Beuchi-chan wrote:

Revived!!

Good luck with your beatmap [Te][Amo] (fff I'm starting to hate this word limit ;_;)

Louis Cyphre wrote:

little IRC mod

- new mp3 (http://puu.sh/6Xjo) 192 kb/s now
- removed useless words in tags
- Set preview point
- Suggested to resnap kiai sections and make them same in all diffs

Good luck!

MileiyHrmirlt wrote:

Nice Map XD
I like Nightcore song<3

but
Broken Heart
OD9→8
AR8→9

CXu wrote:

Hi there o/

Everything I say is to be treated as a suggestion. Feel free to ignore this post if you so see fit.

[General]
Timing feels off somehow though I have no idea what it is or how to fix it. Try consulting someone with timing experience to check?

Breaks in all diffs are different, and normal doesn't even have breaks. Consider making atleast your own diffs consistent. I suggest 01:08:865 - 01:11:623. I know the break is a bit short, but it's what makes most sense to me. Either that or a part of the slow section.

The hitsounds feels a bit bland to me It's like it's not really giving me that feeling of hitting the notes together with the music. Try using stronger-sounding hitsounds?

the tag "BounceBabe" is in [LoliFlan's Love], which I have no idea why is there? You could also add LoliFlan to the tags actually.

[True Love]
00:24:742 (1) - Finish on beginning
00:27:500 (4) - Newcombo?
00:29:568 (6) - New combo?
00:29:568 (6,7,8) - Do you need finish on all of them? I suggest removing on (6,7)
00:32:670 (4) - New combo, then remove new combo at 00:34:394 (1) and add at 00:35:428 (4).
If you like this kind of new-combo pattern, consider doing it for the rest of the diff as I'm lazy to point them out again xD It's following the vocals.
00:34:394 (3,4,5,1) - This pattern might be confusing and hard to read in an easy, since it's overlapping.
00:35:428 (1) - Finish
00:46:804 (1) - Finish on beginning
01:08:865 (1) - Center this?
I guess this diff in general needs more finishes :p
01:48:162 (3,4,5) - Confusing again I think. You can move it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168437

[Love Me]
Yeah, you could try following vocals with the newcombo here too.
00:29:913 (6) - Move this upwards so it looks like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168439 Then move 00:30:258 (1) - here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168444 and finally move 00:30:602 (2,3,4,5,6) - so 00:31:981 (4) - is directly above 00:33:705 (1). http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168445
00:56:628 (5,6) - Move up 1 grid?
00:46:631 (1) to 01:05:246 (6) <-- I love the finishes <3 Try using them in the other diffs?
01:09:210 - Add a break here
01:13:002 - 01:20:068 <--- try using the defaul soft-hitwhistle here and see if you can come up with something. It feels a bit empty.
01:20:585 - Add a spinner here, ending at 01:22:654. You need to remove that slider. Add a note on the current endpoint.
02:05:570 (5,6) - Down 1 grid
02:17:635 - 02:28:838 <-- where are the hitsounds D:
02:25:219 (7,1) - This is weird. Try this pattern: http://puu.sh/7oYt

[LoliFlan's Love]
00:05:438 - 00:05:783 - <-- unused timing sections? Delete them
This diff has some weird spacing and sliderslowdowns that you should consider fixing.
For example:
00:27:327 (1,2) -
00:28:362 (3,1) -
00:32:670 (1,2) - This can be fixed by reversing the 2nd slider
00:34:566 (5,1) - And this slider
00:38:358 (1,2,3) -
I feel they kill the flow.

00:25:432 (3,4,5) - All 1/2, but different spacing that doesn't feel right.
00:26:466 (2,3,1) - Spread out the blue sliders so the yellow one fits perfectly in between.
00:46:631 - Aww, kiai time and the whole section feels slow :<
01:02:316 (5) - Remove this
01:06:797 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - You suddenly switch what you're following here. I think it makes more sense to change at 01:06:107
01:09:037 - Break
01:25:928 (1) - This feels really unnatural.Either begin it on the blue tick at 01:26:014 - or just have it on the white tick.
01:30:754 (5) - End this slider at 01:30:927 -
01:39:200 (2,3) - spacing :<
01:55:746 - More natural to have kiai begin here imo.
02:04:881 (6,7,8) - Spacing again.
02:25:908 (1) - Extend spinner to 02:28:838
Try using some more finishes too.

[Broken Heart]
OD -1
AR -1? <-- This is fine either way, but for me AR 8 felt much better.

00:23:363 - 00:29:396 <-- You should add hitsounds in this part too.
00:35:773 (9) - Finish
01:22:654 (1,2,3) - This is kinda covered by the "Clear" from the spinner. Consider moving?
01:26:101 (7,1) - Swap new combos

Well, the spacing is a bit inconsistent here too, but it is an insane, so I'm not pointing them out. Some of them did feel a bit weird though, mainly those slower ones in the kiai sections. Try some more finishes here too I think.

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Well, all in all the mapset is good. I'd like to hear some louder hitsounding though, as I said
Good luck~~

ziin wrote:

Use this skin please. Your spinner is unrankable.

Also you should add SliderBorder=255,255,255 under [colours] in each difficulty because you are skinning the hitcircle.

Pereira006 wrote:

hello

work with you almost 1 month about this map and many about styles and mod

now everthing look good now and so funny

good job for hard work this

2 STAR ! for you

don't give me kudosu pleasse because i didn't save chat proof

anyway good luck with this map

-Sekai- wrote:

[LoliFlan's Love]
CZ -1, AR -1~? it's hard so, make more like hard not insane plz ~
00:36:656 (1) - remove NC~
00:52:332 (1) - remove whistle and add finish~
01:04:735 (6) - NC~
01:05:252 (1) - remove NC~
01:05:424 (10) - NC~
01:06:113 (1) - remove NC~
02:01:238 (6) - remove whistle and add finish~
good work lolicore great as ever i see :3

Thanks nyaa~

-Sekai- wrote:

~~~~~

[True Love]
AR+3 or 2 plz~ so as OD~ +2 or 3~
00:30:282 (5) - NC~
00:30:627 (1) - remove NC~
00:32:694 (5) - NC~
00:34:416 (1) - remove NC~
00:35:450 (5) - NC~
00:36:139 (2) - DS to 0.0 and off the grip and move it under the 5
00:40:962 (4) - NC~
01:26:440 (3) - ^
ok that's it~

[Love Me]
00:32:005 (4) - 1 grip right~
00:33:727 (1) - ^
00:53:193 (4) - remove the finish~
00:56:294 (4) - ^
00:59:050 (4) - ^
01:01:807 (3) - ^
01:04:563 (4) - ^
01:39:533 (2) - 1 grip down
01:59:688 (5) - remove finish here~
02:02:099 (4) - ^
02:05:200 (4) - ^
02:07:956 (4) - ^
02:10:713 (3) - ^
02:13:469 (4) - ^
02:18:981 (6) - ^
02:21:738 (4) - ^
ok just fix those finishes, other then that it's good~

[LoliFlan's Love]
CZ -1, AR -1~? it's hard so, make more like hard not insane plz ~
00:36:656 (1) - remove NC~
00:52:332 (1) - remove whistle and add finish~
01:04:735 (6) - NC~
01:05:252 (1) - remove NC~
01:05:424 (10) - NC~
01:06:113 (1) - remove NC~
02:01:238 (6) - remove whistle and add finish~
good work lolicore great as ever i see :3

[Broken Heart]
00:30:282 (1) - remove finish plz >o<
00:35:794 (9) - add finish~
01:13:865 (4) - remove finish~
01:26:096 (7) - NC~
01:26:613 (1) - remove NC ~
nice work :3

nice map, and good luck :3

Thx for modding

• why was this diff mapped in 1/3? o-o

1. I don't normally go for nazi stuff like this, but since you're using symmetrical spacings: 00:48:887 (5) - shouldn't it be aligned with 00:48:198 (3) ? (since it'd look a bit odd if you only moved this one, try using this spacing, in case you wanna change it: http://puu.sh/7T3K)
2. 01:15:530 (2,3,4,5,6) - purple lines are a bit too hard for new players, imo.. consider mapping this in some alternative way (this goes for the other notes placed on purple ticks)
3. 01:47:112 (5) - add new combo here? (and remove it on 01:47:457 (1))

1. 00:33:727 (1) - move new combo to 00:35:450 (2) ?
2. 01:06:285 (1,1) - add break between them
3. 01:15:588 (2) - nc maybe?
4. 01:44:356 (1) - increase the volume? sounds a bit weird with it so low here

1. 00:29:076 (1) - the anti-jump didn't fit much due to the pause, which sounds a bit awkward ._. consider adding a note at 00:28:904 (x)
2. 00:38:895 (x) - add a note here?
3. 00:59:739 (1,2,3,4,5) - this anti jump didn't really fit, and it's also confusing in the gameplay. consider using a regular spacing
4. 01:02:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
5. 01:59:343 (5) - consider making this spacing consistent with the rest of the combo
   Generally, this diff is good, but the slider speed/spacing sudden changes turn the map a bit annoying D: I highly suggest you to take another look at that to make sure they really fit

1. 01:55:746 - unsnapped section
2. 02:28:155 -
3. 02:28:838 - ^

1. I would prefer to use the same Combo colors in every diff.
2. ^~ Same for the playfield background color
3. The Inherited Points aren't exactly placed on ticks. I would fix that ;3

1. 00:39:584 (3) - I would prefer to use only one sliderreverse because Newbies won't hold after playing the first reverse. Placing more than 1 sliderrevers on one slider isn't that good in a Easy-Diff
2. 01:30:575 (1) - Maybe add a note here and put the spinner one white tick on the right?
3. Maybe you should map until 02:28:801

1. 00:23:391 (1,2,3) - Remove them, so every diff starts at the same time.
2. 00:35:450 (1) - 2 grids up?

1. 00:27:870 (2,3) - Move to the top of the screen maybe? To make the reading easier.
2. 00:39:068 (3,4,5,6) - The same as above, but move down.
3. 00:41:135 (1,2,3) - I don't get the slider slow down. Makes no sense to me cause the rhythm is still fast. I would remove that slow down.
4. 00:49:920 (3) - Same as above... Move to the top of the screen.
5. 00:50:437 (4,1) - Why are you using antijumps over and over again? D: I would prefer a bigger distance here.
6. 00:59:223 (5,1) - Fast Slider and then 5 antijumps? That's hard to read. I'd prefer to slow down that slider at least (like you did here 01:01:462 (4))
7. 01:02:323 (x) - Add a note
8. 01:26:096 (1) - You mad? Slider on a blue tick?! Place it on the white tick and make it end on the next white tick!
9. 01:28:335 (x) - Add a note. Would fit better to the rhythm.
10. 01:39:188 (2,3) - Make the distance bigger. (before this you got the same spacing in 1/2 and now in 1/1. It's hard to read)
11. 01:44:356 (1) - Slow down makes no sense.
12. 01:59:343 (5) - Antijump makes no sense D: Add a note at 01:59:171 or make the distance bigger.
13. 02:04:511 (4) - New Combo
14. 02:18:120 (1,2) - Move a few grids down
15. 02:19:498 (4) - Add a note
16. 02:23:633 (3,4) - Distance bigger.

1. 00:23:391 (1,2,3) - Same as in LoliFlan's Love
2. 00:34:244 (5) - New Combo?
3. 00:39:929 (1) - Make it start on that blue tick maybe?
4. 01:13:004 (1) - How about a slider slow down here until 01:22:651? Would fit more to the vocals of the song (,which are slow and soft)
5. 01:26:613 (2,3) - Switch them maybe, so that the slider comes before that circle? Would fit better to the music.
6. (01:33:676 (3) - Here you did that slow down)
7. 01:45:906 + 01:46:079 - Add a notes
8. 01:51:074 (4,5,6,7,8) - Make the distance bigger (maybe with another pattern)
9. 01:55:553 (x) - Add a note
10. 02:12:608 (6) - New Combo

1. Uncheck "Letterbox during breaks"

1. 01:46:079 (X) - Add circle?

1. 01:02:496 (1) - Spacing or add circle @ 01:02:323.
2. 01:24:029 (2) - Add clap on end

1. Maybe map the rest of the song?

vivere wrote:

D'awwwww amé el tema ♥ te dejo una estrella :3

-Lennox- wrote:

Hey There.

General

• Black Background colour in every diff? ( song setup -> colour -> Background colour )
• The Preview Time in [Broken Heart] is different then in other diffs. Fix it via .osu
[True Love] / [Love Me] / [Hard Love] -> Prewiev Time is at: 46779
[Broken Heart] -> Preview Time is at: 46607

• The KIAI time starts and ends at different points.
First KIAI TIME: 57844 End: 66113
Second KIAI TIME: 115726 End: 148801

• The SB Load goes up to 6 in some parts. This is UNRANKABLE. Idk how to avoid this.. try to ask a SB pro ( jericho2442, Larto )

• If you want to add a time line do it right over the circle. And not before
• 01:33:503 - Move this timing section to 01:33:676 and don't use 5% Volume. Turn it up to 15~20%.
01:38:844 - Move this timing section to 01:39:188.
01:20:325 - Move this timing section to 01:22:651.

True Love

• 00:33:038 (2) - Reverse sliders with more than 1 reverse aren't that good. Could be confusing for new players. If you won't get trouble with that you should fix this.
• 00:56:122 (3) - This slider needs more work. Look at THISthread and create a sexy slider.
• 01:30:575 (7,1) - This could be also confusing. The spinner appears at the same moment as the Circle. Maybe you move the spinner to the next white tick?
• 01:55:726 - Why the end? Map it to the ending!

Love Me

• 01:29:197 - Add here a hitsound. ( With time lines blahblah you know what i mean )
• Miss the claps at the last KIAI part.

Hard Love

• Miss the claps at the last KIAI part.

Broken Heart

• 00:37:862 (9,10,11) - What is this. Pls don't do this with those patterns.. thats just mean.
• 00:39:757 (1) - This spinner is UNRANKABLE since AUTO doesn't reach 3000 Points.
• 00:55:777 (1) - ^
• 01:09:042 - Add break Time
• Miss the claps at the last KIAI part.


Keep up your work!

256,144,47509,2,0,B|224:192|256:240,1,100,2|0

1. About sb thing, even i don't understand much but i found some problem here. Here it is :
   
   1. I found this picture in SB is unused : sb\zoom.png
   2. There are sb element that are not .png which can cause sb loads high. Here it is :
      
      1. sb\grey.jpg
      2. bg.jpg
      3. sb\soft.jpg

1. First, i'll mention that there are unsnapped timing point here :
   
   1. 01:12:915
   2. 01:20:327
2. I suggest you add a whistle sound with at the begining part of the song. It feels so empty without a hitsound, and the song has already intense. Here's some my suggestion, put whistle at every part that i mention :
   
   1. 00:24:770 (1) - at endpoint
   2. 00:26:148 (3) - both startpoint and endpoint
   3. 00:27:526 (1) -
   4. 00:27:870 (2) - startpoint.
3. 01:13:004 (1) - From here, i recomend that you are using default soft hitsound. The custom whistle at this part is too loud while the song itself is calm at this part. Just change the timing section with default soft hitsound at this time. If you follow this don't forget to add whistle at the startpoint.
4. 01:18:172 (1) - This spinner really should end at 01:19:894 because the beat stops here.
5. 02:17:776 (1) - Add finish sounds here at the startpoint? I think it's good to hear.

1. Again, i'll suggest you adding whistle sound at the beginning part of the song. Here it is :
   
   1. 00:25:114 (2) -
   2. 00:25:459 (3) -
   3. 00:26:837 (5) -
   4. 00:27:870 (2) -
   5. 00:28:215 (3) -
   6. 00:29:593 (5) -
   7. 00:29:937 (6) -
2. 00:33:727 (2) - Why you're not blanket this slider with the previous slider. It's more better than having awkward postion like this. Refer to my example : http://puu.sh/cQwg. Oh, don't forget to adjust the spacing if you follow this suggestion.
3. 00:35:450 (3) - How about add a finish here at the endpoint? Sounds good to me.
4. 00:51:643 (5) - Because you are having whistle sounds at this rythim, than you really should add whistle sounds here to keep to consistencies.
5. 01:22:651 (1) - How about adding a finish here at the startpoint of the slider? Sounds good to me.
6. 01:53:658 (2) - Ah same reason as above, add a whistle here.

1. 01:16:621 (3) - I think this whistle sounds is misplaced. It should really placed here : 01:16:966 (4)
2. 01:19:722 (6) - Also, adding a finish here at the startpoint will make the hitsounds more consistent
3. Oh my, this diff is much much better compared to your normal and easy diff. Great job

1. Oh yes, first of all, there are unsnapped timing point here:
   
   1. 00:45:401
   2. 00:45:487
   3. 00:46:607
2. 01:13:004 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Why it's empty again? >.< I suggest you add default soft whistle sound into this rythim like you do at hard diff.
3. 01:36:432 (1) - I think no need to add finish sounds here. The background rythim doesn't support it.
4. 01:38:499 (5,6) - Ah same as above, i think this is more like overused.

Lizbeth wrote:

Re-Check~

Intense Love
Resnap all notes~ Listo
Todo bien, unas cuantas sugerencias sobre los combos:
00:49:576 (1) - quita el new combo, y agregalo en la nota siguiente Listo
01:36:260 (7) - agrega new combo y quita el siguiente Listo
01:46:768 (1) - quita el new combo y agregalo aquí 01:47:457 (5) Listo
02:03:994 (1) - quita el new combo, y agregalo en la nota siguiente Listo

True Love
Me sigue pareciendo un poco difícil, te dare unos cuantos consejos, tu decides si seguirlos o no para hacerlo mas fácil
00:29:593 (3,4) - elimina estas dos notas Ok
00:35:450 (1) - Elimina el slider y pon una nota aquí: 00:35:794 Listo
00:37:517 (6,1) - Elimina este tipo de stacks que están tan separados en el time line, no estan mal, pero para un Easy es muy confuso. Listo
00:58:878 (3,4) - Igual aquí Ok
01:22:995 (2,3) - Igual Ok
01:46:423 (4) - Elimina esta nota Listo
01:49:869 (6) - Elimina esta nota Listo

Es todo por ahora

Lizbeth wrote:

Una ultima cosa, opino lo mismo que Shiirn sobre ese intro tan largo. Estaría bien si agregas un aviso de que es un long intro, o haces algo creativo con algunas imagenes.

EDIT: Bubbled

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bien [teA]!! Felicitaciones y suerte a la hora del rank

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello, let's see

General:
- Difficulties name's don't seem to make a lot of sense between each other. If you can find better names that would be cool but if you can't is fine too.
I suggest using: No Love > Weak Love > Strong Love > Intense Love You're right
Those names work both backward and forward on the intensity scale because since the song is about love becoming a lie you can do intense love first then go backwards or if you want to keep the current relation that's fine too ^^

SB:
- greys.png, love.png and light.png have some stuff around them, clean them up ? I cleaned i think they are right

Skin:
- Missing spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin. You can make these 1x1 png images. I created the images not 1x1 (whit template skin)
- Missing pause-back, pause-continue, pause-retry Same here

True Love:
- 00:35:794 >> I think it would be confusing for players if you place it between (4,5) also new combo Done
- 01:19:894 >> Silence the spinner ? 10% Done
- 01:46:423 >> Add a note with clap, it feels kinda empty Done
- 01:50:213 >> Make the tail end face (2) for a smoother transition Done

Weak Love:
- 00:37:173 >> New combo ? Done
- 01:02:323 >> Add a repeat ? Done
- 01:05:080 >> Move it down instead ? I mean form a V instead of a ^ Done, ( whit other fix)
- 01:15:588 (2,3) >> Move the tail of (2) to x:328 y:264 and the end of (3) to x:384 y:328. I know very nazi but it looks better, optional so if you don't want to move it, is ok Done
- 01:18:861 >> A 1/1 slider works better here Done
- 01:38:499 (5,6) >> I doesn't look like the notes are spaced equally as other previous notes Done
- 02:11:229 >> Add a repeat ? Done
- 02:13:986 (1,2,3) >> Form a ^ with these Done, ( whit other fix)

Hard Love:
- 00:39:757 >> I think these note is an extra note, it means is not necessarily needed and does not contribute very much so maybe delete it Done
- 01:19:722 >> The finish is a bit too much ... a whistle would sound better ^^ Also remove the read slider point and curve the slider betterDone
- Really nice and smooth ^^ Thanks

Intense Love:
- 01:19:722 >> Same as Hard Love Done
- 01:29:369 >> Extra note, delete it ? Done
- 01:36:432 >> This sound better to me Done

- 02:28:801 >> Remove finishDone

* Pretty good! popping for now, call me back after the fixes ^^

• 
  Skin:

1. Veo que forzaste el Slider Border, pero no lo hiciste de la forma correcta.
   
   Ese espacio que está marcado no debe estar ahí, sino osu! no reconoce el código y por consiguiente, es como si no estuviera. La forma correcta de hacerlo es la siguiente:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,255,128
   Combo2 : 255,128,128
   Combo3 : 128,128,255
   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

narakucrimson wrote:

Hola! Voy a tener que poppear la burbuja por lo siguiente:

[General]

• 
  Skin:

1. Veo que forzaste el Slider Border, pero no lo hiciste de la forma correcta.
   
   Ese espacio que está marcado no debe estar ahí, sino osu! no reconoce el código y por consiguiente, es como si no estuviera. La forma correcta de hacerlo es la siguiente:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,255,128
   Combo2 : 255,128,128
   Combo3 : 128,128,255
   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

Gracias !!

Todo lo demás parece estar bien (voy a tener que hacer un double check, pero de todas formas es un buen pronóstico!).
Llamame cuando hayas terminado de arreglar eso! Nos vemos!

Lizbeth wrote:

Felicidades<3

Muchisimas gracias en verdad !!

terametis wrote:

Congratz

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

congrats~

NewRulerNA wrote:

Congratulations~

-Sekai- wrote:

gretz for your first map ranked >w<

Miya wrote:

Hey, congratz

Tony wrote:

[Te][Amoooooooooooo] congrats :3