section after beeing at 98-100% accuracy
might be just some kind of personal thing, but i think u should rework that section a little, maybe make 1:19:644-1:20:811 1,2,3,4 1,2,3,4 into 4 1/2 sliders followed by cyclone combo? just an idea^^
oh, and if u do that, u should also maybe rotate the 2nd combo in the cyclone a little so it doesnt stack with the prev combo like it does now since the notes are kinda hidden due to low approachrate

-Emdyion's Silver:
0:09:140 (1) jump feels awkward
0:10:473 (1) ^
0:14:473 (5) ^
0:27:640 (1,2,3,4 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) if i listen to it at 100% the notes seem to be to early, if i do it at 25% i see what notes ur trying to hit.... feels a little bit off since the high-pitched notes are actually better to hear then the lower-pitched that u actually want. the notes on that part are kinda echoing i guess, starting with a low-pitch and echo out with a high pitch, i think that makes it feel that awkward to me, but might just again be a personal issue
0:34:306 (5) spacing is off by .1 on this compare to the previous ones in the combo, maybe move it 2rosterticks to the right on tiny grit, that would make it 1.12 and would look better imo since its more of an arch then
1:41:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) in the previous combo the distance constantly increases from 1.00 to 2.15, so i thought it might be nice to just decrease the distance in that part, going down to 1.00 from the 2.15, might feel nice i think, at least thats what i rly enjoy to play
1:50:144 (8) maybe remove that one? feels like an empty note since theres no actual hit in the music i think, theres a tripple base-hit one (8,-,1) but then i think there should be 3 1/4 notes (link: http://250kb.de/cDYtaNQ )
1:57:144 (-) maybe add a center circle on the red tick after the spinner? i think it would fit there bcuz of the snare hit there.... just an idea, no criticism

sooo, thats all ive found
maybe its just personal issues from my side, but as i said im not actually a BMS-map-lover^^
dont forget to check out my map aswell pls http://osu.ppy.sh/s/44449
its only hard+ so far, need to work on normal now^^

greetz

Zurrrr wrote:

-Emdyion's Silver:
0:09:140 (1) jump feels awkward Understood, fixed (moved circle down to 1.37x
0:10:473 (1) ^ Fixed, distance snapped, repositioned
0:14:473 (5) ^ Nope, distance snap 1.02x
0:27:640 (1,2,3,4 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) if i listen to it at 100% the notes seem to be to early, if i do it at 25% i see what notes ur trying to hit.... feels a little bit off since the high-pitched notes are actually better to hear then the lower-pitched that u actually want. the notes on that part are kinda echoing i guess, starting with a low-pitch and echo out with a high pitch, i think that makes it feel that awkward to me, but might just again be a personal issue I see no problem with this pattern.
0:34:306 (5) spacing is off by .1 on this compare to the previous ones in the combo, maybe move it 2rosterticks to the right on tiny grit, that would make it 1.12 and would look better imo since its more of an arch then Fixed, but differently
1:41:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) in the previous combo the distance constantly increases from 1.00 to 2.15, so i thought it might be nice to just decrease the distance in that part, going down to 1.00 from the 2.15, might feel nice i think, at least thats what i rly enjoy to play Fixed, but not sure about change.
1:50:144 (8) maybe remove that one? feels like an empty note since theres no actual hit in the music i think, theres a tripple base-hit one (8,-,1) but then i think there should be 3 1/4 notes (link: http://250kb.de/cDYtaNQ ) Keeping it that way, triple notes will increase difficulty (might change it though, but as of now I'm not)
1:57:144 (-) maybe add a center circle on the red tick after the spinner? i think it would fit there bcuz of the snare hit there.... just an idea, no criticism Does not fit at all; not adding

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*Even though four of the difficulties start right at the beginning of the map, I really don't see a need for an audio lead-in. There's already two seconds of silence before the notes, and so adding a lead-in of 2 1/2 additional seconds is just overkill. If anything, change them to 0.5 seconds, but definitely nothing more. True, but I think this is for the epilepsy warning. I agree with Derekku though.
*I'm surprised that Hard/Insane/Extra use 1.4 SV, while the guest Hard uses 1.6, but it's an issue, per se. I suggest using faster SVs for the hardest difficulties in the future, though! Agree

[Timing]
*Uninherited section at 00:55:645 is unnecessary; remove and resnap notes!
*Uninherited section at 01:56:978 is unnecessary; remove and resnap notes!

[Emdyion's Silver]
*Check AIMod for unsnapped notes, even though you'll need to resnap after removing the aforementioned uninherited sections. I will resnap, once the sections are removed.
01:36:478 (1) - perhaps add a finish? Agree, Philippines could do that though :3

Emdyion wrote:

True, but I think this is for the epilepsy warning.

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*Even though four of the difficulties start right at the beginning of the map, I really don't see a need for an audio lead-in. There's already two seconds of silence before the notes, and so adding a lead-in of 2 1/2 additional seconds is just overkill. If anything, change them to 0.5 seconds, but definitely nothing more. Changed 2 1/2 addictional seconds to 1 sec.
*I'm surprised that Hard/Insane/Extra use 1.4 SV, while the guest Hard uses 1.6, but it's an issue, per se. I suggest using faster SVs for the hardest difficulties in the future, though! okay, okay (:

[Timing]
*Uninherited section at 00:55:645 is unnecessary; remove and resnap notes! Changed into an inherit section instead
*Uninherited section at 01:56:978 is unnecessary; remove and resnap notes! Same as above.

[Rust]
00:54:306 (1) - Isn't snapped to the white tick (regardless of the uninherited section there). snapped.

[Bronze]
*Difficulty settings felt a bit low; I'd bump up the Drain and OD by 1 tick each.
00:08:973 (3) - love sliders like this
00:31:723 (1) - Since the approach late is a bit low, I'd move this to the red tick and shorten by 1/4.

[Silver]
01:22:311 (5) - Perhaps new combo this?
01:48:478 (1,2) - Try and make these closer since (2) is only 1/2 after (1). Otherwise, they look more like 01:49:478 (2,3) which have a 1/1 space in-between... done

[Emdyion's Silver]
*Check AIMod for unsnapped notes, even though you'll need to resnap after removing the aforementioned uninherited sections.Done
01:36:478 (1) - perhaps add a finish?Done

[Gold]
*I'd bump the Drain/OD up by 1 tick each; this IS an "Insane", after all. :pDidn't add OD, but i'd say yes for the Drain thing.

[Platinum]
00:32:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - looove these jumps~
02:07:644 (1) - This is unrankable, since the slider path is very ambiguous (especially when using mmsliders: http://puu.sh/hss5)changed into a normal curve slider.

Philippines wrote:

This should be ready for ranking. o3o (:

wcx19911123 wrote:

plz resnap all notes..

Derekku wrote:

Since the timing changed, you'll want to move your inherited sections back by 5-10ms so that they're not late. Otherwise, I notice that many notes end up using the wrong samplesets or getting silenced from previous sections.

If you didn't already know, you can click/ctrl-click multiple sections in the timing window and then move them all at once: http://puu.sh/i5MJ
DONE, decreased 8 on offsets 00:55:645 til the last section on all diffs.


[Gold]
00:55:389 (6) - not snapped to 1/3 DONE

don't kd since i've already gotten some on 2 posts~

Derekku wrote:

Whoops, I missed an unsnapped slider end (probably because of the 0.59 slider speed)! Please adjust the last slider anchor/node on 02:07:639 (1) on [Platinum]!

The inherited sections like fine now (unless Emdyion wants to check his difficulty to make sure).

Thanks everyone! I'm glad many people like my map and my storyboard. (:

DJNightmare wrote:

First map with 4 Insane difficulties =D

kanpakyin wrote:

Another AHO.....

Philippines wrote:

her map

Garven wrote:

Philippines wrote:

her map

Bass wrote:

>wide streams
>Ranked by Starrodkirby86

ok

Hika wrote:

Bass wrote:

>wide streams
>Ranked by Starrodkirby86

ok

Emdyion wrote:

WOOT ANOTHER RANKED DIFFICULTY :3