Ignacio wrote:

Listo

ErufenRito wrote:

General:

Video offset: podrias intentar un -200, se veria mejor Ok.
Insane:

00:14:566 (12) - Borra, y extiende el slider 00:14:207 (11) - hasta donde aqui. Tambien stackealos adecuadamente usando distance space = 0, y con el grid snap apagado Fixed.
01:14:027 (4,5) - No creo que sea muy intuitivo que uses justamente ese spacing, considerando que poca antes tenias 01:12:590 (4,5), Resumen, quita ese jump ahi. Fixed.
01:14:386 - Add note No me parecía que quedara muy bien, pero anyways.

Tienes algunos jumps que no son muy intuitivos, la cual con un cambio adecuado de new combo en algunas notas podria ayudar, pero soy muy malo para new combos asi que meh. Ejemplo: 00:43:668 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Easy:

00:19:596 (1,2,3) - No stackees objetos asi en un easy, Solo los confundiras mas. De hecho, recomiendo no usar jamas stacks en los easies, pero si tu insistes, supongo que moviendo 00:20:854 (3) seria suficiente Fixed. Y lo tendré en cuenta a futuro
00:23:728 (6) - Acortalo hasta 00:24:087 - Fixed.
00:24:985 (8) - Borralo... No 1/2 en un easy Ok.
00:36:213 (1) - Deberia empezar en 00:36:303 y terminar en 00:37:740 - Fixed.
00:38:099 (1,2,3,4) - Stacks asi esta mas aceptable para mi (Ahem no tienes que cambiar nada de aqui, solo doy ejemplo de como un stack aceptable en easy deberia ser)
00:50:674 (2,3) - Unstack Fixed.
01:08:279 (5,1) - Spacing Fixed.
01:24:356 (1) - Deberia empezar en 01:24:267 - FFFFU, sabía que quedaba mal, e hice caso al otro modeo xD, fixed.

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ A request from My(also LaceWingField) Queue !!~

[Easy]
Your hit sound is really not good. especially the claps.
Please Resnap your notes.
Please do not put your notes in the red tick. Since this is a Easy. Some notes need to be in red ticks.
Some sliders looks so ugly to me. please fix it. I will try it later xD.
00:06:384(4) = spacing Fixed.
00:11:153(3,4,5) ^ Fixed.
00:25:345(1) = remove note since this is not a beat.[/color] Sorry but I prefer this way.

[Insane]
some sliders look so ugly to me. please fix it. I will try it later xD.
Please snap all notes. some object hasn't been snap yet. Fixed.

Okay~ That's all i got. :3
Good Luck!

ErufenRito wrote:

Hard:
Los hitsounds... urghhh! FUCKING BUGS. yo que recuerdo se lo habia pasado con los hitsounds.. Well.. Fixed.
00:14:027 (5) - Muevelo a 00:14:207, y deberias borrar el spinner tambien, y agregar nota en 00:14:746 - kk

Shana Aisaka wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
Please snap all notes. some object hasn't been snap yet. Always. The Bugs.. I think. Fixed.

1. general: add the name of guest diff's mappers on the tag~

-Sekai- wrote:

[Dax's Hard]

1. 00:02:332 (4) - maybe making it lined with the 00:01:753 (3) - ? I make this with ''Diagonal symmetry'' [Ctrl+c/Ctrl+v/Ctrl+j/Ctrl+h] If I making lined with the other circle the Symmetry/Pattern will Broken.. The order asdasd
2. 00:04:840 (3,4) - ^ ^
3. 00:19:416 (1) - remove NC and add it to the 00:19:596 (2) - Hm .. I'll keep that in mind Because i put the NC Following the Sound Changes. - Kk
4. 00:42:410 (5) - NC~ Kk
5. 01:02:710 (6) - ^ Kk
6. 01:05:584 (5) - ^ listen to vocal when it's starts~ lol Kk
7. 01:13:848 (5) - ^ Kk

I liked this diff, Nice work :3 Thanks so Much

-Sekai- wrote:

In-game pm~

1. general: add the name of guest diff's mappers on the tag~

Oops, I forgot it xD.

[Easy]

1. general: you have to use no more then one Distance snapping on Easy diff~
   
   
   1. 00:00:981 (2) - spacing + whistle, fixed the spacing of the other notes after that :3 Fixed.
   2. 00:03:297 (1) - whistle Ok.
   3. 00:04:840 (3) - whistle on the start & end of this slider Ok.
   4. 00:06:384 (4) - ^ Ok.
   5. 00:07:735 (1) - finish on the spinner Ok.
   6. 00:11:153 (3) - spacing and ugly slider, how about using this one, if you like then use this code~ I like it, I'll use it.
      
      Simple slider

      
      

      440,124,11153,2,0,B|444:216|352:240,2,150,8|0|0

   7. 00:12:590 (4) - delete this note Ok.
   8. 00:12:949 (4) - add a clap then fix the spacing ~ Fixed.
   9. 00:13:668 (1) - finish~ Ok.
   10. 00:20:854 (3) - delete Ok.
   11. 00:24:446 (7) - remove the claps and add a whistle Ok.
   12. 00:26:602 (3) - delete Ok.
   13. 00:30:913 (7) - NC~ Fixed.
   14. 00:58:219 (4) - ^ Fixed.
   15. 00:59:656 (5) - ugly slider again~ I'll use this too xD.
       
       =w=

       
       

       80,180,59656,2,2,B|96:272|188:252,2,150

   16. 01:10:434 (3) - use grip size 3 (small) and move it one grip down and one grip left Fixed.
   17. 01:10:794 (4) - 2 grip up and one left
   18. 01:11:153 (5) - delete the 3rd point on that slider to make it more nicer, like this I changed the slider, but not in that way.
       
       SPOILER

       
   19. 01:12:590 (1,2,3) - you better use normal soft hitsounds, and add a whistles if you did that~ Ok.
   20. 01:24:267 (1) - whistle on the spinner~ Ok.

[Insane]

[list][*]00:14:207 (11) - use this slider if you like it~ I like it, I'll use it.

SPOILER

456,108,14207,2,0,B|408:40|312:48,1,160,6|0

[*]00:16:362 (8) - ^ ^

SPOILER

284,112,16362,2,0,B|329:191|300:236|271:257|281:155|390:184|414:226,1,240

[*]00:17:979 (5) - ^ ^

SPOILER

272,224,17979,2,0,B|168:232|136:148|136:148,2,160,4|8|2

[*]00:48:339 (6) - make the slider like this 00:47:979 (5) - it's looks nicer I like the way that I did it xD.
[*]01:06:213 (5) - 1 grip left Fixed.
[*]01:16:542 (6) - NC~ Fixed.
[*]01:22:291 (8) - ^ Fixed.
[*]01:27:500 (10) - ^ Fixed.

Thx you a lot for the big mod

1. remove countdown in all diffs

1. add tags in this diff
2. 00:01:753 (3) - even if you use proper spacing, reverse arrow is too close to the note before, so it looks not so good, so move last point to (248,40)
3. 00:07:735 (1) - snap spinner end to 00:09:357
4. 00:10:434 (2) - clap
5. 00:11:153 (3) - end point finish
6. 00:15:105 (1) - no clap
7. 00:17:261 (4) - only end clap, move endpoint to (296,240)
8. 00:17:979 (5) - move middle point to (256,72)
9. etc.

1. 00:33:069 (2) - don't stack here ? because there are some "oo oo" rhythms before, normal players may press too early here
2. 00:33:967 (4) - delete note ? = =
3. 01:26:961 (1) - middle point 3 grids up, makes blanket look better

1. 00:14:207 (5) - spacing?

1. 00:10:973 (1) - make 1/2 slider,,,
2. 00:16:362 (8) - endpoint clap
3. 00:12:590 (1) - blue color blends in the background video... plz change to green
4. 00:31:093 (1,2,3) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot170-2.jpg this looks better
5. 00:35:225 (3,4) - 1/2 later these 2 notes?
6. 01:00:374 - add a note plz ;.; I duggest stacking with 7
7. 01:21:213 (1) - new combo ? follow pioints look better
8. 01:22:830 (3,4) - symmetrical with 1 and 2
9. 01:23:368 (5) - new combo ? follow pioints look better

No_Gu wrote:

[hard]
00:09:357 (1) - finish at the beginning Kk
01:01:991 (5) - remove clap at the beginning Srry. Hitsouds at 1/2 - 1/3
01:18:339 (3) - finish at the beginning Kk

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Dax's Hard

1. 00:14:207 (5) - spacing? Ctrl+J Changed.

No_Gu wrote:

remove anime from tags.It will appear at Genre after a BAT checked Ok.
btw It seems you use the mp3 of the ranked map.I don't think this timing is fine.But I'm not able to find a accurate timing.try to ask some timinger to get accurate timing.
00:07:735 (1) - end at 00:09:357
[easy]
00:01:753 (3) - change the director of slider.don't overlap 2 Changed the slider.
00:03:297 (1) - spacing Fixed.
00:04:840 (3,4) - remove whistle and add whistle on four circles to remove the sliderbody sound Uh ok.
00:10:434 (2) - clap Ups, I forgot this xD, fixed.
00:12:949 (4) - whistle instead of clap Ok.
00:23:728 (6) - NC Nop.
00:29:836 (6) - stack with 4's beginning Ok.
00:31:632 (3) - y276 Ok.
00:38:099 (1,2,3,4) - move to center It's ok in this way.
00:40:973 (1) - spacing Fixed.
00:55:345 (1) - finish at the beginning Ok.
01:09:716 (1) - spacing Fixed.
01:17:620 (1) - finish on the end Ok.
01:27:500 (1) - move to center This note is ok.

[insane]
00:16:362 (8) - clap in the end Fixed.
00:24:806 (7,8) - make them straight
00:58:219 (1) - 1 gird right&up I think this is ok.
01:21:213 (4) - NC for huge jump Ok

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

General

1. remove countdown in all diffs

Easy

1. add tags in this diff I forgot it xD.
2. 00:01:753 (3) - even if you use proper spacing, reverse arrow is too close to the note before, so it looks not so good, so move last point to (248,40) Fixed.
3. 00:07:735 (1) - snap spinner end to 00:09:357 Ok.
4. 00:10:434 (2) - clap Fixed.
5. 00:11:153 (3) - end point finish Ok.
6. 00:15:105 (1) - no clap Ok.
7. 00:17:261 (4) - only end clap, move endpoint to (296,240) Ok.
8. 00:17:979 (5) - move middle point to (256,72) Ok.
9. etc.

Insane

1. 00:10:973 (1) - make 1/2 slider,,, I don't like that way.
2. 00:16:362 (8) - endpoint clap Ok.
3. 00:12:590 (1) - blue color blends in the background video... plz change to green Ok.
4. 00:31:093 (1,2,3) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot170-2.jpg this looks better Fixed.
5. 00:35:225 (3,4) - 1/2 later these 2 notes? I think this seems good.
6. 01:00:374 - add a note plz ;.; I duggest stacking with 7 Nop.
7. 01:21:213 (1) - new combo ? follow pioints look better Fixed.
8. 01:22:830 (3,4) - symmetrical with 1 and 2 Ok.
9. 01:23:368 (5) - new combo ? follow pioints look better Nop.

Touche wrote:

IRC MODDING ~ I paste the savelog here :3

EASY

20:12 <Touche> : EASY
20:13 <Touche> : 00:12:949 - se veria nice en 260,116 (el mismo lugar que el circulo 2)
20:13 <Touche> : imo
20:13 <Darksonic> : LEMMEE
20:13 <Darksonic> : see
20:14 <Touche> : 00:34:865 - new combo
20:14 <Darksonic> : Quise ponerlo a la altura del slider anterior
20:14 <Darksonic> : pero well
20:14 <Darksonic> : lo movere
20:14 <Touche> : 00:39:536 - new combo
20:14 <Touche> : 00:45:285 - new combo
20:14 <Darksonic> : uhm
20:14 <Touche> : imo
20:14 <Darksonic> : Seguro que por 2 notas deberia poner nc
20:14 <Touche> : IMOOOOO
20:14 <Darksonic> : ?
20:14 <Touche> : if u want
20:14 <Darksonic> : si lo se
20:14 <Darksonic> : XD
20:14 <Touche> : es tu map
20:14 <Touche> :
20:15 <Darksonic> : Bueno
20:15 <Darksonic> : no te enojes plz (?)
20:15 <Touche> : 01:15:464 - new combo
20:16 <Touche> : 01:17:620 - delete new combo
20:16 <Touche> : no estoy enojado ch3 <3
20:16 <Darksonic> : ese si lo usare
20:16 <Touche> : 01:19:057 - new combo
20:16 <Darksonic> : k
20:16 <Touche> : bue

INSANE

20:20 <Touche> : ok INSANE
20:20 <Darksonic> : okokokk
20:20 <Touche> : NOTAS
20:21 <Touche> : UNSNAPPED
20:21 <Darksonic> : rly
20:21 <Touche> : mira bien
20:21 <Darksonic> : se habra bugeado
20:21 <Darksonic> : ya las habia snappeado
20:21 <Darksonic> : pero WELL
20:21 <Touche> : en el primer timing
20:21 <Touche> : ch3
20:21 <Touche> : ok snapea eso
20:21 <Darksonic> : ya lo arregle
20:21 <Darksonic> : xd
20:21 <Touche> : updatea el insane
20:21 <Touche> : asi me guio mas facil
20:22 <Touche> : te espero ch3
20:22 <Darksonic> : wait
20:22 <Touche> : well
20:23 <Touche> : aqui ya se updateo ch3
20:23 <Darksonic> : aca todavia carga
20:23 <Darksonic> : lol
20:23 <Touche> : lolol
20:23 <Touche> : ahora si estan snapped :>
20:24 <Darksonic> : okay
20:24 <Darksonic> : wat now
20:24 <Touche> : dax tambien tenia unsnapped, ahi le dije
20:24 <Darksonic> : okay
20:25 <Touche> : ok ahora si
20:26 <Touche> : nada
20:26 <Touche> : really, NADA
20:26 <Touche> : INSANE IS GUD
20:27 <Darksonic> : nada?
20:27 <Darksonic> : de verdaD?
20:27 <Darksonic> : <3
20:27 <Touche> : seh
20:27 <Touche> : Gratz, well
20:27 <Touche> : modeado :>
20:27 <Darksonic> : :3
20:27 <Touche> : guardo log
20:27 <Darksonic> : gracias
20:27 <Darksonic> : copialo ahi
20:27 <Darksonic> : y te doy el kdddkdk

Hi there! Here's your mod. Oh and btw, I downloaded your map and I only got Dax's Hard Diff. Take a look: D: & D:

GENERAL

1. Reupload your beatmap. Make sure you have all the diffs included into that folder. Use FULL SUBMIT.

DAX'S HARD

1. Overall Difficulty -1
   
   
2. 00:22:111 - Move the slider's first point one grid up.

Philippines wrote:

Hi there! Here's your mod. Oh and btw, I downloaded your map and I only got Dax's Hard Diff. Take a look: D: & D:

GENERAL

1. Reupload your beatmap. Make sure you have all the diffs included into that folder. Use FULL SUBMIT.

DAX'S HARD

1. Overall Difficulty -1
   
   
2. 00:22:111 - Move the slider's first point one grid up.

suzutsukikanade wrote:

[General]
Nothing Bad.

[Easy]
00:40:434 (5): Remove whistle here. Ok.
00:43:488 (6): Start NC here. Ok.
00:49:237 (5): ^ Ok.
00:49:596 (1): End slider in 00:50:315, i think is better. Ok, it seems a little better.
00:50:674 (2): End slider in 00:51:392. Also, add finish in the end. Ok.
01:24:267 (1): Remove whistle and add Finish here. Fixed.

[Insane]
Looks good~

Good Luck in your map and star

Philippines wrote:

DAX'S HARD

1. Overall Difficulty -1 kk
   
   
2. 00:22:111 - Move the slider's first point one grid up. kk

suzutsukikanade wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
00:15:105: Add note here and in this note, add finish? Ok.
00:19:237 (1,2.3): I think it does not mix well ... I suggest you change this or change this to another pattern. You are not required to change that. Is for the vocal. I can't make another stuff. would have to change all the pattern..
00:51:752 (1): Remove new combo. Ok

Touche wrote:

Rankealo ch3, quiero verlo ranked :<

No_Gu wrote:

[hard]
00:05:419 (4) - whislte kk
00:13:668 (3) - finish kk
00:18:698 (5) - clap kk
00:32:351 (1) - finish at the beginning kk
00:36:482 (5) - finish sounds noisy Whistle removed
01:18:339 (3,4,5) - try to use 0.5x slider? Fixed. -Remaped-

No_Gu wrote:

[easy]
00:04:840 (3,4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/230696 Ok.
00:11:153 (3) - y116 Oops, fixed.
00:24:446 (7) - remove the sound of the sliderbody Ok.
01:10:075 (2,4) - clap Ok.
01:11:153 (5) - whislte Ok.
01:15:464 (1,2,3,4) - spacing Fixed.

[insane]
00:07:735 (1) - end at 00:09:357 Fixed.
01:12:590 (4,5,6) - follow vocal sounds not good Ok, I made a different pattern.

Okay, I'm back. I'm sorry If I haven't noticed your post. But anyway, here's your mod. <3

GENERAL

1. I'm not quite sure about your hit sound. I don't really hear any of them. Please increase the volume.

EASY

1. 00:07:735 - This spinner should end at 00:09:182.
   
   
2. 00:20:854 - Add a note here. Make sure you move the green line earlier than this so that this note gets the right hit sound.
   
   
3. 00:49:237 - Remove new combo. Then add new combo on the next note.
   
   
4. Overall Difficulty -1

IGNA'S NORMAL

1. This diff's Distance Spacing is so high. And If I suggested you to reduce this, It's just like saying "make a new diff".
   
   So I guess there's nothing to do here but to just increase circle size to the max.
   
   
2. 00:50:674 - New combo.
   
   
3. 01:03:608 - This spinner should start at 01:03:967.
   
   
4. If you didn't increase Circle Size, Overall Difficulty must be set to 5 or 4.

INSANE

1. 00:14:746 - This note is not really stack with the end of the previous slider. Hope you're aware of that.
   
   
2. 00:38:099 - I hope your aware that these notes (1,2,3,4,5,6) are not placed in the center.
   
   
3. 00:39:536 - High jump. Try this instead:
   SPOILER

   Move (4) at x:144 t:188. In this way, it could improve better gameplay for the player. Move them to the center.
   
   
4. 00:43:848 - ^ (This applies to the two suggestions above.)
   
   
5. 01:26:782 - (8) This note is actually not on the right place. It actually breaks the square shape pattern.

Nice map. Good luck getting it ranked! <3

Philippines wrote:

GENERAL

1. I'm not quite sure about your hit sound. I don't really hear any of them. Please increase the volume.

EASY

1. 00:07:735 - This spinner should end at 00:09:182. Uhm, I think 00:09:357 seems a little better.
   
   
2. 00:20:854 - Add a note here. Make sure you move the green line earlier than this so that this note gets the right hit sound. Ok.
   
   
3. 00:49:237 - Remove new combo. Then add new combo on the next note. Ok.
   
   INSANE
4. 00:14:746 - This note is not really stack with the end of the previous slider. Hope you're aware of that. Fixed.
   
5. 00:38:099 - I hope your aware that these notes (1,2,3,4,5,6) are not placed in the center. These notes are ok xD.
   
6. 00:39:536 - High jump. Try this instead:
   SPOILER

   Move (4) at x:144 t:188. In this way, it could improve better gameplay for the player. Move them to the center. Uhm, this is an insane and there are high jumps like that in the map, so I think it's ok.
   
   
7. 00:43:848 - ^ (This applies to the two suggestions above.) ^
   
   
8. 01:26:782 - (8) This note is actually not on the right place. It actually breaks the square shape pattern. Fixed.

1. Tu BG es de 1023x767,debes reducirlo a 1024x768 no es la gran cosa pero no te tomara mas de 5 segundos en hacerlo
2. Como no hay break, desabilita el letterbox durantes los breaks
3. Y como no es necesario tambien desabilita el countdown
4. Creo que 1996 en Lead-In esta bien pero seria mejor si lo pusiera a 2000

• - 00:15:105 (1) - Esto es muy dificil de leer para los nuevos players,que venga un spinner y una nota rapidamente,sugiero que elimines esta nota, seria mlo correcto
  - 00:19:596 (1) - Remueve este new combo
  - 00:23:728 (7) - En mi opinion si sigues la musica, pondria nuevo combo y aqui 00:25:345 lo removeria,se veria bien
  - 00:26:961 (1) - Hmm aqui podria producir un espera en el map ya que el spacing no es correcto,podrias reducirlo ?
  - 00:38:099 (1) - La misma sugerencia del spinner
  - 01:23:368 (5) - Creo que podrias mejorar el slider un poco mas,ya que a la vista se ve feo

• -- Hmm podrias seguir el formato del tick rate slider ya que es 1,y tu lo pusistes en 2. Lo podrias cambiar a 1?
  - 00:29:476 (5) - Nuevo combo para seguir tu patron

• - 00:12:231 (1) - Se escucha tan vacio este slider,podrias poner un finish al principio

• - 00:23:728 (5) - Con este slider podrias hacer algo similar como lo hicistes aqui 00:24:267
  - 01:06:123 (4) - New combo para seguir tu patron

[Ryuu] wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
00:05:805 (5) - nc Kk
00:06:384 (1) - delete nc Kk
01:08:279 (5) - nc Kk
01:12:231 (7) - ^ Kk
01:12:590 (1) - delete nc Kk
01:13:488 (4) - nc Kk
01:13:848 (1) - delete nc Kk
01:15:105 (6) - nc Kk
01:15:464 (1) - delete nc Kk
01:16:362 (4) - nc Kk

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hard

• - 00:12:231 (1) - Se escucha tan vacio este slider,podrias poner un finish al principio Nice Tip. Kk

[Ranger] wrote:

[Easy]
Not evenly spaced.
Make a constant interval

00:09:716 (1) - -spacing error,Put in x:80 y:116 Fixed.
00:40:434 (5,1) - Spacing error,it`s hard for beginner The spacing here seems good.

[Insane]
00:06:577 (5) - Remove circle Nope.
00:06:770-Add circle(x:60 y:156) Ok.
00:43:668 (6) - Remove circle Ok.

[Ryuu] wrote:

[Easy]

00:00:981 (3) - use distance snap (further - DS) The spacing here is ok.
00:03:297 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:07:735 (1) - start at 00:07:928 Ok.
00:12:590 - add note (clap) Ok.
00:12:949 (5) - delete note Ok.
00:13:309 - add note (clap) Ok.
00:17:979 (5) - DS Fixed.
00:23:368 (6) - nc Ok.
00:25:345 (1) - DS This one seems good.
00:26:961 (1) - ^ (next notes also) Fixed.
00:34:865 (4) - nc Ok.
00:48:877 (4) - DS Fixed.
00:49:596 (1) - flip vertically (ctrl+J) and use DS so the next slider won't touch the previous when using DS Fixed.
00:51:752 (3) - DS Fixed.
00:56:782 (3) - this more cute:

SPOILER

Ok.

00:58:219 (1) - DS Fixed.
01:03:249 (5) - ^ Fixed.
01:06:842 (1,2,3,4) - i think it would be difficult for beginners This isn't hard for beginners.
01:09:716 (1,2) - moved from under the slider Nop.
01:12:590 (1) - DS Fixed.
01:15:464 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:19:057 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:23:368 (5) - make more cute form Fixed.
01:24:267 (1) - start at 01:24:446 Fixed.

[Insane]

00:33:608 (4) - nc Ok.
00:34:686 (1) - move higher or lower than 00:34:865 (2,3,4) Nope.
00:35:584 (5) - nc Ok.

that's all \:D/
good luck ;3

MoodyRPG wrote:

General

1. Tu BG es de 1023x767,debes reducirlo a 1024x768 no es la gran cosa pero no te tomara mas de 5 segundos en hacerlo
2. Como no hay break, desabilita el letterbox durantes los breaks
3. Y como no es necesario tambien desabilita el countdown
4. Creo que 1996 en Lead-In esta bien pero seria mejor si lo pusiera a 2000

Easy

• - 00:15:105 (1) - Esto es muy dificil de leer para los nuevos players,que venga un spinner y una nota rapidamente,sugiero que elimines esta nota, seria mlo correcto Ok.
  - 00:19:596 (1) - Remueve este new combo Ok.
  - 00:23:728 (7) - En mi opinion si sigues la musica, pondria nuevo combo y aqui 00:25:345 lo removeria,se veria bien Creo que esta bien como lo hice
  - 00:26:961 (1) - Hmm aqui podria producir un espera en el map ya que el spacing no es correcto,podrias reducirlo ? Fixed.
  - 00:38:099 (1) - La misma sugerencia del spinner Ok.
  - 01:23:368 (5) - Creo que podrias mejorar el slider un poco mas,ya que a la vista se ve feo Fixed.

Insane

• - 00:23:728 (5) - Con este slider podrias hacer algo similar como lo hicistes aqui 00:24:267 Me gusta como lo hice
  - 01:06:123 (4) - New combo para seguir tu patron Ok.

BeatofIke wrote:

[General]
-Your BG size is 1023 x 767. Resize it to 1024 x 768. Try using this website to resize your BG: http://www.resizemypicture.com Fixed.
-First BPM is off. It should be 78.00 BPM Fixed.
-First offset is off. Should be 190. Fixed.
-Second BPM is correct.
-Second offset is off. It should be 9,335. Fixed.
(Make sure you change this in all difficulties.)
Now that takes care of your BPM/offset issue. I'm going to mod the difficulties.

*NOTE: Please correct the BPM and the offset FIRST before reading my mod, since I used the corrected BPM and offset to mod your map.

[Easy]
00:07:882 (1)- End this spinner at 00:09:335. Omg, I didn't do this xD, Fixed.
00:25:323 (1) - Remove Combo Ok.
00:29:095 (1) - Remove Combo Nope.
00:30:891 (3) - Remove Combo Nope.
00:34:843 (1) - Revome Combo Nope.

This difficulty is usually too hard for an easy (2.5 Stars). Usually, it's 2 stars or under. However, there are some ranked maps that has 2.5 stars on easy difficulty anyway, so I wouldn't worry too much about it. Maybe tone it down a little or you can just leave it as it is. Just a suggestion. I personally think that it will be fine though.

[Insane]
00:06:535 (5) - Add a hit circle here. Ok.
00:06:728 (5) - Remove hit circle. Ok.
00:10:951 (1) - Remove Combo. Nope.
01:27:478 (1) - Remove Combo? Nope.

BeatofIke wrote:

[Hard]
00:07:689 (1) - Remove Finish on spinner. kk
01:19:035 (4) - Add a hit circle here. kk

BeatofIke wrote:

*NOTE: Please correct the BPM and the offset FIRST before reading my mod, since I used the corrected BPM and offset to mod your map.

DaxMasterix wrote:

Eso solamente si es el mismo .mp3 , claro esta.

iMercurial wrote:

If my post was helpful, please give me a kudosu.

1. Insane,Normal,Easy Need Resnap Gleen Line

1. HP+1
2. try this custom clap?http://puu.sh/dMGp
3. 00:11:670 (3) - ugly slider change?
4. 01:21:191 (1,2,3,4) - why put All hitsound lol finish better

1. why same Insane SV? probably MAT/BAT said change this
2. 00:09:873 (2,1,3,4,5) - why overlap 1slider Please correction this
3. 01:12:568 (3,4) - swaps note?

1. diff name change Ignacio's Normal? He/she have guest diff ranked name was Ignacio
2. Why does spacing change?
3. be off Green line you need gleen line resnap
4. map so good

1. fine

S o r d a wrote:

[Dax'Hard]:

1. why same Insane SV? probably MAT/BAT said change this eehhhhhh i like turtles
2. 00:09:873 (2,1,3,4,5) - why overlap 1slider Please correction this OH SHI- Fixed.
3. 01:12:568 (3,4) - swaps note? what?

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:

1. Insane,Normal,Easy Need Resnap Gleen Line Fixed.

[Insane]:

1. HP+1 Ok.
2. try this custom clap?http://puu.sh/dMGp Where?
3. 00:11:670 (3) - ugly slider change? Fixed.
4. 01:21:191 (1,2,3,4) - why put All hitsound lol finish better Omg, I didn't do this xD, Fixed.

phonic wrote:

NC = Add New Combo.
RNC = Remove New Combo.

[General]

1. Disable letterboxing during breaks for all difficulties
2. Please change Taiko BG into a JPEG image
3. AudioLeadIn : 2000
4. Kiai Time : Unify (Is "Dax's Hard" diff to be strange)

[Insane]

1. 00:07:715 (1) - Attract the last of this spin to the big white line Ok.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:131 (x) - You match it by a song when put Note here Ok.
3. 00:11:490 (x) - ^ Uhm, I don't like this one.
4. 00:13:646 (6) - Add NC and finish Ok.
5. 00:35:203 (4) - 1grid up? Fixed.
6. 00:36:101 (4,5) - 2grid left Nope.
7. 00:40:233 (7) - NC Ok.
8. 00:59:634 (6) - ^ Ok.
9. 01:18:317 (3) - ^ Ok.

[Easy]

1. 00:07:908 (1,1) - The beginner will be puzzled very much, This is suggestion to you from me I fixed this before >_>, fixed again.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:646 (1) - This spin is very short, Please lengthen this spin a little more I think this is ok to be an easy.
3. 00:19:574 (5,6) - Do not hide to the 00:17:957 (4) slider Fixed.
4. 00:25:323 (x) - Why is not there Note here? Fixed.
5. 00:29:814 (6) - Do not hide to the 00:28:017 (4) slider Fixed.
6. 00:55:323 (x) - Green line resnap It's snapped lol.
7. 00:58:197 (1) - Add finish Ok.
8. 01:06:820 (1,2,3,4) - I think that I am very difficult for a beginner, This is suggestion to you from me Fixed.
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:17:598 (4) - Do not hide to the 01:15:442 (1) slider I think this is ok because the spacing.
10. 01:23:346 (5) - lose a slider and add Note This seems ok to be an easy.
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:24:245 (1) - Add finish, This is suggestion to you from me Ok.
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:06:364 (4) - seperate it, like 00:01:733 (3,1) using the 1.6 DS.
2. 00:07:908 (1,1) - Such a short time between spinner and note, easpecially for easy diff, so make the spinner end at 00:09:335.
3. 00:19:574 (5,6) - keep the 0.9 DS is better to recognize.
4. 00:26:939 (1) - ^

1. 00:11:311 (4) - I prefer put it at 00:11:131, then put the later one (the slider00:11:670 (5) )at 00:11:490 and add a note at 00:11:849.
2. 00:33:047 (2) - Seperating it will better to recognize.

1. 00:06:364 (4,5,6) - Here is a long syllable, so the note here dosen't make sense. Remove it, add a slider from 00:06:364 to 00:06:750, an other one from 00:06:943 to 00:07:329. That's well be better. :3
2. layout in such diff is pretty nice, nothing to say.

1. Seems fine to me :3

1. 00:20:494 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - It doesn't make sense here, I prefer deleting it and add finish at 00:20:854

KayeSara wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:06:364 (4) - seperate it, like 00:01:733 (3,1) using the 1.6 DS. Fixed.
2. 00:07:908 (1,1) - Such a short time between spinner and note, easpecially for easy diff, so make the spinner end at 00:09:335. Ok.
3. 00:19:574 (5,6) - keep the 0.9 DS is better to recognize. I like how I did this one xD.
4. 00:26:939 (1) - ^ ^

phonic wrote:

[Dax's Hard]

1. 00:37:358 (6) - NC Ok
2. 00:40:233 (x) - You match it by a song when put Note here Ok
3. 00:45:981 (x) - ^ Ok
4. 00:52:269 (1) - Is finish necessary for this spin? I KNOW ASDSADSA Fixed.
5. 00:55:323 (1) - Add finish to the head of the slider Ok
6. 00:58:197 (1) - ^ Ok
7. 01:09:694 (1) - ^ Ok
8. 01:18:317 (3) - NC Ok
9. 01:19:574 (5) - This is suggestion to you from me
   SPOILER

   
   Hm.. Pretty But no.
10. 01:19:574 (5,6,7) - You exclude finish, and please add whistle or clap Whistle Fixed.

KayeSara wrote:

[Dax's Hard]

1. 1. 00:06:364 (4,5,6) - Here is a long syllable, so the note here dosen't make sense. Remove it, add a slider from 00:06:364 to 00:06:750, an other one from 00:06:943 to 00:07:329. That's well be better. :3 Yes.. But i can't broken the Pattern. Are divide en 3 sections and the Line is a part of that.. lololo But thanks for the Sugg. I will ''maybe'' Change it.
   2. layout in such diff is pretty nice, nothing to say. Don't forget my name \o/

[Colours]
Combo1 : 119,159,183
Combo2 : 253,200,230
Combo3 : 151,211,240
Combo4 : 226,131,140

Wiinter wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
00:26:692 - unsnapped timing section huh Fixed.

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Dax's Hard
00:46:071 (6) - Agrega nota Well~ Changed.
00:46:251 (8) - Agrega nota http://puu.sh/fuR2 para hacer un stream o has un slider con repeats ~ Changed.
00:52:269 (1) - El spinner deberia empezar aca 00:52:448 (1) terminalo en el mismo punto Of course~ Changed.

S h i a wrote:

[Dax's Hard]
00:07:522 (7) - delete it and let the spinner start from here? YES SIR. Kk.
good diff Thanks#~

S h i a wrote:

[overall]
Audio Lead-in better change to 2000 in all diff.
and take this taiko bg to save spaces
then open taiko diff in whatever txt editor you have
and change to "Taiko BG.jpg" Done.


[Easy]
You should sets a better distance spacing D:
00:06:364 (4) - make spinner start at here? No.
00:09:694 (1) - too far away from spinner center. that's hard for easy tho.(seems all spinner have the same issues I made a different pattern.
00:11:131 (3) - ^

SPOILER

00:13:646 (1) - this spinner is too short for easy. serously. Deleted it and made a slider.
00:17:957 (4) -

SPOILER

and also move 00:19:574 (5,6) - Fixed.
00:33:766 (3) - Fixed.

SPOILER

00:35:562 (2) - change it into note and let spinner start from 00:35:921 Ok.

[Insane]
00:07:522 (8) - delete it and let the spinner start from here? Nope, I like this way xD.
00:11:131 (2) - clap Fixed.
00:11:670 (4) - clap at the end of the slider Fixed.
00:14:724 (7) - clap Fixed.
00:22:089 (7) - clap at the end of the slider Fixed.

Asgard wrote:

General

1. offset is not same..http://puu.sh/h6Vf
2. KIAI is not same http://puu.sh/h6Vu
   maybe KIAI time is 00:55:323 ~ 01:18:317 Omg, fixed.
   

Insane

1. 00:01:733 (5) - distance Oops, I forgot this. Fixed.
2. 00:04:820 (5) - ^ ^
3. 00:27:837 (7) - move 2th slider point 332,216 Ok.
4. 00:42:748 (2,3) - remove finish Ok.
5. 00:48:676 (7) - overlap I made a different pattern.
6. 00:58:017 (12) - remove because overmapping Ok.
7. 01:06:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - shape is some strange It is ok.
8. 01:09:514 (10) - remove same reason (12) Ok.
9. 01:12:029 (1) - i think distance reduce 2~30% maybe this is more better Nope.
   

Easy

1. 00:15:442 (1,2) - overlap.. Fixed.
2. 00:17:957 (4) - stack plz.. Fixed.
3. 00:19:574 (5,6) - how about this? http://puu.sh/h70f Ok.
4. 00:25:323 (1,2) - ^ ^
5. 00:40:412 (4,1) - - is this jump? in easy?? omg.. i think this is more better http://puu.sh/h70K I think this is ok.
6. 01:04:305 (6) - stack Fixed.
7. 01:05:023 - add note Nope.
8. 01:06:820 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is hard for beginner I made a different pattern.
9. 01:09:694 (1,2,3,4) - overlap.. hard to see Fixed.
10. 01:12:568 (1) - stack Fixed.
11. 01:17:598 (4) - stack Fixed.

Asgard wrote:

Dax's Hard

1. SV 1.6 is not hard, this isinsane mapset.. Is not the ''UOAH 1.6 IS SO HARD'' So is not much important.. And with the Jumps in Insane diff is Enought. That make the difference.
2. 00:20:472 (4,5) - remove Nope.
3. 00:26:221 (5,6) - ^ Nope.
4. 00:38:077 (1) - remove NC Nope.
5. 00:39:155 (2) - NC Nope.
6. 00:58:017 (8) - remove Nope.
7. 01:03:766 (5) - remove Kk
8. 01:03:945 - add note Kk
9. 01:09:514 (6) - remove Nope.
   

giO- wrote:

Easy

00:13:646 (6) - this slider is a bit ugly, unstack from 00:13:287 (5) - and make something like this http://puu.sh/hkL1 ,follow those point x:80 y:64, x:84 y:148, red point x:171 y:161, x180 y:220 Ok I made something different but didn't unstack.

Insane

00:06:364 (4,5) - i would delete those notes and replace with minislider http://puu.sh/hkTt ,make the slider finish on 00:06:750 - It doesn't sounds good if I finish it at 00:06:750, I made a slider right there, but I finished it at 00:06:557, it sounds better.
00:22:089 (7) - fix slider shape, follow those point x:328 y:144, x228: y:96, x:184 y:168, x:108 y:144 http://puu.sh/hkVg Fixed.
00:27:119 (3,4,5,6) - respect the symmetry, move on those points with distance snap 1.0x (3)x:256 y:64, (4)x:196 y:116, (5)x:160 y:188, (6)x:160 y:268 result http://puu.sh/hkXl Fixed.
00:27:837 (7) - delete red point from this slider http://puu.sh/hkXh Fixed.
00:57:658 (10) - new combo? Nope.
01:03:766 (9) - ^ and remove from 01:04:125 (1) - Nope.
01:09:155 (8) - remove clap Fixed
01:09:334 (9) - add clap Fixed

follow this clap/finish pattern
01:12:209 (2,6) - CLAP
01:12:568 (4) - FINISH
01:13:646 (2,6) - CLAP
01:14:005 (4) - FINISH Ok.

giO- wrote:

Dax's Hard

AR +1? Only if darksonic put AR9 in the Diff Insane atm not. - AR7 is ok for a Hard Diff.

00:40:233 (5,6,7) - unstack the (6) and make something like http://puu.sh/hkRt Nope.
00:45:981 (5,6,7,8,9) - this ministream looks better unstacked Nope.
01:26:939 (1,2) - do something like that? http://puu.sh/hkSr Sure~ Changed.

Pereira006 wrote:

General

all diff open on osu.notepad you will see this "AudioLeadIn: 1996" change to 2000 then save It is in 2500 right now.
Kiai Times are Inconsistency http://puu.sh/hH3Z pleasse same all diff Fixed.

Easy

00:11:131 (3) - the middle hitsound finish look not good remove finish IMO Ok.
00:12:568 (4) - I feel this need new combo because the drums is change Fixed.
00:13:646 (6) - add clap only end slider ? Nope.
00:15:802 (2,4) - not perfect stack maybe perfect stack ? like this http://puu.sh/hGXm Fixed.
00:15:802 (2) - add clap only end slider? Nope.
00:17:957 (4) - ^ same ^
00:19:574 (5) - New combo ? because is same drums is change Fixed.
00:22:269 (5) - add clap only end slider? Nope.
00:23:706 (3) - ^ same ^
00:24:424 (4) - ^ same ^
00:35:562 (2) - add clap? Ok.
00:38:436 (1) - you can see http://puu.sh/hH11 but this is new combo then is "bug New combo" you have put manually new combo Fixed.
00:50:652 (2) - add finish only start slider? Ok.

Insane

00:19:215 (8) - grid 1 left ? or is intentional? Oops, isn't intentional, fixed.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

General:

Audio Lead-In: Me parece que no es suficiente en 2000 (adsadas por el momento esta en 1996 xD), deberias ajustarlo en 2500 porque realmente empieza muy rapido. Es mejor si lo ajustas en el .osu file in Notepad (File --> Open .osu in Notepad) Ok.

Easy:
-Me parece que lo settings estan algo alto para esta dificultad:
--> El Overall Difficulty, esta algo alto, es mejor que lo disminuyas en 1 Tick (OD-1) Ok.
--> Con el HP Drain Rate me pasa algo parecido, digo lo mismo que arriba y lo disminuyas en 1 Tick (HP-1) Ok.
--> Lo mismo con el Approach Rate, esta alto para la velocidad de Slider que tenes, cuando llegas a los Sliders hace parecer que la Velocidad en los Sliders va a ser mayor. Por esto te digo que lo disminuyas en 1 Tick tambien (AR-1) Ok.

00:06:171 (3,4): Spacing, no es recomendable que aparezcan este tipo de errores en las dificultades faciles, porque causa confusion en los nuevos jugadores. Arregla esto moviendo el Slider (4) con Distance Snap (0.9x) Fixed.
00:06:364 (4): Me suena a que hay un cambio notorio en cuanto a la voz, por esta razon deberias agregar un New Combo Ok.
00:12:568 (4): Siguiendo la musica, deberias agregar un New Combo aca, ademas siempre se sugiere que los Combos sean cortos en estas dificultades para que el Score no sea tan reducido, por eso 3/3 juega mejor que un pattern de 6. Fixed.
00:13:466 (5,6): Es mejor que no apiles notas en estas dificultades, porque causa confusion en los Nuevos jugadores. Por esto deberias desapilar las notas. Si lo haces, cuida el Spacing con la proxima nota (1) Fixed.
00:17:957 (4): Queda mejor si este Slider ocupa el mismo lugar que el Slider previo (2), para esto move 1 Grid a la derecha (Grid Level 4) este Slider Creí que lo había arreglado ya xD, fixed.
00:19:574 (5): El ritmo cambia aca, por esto deberias agregar un New Combo Ok.
00:20:832 (1): Dos cosas para esta nota:
1era--> Creo que siguiendo el Instrumental, puedes agregar un Whistle en esta nota Ok.
2da--> Deberias comenzar esta seccion con la voz, creo que esta nota todavia pertenece al Instrumental. Entonces te sugiero que Elimines este New Combo y se lo agregues a la siguiente nota en 00:21:191 (2) Sip, creo que es del instrumental, fixed.
00:23:167 (1,2): Desapila estas notas, por la razon que habia dado anteriormente Fixed.
00:26:490 (2,1): Como te mencione en otra oportunidad, cuida el espaciado entre las notas para esta clase de dificultades. Para arreglar el problema move (1) con Distance Snap (0.9x) Fixed.
00:26:580 (x): Para hacer este pattern mas consistente al anterior (00:20:832), deberias agregar una Nota con Whistle aca Ok.
00:38:436 (1): Combo Bug. Agrega un New Combo para arreglar el problema Fixed.
00:43:826 (2,3): Que tal de cambiar estas dos notas por un Slider?? Me suena mejor con la musica Ok.
00:45:263 (4,5): (^) ^
00:51:909 (3,4): Desapila estas notas, por razones que ya di Fixed.
00:55:314 (T): El comienzo del Kiai esta fuera de lugar (Unsnapped). El comienzo del Kiai debe estar en 00:55:323, asi que debes resnapear Fixed.
00:56:760 (3): Quizas puedes agregar un Clap en el Reverse Arrow Ok.
00:59:634 (5): Este Whistle en todo el Slider, queda inconsistente con lo que venias haciendo, no venia usando Whistle desde un buen rato. Suena mejor si haces lo mismo que el Slider anterior que mencione (Sin hitsounds en las puntas y con Clap en el Reverse Arrow) Ok.
01:04:305 (6): Siento el cambio de voz en esta nota, deberias agregar un New Combo aca Ok.
01:05:203 (Spin): Cuando testee el map, este Spinner me sono algo tarde. Por esto, es mejor si mueves este Spinner 1/2 hacia atras, en 01:05:023 (Tick Blanco) Fixed.
01:17:239 (3): Este Clap no va bien con la musica, asi que eliminalo de esta nota Ok.

Insane:
00:05:785 (1,2,3,4): Es mejor si mantienes la misma distancia entre las notas como lo hiciste en los patterns anteriores. Pero si están a la misma distancia O.o
00:39:424 (4,5): Este Salto queda algo raro, ya que tienes a (3,4) apilados en 1/2 de distancia, mientras que (5) esta totalmente separado estando a 1/2 tambien. Me parece mejor si apilas a (5) con (3,4) y dejar a (6) en el lugar que esta ya que esta en 1/1 de distancia Si, definitvamente queda mejor xD, fixed.
00:45:173 (4,5): (^) ^

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Dax's Hard:

00:45:981 (5): Como cambia el ritmo, y ademas viendo que hay un comienzo de un 5-plet, son buenas razones para agregar un New Combo aca OMG Por poco pense que dirias ''Pon un slider'' :I Adedd.
00:55:320 (T): El Comienzo del Kiai esta Fuera de Lugar (Unsnapped) por 3ms. El Kiai debe comenzar en 00:55:323, asi que debes resnapearlo Fixed.
01:20:832 (4): El cambio de velocidad es algo repentino, creo que debes agregarle un New Combo a esta nota para hacerlo mas predescible Seria pero no quiero un OverNC Con esa em.. como decirlo ''Patata''. So esta bien como esta.

Bien Dax como siempre, te estas haciendo pro en esto Para la prox espero ver un ''no Mods'' XD

Pereira006 wrote:

Dax's Hard

stuff cool Nice :3

GiNa wrote:

[Dax’s Hard]
00:45:981 (5,6,7,8,9) – a little too much for Hard ? Is easy.. BPM:167.XD
Nice diff here too

GiNa wrote:

[General]
-Turn off “Enable countdown”? it’s annoying, especially for this kind of soft song I thought I did it ;_;. Fixed

Insane

01:02:329 (6) - : delete back whistle add front whistle

01:02:688 (7) - : add whistle

01:02:867 (8) - : delete slider whistle

01:08:077 (6) - : add whistle

01:08:257 (7) - : delete slider front back whistle (skip turn)

01:10:772 (3) - : add whistle

01:11:131 (5) - : delete slider whistle

01:13:287 (8) - : move x 256 y 120

01:17:239 (6) - : delete back clap

W h i t e wrote:

Hello~~

Insane

01:02:329 (6) - : delete back whistle add front whistle Ok.

01:02:688 (7) - : add whistle Ok.

01:02:867 (8) - : delete slider whistle Ok.

01:08:077 (6) - : add whistle Nope.

01:08:257 (7) - : delete slider front back whistle (skip turn) Ok.

01:10:772 (3) - : add whistle Ok.

01:11:131 (5) - : delete slider whistle Ok.

01:13:287 (8) - : move x 256 y 120 Nope.

01:17:239 (6) - : delete back clap Ok.

frost-b-spec wrote:

[Insane]
0.28.736(1) - delete 2nd waypoint(dont need this) I think that is ok with these points.
0.36.460(6) - why jumping? Insane diff lol, that jump is ok.
0.55.682(2) - delete 2nd waypoint Oops, fixed.
1.06.909(1) - delete redwaypoint(change whitepoint) Fixed.
1.07.538(4) - ^ ^

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi, Darksonic... a bit mod to give

General

Pass...

Sekai's Easy

00:01:733(3) - don't mind shortening this slider to 02:312?
00:04:820(3) - same as above but end it at 05:399
00:25:861(2) - put finish at the end of the slider
01:15:442(2) - add finish here
01:18:317(2) - add finish at beginning of the slider..

Ignacio's Normal

00:21:909(2) - remove repeat here..

Dax's Hard

00:20:832(1) - add finish at the beginning of the slider
00:26:580(1) - ^
00:36:460(6) - add finish
01:18:317(1) - make this a curve slider, seems a bit ugly..

Ok, I'll take my leave....

hillaryzx wrote:

Dax's Hard
00:20:832(1) - add finish at the beginning of the slider Kk
00:26:580(1) - ^ Kk
00:36:460(6) - add finish lol The note already have a finish
01:18:317(1) - make this a curve slider, seems a bit ugly.. Changed.

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi, Darksonic... a bit mod to give

General

Pass...

Sekai's Easy

00:01:733(3) - don't mind shortening this slider to 02:312? No~
00:04:820(3) - same as above but end it at 05:399 ^
00:25:861(2) - put finish at the end of the slider ok~
01:15:442(2) - add finish here ^
01:18:317(2) - add finish at beginning of the slider.. ^