[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

[('(oo)')]

1. nice diff name
2. 01:20:973 (8) - whistle
3. 01:22:806 (7) - whistle on the head
4. 01:26:306 (3) - ^
5. 01:29:306 (1,2) - whistle
6. 01:31:639 (1) - ^
7. 01:32:973 (1) - whistle on the head
8. 02:38:306 (1,2) - ^
9. 02:39:639 (1,3) - ^
10. 02:43:639 (1) - whistle
11. 02:48:973 (2) - ^

Melophobia wrote:

AAAAH!!!!! >A<

336,112,100806,6,0,B|320:128|308:168|376:200|468:104|372:-20|260:48|256:128|320:172,1,269.999991953373,2|4

• [General]

1. The folder's size is "12.1 MB" which is greater than the allowed size without video "10.0 MB".
2. The song isn't fully mapped so I suggest you to cut the mp3 for a lower file size.
3. Why is there an "osb" file on your folder? I don't see any storyboard on this map. Kill that osb file.
4. Y u no put kiai time? Try putting kiai time on epic parts of the map such as the chorus~
   
   [('(oo)')]
5. HP Drain Rate: -1
6. Overall Difficulty: -1

h3k1ru wrote:

new mp3:

http://puu.sh/cM4r

Thite wrote:

hi Hi Thite Thite Thite >///<
AAAH!!!
too many snapping notes>< fixed, me baka wwww
00:34:680 - add break here Done
01:12:514 - add note i followed "beat sound" so thats why this part is empty ><
01:13:847 - ^
01:17:181 (5) - add finish every "aaah"? ok
01:40:848 (7) - add finish this slider start? hmm, no its already got clap ><
02:34:515 (5) - same as 01:17:181 (5) yep~

AAAAH!!!!
00:51:514 (4) - add whistle? added slider whstle
00:52:847 (4) - ^
01:02:847 (2) - add finish? ok
01:12:514 - add note same as previuos diff xD
01:13:847 - ^
01:17:181 (1) - add finish every "aaah"? aaAAAHHH, ok wwww
02:08:847 (4) - add whistle? slider whstle
02:10:180 (4) - ^
02:10:514 (6) - new combo? ok
02:34:514 (1) - same as 01:17:181 (1) yep ><!

good map~

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~ Here's my mod (a request from my queue)

• [General]

1. The folder's size is "12.1 MB" which is greater than the allowed size without video "10.0 MB". Changed mp3~
2. The song isn't fully mapped so I suggest you to cut the mp3 for a lower file size.
3. Why is there an "osb" file on your folder? I don't see any storyboard on this map. Kill that osb file. Its ok to keep osb file in folder even without SB xD
4. Y u no put kiai time? Try putting kiai time on epic parts of the map such as the chorus~ dont like kiai sry ><
   
   [('(oo)')]
5. HP Drain Rate: -1
6. Overall Difficulty: -1

That's all~
Very Nice map!!! >w<d
Have this Ranked! Have a star!~ >w<

hoLysoup wrote:

Hi~
I'm really sorry for super super late mod. But it's because this map is already really good so I couldn't find anything for the longest time.
So i modded other maps first, I think this map is very good I like each difficulty so I really have nothing to say~
Just these unrankable things you must fix below. all of them:

[('(oo)')]
this difficulty has different combo colours than other difficulty please fix~, its because we got different BG, i will use Sandpig's BG later for all diff, and surely will change colors, thx for remind me

[AAAAH!!!!]
01:10:681 (3) - unsnapped slider not sure what is it, i just resnaped all notes xD

[xsrs's AAH!!]
this difficulty has a star rating of 3.06~ :< i think its ok, i saw alot of ranked maps with 3.20 star rating on easiest diff, didnt want to make easy cause already got 5 diffs >< lets hope climbb didnt forget about me xD

That's it
:>
Ahh~

aabc271 wrote:

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:29:014 ( 151 ) - Blue note ? No /.w.\

01:09:680 ( 378 ~ 381 ) - I prefer using 1/4 instead of 1/6, as a single 1/6 looks quite odd.
I think it's okay 'cause the background is 1/6 beat too.

01:35:014 ( 511 ) - Blue note ? No /.w.\

01:35:680 ( 513 ) - ^ No /.w.\

02:52:347 ( 980 ) - ^ No /.w.\

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

• 02:09:194 (3,4,5,6) - These note should have the same hitsound settings than (1) and (2). They both sound exactly the same. there are background beats for them
• 02:13:194 (5) - Add a new combo on this note and remove it on 02:14:194 (1). It would really match the music better. i think mine works too

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[General]

• Kiai would really fit well in this map. Say, 01:19:694 - 01:40:861 & 02:37:028 - 02:58:528? not using kiai sry...
• I think the volume should just go up generally. It's really hard to hear the hitsounds at some points. increaced volume in few parts parts but overal, i want to keep same volume

[AAAH!!!]

• 00:52:778 - It would match the music better and feel much more consistent if you placed a note here. i dont hear triplet sound here.....
• 01:11:861 - A note here would go with the music a tad better. And it would match what you're mapping at 01:13:195 (1). added
• 02:14:361 (1) - 0.50x slow down does not fit well with this section. It would cause people to overjump half the time. Consider changing it to 0.75x. yep changed in both diffs


[AAAAH!!!!]

• 01:11:861 - It would be better if a note sounded off here. It would match what you're mapping to for 01:13:195 (1). yyyyyyy
• 00:12:861 (7) - New combo on this note to indicate a slider speed change. dont understand this.......i dont see any slider speed change o.o

• General

1. I dislike those custom Difficulty Names. The player has to count every "!" and "A"'s to know which difficulty is he going to play at the song selection menu? (well, maybe the player can figure out a bit by himself checking the star rating, but knowing this, I still don't agree).
   
   
2. Why you don't want to add Kiai Time? The map would be better. When a map doesn't have Kiai, I feel it "empty" without that emphasis at the chorus. You should consider adding it.
   
   
3. Why there are bookmarks here..? You changed the mp3 and after that you forgot to delete them, I guess:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. I also dislike the way you use some samples. They aren't noticeable. When I hear the map samples with the music at the editor, I honestly don't hear them. It just sounds like you didn't used samples. I removed some of them, and then heared that part without samples and I didn't found any difference. They sound just exactly like the song itself. What's the point of adding samples that sound exactly like in the song? I mean, they're good, you placed them well and all. I just don't like the custom samples you decided to use (soft-hitclap2, soft-hitfinish2, soft-hitwhistle); But in other hand.. I like the way you used normal-hitwhistles and that custom soft-hitfinish.
   
   
5. I agree with Louise, a [Easy] difficulty would be nice. I find that Normal difficulty a bit challenging for being the easiest difficulty of the mapset.

• [xsrs's AAH!!]

1. 00:38:528 (1) - How about adding a new combo here? Fits nice with the music. Short combos are better for easiest diffs. If you do this, don't forget to add a new combo at 00:51:861 (3), 01:55:528 (2) and at 02:09:194 (3) too, for consistency. I also want to agree that I see this useful because 02:07:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6) <- that combo number is high for a Normal/Easiest diff of the mapset, and doing this, the combo ends up being 02:07:861 (1,2,1,2,3,4), which is shorter and better.
2. 01:19:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is quite high. I suggest you to add a new combo at 01:21:861 (4). You should do this for consistency too, since you added a new combo at 02:39:695 (1).
3. 02:13:194 (5) - Unnecesary high combo number.. I think you should add a new combo here and remove nc at 02:14:194 (1). It also fits way better with the music to me.
4. 02:55:861 (6) - The new combo should be here instead of being at 02:56:695 (1) in my opinion. Also, if you do this, you should consider adding a combo at 02:57:361 (1) to avoid high combo numbers. It follows nice the vocals in my opinion.
   
   Nothing else, just some few new combo suggestions. Good difficulty.

• [AAAH!!!]
  
  This is a Hard difficulty..? If it is, there are various jumps that you should delete or al least reduce them.. such as 01:08:860 (3,1).. because I think that jumps like that are way too much for a Hard, and more when you have 2 Insanes in your mapset. You should leave those jumps for the hardest difficulties.

1. 01:11:694 (6) - I'm really surprised that noone noticed this but.. here are 2 notes on the same tick.. delete that hitcircle, and leave the slider, I guess..
2. 02:14:361 (1) - This slider shape looks weird. How about improving it a bit? This isn't really necessary to change, but I think that this slider feels like off of place because your previous sliders were curved and with a good-looking.
3. 02:31:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is inconsistent with your previous combos.. (01:14:528 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2). You should add new combo at 02:32:528 (5) and at 02:33:194 (7) for consistency.
4. 02:35:194 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - And again, this is inconsistent with your previous combo (01:17:361 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2)). You have to add a new combo at 02:34:694 (6), remove nc at 02:35:194 (1) and also at 02:35:861 (1), and after that add a new combo at 02:36:528 (3), for consistency again.
5. 02:45:195 (6) - Aaaand again, for consistency, I think you should add a new combo here and remove new combo at 02:45:695 (1).
   
   I hope I didn't missed any combo inconsistencies. Just in case, you should check the combos of the difficulty.

• [('(oo)')]

1. 00:50:195 (8) - A new combo here would fit nice with the music.
2. 01:58:361 (6) - How about improving this shape.. making it more.. curved? Maybe like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Nothing else, really. And again, I hope I didn't missed anything here.. I'm feeling sleepy >.< but I checked this difficulty several times just in case. Nice artistic patterns.

• [AAAAH!!!!]

1. 01:10:695 (3) - Unsnapped slider end.
2. 02:58:195 (5) - For consistency, you should add a new combo here since you did that at 01:40:861 (1).
   
   Nice difficulty. I hope once again lol that I didn't missed anything here. I have to recheck this anyways, so it is not a big deal if I did.

Kei wrote:

[AAAAH!!!!]