Sir Minelli wrote:

Hello,


~Comments here are not final decisions, you can always decide by yourself~


[N0_ormal]

00:34:00 - new comb o - Yes!
00:34:24 - undo new combo - Yes!
00:35:87 - new combo - Yes!
00:36:11 - undo new combo - Yes!



[Bananas]

00:15:74 (12) - new combo - No u!
00:16:01 (1) - undo new combo - ^
00:18:20 (7) - new combo - Already fixed, just need to update.
00:18:46 (1) - undo new combo - Already fixed, just need to update.

Rawr.

Delicious cake.

Download: Nico Nico Douga - Touhou Extra Boss RUSH!! (C o I z) [Collab].osu

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☆

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (Hara) [Larto].osu

[Bananas]

00:21:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ugly.
01:09:78 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:16:09 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
01:23:57 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^

Starrrr

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Preview on the easy.

EDIT: THIS POST IS PRETTY OBSOLETE IS IT NOT?

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (Hara) [v0xtrot's Easy].osu

Hey, here's my finished Easy. It's up to you if you want to use it or not. ;o

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (Hara) [v0xtrot's Easy].osu

Using grid 3

v0xtrot's Easy
00:14:10 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe too many beat, put some sliders, its an easy ^^

N0_ormal
Ok!

Larry Kong
01:22:40 (4,5) - upset spacing with previous slider, It takes me 2 miss XD"

Bananas (->Omg its too hard for meh x_x)
Im not a fan of 9-10+ combo... So maybe do something? If you want, oc



Starred~!

Made my Easy-diff easier. I'll upload it if Hara shows actual interest of using it. ;O

[v0x Easy]
00:12:74 (1) - even pausing and staring at the skeleton i cannot tell what this slider is doing
00:18:19 (4) - this is a very long break
00:39:38 (1) - doesnt flow well from 1
00:43:12 (1) - ^
00:43:59 (1) - ^
01:13:75 (2) - whistle
01:15:62 (4,5,6) - whistlespam
yeah your sliders dont flow that well and youre using too many whistles at the end...other than that nice job


[N0_ormal]
00:08:09 (5) - remove whistle
00:10:55 (1) - doesnt quite flow from 4
00:37:98 (1,2,3) - needs more hitsounds imo
00:50:60 (3) - clap
01:21:00 (6) - can you make this a bit more balanced?
01:24:39 (5) - stack under 4
01:26:26 (4) - ^ 3
i think theres a bit much of whistle in here but meh up to you


[Larry Kong]
00:20:31 (1) - jump is a bit extreme
00:23:98 (10) - delete and replace break
00:47:33 (1) - symmetry plz
00:51:07 (1) - ^ (its biased <---)
01:05:10 (1) - bpm change is completely uncalled for
01:06:74 (5) - new combo?
01:14:22 (5) - ^
01:21:00 (3) - can you make this a bit prettier?
01:24:98 (1,2) - stack the endpoints
01:35:03 (1) - align w 3


[Bananas]
00:04:82 (5) - new combo
00:07:00 (5) - ^
00:11:65 (1) - inherit sections for volume changes should be slightly before the note they intend to affect in order to contain early clickers as well as late clickers
00:18:99 (5) - new combo
00:23:22 (5) - ^
00:37:98 (1) - i would prefer it if with these sliders you ended them on a blue tick rather than a yellow one because you DO need to "unclick" one slider before you "click" another and i dont think this allows enough time for that
00:45:46 (1,1,2) - slider overlap is ugly
00:49:20 (2,1,2) - ^
00:51:07 (2) - delete and replace break
01:06:74 (5) - new combo
01:14:22 (5) - ^
01:16:09 (5) - ^
01:17:96 (4) - ^
01:19:83 (4) - ^
01:23:57 (5) - ^
01:25:44 (4) - ^
01:27:31 (4) - ^
01:32:23 (1) - clap
01:36:67 (5) - new combo

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- v0xy style:
00:12:74 (1) - dunno if bats will be picky about it xD
00:45:46 (1) - 1/4 longer, maybe?
01:06:97 (5) - are you sure it should end in the blue tick? it seems kinda weird, but if you do that intentionally i guess there are no problems. mevermind, other beats use that and it's ok xD

- n0_rmal:
fine

- Larry kong:
25:000 - fix this break

- Bananas:
00:37:98 (1,1,2) - OMG is it ok to make sliders like that? xD

Good, have a blinky star =3

[v0xy style]
00:12:74 (1) - *picks up* BAD OVERLAPPING SLIDER, BAD!

Mhm.

[bananas]
00:52:713 reinsert break


everything else checks out.

DONKEY KONG IS AWESOME !

Star4you

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[Larry Kong]
00:19:78 (7,1) - Love this jump. I wish there were more like it.
00:44:99 (5,6,7,8,1) - Revise hitsounds.
01:07:32 (10,11,12) - Hitsounds.
01:14:81 (10,11,12) - Here too.
01:24:98 (1) - Add a whistle on the end of this?
01:35:03 (1,2,3) - These jumps feel sort of forced. Make them a bit smaller?

[v0xy style]
New combos in the first section:
00:09:19 (5) - Until here, they should be where all the 2s are now.
00:14:10 (1) - From here on to the break they should be where the 4s are now.
And I don't like the rhythmic clap sounds in the first section either.
00:12:74 (1,1) - This jump is so lonely. Give it friends or put it out of its misery.

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (Hara) [Larry Kong].osu

Don't feel special. Everyone gets mtmcl bubbles.

Rank this already.

Oh, and mtmcl, I'm not special either, my recent maps want bubbles.

Larry Kong
01:05:10 (1) - BPM Warning?

Upon testing, it shouldn't be a problem

Ranked