[General]• Kiai would really fit well in this map. Say, 01:19:694 - 01:40:861 & 02:37:028 - 02:58:528?
• I think the volume should just go up generally. It's really hard to hear the hitsounds at some points.
[xsrs's AAH!!]• 00:04:528 - I think you should insert a slider here. It feels rather empty without it.
• 02:09:194 (3,4,5,6) - These note should have the same hitsound settings than (1) and (2). They both sound exactly the same.
• 02:13:194 (5) - Add a new combo on this note and remove it on 02:14:194 (1). It would really match the music better.
• 02:47:195 (1) - Silencing the end of this slider really ruins and take away from the game play. It gives this map a strange feeling. Please bring the volume up on the note.
• 00:19:528 - It would be much better if you add a note here to continue the flow and match the previous patterns.
• 00:20:861 - ^
• 02:45:695 (2,3,4,5,6) - This would play better and be a tad more appealing if it was like
this.[AAAH!!!]• 00:52:778 - It would match the music better and feel much more consistent if you placed a note here.
• 01:11:861 - A note here would go with the music a tad better. And it would match what you're mapping at 01:13:195 (1).
• 02:14:361 (1) - 0.50x slow down does not fit well with this section. It would cause people to overjump half the time. Consider changing it to 0.75x.
[AAAAH!!!!]• 01:11:861 - It would be better if a note sounded off here. It would match what you're mapping to for 01:13:195 (1).
• 00:12:861 (7) - New combo on this note to indicate a slider speed change.
[('(oo)')]• 00:22:194 (1) - This combo does not match the previous part. Remove it.
• 00:23:694 (4,1,2) - I would change this pattern to something like
this. It feels as though it matches the music better.
• 00:45:695 (3) - Give this pattern a better feel and greater flow by flipping this note
like so.• 01:02:195 (1) - Again, new combo on this note to indicate sudden slider speed up.
• 01:57:194 (1) - This spacing will confuse a lot of players. Please fix this.
• 02:09:861 (1) - This would match the music and have a better feel it you
do this.
[Overall]
I'm tired. But good map! I think this can go for a bubble, but there is always room for improvement. Get more mods (2-3) and call me back for a re-check.
EDIT:
I AM STUPID It seems as though I mixed in the mods of the two last diffs together. Don't worry, it's fixed now.