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Matma Rex

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
00:10:99 (5) - This starts half a beat later Nope, it doesnt.
00:22:93 (2) - quarter note earlier 1/8th. Fixed.
00:23:77 (1,2) - starting from here the distance between the 1 and 2 of the next few combos vary, so it would be nice if all of them are unified Fixed.
00:23:77 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - overall, this gets repetitive. I would like some more variety in pattern here, but I guess this is okay.
00:43:77 (1) - it is very difficult to go from a multi-repeating slider to a normal slider or note, so it is usually not advised to ever put one on an easy difficulty map Repeater removed.
00:44:60 (2) - it looks ugly for 1 to slightly overlap this slider Its meant to be like that, same way as 2,3,4,5 overlap each other.
00:48:21 (1,2) - same as last 2 comments Fixed same way.
00:52:52 (1) - same as 00:43:77 (1) There is some space around it, I think its okay.
01:24:60 (8) - new combo color
01:26:82 (12) - " "
01:29:05 (16) - " " Colors added.
01:33:49 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is repetitive. It is very boring to play a single pattern for 26s straight Well, I think I can only leave it as-is or just remove it, I have no idea how to make it better.

Hard:
00:10:99 (7) - it does not look nice for this slider to be overlapped by 6. Also, align this slider with the end of 6
00:12:80 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack these under the end of 7 This and above - fixed.
00:23:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - repeating stacks like this is pretty boring and tedious, please think of a new pattern. Also, the spacing in this section is different than the rest of your song, y? Spacing is different to make it look nicer. But with what can I replace those stacks? Spinners? Repeating sliders would be even more boring.
01:33:49 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same comment as easy I think I made it a bit more interesting.

Besides the stacks, hard is not difficult enough to call hard. I can rename it :P

Also hard is very similar to easy right now. All hard seems to be is a easy with a lot more notes but still almost the same positioning. No way, positioning isnt same.
DJPop
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Topic Starter
Matma Rex
DJ, fixed.

Dammit, how did you guess it's copypaste? :o
Starrodkirby86
This song is awesome.

[Easy]:
00:14:64 (1) - That slider next up should actually begin here.
00:15:75 (x) - Same for this slider.
00:49:07 (6) - New combo.
00:55:73 (4) - End slider sooner.
01:49:17 (2,1,2,1,2) - Make these on white ticks.

[Hard]:
00:14:60 (1,2,3) - Same concern with [Easy].
00:37:10 (1,2,3,4) - What interesting sliders. I hope no one complains about this.

The rhythm is so odd, especially after the second break. When I have enough spare time, I'll make a quick difficulty that has my rhythm for the song, so you can use that as a base. Least I can do for delaying the modding of this baby. (I'll have to make it Taiko since I don't want to spend time doing all of the spacing work, and if you like, you can add it :3).

It's a star though...I hope you have enthusiasm for this to get Ranked.
WyndII
Love this songgame .. so much.. but where is PL 2 English!? T.T lol
star these maps! star this game! star this song! oh and star for you! XD

Download: Tomohito Nishiura - Professor Layton's Theme (Matma Rex) [WyndII's MiX].osu
blissfulyoshi
Easy:
00:36:57 (4) - spacing mistake

Hard:
no problems I can fine except that it gets pretty boring.

In my earlier post, I was referring to how easy and hard have very similar general positions. EX: 01:33:49 (1,2) both of these notes start in the top left and the second note will be in the bottom left. I guess since I do this myself it is okay, but it annoys me how similar their positions are.

For hard, I would suggest you mix repeating sliders with stacks and streams to give yourself more variety.

For the ending, please put more variation. I can barely bring myself to play an easy section for both difficulties that is copy and pasted three times over. I would suggest you try some different patterns unless this is done for a reason.

Since this map has very few technical flaws, star.
Topic Starter
Matma Rex

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

This song is awesome.

[Easy]:
00:14:64 (1) - That slider next up should actually begin here. Hm, I think its okay. If somebody else complains, I will change it.
00:15:75 (x) - Same for this slider. Hm, I think its okay. If somebody else complains, I will change it.
00:49:07 (6) - New combo. Fixed.
00:55:73 (4) - End slider sooner. Hm, I think its okay. If somebody else complains, I will change it.
01:49:17 (2,1,2,1,2) - Make these on white ticks. Fixed.

[Hard]:
00:14:60 (1,2,3) - Same concern with [Easy]. Hm, I think its okay. If somebody else complains, I will change it.
00:37:10 (1,2,3,4) - What interesting sliders. I hope no one complains about this. You are first :). If somebody else complains, I will change it.

The rhythm is so odd, especially after the second break. Hm? What did you mean?

When I have enough spare time, I'll make a quick difficulty that has my rhythm for the song, so you can use that as a base. Great :)

(I'll have to make it Taiko since I don't want to spend time doing all of the spacing work, and if you like, you can add it :3). Sure.


WyndII: thanks, diff added :) Kinda hard, but well.



blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
00:36:57 (4) - spacing mistake That's what should be called "nazi modding" ;). But fixed.

In my earlier post, I was referring to how easy and hard have very similar general positions. EX: 01:33:49 (1,2) both of these notes start in the top left and the second note will be in the bottom left. I can flip the whole difficulty :P

For hard, I would suggest you mix repeating sliders with stacks and streams to give yourself more variety. I'll try.

For the ending, please put more variation. I can barely bring myself to play an easy section for both difficulties that is copy and pasted three times over. I would suggest you try some different patterns unless this is done for a reason. I think I'll just cut off the last repeat, and maybe flip the second or something.
Nachy
Couldn't find anything wrong with it, great job. Normal is perfect, no need on changing anything. Hard is fun, although I do suggest a rather "puzzling" order of notes and sliders for Hard, since this is Professor Layton after all. :)

Anyways, good job, starred.
Jinxy
[Easy]
00:08:26 (1,2) - You should make this two beats into 1 slider as there are a few notes in the middle.
Very repetive at the end.

[Hard]
Nothing.


[WyndII mix]
Nada.
fufe
wyd-

00:09:05 (1) - <- Start here (next full beat)
00:16:82 (8,1,2,3,4) - needs to be restacked.
00:28:91 (6) - This slider is masking a hit. put a hit here. then move this slider forward 1/4. I think you should then remove the next hit (would be 8) instead of shortening this slider.
00:34:18 (3,4) - stack on 2?
00:35:30 (6,7) - ^
00:48:77 (3,4,5) - can you normalize the spacing here?
01:00:43 (1) - switch places with 01:00:16 (1,1) - imo.

Try to get a break in there if possible =z thats some intense clicking

hard-
00:52:52 (1) - kinda close, potentially confusing.
01:06:82 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i dont feels the beat here =x
01:33:217 section - whats with the new combo placement here?
kinda dull finalle but I guess there isnt any rules about that.

I dont really understand a lot of the hits in Easy. It should be mega stupid easy imo. Here is some things I would change. Use it if you wish. Though i still think it could be easier. Also the sliders at the end could be made into patterns instead of just going in a circle 4 times in a row.
Download: Tomohito Nishiura - Professor Layton's Theme (Matma Rex) [Easy-Fufed].osu
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
NachoPiggy: thanks :)

JInxyjem: I added another note between them.
Topic Starter
Matma Rex

fufe wrote:

wyd-

00:09:05 (1) - <- Start here (next full beat) Fixed.
00:16:82 (8,1,2,3,4) - needs to be restacked. Fixed, I hope.
00:28:91 (6) - This slider is masking a hit. put a hit here. then move this slider forward 1/4. I think you should then remove the next hit (would be 8) instead of shortening this slider. Fixed, I hope.
00:34:18 (3,4) - stack on 2? Better this way.
00:35:30 (6,7) - ^ ^
00:48:77 (3,4,5) - can you normalize the spacing here? What's wrong with it?
01:00:43 (1) - switch places with 01:00:16 (1,1) - imo. Done.

Try to get a break in there if possible =z thats some intense clicking

hard-
00:52:52 (1) - kinda close, potentially confusing. Made the slider before vertical, should be OK now.
01:06:82 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i dont feels the beat here =x For me its okay.
01:33:217 section - whats with the new combo placement here? Em, I dont understand what did you mean.
kinda dull finalle but I guess there isnt any rules about that.
fufe
00:48:77 (3,4,5) - can you normalize the spacing here? What's wrong with it?
look at the overlap from 00:49:467 or so. 5 is too close. It is technically fine tho if you wanna leave it alone i guess.

whats with the new combo placement here? Em, I dont understand what did you mean.
i just thought it was kinda wierd to have combo changes on the two sliders right next to eachother. its fine maybe. im not an expert on combos.
adam2046
A star for you.
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
Fixed more.

fufe, thanks.

adam, thanks for IRC help :)
WyndII
fufe fixes.. Fufe most of teh notes u mentioned are intentional. ;) oh and I'll just do the modding for this diff. xD

Download: Tomohito Nishiura - Professor Layton's Theme (Matma Rex) [WyndII's MiX].osu
Larto
Overall:
Offset seems to be more like 191. Sorry about that. Also, when I downloaded the map, I only got Easy.

Easy:
00:09:23 (4) - 1/4 earlier
00:11:31 (6) - ^
00:53:79 (1) - 1 repeat more
00:54:55 (2,3,4) - 1/8 later
00:55:73 (4) - 1/4 shorter maybe?


Hard:
You didn't even take my timing here =.=
BPM: 108,07
Offset: 191

00:37:11 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this. Maybe make 1 2 and 3 just one single repeat slider? And 4 would sound better if it ended 1/4 earlier.
DawnII
BPM 108.08/Offset 188

[Easy]
00:36:13 (3,4) - Too close.
00:55:71 (4) - Shorten 1/4.
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
Larto, DawnII: fixed.
Larto
Okay now I think
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
<3
Gens
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Topic Starter
Matma Rex

Gens wrote:

- You can set a Preview Point by going to the menu Timing -> Set current point as preview.
Yea, I know, but I think starting at beginning here is best ;)
DeathxShinigami
Man...what a catchy tune this is. ~_~ starred.
Lokamp
Here in Italy, I'm still waiting for the 2nd chapter...

Easy
[00:45:227] (2) whistle here
[00:46:757] (2, 3, 4) unify these beats in a slider (start and end it with sounds of your choise)
[01:15:701] from here until 01:24:251 use a "rhythmical chart" like this:
Whistle-clap-whistle-clap, Whistle-clap-whistle-clap and so on.
You can also use finish sounds instead of whistle ones!
[01:31:217] from now until the end, set some beats (clap?) between sliders, like I've made in the photo attacked on this post...

Normal
[00:00:000] (2, 4, 6, 8) Let's mod from the beginning! claps (or finish) on 4th and 8th beats, whistle on the others
[00:22:969] (2) finish here
[00:23:769] (1) whistle ALL the slider!

Ill'mod the rest later... Star'd!

Mafiamaster
Normal~
  1. 00:55:70 (4) - Redo break after this beat. (It'll shorten and it'll begin at the right place.
WyndII's MiX~
  1. 00:55:99 (6) - Suggestion: Maybe move this over 1/4 of a beat.
  2. 01:13:35 (x) - Suggestion: Maybe add a beat here?
That's all I found.
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
Lokamp: most fixed, some not - I try to avoid overusing claps in this map. Music is light, so should be hisounds.
Mafiamaster: break fixed. I didnt modify Wynd's difficulty - he'll do it on his own (I hope).

Also, it's Hard, not Normal >:(
lukewarmholiday
Alright sorry i'm so late. had to do a bunch of fixes on my own map, do stuff for my collab, etc.

Once again, nothing Id deem unrankable, just some pet peeve suggestions.

Hard:
00:51:26 (4) - any chance the end of this slider could be moved facing horizontally to go with the way the song is moving
00:52:51 (1) - move spacing to compensate with above suggestion if you decide to take it

WyndII's MiX
01:03:77 (1) - 01:05:30 (1) - really messes me up for what otherwise may be one of my favorite maps the one hitcircle in the sliders just makes me cringe
01:10:99 (7) - put 8 under the end of this slider, or just have it repeat the full 5 times, because its just awkward to hit.
01:12:66 (5) - unnecessary but nothing really wrong with it, I would have just preferred normal beats following the piano.

Great map
WyndII
Fixed.
Matma if you want the skin I made. try it/ use it. = )



EDIT: Sorry, I forgot to put spinners. Download: New Folder.rar

Download: 7103 Tomohito Nishiura - Professor Layton's Theme.rar

Download: Tomohito Nishiura - Professor Layton's Theme (Matma Rex) [WyndII's MiX].osu
Lokamp
New modding time!

Hard
[00:18:556] (3) finish here
[00:29:956] (7) finish also at this slider's end!
[00:46:834] (9, 10, 11) try to add here two whistles and a finish ...
[01:15:663] from now until 01:24:433, start EVERY slider with a finish!
[01:42:910] (1) whistle here

WindII's mix
Nothin'wrong here...

Plus, try to set some claps a little more in the other modes!
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
Wynd: great :D Skin added (I tweaked it a little), difficulty updated.

Lokamp: fixed, I think.
anonymous_old
Easy
Feels like a Normal. I don't really like the difficulty personally though.

00:11:01 (7) - wtf timing? Very unintuitive. Start at 00:11:29 (1/2 later).

Hard
Could use some streams... Maybe at 00:53:75 (1,2,3,4)?
00:13:51 (6,1,2) - Spacing isn't awesome.
00:19:06 (x) - Fill notes in this break?
01:13:46 (4,5,6) - Can't feel the beat.
01:33:45 (1) - Add Whistle to end for consistency. Personally, I would have the first one like this not have the Whistle for each of this pattern, though. E.g. 01:35:67 (3) - Remove Whistle at end.

WyndII's MiX
00:08:49 (1) - wtf is this? It doesn't match anything...
00:17:93 (12) - New combo?
00:30:43 (1,1) - Hard to contrast hit circle colours with each other and the background. Grr. That makes this part hard to read.
00:33:21 (1,2) - Switch new combos?
00:38:49 (1) - Move to 00:38:35 (1/4 back).
00:51:13 (1,1,1) - Too close together IMO.
00:55:57 (5,6) - Too close together IMO.
01:12:38 (4,5,6) - Definitely too close to be read properly.
01:13:77 (1) - Seems to end too late.
Topic Starter
Matma Rex

strager wrote:

Easy
Feels like a Normal. I don't really like the difficulty personally though.

00:11:01 (7) - wtf timing? Very unintuitive. Start at 00:11:29 (1/2 later). Can't agree. I tried to put it in many places and this one seems best for me. Also, it's same in Hard and you didnt notice it there.

Hard
Could use some streams... Maybe at 00:53:75 (1,2,3,4)? Streamed this and stacks arounds.
00:13:51 (6,1,2) - Spacing isn't awesome. Better now?
00:19:06 (x) - Fill notes in this break? Nope? ;)
01:13:46 (4,5,6) - Can't feel the beat. Completely remade that part.
01:33:45 (1) - Add Whistle to end for consistency. Done.
anonymous_old
WyndII

strager wrote:

Easy

WyndII's MiX
00:08:49 (1) - wtf is this? It doesn't match anything..Slider tick, symmetry, piano (=
00:17:93 (12) - New combo?
00:30:43 (1,1) - Hard to contrast hit circle colours with each other and the background. Grr. That makes this part hard to read.
00:33:21 (1,2) - Switch new combos?
00:38:49 (1) - Move to 00:38:35 (1/4 back).
00:51:13 (1,1,1) - Too close together IMO.
00:55:57 (5,6) - Too close together IMO.
01:12:38 (4,5,6) - Definitely too close to be read properly. 01:12:939 timing points, it slows down so DS seems to be reduced =/
01:13:77 (1) - Seems to end too late. I test it in 75% playback and it ends exactly when the piano starts in 01:15:717 that sounds like 00:00:162.
Thanks


EDIT: I FORGOT SOMETHING in edit.. (forgot something in lukewarm's mod)
Download: Tomohito Nishiura - Professor Layton's Theme (Matma Rex) [WyndII's MiX].osu
anonymous_old
blissfulyoshi
strager:
00:21:56 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 4
00:39:60 (2) - realign under the end of 1
00:48:62 (4,5,6,7) - move 1 grid left (3) to make the spacing consistent
00:55:28 (9) - make the spacing between 9 and 11 equal to the spacing between 6 and 8
01:13:46 (1) - align with 5

Nice diff.
anonymous_old
Thanks blissfulyoshi for your comments.

Took your suggestions and made another fix.

Download: Tomohito Nishiura - Professor Layton's Theme (Matma Rex) [strager's Puzzling].osu
EEeee
wow bubbled, go for rank, anyways, I see stager has been making a diff, why isn't it added so I can DL without the attachment, so I'm using his last post as his diff, if u understand?

Easy (maybe it can be switched to normal, ask around)
Fix all breaks, :D
01:13:46 (3) - just move this pattern somewhere else, it isn't spaced like 1 or 2, and I think it should be at 0.9x

Hard
Fix first break, its off by a bit :P
00:46:82 (9,10,11) - spacing is off here, fix it by snapping it to 8 at 0.9x

WyndII's mix
00:17:52 (9) - New combo, its goes to high for me
00:51:13 (1,1,1) - nazi right here, but take off the finishes at the endpoints
01:13:86 (1) - start this 1/6 forward, but end at the same place
Nice Claps :P

stager's puzzling
kk hope I get this right
00:13:51 (1,2,3) - new combo all of these
00:19:06 (2,3,4) - same to these, I think this should be new combo's cause I can't be to sure on where they are
snapped, so new combo should fix that ;)
00:23:78 (4) - this isn't snapped, so either try and fix the pattern, or just add a new combo to 4 and remove new
combo here 00:24:61 (10)
00:45:43 (8) - spacing changes, new combo plz
00:50:42 (8,9) - new combos on both of these, then remove this one 00:51:12 (1)
01:15:68 (5) - add note here, with a finish :D

Edit: Hey Guys, if u want to keep this bubbled, fix WnydII offset, its different
anonymous_old

EEeee wrote:

00:13:51 (1,2,3) - new combo all of these
00:19:06 (2,3,4) - same to these, I think this should be new combo's cause I can't be to sure on where they are
snapped, so new combo should fix that ;)
Sorry but I disagree. I've changed the spacing though so maybe it's a little better.

EEeee wrote:

00:23:78 (4) - this isn't snapped, so either try and fix the pattern, or just add a new combo to 4 and remove new
combo here 00:24:61 (10)
Fixed snapping and fixed combos. Thanks for mentioning! I can't belive I missed that.

EEeee wrote:

00:45:43 (8) - spacing changes, new combo plz
Nah. It matches the violin all the way though.

EEeee wrote:

00:50:42 (8,9) - new combos on both of these, then remove this one 00:51:12 (1)
Nah.

EEeee wrote:

01:15:68 (5) - add note here, with a finish :D
K.

Update attached.

Download: Tomohito Nishiura - Professor Layton's Theme (Matma Rex) [strager's Puzzling].osu
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