fixed some~Thanks moe Rin
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gd的話~可以的 反正我SB沒做好~要的話就pm我吧
And Thank you RuRu~xD
I love Mitani Nana
就做个有点脸疼的建议好了...
[Collab]
[Collab]
- I suppose some people might complain that the Stack Leniency is too low and makes the map harder to play on Hidden, but it's your choice as to whether you'd like to raise it or not.
00:43:828 (4) - This wave would probably look better if it was a bit smoother.
02:29:428 (1,2) - These aren't really unrankable, but they don't look very good and are sort of out of place. As in, there aren't any other sliders like this in the rest of the map. So perhaps choose a simpler curve shape.
04:07:228 (3,4) - Possibly adjust this so the end of (4) doesn't touch the body of (3)?
Map is pretty solid, should be an easy bubble after fixes.
btw wa or ha is also ok
So no change~Thank you Breeze
Download: Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ... (karenying) [eveless].osu
恭喜
ha=O wa=X (but use wa is also OK
asked Japanese friend.
这个问题不想多说...硬要说的话都是对的，日本人的习惯是ha wa的话是拟音的
It's Hepburn romanization which ertyukjh010 said, it's correct title.
In Nihon-shiki romanization, 'は' always is written as 'ha'.
But point isn't that, if you follow Nihon-shiki, 'Shiroi' should be 'Siroi'.
I hope you don't make mistake at next time!
PS : How could you make same mistake again, goodbye.
You are very pro of Japanese
Topic Starter
吃掉karenying+bakabaka
吃掉的話, 我也可以變成神麻婆嗎?
以下都是建議~
00:44:578 (6) - NC?
00:53:428 (4) - 要不要再圓一點? http://puu.sh/8AZo
00:57:778 (6) - NC? 覺得有點長
01:09:478 (2) - 因為jump在這裡 所以NC?
01:14:878 (1) - 要不要變成slider? 像這樣 http://puu.sh/8B5n
02:09:928 (8) - 這裡再NC
02:10:228 (1) - remove NC
02:10:828 (1) - ^
02:27:628 - 再加一個beat? 有個洞感覺有點.. 奇怪?
03:03:028 (1,2,3) - 我覺得這裡的節奏這樣打比較好 http://puu.sh/8B5F
03:09:028 (1,2) - 這兩個.. 有點奇怪? 好像沒跟甚麼.. (是我而已嗎?)
沒了~ 神圖跟曲子
第2顆星!!
越來越窮
吃掉的話, 我也可以變成神麻婆嗎?
以下都是建議~
00:44:578 (6) - NC?
00:53:428 (4) - 要不要再圓一點? http://puu.sh/8AZo
00:57:778 (6) - NC? 覺得有點長
01:09:478 (2) - 因為jump在這裡 所以NC?
01:14:878 (1) - 要不要變成slider? 像這樣 http://puu.sh/8B5n
02:09:928 (8) - 這裡再NC
02:10:228 (1) - remove NC
02:10:828 (1) - ^
02:27:628 - 再加一個beat? 有個洞感覺有點.. 奇怪?
03:03:028 (1,2,3) - 我覺得這裡的節奏這樣打比較好 http://puu.sh/8B5F
03:09:028 (1,2) - 這兩個.. 有點奇怪? 好像沒跟甚麼.. (是我而已嗎?)
沒了~ 神圖跟曲子
第2顆星!!
越來越窮
Topic Starter
謝謝萌萌holysoup~我的部分基本上都改了~ :>
還有我不是神麻婆:< 不過baka是:>
還有我不是神麻婆:< 不過baka是:>
title
白い雪のプリンセスは
Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... x
Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha... O
or Snow White is...?
嘛反正我以前做的时候使用了Snow White is lol 哭了这个好喜欢的 当初第一张正经作图坑这个的时候还想着以后要remap这个翻唱版本呢 哭了都这么久了TAT
超喜欢实谷奈奈的:3
(虽然本来想说要个gd...
白い雪のプリンセスは
Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... x
Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha... O
or Snow White is...?
嘛反正我以前做的时候使用了Snow White is lol 哭了这个好喜欢的 当初第一张正经作图坑这个的时候还想着以后要remap这个翻唱版本呢 哭了都这么久了TAT
超喜欢实谷奈奈的:3
(虽然本来想说要个gd...
00:59:128 (1,2) - 这个(2)貌似丢歪了 XD
02:14:128 (2,4) - ^ 不过是(4)
03:03:028 (1,2) - 节奏这里跟前面有点不照了 考虑(2)移到前面红线然后后面加note?
04:13:078 (3,4) - 略违和 跟鼓点的话是5连而不是3
这里的きみ考虑是不是该间距再大点，毕竟是要盖到三个字头上的 XD
baka找我测试来着 结果两秒死 ;w; 胡乱打点东西好了
02:14:128 (2,4) - ^ 不过是(4)
03:03:028 (1,2) - 节奏这里跟前面有点不照了 考虑(2)移到前面红线然后后面加note?
04:13:078 (3,4) - 略违和 跟鼓点的话是5连而不是3
这里的きみ考虑是不是该间距再大点，毕竟是要盖到三个字头上的 XD
baka找我测试来着 结果两秒死 ;w; 胡乱打点东西好了
蛤蛤蛤
Ｐｒｅｔｔｙ Ｎｉｃｅ Ｃｏｌｌａｂ
General
baka&ying
01:45:628 (4) - new combo? 會按快
02:22:078 (5) - 好位置, 不移嗎? :http://puu.sh/8Eei
02:24:478 (1) - 不移嗎?! 好靠近前一slider XD
貌似只能挑挑細節的, 做的很好
手速不夠打啊 XD
- - BG大小大丈夫? 1000*700
baka&ying
- - 噢噢AR9好快好快
01:45:628 (4) - new combo? 會按快
02:22:078 (5) - 好位置, 不移嗎? :http://puu.sh/8Eei
02:24:478 (1) - 不移嗎?! 好靠近前一slider XD
貌似只能挑挑細節的, 做的很好
手速不夠打啊 XD
Topic Starter
嗯title改了:> 謝謝e姐~ 我也超喜歡实谷奈奈~goodbye wrote:
title
白い雪のプリンセスは
Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... x
Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha... O
or Snow White is...?
嘛反正我以前做的时候使用了Snow White is lol 哭了这个好喜欢的 当初第一张正经作图坑这个的时候还想着以后要remap这个翻唱版本呢 哭了都这么久了TAT
超喜欢实谷奈奈的:3
(虽然本来想说要个gd...
gd的話~可以的 反正我SB沒做好~要的話就pm我吧
謝謝科林Colin Hou wrote:
00:59:128 (1,2) - 这个(2)貌似丢歪了 XD fixed
02:14:128 (2,4) - ^ 不过是(4) fixed
03:03:028 (1,2) - 节奏这里跟前面有点不照了 考虑(2)移到前面红线然后后面加note?fixed by another way
04:13:078 (3,4) - 略违和 跟鼓点的话是5连而不是3 唔 這個嘛先保留
这里的きみ考虑是不是该间距再大点，毕竟是要盖到三个字头上的 XD 嗯~日後再改
baka找我测试来着 结果两秒死 ;w; 胡乱打点东西好了
謝謝Pokie姐Pokie wrote:
General
- - BG大小大丈夫? 1000*700 1024*768以內 & 4:3,大丈夫
baka&ying00:33:928 (4) - 建議 :http://puu.sh/8EdD 給baka~
- - 噢噢AR9好快好快
01:45:628 (4) - new combo? 會按快 好
02:22:078 (5) - 好位置, 不移嗎? :http://puu.sh/8Eei 改了
02:24:478 (1) - 不移嗎?! 好靠近前一slider XD 改了
貌似只能挑挑細節的, 做的很好
手速不夠打啊 XD
And Thank you RuRu~xD
I love Mitani Nana就做个有点脸疼的建议好了...
[Collab]
- 02:29:428 (1,1) - 这个我觉得扭得不是很好看...虽然说是要跟着调子...然后试试这样吗
336,104,141028,6,0,B|328:52|280:20|232:28,1,140,4|8
03:13:828 (8) - 这里感觉漏拍...啥的 试着缩短两格格子然后在03:14:278加个note吗？
03:17:428 (3) - ^ 然后在03:17:803 和 03:18:028加个Note吗？采用了的话给03:18:028 (5) - 加个whistle
03:26:428 (2) - 建议缩短3格
Topic Starter
nothing change...thanks anyway
from in-game pm
[General]
OD-1
HD+1
stack leniency不知道会不会太小了0.0
[sb]
苹果跟miku直接出来跟消失就好我觉得，没必要渐入渐出的感觉
标题感觉可以在16078加个放大+消失的效果
最后不加个thanks for playing之类的么0.0
[Collab]
00:14:428 (4) - 这个可以试试ctrl+r，flow好点
00:16:978 (2) - 这节奏有点违和，这个移到00:16:828 - ，然后加个slider从00:16:978 - 到00:17:278 - ，感觉好很多
00:19:678 (2) - 加个NC？
00:37:528 (2) - 换成折返slider？00:37:678 - 这地方有个vocal音
00:55:228 (2,3) - 我感觉这里spacing要小点，不然有点难读出是1/4，毕竟SV不高但是DS比较大
01:02:728 (1) - 试试这个节奏，感觉好很多 http://puu.sh/a2GA http://puu.sh/a2Gu
01:18:628 (4) - 用点红色锚点拉个拉风的shape出来吧。。这个太软了orz
01:43:828 (1) - 这个对准下一个circle逆时针 rotate 90°试试，感觉这地方弄个跳好点
02:05:278 (3) - 这个往左下移点？感觉跳有点大了
02:12:328 (4) - 跟01:02:728 (1) - 一样的建议
02:47:278 (4) - 我感觉吧这个移动到02:46:378 - x:312 y:280，然后02:46:378 (1,2,3) - 往后挪1/2，打起来顺手点
03:17:428 (3) - 结束在03:17:728 - ，然后03:18:028 (4) - 移动到03:17:878 - 试试？
03:38:803 (5) - 这个删掉好点，我感觉这里三连的话有点违和
神图QAQ
edit：之前忘了射星了orz
[General]
OD-1
HD+1
stack leniency不知道会不会太小了0.0
[sb]
苹果跟miku直接出来跟消失就好我觉得，没必要渐入渐出的感觉
标题感觉可以在16078加个放大+消失的效果
最后不加个thanks for playing之类的么0.0
[Collab]
00:14:428 (4) - 这个可以试试ctrl+r，flow好点
00:16:978 (2) - 这节奏有点违和，这个移到00:16:828 - ，然后加个slider从00:16:978 - 到00:17:278 - ，感觉好很多
00:19:678 (2) - 加个NC？
00:37:528 (2) - 换成折返slider？00:37:678 - 这地方有个vocal音
00:55:228 (2,3) - 我感觉这里spacing要小点，不然有点难读出是1/4，毕竟SV不高但是DS比较大
01:02:728 (1) - 试试这个节奏，感觉好很多 http://puu.sh/a2GA http://puu.sh/a2Gu
224,124,62278,1,001:07:228 (4) - 试试ctrl+r，flow好点而且多点跳更好玩
280,256,62428,2,0,B|272:212|292:172,1,70
01:18:628 (4) - 用点红色锚点拉个拉风的shape出来吧。。这个太软了orz
01:43:828 (1) - 这个对准下一个circle逆时针 rotate 90°试试，感觉这地方弄个跳好点
02:05:278 (3) - 这个往左下移点？感觉跳有点大了
02:12:328 (4) - 跟01:02:728 (1) - 一样的建议
02:47:278 (4) - 我感觉吧这个移动到02:46:378 - x:312 y:280，然后02:46:378 (1,2,3) - 往后挪1/2，打起来顺手点
03:17:428 (3) - 结束在03:17:728 - ，然后03:18:028 (4) - 移动到03:17:878 - 试试？
03:38:803 (5) - 这个删掉好点，我感觉这里三连的话有点违和
神图QAQ
edit：之前忘了射星了orz
Requested by kanpakyin to mod your map~
And also, hi.
Well, it looks like I couldn't find anything wrong with this map.
Very nice work.
Good luck getting your map approved.
And also, hi.
Well, it looks like I couldn't find anything wrong with this map.
Very nice work.
Good luck getting your map approved.
This changes everything.NatsumeRin wrote:
[Collab]
- I suppose some people might complain that the Stack Leniency is too low and makes the map harder to play on Hidden, but it's your choice as to whether you'd like to raise it or not.
00:43:828 (4) - This wave would probably look better if it was a bit smoother.
02:29:428 (1,2) - These aren't really unrankable, but they don't look very good and are sort of out of place. As in, there aren't any other sliders like this in the rest of the map. So perhaps choose a simpler curve shape.
04:07:228 (3,4) - Possibly adjust this so the end of (4) doesn't touch the body of (3)?
Map is pretty solid, should be an easy bubble after fixes.
Topic Starter
All fixed~:> Thank you
EDIT : Change the source to Noboru-P and tag noboru~since some one tell me that's true
EDIT : Change the source to Noboru-P and tag noboru~since some one tell me that's true
Alright then, things are fixed. Sorry for being late. This will be MAT bubble #1 for approval.
Bubbled!
Bubbled!
哇，总算有一个能RANK/APP的白雪公主了，刚打OSU的时候就找过一次这歌啊有木有
bakaying GJ
我只会闲扯╮(╯_╰)╭
bakaying GJ
我只会闲扯╮(╯_╰)╭
Topic Starter
哎呀 隨公公,最近和水娘娘可好？gone with wind wrote:
哇，总算有一个能RANK/APP的白雪公主了，刚打OSU的时候就找过一次这歌啊有木有
bakaying GJ
我只会闲扯╮(╯_╰)╭
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions
Only this
Send me a forum PM when you have reply then
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions
General
- Shouldn't title be "Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ..."? "は" read to "wa" :/ According to other ranked maps
Only this
Send me a forum PM when you have reply then
Topic Starter
I asked my Japanese friend,she said wa=X ha = O desu!Breeze wrote:
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestionsGeneral
- Shouldn't title be "Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ..."? "は" read to "wa" :/ According to other ranked maps
Only this
Send me a forum PM when you have reply then
btw wa or ha is also ok
So no change~Thank you Breeze
OK, then, bubble#2
awesome
wa
Topic Starter
thank you Sorda
and wa tsundere shion
and wa tsundere shion
好圖
快點approve
Approved! ... ?
Topic Starter
Ee?? Oh thanks!
哇baka莹！ 抱
恭喜:D
哇 ~ APP 祝贺 papapa ~
gratz~~~
congrats~
快ban了
yeeeey nice!!!!!!!!
喔喔喔!!!
bakaying!!
真的隔天就approve了~
bakaying!!
真的隔天就approve了~
yeah~
princess wa Karen . ,.
princess wa Karen . ,.
Topic Starter
Thanks all >.<
Tsundere wa Shion desu!
Tsundere wa Shion desu!
Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Topic Starter
haha bakaru's big heart
GJ
白雪公主><
白雪公主><
好又少一个债要还
Topic Starter
卧槽原來你有做?goodbye wrote:
好又少一个债要还
(做了一半忘了karenying wrote:
卧槽原來你有做?goodbye wrote:
好又少一个债要还
Topic Starter
eeeee 求看e姐我喜歡你goodbye wrote:
(做了一半忘了
.karenying wrote:
eeeee 求看e姐我喜歡你goodbye wrote:
(做了一半忘了
Download: Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ... (karenying) [eveless].osu
karenying wrote:
e姐我喜歡你
恭喜好奇問一下，歌名是不是 Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... 才對
Topic Starter
I said in breeze modertyukjh010 wrote:
好奇問一下，歌名是不是 Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... 才對
ha=O wa=X (but use wa is also OK
asked Japanese friend.
ertyukjh010 wrote:
好奇問一下，歌名是不是 Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... 才對
这个问题不想多说...硬要说的话都是对的，日本人的习惯是ha wa的话是拟音的
app了，恭喜恭喜
I'm late. x_xkarenying wrote:
I said in breeze modertyukjh010 wrote:
好奇問一下，歌名是不是 Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... 才對
ha=O wa=X (but use wa is also OK
asked Japanese friend.
It's Hepburn romanization which ertyukjh010 said, it's correct title.
In Nihon-shiki romanization, 'は' always is written as 'ha'.
But point isn't that, if you follow Nihon-shiki, 'Shiroi' should be 'Siroi'.
I hope you don't make mistake at next time!
PS : How could you make same mistake again, goodbye.
Topic Starter
wow,thank you carrot for point out my error lolykcarrot wrote:
I'm late. x_x
It's Hepburn romanization which ertyukjh010 said, it's correct title.
In Nihon-shiki romanization, 'は' always is written as 'ha'.
But point isn't that, if you follow Nihon-shiki, 'Shiroi' should be 'Siroi'.
I hope you don't make mistake at next time!
PS : How could you make same mistake again, goodbye.
You are very pro of Japanese
no fail @@
My mistaken 
Beautful song~~~
i love this map~
;D