Leorda wrote:

Hello there

General
* spinner-approachcircle is blend from spinner, try make it darker? Done.
* Inconsistent kiai time (Source : AIBat) puu.sh/cmbg Fixed.


Normal
00:42:597 (1) - Remove new combo? Like others? Ok!
00:46:415 (1,2,3) - This pattern is doesn't following the vocal, try make this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212572 ^
01:23:506 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider for good rhythm? ^
02:07:142 (1) - Remove new combo for pattern? ^
02:25:688 (1) - Add whistle, since it's downbeat? ^
02:28:961 (7,8,1) - This stacks is makes boring for beginner, try making a good pattern? Now It's better, I guess.
02:30:324 (2) - This slider is kinda make sense if the slider is follow the vocal. Try move to 02:30:597, end at 02:31:142 and add note at 02:30:324. You should end up like this http://puu.sh/clYQ Done.
02:52:142 (1) - Would be nice if this move to 02:52:415, since the slider is fit to the vocal ^
03:21:324 (5) - Spacing error here Oh you're right. Fixed.

I've improved a bit this difficulty with your suggestions. Now it looks and sounds better.

Hard
* I like the blanket combo <3 Yay! c:

00:36:597 ~ 01:10:961 - This sections is lacks of hitsound, try adding whistle, like other diff Added whistles.
00:47:233 (2) - I don't like if this slider overlapper by previous slider (Nazi) It seems like noone likes it so I changed it.
01:20:233 (1) - Add whistle? Ok
01:54:052 (7,8) - I think these pattern is good for following vocal http://puu.sh/cm3u Sounds nice c:
02:05:370 (4) - Perhaps, replace this into a slider that end at 02:05:642 for following vocal? ^
02:18:461 (4) - Whistle at head slider is doesn't fit, IMO I like how it sounds there.
02:21:324 (1) - This slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's hard to understand for players, look at test mode Fixed.
02:26:233 (2) - ^ ^
02:29:097 (1) - Add whistle? Yeah.


Not bad for me, PM me for reheck (since this map is too old) Ok. I'm waiting for Kyon's update. Thank you~

Santa Claw wrote:

The creator is No.D, you should put the name in the Source/Tags. I added it to Source, since most of the Vocaloid songs have Creator Name in Source.
In i_k's insane, 01:24:052 (5) - LOL.
Besides the name of the creator, everything (diffs, hitsounds, etc.) is awesome and should be ranked Thanks for your help and support

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

i_k's Insane
* I agree with Lucifer, this diff is overmapped. If you have a stream (e.g. 00:04:415 (1,2,3,4,5)) or triplets (00:28:688 (3,4,5)), try ask yourself with one question : "Is this streams and triplets are fit to music?". If you say no, then you have to remove the notes inside the stream/triplets and change a new pattern - ok Ill change many stuff :3

00:30:324 (2,3) - Try make a same slider as 00:29:779 (1) to avoiding players for confusing
00:49:006 (4) - I feel this object is overlapped by hitbursts
00:56:506 (1) - End this slider at 00:56:779 and add note at 00:57:052 for following vocal?
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - This finish hitsound are not fit, IMO
02:43:688 (8) - New combo for stanza? Like others?

Leorda wrote:

@ikari_kyon - hm? ovo

I still found the unnecessary stream/triplets on this diff. Here the list of unncessary stream/triplets. You can agree/disagree the stuff but you must have a reason

00:21:870 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4)
00:26:233 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4)
00:30:870 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3)
01:04:961 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
01:14:779 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
01:16:415 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
02:29:506 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
02:46:415 (3,4,5,6,7) <- Not fit to the song in calm part
03:12:052 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary

Correct me if I am wrong, also sorry for point out the stream, ikari_kyon. Also, I really sorry for modder if my mod is stupid

ikari_kyon wrote:

yey after irc stuff with Leorda x3

Edit: pag. 9 <3

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hitcircle.png
 hitcircleoverlay.png
 approachcircle.png

Katsuri wrote:

General

hitcircle.png
 hitcircleoverlay.png
 approachcircle.png

You need to add these 3 skin elements and then full-submit.
I will mod later when I get back home..
I hope to help you improve your map.

In the morning I pop bubbles and then mod them at night if they are popped.

Garven wrote:

[General]
Actually, since you have the reverse arrow skinned, you -do- need to add the rest of the hitcircle-specific elements. I deleted the reverse arrow because I don't know how to skin hitcircle elements and I neither know which hitcircle would fit with the map current skin and song.
Also, set your hitburst dimensions to 256x256 while you're there. Done

[Normal]
00:46:688 (2,3) - Was kind of weird having this stacked considering your other 3 1/2 rhythms' patterns... Unstacked
02:21:324 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. Try to give at least two beats for recovery. I replaced the slider (1) with a circle, and placed it at 02:21:870.
02:36:597 (5,1,1) - Kind of wary of this spacing here. Uhm I tried another spacing now. It's better now, I guess.

[Hard]
00:54:324 (3,1) - This is a pretty big jump for this level of difficulty. Reduced jump.
00:57:733 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:26:915 (7,8) - Strange that these weren't stacked considering the pattern earlier... You're right. I stacked them now.
02:48:597 (2) - I can understand the first one just being a long slider due to the pace of the song, but this one? Why another long slider? I replaced that slider with circles that follow the vocals. Now it's way better <3
03:04:961 (1,2,3) - Quite the large spacing there. Feels a bit too much considering the rest of the map goes back to the close spacing distance snap. Removed jump between these 3 notes.

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
HP Drain -1
Tick rate 2
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't really fit what's going on in the music. :/
01:25:824 (5,6) - misaligned
01:38:233 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can't see anything here. Please try a different pattern.

SPOILER

• 
  Stuff:

1. Spread could have been better, an even easier difficulty could have been very nice, since the current Normal is probably very hard for a new player.
   Skin:
2. I don't get why the slider ball has so few frames, it makes it look as if it was rolling veeery fast :C
3. On the spinner-background.png image:
   
   You know that could have gone smoother
   Also, is that "white" part transparent? And is that intentional? I mean I can see the background back there:
   
4. Well you coooouuuuld, thorically, force other skin elements so that other skins wouldn't "overlap" with yours.
   For example if a user has a skin with a custom hitcircle that has nothing to do with this map at all, he'll still get it but won't get the hitbursts, becuase you are forcing them.
   Metadata:
5. I googled, but couldn't find what the current source, No.D, is. I'd like to ask just to clear things up.
   Timing:
6. I don't agree with the place where the offset has been set, since there is no "music" until 00:01:688 -. I'd suggest the Offset to be there (1688 ms), and then I'd add another red section to fix the metronome at 00:02:233 -. You might wanna double check with somebody else, maybe Garven?

1. 00:19:142 (5) - May I suggest a new combo here? Looks good with the music
2. 00:51:051 (1) - I don't really get the point of this new combo. I get you followed the vocals but it's totally not consistent with you previous combos. At the very least, you could do something like 00:45:324 (1,2,3) - and remove the new combo at 00:51:051 (1) - , then add it at 00:50:779 (2) - :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. Some combos go up to 8, that shouldn't happen in the easiest difficulties. Be more careful next time.

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi!

Well things to mention:

[General]

• 
  Stuff:

1. Spread could have been better, an even easier difficulty could have been very nice, since the current Normal is probably very hard for a new player.
   Skin:
2. I don't get why the slider ball has so few frames, it makes it look as if it was rolling veeery fast :C D: Added more slider ball frames.
3. On the spinner-background.png image:
   
   You know that could have gone smoother xD I fixed this too. Now it looks good.
   Also, is that "white" part transparent? And is that intentional? I mean I can see the background back there: Yup, that's intentional.
   
4. Well you coooouuuuld, thorically, force other skin elements so that other skins wouldn't "overlap" with yours.
   For example if a user has a skin with a custom hitcircle that has nothing to do with this map at all, he'll still get it but won't get the hitbursts, becuase you are forcing them. Asdf well I made a hitcircle and added it in this update (I added the reverse arrow, sliderborder, hitcircleoverlay and approach circle too obviously ).
   Metadata:
5. I googled, but couldn't find what the current source, No.D, is. I'd like to ask just to clear things up.Like Garven said, he's the artist.
   Timing:
6. I don't agree with the place where the offset has been set, since there is no "music" until 00:01:688 -. I'd suggest the Offset to be there (1688 ms), and then I'd add another red section to fix the metronome at 00:02:233 -. You might wanna double check with somebody else, maybe Garven?

No changes because Garven said that the metronome it's ok.

[Normal]

1. 00:19:142 (5) - May I suggest a new combo here? Looks good with the music Okay.
2. 00:51:051 (1) - I don't really get the point of this new combo. I get you followed the vocals but it's totally not consistent with you previous combos. At the very least, you could do something like 00:45:324 (1,2,3) - and remove the new combo at 00:51:051 (1) - , then add it at 00:50:779 (2) - : ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. Some combos go up to 8, that shouldn't happen in the easiest difficulties. Be more careful next time.

Ok that's all for now I guess, call me back later so I can recheck this. Ok! thank you :3

Garven wrote:

Oh, I can't believe I missed this, but in Hard: 00:54:324 (3,1) - This jump still feels pretty big. Think you can tone it down a tad more? Done.

ikari_kyon wrote:

The work of the people, not just our work, please notice that we are on the 10th page now, and send to the garbage all the people's work, mod post, star, kudostar (that was very expensive on some past time), the effort of Leorda has spent here trying to bubble us and many more stuff is something to considerate of.

Garven wrote:

I'm saddened at the tone of the replies, especially with the reasoning of having to find more MAT/BAT to mod/rank when you have two BATs offering assistance.

iMercurial wrote:

Is just a stupid idea (Like Kei said)

iMercurial wrote:

Ranked :3

MoodyRPG wrote:

Grats Kei ^^

Zelmarked wrote:

I found the mapping very comprehensible. Got it done first try.(insane)

Kei wrote:

Zelmarked wrote:

I found the mapping very comprehensible. Got it done first try.(insane)

Oh really? but.. is that a bad thing or.. it's something good? lol