Touche wrote:

Rankealo ch3, quiero verlo ranked :<

No_Gu wrote:

[hard]
00:05:419 (4) - whislte kk
00:13:668 (3) - finish kk
00:18:698 (5) - clap kk
00:32:351 (1) - finish at the beginning kk
00:36:482 (5) - finish sounds noisy Whistle removed
01:18:339 (3,4,5) - try to use 0.5x slider? Fixed. -Remaped-

No_Gu wrote:

[easy]
00:04:840 (3,4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/230696 Ok.
00:11:153 (3) - y116 Oops, fixed.
00:24:446 (7) - remove the sound of the sliderbody Ok.
01:10:075 (2,4) - clap Ok.
01:11:153 (5) - whislte Ok.
01:15:464 (1,2,3,4) - spacing Fixed.

[insane]
00:07:735 (1) - end at 00:09:357 Fixed.
01:12:590 (4,5,6) - follow vocal sounds not good Ok, I made a different pattern.

Okay, I'm back. I'm sorry If I haven't noticed your post. But anyway, here's your mod. <3

GENERAL

1. I'm not quite sure about your hit sound. I don't really hear any of them. Please increase the volume.

EASY

1. 00:07:735 - This spinner should end at 00:09:182.
   
   
2. 00:20:854 - Add a note here. Make sure you move the green line earlier than this so that this note gets the right hit sound.
   
   
3. 00:49:237 - Remove new combo. Then add new combo on the next note.
   
   
4. Overall Difficulty -1

IGNA'S NORMAL

1. This diff's Distance Spacing is so high. And If I suggested you to reduce this, It's just like saying "make a new diff".
   
   So I guess there's nothing to do here but to just increase circle size to the max.
   
   
2. 00:50:674 - New combo.
   
   
3. 01:03:608 - This spinner should start at 01:03:967.
   
   
4. If you didn't increase Circle Size, Overall Difficulty must be set to 5 or 4.

INSANE

1. 00:14:746 - This note is not really stack with the end of the previous slider. Hope you're aware of that.
   
   
2. 00:38:099 - I hope your aware that these notes (1,2,3,4,5,6) are not placed in the center.
   
   
3. 00:39:536 - High jump. Try this instead:
   SPOILER

   Move (4) at x:144 t:188. In this way, it could improve better gameplay for the player. Move them to the center.
   
   
4. 00:43:848 - ^ (This applies to the two suggestions above.)
   
   
5. 01:26:782 - (8) This note is actually not on the right place. It actually breaks the square shape pattern.

Nice map. Good luck getting it ranked! <3

Philippines wrote:

GENERAL

1. I'm not quite sure about your hit sound. I don't really hear any of them. Please increase the volume.

EASY

1. 00:07:735 - This spinner should end at 00:09:182. Uhm, I think 00:09:357 seems a little better.
   
   
2. 00:20:854 - Add a note here. Make sure you move the green line earlier than this so that this note gets the right hit sound. Ok.
   
   
3. 00:49:237 - Remove new combo. Then add new combo on the next note. Ok.
   
   INSANE
4. 00:14:746 - This note is not really stack with the end of the previous slider. Hope you're aware of that. Fixed.
   
5. 00:38:099 - I hope your aware that these notes (1,2,3,4,5,6) are not placed in the center. These notes are ok xD.
   
6. 00:39:536 - High jump. Try this instead:
   SPOILER

   Move (4) at x:144 t:188. In this way, it could improve better gameplay for the player. Move them to the center. Uhm, this is an insane and there are high jumps like that in the map, so I think it's ok.
   
   
7. 00:43:848 - ^ (This applies to the two suggestions above.) ^
   
   
8. 01:26:782 - (8) This note is actually not on the right place. It actually breaks the square shape pattern. Fixed.

1. Tu BG es de 1023x767,debes reducirlo a 1024x768 no es la gran cosa pero no te tomara mas de 5 segundos en hacerlo
2. Como no hay break, desabilita el letterbox durantes los breaks
3. Y como no es necesario tambien desabilita el countdown
4. Creo que 1996 en Lead-In esta bien pero seria mejor si lo pusiera a 2000

• - 00:15:105 (1) - Esto es muy dificil de leer para los nuevos players,que venga un spinner y una nota rapidamente,sugiero que elimines esta nota, seria mlo correcto
  - 00:19:596 (1) - Remueve este new combo
  - 00:23:728 (7) - En mi opinion si sigues la musica, pondria nuevo combo y aqui 00:25:345 lo removeria,se veria bien
  - 00:26:961 (1) - Hmm aqui podria producir un espera en el map ya que el spacing no es correcto,podrias reducirlo ?
  - 00:38:099 (1) - La misma sugerencia del spinner
  - 01:23:368 (5) - Creo que podrias mejorar el slider un poco mas,ya que a la vista se ve feo

• -- Hmm podrias seguir el formato del tick rate slider ya que es 1,y tu lo pusistes en 2. Lo podrias cambiar a 1?
  - 00:29:476 (5) - Nuevo combo para seguir tu patron

• - 00:12:231 (1) - Se escucha tan vacio este slider,podrias poner un finish al principio

• - 00:23:728 (5) - Con este slider podrias hacer algo similar como lo hicistes aqui 00:24:267
  - 01:06:123 (4) - New combo para seguir tu patron

[Ryuu] wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
00:05:805 (5) - nc Kk
00:06:384 (1) - delete nc Kk
01:08:279 (5) - nc Kk
01:12:231 (7) - ^ Kk
01:12:590 (1) - delete nc Kk
01:13:488 (4) - nc Kk
01:13:848 (1) - delete nc Kk
01:15:105 (6) - nc Kk
01:15:464 (1) - delete nc Kk
01:16:362 (4) - nc Kk

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hard

• - 00:12:231 (1) - Se escucha tan vacio este slider,podrias poner un finish al principio Nice Tip. Kk

[Ranger] wrote:

[Easy]
Not evenly spaced.
Make a constant interval

00:09:716 (1) - -spacing error,Put in x:80 y:116 Fixed.
00:40:434 (5,1) - Spacing error,it`s hard for beginner The spacing here seems good.

[Insane]
00:06:577 (5) - Remove circle Nope.
00:06:770-Add circle(x:60 y:156) Ok.
00:43:668 (6) - Remove circle Ok.

[Ryuu] wrote:

[Easy]

00:00:981 (3) - use distance snap (further - DS) The spacing here is ok.
00:03:297 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:07:735 (1) - start at 00:07:928 Ok.
00:12:590 - add note (clap) Ok.
00:12:949 (5) - delete note Ok.
00:13:309 - add note (clap) Ok.
00:17:979 (5) - DS Fixed.
00:23:368 (6) - nc Ok.
00:25:345 (1) - DS This one seems good.
00:26:961 (1) - ^ (next notes also) Fixed.
00:34:865 (4) - nc Ok.
00:48:877 (4) - DS Fixed.
00:49:596 (1) - flip vertically (ctrl+J) and use DS so the next slider won't touch the previous when using DS Fixed.
00:51:752 (3) - DS Fixed.
00:56:782 (3) - this more cute:

SPOILER

Ok.

00:58:219 (1) - DS Fixed.
01:03:249 (5) - ^ Fixed.
01:06:842 (1,2,3,4) - i think it would be difficult for beginners This isn't hard for beginners.
01:09:716 (1,2) - moved from under the slider Nop.
01:12:590 (1) - DS Fixed.
01:15:464 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:19:057 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:23:368 (5) - make more cute form Fixed.
01:24:267 (1) - start at 01:24:446 Fixed.

[Insane]

00:33:608 (4) - nc Ok.
00:34:686 (1) - move higher or lower than 00:34:865 (2,3,4) Nope.
00:35:584 (5) - nc Ok.

that's all \:D/
good luck ;3

MoodyRPG wrote:

General

1. Tu BG es de 1023x767,debes reducirlo a 1024x768 no es la gran cosa pero no te tomara mas de 5 segundos en hacerlo
2. Como no hay break, desabilita el letterbox durantes los breaks
3. Y como no es necesario tambien desabilita el countdown
4. Creo que 1996 en Lead-In esta bien pero seria mejor si lo pusiera a 2000

Easy

• - 00:15:105 (1) - Esto es muy dificil de leer para los nuevos players,que venga un spinner y una nota rapidamente,sugiero que elimines esta nota, seria mlo correcto Ok.
  - 00:19:596 (1) - Remueve este new combo Ok.
  - 00:23:728 (7) - En mi opinion si sigues la musica, pondria nuevo combo y aqui 00:25:345 lo removeria,se veria bien Creo que esta bien como lo hice
  - 00:26:961 (1) - Hmm aqui podria producir un espera en el map ya que el spacing no es correcto,podrias reducirlo ? Fixed.
  - 00:38:099 (1) - La misma sugerencia del spinner Ok.
  - 01:23:368 (5) - Creo que podrias mejorar el slider un poco mas,ya que a la vista se ve feo Fixed.

Insane

• - 00:23:728 (5) - Con este slider podrias hacer algo similar como lo hicistes aqui 00:24:267 Me gusta como lo hice
  - 01:06:123 (4) - New combo para seguir tu patron Ok.

BeatofIke wrote:

[General]
-Your BG size is 1023 x 767. Resize it to 1024 x 768. Try using this website to resize your BG: http://www.resizemypicture.com Fixed.
-First BPM is off. It should be 78.00 BPM Fixed.
-First offset is off. Should be 190. Fixed.
-Second BPM is correct.
-Second offset is off. It should be 9,335. Fixed.
(Make sure you change this in all difficulties.)
Now that takes care of your BPM/offset issue. I'm going to mod the difficulties.

*NOTE: Please correct the BPM and the offset FIRST before reading my mod, since I used the corrected BPM and offset to mod your map.

[Easy]
00:07:882 (1)- End this spinner at 00:09:335. Omg, I didn't do this xD, Fixed.
00:25:323 (1) - Remove Combo Ok.
00:29:095 (1) - Remove Combo Nope.
00:30:891 (3) - Remove Combo Nope.
00:34:843 (1) - Revome Combo Nope.

This difficulty is usually too hard for an easy (2.5 Stars). Usually, it's 2 stars or under. However, there are some ranked maps that has 2.5 stars on easy difficulty anyway, so I wouldn't worry too much about it. Maybe tone it down a little or you can just leave it as it is. Just a suggestion. I personally think that it will be fine though.

[Insane]
00:06:535 (5) - Add a hit circle here. Ok.
00:06:728 (5) - Remove hit circle. Ok.
00:10:951 (1) - Remove Combo. Nope.
01:27:478 (1) - Remove Combo? Nope.

BeatofIke wrote:

[Hard]
00:07:689 (1) - Remove Finish on spinner. kk
01:19:035 (4) - Add a hit circle here. kk

BeatofIke wrote:

*NOTE: Please correct the BPM and the offset FIRST before reading my mod, since I used the corrected BPM and offset to mod your map.

DaxMasterix wrote:

Eso solamente si es el mismo .mp3 , claro esta.

iMercurial wrote:

If my post was helpful, please give me a kudosu.

1. Insane,Normal,Easy Need Resnap Gleen Line

1. HP+1
2. try this custom clap?http://puu.sh/dMGp
3. 00:11:670 (3) - ugly slider change?
4. 01:21:191 (1,2,3,4) - why put All hitsound lol finish better

1. why same Insane SV? probably MAT/BAT said change this
2. 00:09:873 (2,1,3,4,5) - why overlap 1slider Please correction this
3. 01:12:568 (3,4) - swaps note?

1. diff name change Ignacio's Normal? He/she have guest diff ranked name was Ignacio
2. Why does spacing change?
3. be off Green line you need gleen line resnap
4. map so good

1. fine

S o r d a wrote:

[Dax'Hard]:

1. why same Insane SV? probably MAT/BAT said change this eehhhhhh i like turtles
2. 00:09:873 (2,1,3,4,5) - why overlap 1slider Please correction this OH SHI- Fixed.
3. 01:12:568 (3,4) - swaps note? what?

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:

1. Insane,Normal,Easy Need Resnap Gleen Line Fixed.

[Insane]:

1. HP+1 Ok.
2. try this custom clap?http://puu.sh/dMGp Where?
3. 00:11:670 (3) - ugly slider change? Fixed.
4. 01:21:191 (1,2,3,4) - why put All hitsound lol finish better Omg, I didn't do this xD, Fixed.

phonic wrote:

NC = Add New Combo.
RNC = Remove New Combo.

[General]

1. Disable letterboxing during breaks for all difficulties
2. Please change Taiko BG into a JPEG image
3. AudioLeadIn : 2000
4. Kiai Time : Unify (Is "Dax's Hard" diff to be strange)

[Insane]

1. 00:07:715 (1) - Attract the last of this spin to the big white line Ok.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:131 (x) - You match it by a song when put Note here Ok.
3. 00:11:490 (x) - ^ Uhm, I don't like this one.
4. 00:13:646 (6) - Add NC and finish Ok.
5. 00:35:203 (4) - 1grid up? Fixed.
6. 00:36:101 (4,5) - 2grid left Nope.
7. 00:40:233 (7) - NC Ok.
8. 00:59:634 (6) - ^ Ok.
9. 01:18:317 (3) - ^ Ok.

[Easy]

1. 00:07:908 (1,1) - The beginner will be puzzled very much, This is suggestion to you from me I fixed this before >_>, fixed again.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:646 (1) - This spin is very short, Please lengthen this spin a little more I think this is ok to be an easy.
3. 00:19:574 (5,6) - Do not hide to the 00:17:957 (4) slider Fixed.
4. 00:25:323 (x) - Why is not there Note here? Fixed.
5. 00:29:814 (6) - Do not hide to the 00:28:017 (4) slider Fixed.
6. 00:55:323 (x) - Green line resnap It's snapped lol.
7. 00:58:197 (1) - Add finish Ok.
8. 01:06:820 (1,2,3,4) - I think that I am very difficult for a beginner, This is suggestion to you from me Fixed.
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:17:598 (4) - Do not hide to the 01:15:442 (1) slider I think this is ok because the spacing.
10. 01:23:346 (5) - lose a slider and add Note This seems ok to be an easy.
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:24:245 (1) - Add finish, This is suggestion to you from me Ok.
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:06:364 (4) - seperate it, like 00:01:733 (3,1) using the 1.6 DS.
2. 00:07:908 (1,1) - Such a short time between spinner and note, easpecially for easy diff, so make the spinner end at 00:09:335.
3. 00:19:574 (5,6) - keep the 0.9 DS is better to recognize.
4. 00:26:939 (1) - ^

1. 00:11:311 (4) - I prefer put it at 00:11:131, then put the later one (the slider00:11:670 (5) )at 00:11:490 and add a note at 00:11:849.
2. 00:33:047 (2) - Seperating it will better to recognize.

1. 00:06:364 (4,5,6) - Here is a long syllable, so the note here dosen't make sense. Remove it, add a slider from 00:06:364 to 00:06:750, an other one from 00:06:943 to 00:07:329. That's well be better. :3
2. layout in such diff is pretty nice, nothing to say.

1. Seems fine to me :3

1. 00:20:494 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - It doesn't make sense here, I prefer deleting it and add finish at 00:20:854

KayeSara wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:06:364 (4) - seperate it, like 00:01:733 (3,1) using the 1.6 DS. Fixed.
2. 00:07:908 (1,1) - Such a short time between spinner and note, easpecially for easy diff, so make the spinner end at 00:09:335. Ok.
3. 00:19:574 (5,6) - keep the 0.9 DS is better to recognize. I like how I did this one xD.
4. 00:26:939 (1) - ^ ^

phonic wrote:

[Dax's Hard]

1. 00:37:358 (6) - NC Ok
2. 00:40:233 (x) - You match it by a song when put Note here Ok
3. 00:45:981 (x) - ^ Ok
4. 00:52:269 (1) - Is finish necessary for this spin? I KNOW ASDSADSA Fixed.
5. 00:55:323 (1) - Add finish to the head of the slider Ok
6. 00:58:197 (1) - ^ Ok
7. 01:09:694 (1) - ^ Ok
8. 01:18:317 (3) - NC Ok
9. 01:19:574 (5) - This is suggestion to you from me
   SPOILER

   
   Hm.. Pretty But no.
10. 01:19:574 (5,6,7) - You exclude finish, and please add whistle or clap Whistle Fixed.

KayeSara wrote:

[Dax's Hard]

1. 1. 00:06:364 (4,5,6) - Here is a long syllable, so the note here dosen't make sense. Remove it, add a slider from 00:06:364 to 00:06:750, an other one from 00:06:943 to 00:07:329. That's well be better. :3 Yes.. But i can't broken the Pattern. Are divide en 3 sections and the Line is a part of that.. lololo But thanks for the Sugg. I will ''maybe'' Change it.
   2. layout in such diff is pretty nice, nothing to say. Don't forget my name \o/

[Colours]
Combo1 : 119,159,183
Combo2 : 253,200,230
Combo3 : 151,211,240
Combo4 : 226,131,140

Wiinter wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
00:26:692 - unsnapped timing section huh Fixed.