1. Hard (4,75 stars, 314 notes)
2. Normal (2,65 stars, 153 notes)
3. soyaH's Taiko (4,89 stars, 703 notes)
4. Tony's Easy (1,88 stars, 156 notes)

Tony wrote:

http://puu.sh/f8ev
diff, without hitsounds atm

1. general: delete the osb file and full submit~
   
   
   

   [Tony's Easy]

   nothing to poke~
   
   

   [Normal]

   1. 00:53:197 (6) - NC~
   2. 01:06:921 (3) - ^
   3. 01:16:785 (4) - 2 grip down
   4. 01:17:214 (5,6) - fix the spacing ~
   5. 01:39:086 (4) - 1 grip up and right to = the two~
   6. 01:59:458 (4,5) - useless notes, delete them and start the spinner here 01:59:886 - and ends here 02:02:674 -
   7. 02:06:963 (4) - NC~
   8. 02:20:687 (3) - 1 grip right~
   9. 02:22:402 (4) - fix the spacing after that~
   
   

   [Hard]

   Nice diff, i like it \:D/
   
   Nice map and good luck with getting it ranked :3

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 0,128,192
Combo4 : 250,154,84

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Well, that's all for now.
I'm a little tired
Good Luck with your map

Revengexsoyah wrote:

try my diffie


and star

Nymph wrote:

soyaH's Taiko:
Issue
01:17:643 (4) - why there are 2 notes at the same time?
01:18:071 (5) - ^
01:18:500 (8) - ^

1. 00:50:624 (5,1) - Perhaps curve (5) and make (1) encircle (5)'s end? Like this:
   
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   [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/241568[/img]
2. 01:02:632 (2) - I wonder, why no clap here? Clap fits much here imo
3. 01:03:490 (3) - The slider-tick isn't in the center, and the slider's end is a bit too the left compared with the slider's start. It's not a big problem actually (:
4. 01:05:205 (1,2) - idk... Rather than just a straight slider, some linear curve twist looks better here imo:
   
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   [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/241571[/img]
5. 01:15:498 (2) - One grid left, to make (1,2) and (2,3)'s spacing equal
6. 01:15:927 (3) - It's kinda weird for me, this finish isn't placed on the downbeat (2). Well, sounds fine as is though
7. 01:20:645 (3,4) - (optional) For me, you can reduce (3) by two repeats, and add another slider 1/1 after so you can arrange like this :
   
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8. 01:42:946 (1,2) - To keep the whistle consistent, the whistles should be placed on both slider's end, actually. If you don't follow this, at least remove the whistle on (1)'s start, because there's already one 1/1 before (a whistle so soon after before doesn't blend really well, imo)
9. 01:52:810 (5) - Move this few grids down and left so you can arrange like this? (if you look carefully, (1),(2),(5),(1) will form a pseudo-hexagon pattern this way)
   
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10. 02:12:110 (3) - Move the clap to (4). Feels awkward here
11. 02:18:543 (3,4,5) - Move (4) few grids down to form an arc? Plays better this way imo
12. 02:23:260 (5) - (optional) Make this encircle (1)'s start?
13. 02:27:120 (3) - No clap here? ><

1. 00:44:619 (1) - (optional) Make this slider wave neater?
   
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2. 00:45:906 (2) - I think it's better to place it on the bottom, so (1,2,3,4) will form a diamond pattern (there's still much space downward :3)
3. 00:54:912 (1,3) - Slider wave is okay to use here, but I prefer to make it encircle (2), with (2)'s approachcircle to guide encircling:
   
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4. 01:00:059 (3,4) - The spacing here, I wonder... It seems like you're forcing this slider. imo it's better to move 00:59:201 (2) more downward so you can keep the vertical symmetry going here (although it sacrifices the stack >_<)
5. 01:01:774 (1) - Considering you're symmetry-mapping here : Move the endpoint two grids lv4 left (x will be on 136, although if you want it to be perfect, x should be on 134 without grid snap)
6. 01:03:490 (3) - Same here, but just simply copy-paste from (1) when you're done with above
7. 01:04:776 (4) - Hmm, spacing error? Not that hard to catch though
8. 01:07:350 (4,5,6) - I personally dislike how (4) touches 01:05:849 (2). I prefer to create this pattern here:
   
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9. 01:16:785 (4) - Considering the previous 01:15:498 (1,2) forms a straight line, make (3,4) forms a straight line also?
10. 01:37:800 (3) - Slidertick isn't in the center, but not a major problem (:
11. 01:51:309 (2) - I really recommend to add whistle here, fits the synth much :3
12. 01:59:243 (4) - I wonder, why not keep consistent with the symmetry here (copy-paste 01:56:027 (6) and CTRL-H here) ?
13. 02:05:247 (3) - Well, move the clap to slider's end? Clap here isn't supposed to be on the red tick...
14. 02:16:398 (5) - (optional) Curve this a bit encircling (1)? (your previous sliders here are mostly curved, so why not curve this one also)
    
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15. 02:39:771 (3,4) - You might want to add whistle to these two, to build up more variation from the hitsound

1. 00:42:904 (1,2) - Curve these two on an opposite direction, to create more flow?
   
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2. 00:46:335 (1) - Is this moved to the right a bit unintentionally? Because this kind of spacing could give an illusion this is actually 3/4 apart
3. 01:00:059 (1) - Should be moved one grid down and left, so (1,2,3,4,1) will form a better diagonal line
4. 01:04:562 (8,9) - Rather than stacking (9,10), I prefer to make (8,9) as a single slider. Not something you have to fix though
5. 01:13:783 (1) - I wonder, why not just copy-paste the previous (1) and CTRL+J here?
6. 01:23:540 (4) - Sounds a lot better if placed 1/4 earlier. You might want to create a 1/4 slider on 01:23:540 though
7. 01:27:507 (1) - Considering 01:25:791 (1)'s and 01:29:222 (1)'s shape, single straight slider fits better here imo
8. 01:33:510 (3) - Finish on slider's start also, to accompany the cymbal from the song?
9. 01:42:946 (x) - I highly recommend to add a circle here. 5/4 delay between notes sounds awkward, plus, the loud bass sound here should be mapped imo :3
10. 01:47:664 (4) - (optional) Put this on (1)' start, and then CTRL+H to keep symmetry here?
11. 01:51:523 (1,2) - They aren't perfectly stacked. Barely noticeable, though
12. 01:57:849 (2,3) - You can arrange like this, to avoid (3) touching both (1) and (4):
    
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13. 02:07:821 (4,5,6) - Rather than simple 1/2s, why not follow the synth also as you previously did here?
14. 02:12:324 (4,5,6) - Due to the stack's nature, (4) is touching (3). Repeating slider here instead?
    
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15. 02:26:905 (6) - (optional) You can add clap here also, to build more power from the hitsound

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

I feel your timing is a bit off, try this

139.94, 41207

General:
No taiko background
Set easy's cooldown to 0 and no letterbox

Normal:
00:41:187 (1) - unsnapped

spboxer3 wrote:

m4m request~

[soyaH's Taiko]

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  mapping
  

1. 00:06:692 - add note?
2. 00:32:631 (16) - D?
3. 01:56:453 - add note?
   
   
4. unsnap issue
   01:17:643 (3) - (Multi note)
   01:17:643 (4) -
   01:18:071 (6) -
   01:18:072 (7) -
   01:18:500 (10) -
   01:18:501 (11) -

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

oh~well It's good mapset~star and good luck

1. A lot of your mp3 is unused at the end. I think that you need to cut it for it to be rankable.

1. 01:08:647 (1) - You should add a finish here. It's in the music.
2. 01:17:222 (4) - Remove the finish at the end of this slider. It feels really out of place and the music doesn't justify it.
3. 01:42:947 (1,2) - I love how you made these sliders follow the rhythm of the music. It's really nice to play in a map.
4. 01:56:667 (1,2) - I honestly don't think that the music calls for scrunched up sliders like these.
5. 02:24:536 (1) - Make it so this slider is under the previous reverse slider rather than next to it so that each object smoothly leads into another for better flow.
6. 02:25:823 (2) - Remove the finish at the end of this slider for the same reason as 01:17:222 (4).
7. 02:28:395 (2) - Ctrl + R this for better flow so that each object leads into another smoothly.
8. 02:29:253 (3) - If you do the above suggestion, Ctrl + R this also.

1. 00:52:783 (6,1) - There's a small spacing error between these two notes.
2. 00:56:642 (3) - It seems as if you forgot to remove the finish from the beginning of this slider when copying it. If that's not the case, then there still is nothing in the music to back that finish up.
3. 01:04:788 (4,1) - Space these notes farther apart. It's another spacing error.
4. 01:07:361 (4) - Why didn't you add a clap at the beginning of this slider to keep the clap pattern going?
5. 01:08:218 (5) - Add a clap.
6. 01:09:933 (2) - Move this slider down so that it's "blanketing" the previous slider like this. It looks pretty cool.
7. 01:18:937 (1) - Add a finish to this slider. You can hear it in the music.
8. 01:46:163 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:46:377. Listen to the music.
9. 02:05:243 (3) - Remove the clap from the reverse of this slider. It doesn't follow your clap pattern.
10. 02:12:960 (5) - Why don't you arrange this note under (4) like this for better flow?
11. 02:27:109 (6) - Put this note to the left of (5) for smoothness.

1. 01:33:515 (3) - Add a finish to the beginning of this slider. You can hear it in the music.
2. 01:34:372 (1) - Add all of the finishes you hear in the music into this slider.
3. 01:57:954 (2) - Space these all out more from (1) and (3). They almost overlap, making it look sort of odd.
4. 02:17:248 (1) - Add a finish to this note. It's in the music.

1. 01:18:072 (5) - Unsnapped circle.