-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

♪Hihi~!
♪Here's my modding~!

♪General

SPOILER

♪delete .osb then fullsub again. Done
♪nothing else~! such a purple skin~!

♪【Hard】diff

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00:43:688 (5) - left 1 grid? Uhm.. okay.
00:47:233 (2) - can u make it not blocking? I like how it is
00:51:052 (3,4,5) - these 3 can use a same symmetric shape and it will give u a better effect. Ok.
01:21:597 (4) - up 1 grid? Uh.. ok.
01:29:506 break right after the spinner http://puu.sh/adz7 Done.
02:34:142 (10,1) - i don't think a jump is suitable Sorry but I'll keep the jump.
02:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - jump~! Done.
02:49:415 (1) - remove? Nope, sorry.
02:58:142 (5) - remove finish at tail ^
03:18:597 (2) - just a suggestion:http://puu.sh/adzZ I think that the current one is okay.
This diff is a lot better than the insane... Well.. I didn't mapped the Insane. It's a guest difficulty.

and nice hit sound~! Thanks :3

♪【Normal】diff

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00:19:142 00:19:688 actually u can add 2 notes.. Ok!
00:57:051 (4) - spacing Fixed.
00:58:142 (6) - ^ ^
01:11:506 (1,2,3) - make these more round? Nah, that's unnecesary. Doing that little change would ruin all the next note's spacing.
02:18:870spinner start at here? No ;-;
02:52:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make this part like this?http://puu.sh/adBt this sound better to me, and u dont have a break, these slow notes can also be regarded as the break Nope again, sorry.
03:10:961 (3) - move this to form a better star.. Done
Good~!

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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
Good luck~!
Since i am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.

Thanks a lot for your mod!

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

♪【i_k's Insane】diff

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OD 6 or 7 plz, or people will get annoyed with a very low acc and this is a long song. 7
00:27:597 (2) - up 1 grid?
00:33:597 (7) - better shape plz.. http://puu.sh/aduO it is the same design with a different shape =v= so no
01:00:052 (8) - better shape..
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump?
01:12:733 (3) - left 1 grid
01:24:052 (5) - better shape
01:45:324 (5) - ^
01:50:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust the note with the DS off, make the note on the same spot what?
01:57:597 (5) - NC
02:02:779 (5) - put it some where else? where?
02:03:870 (7) - not a good time for a jump.
02:05:506 (4) - may be like this?http://puu.sh/advP
02:06:597 (7) - NC
02:07:142 (1) - remove NC
02:08:779 (7) - NC
02:09:870 (1) - remove nc
02:11:233 (4) - NC
02:11:779 (1) - remove nc
02:12:733 (3) - NC
02:13:142 (6) - better shape
02:13:688 (1) - remove NC
02:15:051 (1) - remove NC
02:15:324 (2) - NC
02:20:506 (8) - NC?
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - can u make them not blocking 5? what blocking?
02:37:415 (1,2,3) - jump?
02:43:142 (6) - NC
02:54:597 (1) - better shape http://puu.sh/adwX
02:56:915Form here the NC was weird for me again...
03:29:506 (1,2,3,4) - move not blocking 5
in fact, this diff is like a rough copy in my view, everything is not that neat especially for the sliders. so plz make them better looking if possible. Also, add a break at the second half. =v= what copy?

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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
... ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

IRC Mod Bla Bla Caca xD.

Mod

00:36 *mancusojuanmattos is editing (Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33143]
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : fuck que duda que me agarre
01:00 <Kei> : weee decime :3
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : en la Normal
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:56:779
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas entre un New Combo pero no se
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : porque despues me viene la duda mas adelante
01:01 <Kei> : ah
01:01 <Kei> : mm..
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:02:779 quizas remover el New Combo
01:02 <Kei> : bueno ese combo lo agrego
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : y agregarlo en 01:04:415
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : duda duda
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:02 <Kei> : fuuuu xD
01:03 <Kei> : mm
01:03 <Kei> : ami me parece que esta bien como esta
01:03 <Kei> : pero el primer combo que me dijiste
01:03 <Kei> : si es mejor
01:03 <Kei> : mm..
01:03 <Kei> : si c:
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : kei estas?
01:28 <Kei> : ah si
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : t hago el mod por aca nomas?
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : es poco
01:30 <Kei> : ok
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : bien
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : empiezo?
01:30 <Kei> : Si
01:30 <Kei> : que dificultad primero?
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : General
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : esto es re bobo pero ta
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : borra el .osb file de la carpeta y luego full submit
01:31 <Kei> : ah cierto o:
01:31 <Kei> : ok!
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : en Normal y Hard
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : Audio Lead-In 500 creo que esta bien
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : tarda mucho en empezar con 1004
01:33 <Kei> : listo
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : Normal y Hard de vuelta
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : desde 00:01:688-00:19:688
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : no escucho los soft hitnormal
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : suenan bajo
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : recien empiezo a escuchar los hitsound cuando agregas Hitfinishes y Hitwhistles
01:35 <Kei> : osea
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias subir el sample a 90%
01:35 <Kei> : 00:01:688 (1) -
01:35 <Kei> : desde ahi
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : siip
01:35 <Kei> : o.o hasta el break?
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : si
01:35 <Kei> : bien
01:35 <Kei> : voy :3
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : osea mapea toda la cancion con 90%
01:36 <Kei> : listo
01:36 <mancusojuanmattos> : ahora la Normal
01:37 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:19:142 (5)-
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : Suena fuera de lugar ese (5)
01:38 <Kei> : que tiene :3?
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : es raro
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : como que no me va en el tick blanco
01:39 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias moverlo 1/2 adelante
01:41 <Kei> : o.o
01:41 <Kei> : y y
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:41 <Kei> : pero pero pero
01:41 <Kei> : si le pongo eso
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : capaz que soy yo
01:41 <Kei> : no queda mejor si le pongo una nota
01:41 <Kei> : en
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:415 (6) -
01:42 <Kei> : digo
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:142 (5) -
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : no habia visto eso
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : buena idea
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:42 <Kei> : weeee :B
01:42 <Kei> : lo pongo xD
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : sigo
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:51:052 (3)-
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo por cambio de voz
01:45 <Kei> : agregado
01:45 <Kei> : o:
01:45 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:26:779 (6)-
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo de vuelta
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:48 <Kei> : O:
01:48 <Kei> : aver
01:48 <Kei> : cierto
01:48 <Kei> : listo :B
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:25:688 (x)-
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : Una Nota aqui + New Combo en esta nota
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : ya que la voz empieza aca
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : puedes apilarla con 02:26:233
01:50 <Kei> : si
01:50 <Kei> : eso iba a hacer xD
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : jaja
01:51 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que por el New Combo que hablamos hoy
01:52 <mancusojuanmattos> : deberia ir uno en 02:58:415 (3)-
01:52 <Kei> : o:!
01:52 <Kei> : agregado
01:53 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que en Normal nada mas
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : Hard
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:18:597 (1,1,1,1)-
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : No soy muy amante de este (1,1,1,1) usualmente no siguen la song
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que (1,2,3,4) juega mejor
01:57 <Kei> : voy
01:57 <Kei> : arreglaba una cosita
01:58 <Kei> : en cuanto a
01:58 <Kei> : eso de 1,1,1,1
01:58 <Kei> : podria sacar el new combo de la nota que esta en 00:19:006 -
01:58 <Kei> : y la siguiente
01:58 <Kei> : y dejar new combo en la ultima
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : si puede ser
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : queda mejor que 1,1,1,1
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> :
01:59 <Kei> : y
01:59 <Kei> : aver lo otro que me dijiste
02:00 <Kei> : ah nada
02:00 <Kei> : xD
02:00 <mancusojuanmattos> :
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:18:324 (5)-
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:01 <Kei> : o: cierto
02:01 <Kei> : xD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : al igual que en 01:22:688 (6)-
02:02 <Kei> : agregado tambien
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
02:02 <Kei> : cuantos errores se me pasan
02:02 <Kei> : XD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : son pequeñas cosas
02:03 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver creo que me queda una cosa
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:31:961 (7)-
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : encontre solo esas cosas
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : asdsasa
02:05 <Kei> : O:
02:05 <Kei> : listo! Gracias
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : ups creo que se me paso algo
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : te acordas del 1,1,1,1
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : que quedo en 1,2,3,1
02:06 <Kei> : si
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:37:142 usaste casi lo mismo con 1,2,3,4
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas al (4) debes agregrle un NC
02:08 <Kei> : cierto
02:08 <Kei> : para que quede igual o:

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

General
* spinner-approachcircle is blend from spinner, try make it darker? Done.
* Inconsistent kiai time (Source : AIBat) puu.sh/cmbg Fixed.


Normal
00:42:597 (1) - Remove new combo? Like others? Ok!
00:46:415 (1,2,3) - This pattern is doesn't following the vocal, try make this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212572 ^
01:23:506 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider for good rhythm? ^
02:07:142 (1) - Remove new combo for pattern? ^
02:25:688 (1) - Add whistle, since it's downbeat? ^
02:28:961 (7,8,1) - This stacks is makes boring for beginner, try making a good pattern? Now It's better, I guess.
02:30:324 (2) - This slider is kinda make sense if the slider is follow the vocal. Try move to 02:30:597, end at 02:31:142 and add note at 02:30:324. You should end up like this http://puu.sh/clYQ Done.
02:52:142 (1) - Would be nice if this move to 02:52:415, since the slider is fit to the vocal ^
03:21:324 (5) - Spacing error here Oh you're right. Fixed.

I've improved a bit this difficulty with your suggestions. Now it looks and sounds better.

Hard
* I like the blanket combo <3 Yay! c:

00:36:597 ~ 01:10:961 - This sections is lacks of hitsound, try adding whistle, like other diff Added whistles.
00:47:233 (2) - I don't like if this slider overlapper by previous slider (Nazi) It seems like noone likes it so I changed it.
01:20:233 (1) - Add whistle? Ok
01:54:052 (7,8) - I think these pattern is good for following vocal http://puu.sh/cm3u Sounds nice c:
02:05:370 (4) - Perhaps, replace this into a slider that end at 02:05:642 for following vocal? ^
02:18:461 (4) - Whistle at head slider is doesn't fit, IMO I like how it sounds there.
02:21:324 (1) - This slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's hard to understand for players, look at test mode Fixed.
02:26:233 (2) - ^ ^
02:29:097 (1) - Add whistle? Yeah.


Not bad for me, PM me for reheck (since this map is too old) Ok. I'm waiting for Kyon's update. Thank you~

Santa Claw wrote:

The creator is No.D, you should put the name in the Source/Tags. I added it to Source, since most of the Vocaloid songs have Creator Name in Source.
In i_k's insane, 01:24:052 (5) - LOL.
Besides the name of the creator, everything (diffs, hitsounds, etc.) is awesome and should be ranked Thanks for your help and support

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

i_k's Insane
* I agree with Lucifer, this diff is overmapped. If you have a stream (e.g. 00:04:415 (1,2,3,4,5)) or triplets (00:28:688 (3,4,5)), try ask yourself with one question : "Is this streams and triplets are fit to music?". If you say no, then you have to remove the notes inside the stream/triplets and change a new pattern - ok Ill change many stuff :3

00:30:324 (2,3) - Try make a same slider as 00:29:779 (1) to avoiding players for confusing
00:49:006 (4) - I feel this object is overlapped by hitbursts
00:56:506 (1) - End this slider at 00:56:779 and add note at 00:57:052 for following vocal?
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - This finish hitsound are not fit, IMO
02:43:688 (8) - New combo for stanza? Like others?

Leorda wrote:

@ikari_kyon - hm? ovo

I still found the unnecessary stream/triplets on this diff. Here the list of unncessary stream/triplets. You can agree/disagree the stuff but you must have a reason

00:21:870 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4)
00:26:233 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4)
00:30:870 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3)
01:04:961 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
01:14:779 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
01:16:415 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
02:29:506 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
02:46:415 (3,4,5,6,7) <- Not fit to the song in calm part
03:12:052 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary

Correct me if I am wrong, also sorry for point out the stream, ikari_kyon. Also, I really sorry for modder if my mod is stupid

ikari_kyon wrote:

yey after irc stuff with Leorda x3

Edit: pag. 9 <3

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hitcircle.png
 hitcircleoverlay.png
 approachcircle.png

Katsuri wrote:

General

hitcircle.png
 hitcircleoverlay.png
 approachcircle.png

You need to add these 3 skin elements and then full-submit.
I will mod later when I get back home..
I hope to help you improve your map.

In the morning I pop bubbles and then mod them at night if they are popped.

Garven wrote:

[General]
Actually, since you have the reverse arrow skinned, you -do- need to add the rest of the hitcircle-specific elements. I deleted the reverse arrow because I don't know how to skin hitcircle elements and I neither know which hitcircle would fit with the map current skin and song.
Also, set your hitburst dimensions to 256x256 while you're there. Done

[Normal]
00:46:688 (2,3) - Was kind of weird having this stacked considering your other 3 1/2 rhythms' patterns... Unstacked
02:21:324 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. Try to give at least two beats for recovery. I replaced the slider (1) with a circle, and placed it at 02:21:870.
02:36:597 (5,1,1) - Kind of wary of this spacing here. Uhm I tried another spacing now. It's better now, I guess.

[Hard]
00:54:324 (3,1) - This is a pretty big jump for this level of difficulty. Reduced jump.
00:57:733 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:26:915 (7,8) - Strange that these weren't stacked considering the pattern earlier... You're right. I stacked them now.
02:48:597 (2) - I can understand the first one just being a long slider due to the pace of the song, but this one? Why another long slider? I replaced that slider with circles that follow the vocals. Now it's way better <3
03:04:961 (1,2,3) - Quite the large spacing there. Feels a bit too much considering the rest of the map goes back to the close spacing distance snap. Removed jump between these 3 notes.

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
HP Drain -1
Tick rate 2
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't really fit what's going on in the music. :/
01:25:824 (5,6) - misaligned
01:38:233 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can't see anything here. Please try a different pattern.

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• 
  Stuff:

1. Spread could have been better, an even easier difficulty could have been very nice, since the current Normal is probably very hard for a new player.
   Skin:
2. I don't get why the slider ball has so few frames, it makes it look as if it was rolling veeery fast :C
3. On the spinner-background.png image:
   
   You know that could have gone smoother
   Also, is that "white" part transparent? And is that intentional? I mean I can see the background back there:
   
4. Well you coooouuuuld, thorically, force other skin elements so that other skins wouldn't "overlap" with yours.
   For example if a user has a skin with a custom hitcircle that has nothing to do with this map at all, he'll still get it but won't get the hitbursts, becuase you are forcing them.
   Metadata:
5. I googled, but couldn't find what the current source, No.D, is. I'd like to ask just to clear things up.
   Timing:
6. I don't agree with the place where the offset has been set, since there is no "music" until 00:01:688 -. I'd suggest the Offset to be there (1688 ms), and then I'd add another red section to fix the metronome at 00:02:233 -. You might wanna double check with somebody else, maybe Garven?

1. 00:19:142 (5) - May I suggest a new combo here? Looks good with the music
2. 00:51:051 (1) - I don't really get the point of this new combo. I get you followed the vocals but it's totally not consistent with you previous combos. At the very least, you could do something like 00:45:324 (1,2,3) - and remove the new combo at 00:51:051 (1) - , then add it at 00:50:779 (2) - :
   
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3. Some combos go up to 8, that shouldn't happen in the easiest difficulties. Be more careful next time.

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi!

Well things to mention:

[General]

• 
  Stuff:

1. Spread could have been better, an even easier difficulty could have been very nice, since the current Normal is probably very hard for a new player.
   Skin:
2. I don't get why the slider ball has so few frames, it makes it look as if it was rolling veeery fast :C D: Added more slider ball frames.
3. On the spinner-background.png image:
   
   You know that could have gone smoother xD I fixed this too. Now it looks good.
   Also, is that "white" part transparent? And is that intentional? I mean I can see the background back there: Yup, that's intentional.
   
4. Well you coooouuuuld, thorically, force other skin elements so that other skins wouldn't "overlap" with yours.
   For example if a user has a skin with a custom hitcircle that has nothing to do with this map at all, he'll still get it but won't get the hitbursts, becuase you are forcing them. Asdf well I made a hitcircle and added it in this update (I added the reverse arrow, sliderborder, hitcircleoverlay and approach circle too obviously ).
   Metadata:
5. I googled, but couldn't find what the current source, No.D, is. I'd like to ask just to clear things up.Like Garven said, he's the artist.
   Timing:
6. I don't agree with the place where the offset has been set, since there is no "music" until 00:01:688 -. I'd suggest the Offset to be there (1688 ms), and then I'd add another red section to fix the metronome at 00:02:233 -. You might wanna double check with somebody else, maybe Garven?

No changes because Garven said that the metronome it's ok.

[Normal]

1. 00:19:142 (5) - May I suggest a new combo here? Looks good with the music Okay.
2. 00:51:051 (1) - I don't really get the point of this new combo. I get you followed the vocals but it's totally not consistent with you previous combos. At the very least, you could do something like 00:45:324 (1,2,3) - and remove the new combo at 00:51:051 (1) - , then add it at 00:50:779 (2) - : ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. Some combos go up to 8, that shouldn't happen in the easiest difficulties. Be more careful next time.

Ok that's all for now I guess, call me back later so I can recheck this. Ok! thank you :3

Garven wrote:

Oh, I can't believe I missed this, but in Hard: 00:54:324 (3,1) - This jump still feels pretty big. Think you can tone it down a tad more? Done.

ikari_kyon wrote:

The work of the people, not just our work, please notice that we are on the 10th page now, and send to the garbage all the people's work, mod post, star, kudostar (that was very expensive on some past time), the effort of Leorda has spent here trying to bubble us and many more stuff is something to considerate of.

Garven wrote:

I'm saddened at the tone of the replies, especially with the reasoning of having to find more MAT/BAT to mod/rank when you have two BATs offering assistance.

iMercurial wrote:

Is just a stupid idea (Like Kei said)

iMercurial wrote:

Ranked :3

MoodyRPG wrote:

Grats Kei ^^

Zelmarked wrote:

I found the mapping very comprehensible. Got it done first try.(insane)

Kei wrote:

Zelmarked wrote:

I found the mapping very comprehensible. Got it done first try.(insane)

Oh really? but.. is that a bad thing or.. it's something good? lol