vivere wrote:

D'awwwww amé el tema ♥ te dejo una estrella :3

-Lennox- wrote:

Hey There.

General

• Black Background colour in every diff? ( song setup -> colour -> Background colour )
• The Preview Time in [Broken Heart] is different then in other diffs. Fix it via .osu
[True Love] / [Love Me] / [Hard Love] -> Prewiev Time is at: 46779
[Broken Heart] -> Preview Time is at: 46607

• The KIAI time starts and ends at different points.
First KIAI TIME: 57844 End: 66113
Second KIAI TIME: 115726 End: 148801

• The SB Load goes up to 6 in some parts. This is UNRANKABLE. Idk how to avoid this.. try to ask a SB pro ( jericho2442, Larto )

• If you want to add a time line do it right over the circle. And not before
• 01:33:503 - Move this timing section to 01:33:676 and don't use 5% Volume. Turn it up to 15~20%.
01:38:844 - Move this timing section to 01:39:188.
01:20:325 - Move this timing section to 01:22:651.

True Love

• 00:33:038 (2) - Reverse sliders with more than 1 reverse aren't that good. Could be confusing for new players. If you won't get trouble with that you should fix this.
• 00:56:122 (3) - This slider needs more work. Look at THISthread and create a sexy slider.
• 01:30:575 (7,1) - This could be also confusing. The spinner appears at the same moment as the Circle. Maybe you move the spinner to the next white tick?
• 01:55:726 - Why the end? Map it to the ending!

Love Me

• 01:29:197 - Add here a hitsound. ( With time lines blahblah you know what i mean )
• Miss the claps at the last KIAI part.

Hard Love

• Miss the claps at the last KIAI part.

Broken Heart

• 00:37:862 (9,10,11) - What is this. Pls don't do this with those patterns.. thats just mean.
• 00:39:757 (1) - This spinner is UNRANKABLE since AUTO doesn't reach 3000 Points.
• 00:55:777 (1) - ^
• 01:09:042 - Add break Time
• Miss the claps at the last KIAI part.


Keep up your work!

256,144,47509,2,0,B|224:192|256:240,1,100,2|0

1. About sb thing, even i don't understand much but i found some problem here. Here it is :
   
   1. I found this picture in SB is unused : sb\zoom.png
   2. There are sb element that are not .png which can cause sb loads high. Here it is :
      
      1. sb\grey.jpg
      2. bg.jpg
      3. sb\soft.jpg

1. First, i'll mention that there are unsnapped timing point here :
   
   1. 01:12:915
   2. 01:20:327
2. I suggest you add a whistle sound with at the begining part of the song. It feels so empty without a hitsound, and the song has already intense. Here's some my suggestion, put whistle at every part that i mention :
   
   1. 00:24:770 (1) - at endpoint
   2. 00:26:148 (3) - both startpoint and endpoint
   3. 00:27:526 (1) -
   4. 00:27:870 (2) - startpoint.
3. 01:13:004 (1) - From here, i recomend that you are using default soft hitsound. The custom whistle at this part is too loud while the song itself is calm at this part. Just change the timing section with default soft hitsound at this time. If you follow this don't forget to add whistle at the startpoint.
4. 01:18:172 (1) - This spinner really should end at 01:19:894 because the beat stops here.
5. 02:17:776 (1) - Add finish sounds here at the startpoint? I think it's good to hear.

1. Again, i'll suggest you adding whistle sound at the beginning part of the song. Here it is :
   
   1. 00:25:114 (2) -
   2. 00:25:459 (3) -
   3. 00:26:837 (5) -
   4. 00:27:870 (2) -
   5. 00:28:215 (3) -
   6. 00:29:593 (5) -
   7. 00:29:937 (6) -
2. 00:33:727 (2) - Why you're not blanket this slider with the previous slider. It's more better than having awkward postion like this. Refer to my example : http://puu.sh/cQwg. Oh, don't forget to adjust the spacing if you follow this suggestion.
3. 00:35:450 (3) - How about add a finish here at the endpoint? Sounds good to me.
4. 00:51:643 (5) - Because you are having whistle sounds at this rythim, than you really should add whistle sounds here to keep to consistencies.
5. 01:22:651 (1) - How about adding a finish here at the startpoint of the slider? Sounds good to me.
6. 01:53:658 (2) - Ah same reason as above, add a whistle here.

1. 01:16:621 (3) - I think this whistle sounds is misplaced. It should really placed here : 01:16:966 (4)
2. 01:19:722 (6) - Also, adding a finish here at the startpoint will make the hitsounds more consistent
3. Oh my, this diff is much much better compared to your normal and easy diff. Great job

1. Oh yes, first of all, there are unsnapped timing point here:
   
   1. 00:45:401
   2. 00:45:487
   3. 00:46:607
2. 01:13:004 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Why it's empty again? >.< I suggest you add default soft whistle sound into this rythim like you do at hard diff.
3. 01:36:432 (1) - I think no need to add finish sounds here. The background rythim doesn't support it.
4. 01:38:499 (5,6) - Ah same as above, i think this is more like overused.

Lizbeth wrote:

Re-Check~

Intense Love
Resnap all notes~ Listo
Todo bien, unas cuantas sugerencias sobre los combos:
00:49:576 (1) - quita el new combo, y agregalo en la nota siguiente Listo
01:36:260 (7) - agrega new combo y quita el siguiente Listo
01:46:768 (1) - quita el new combo y agregalo aquí 01:47:457 (5) Listo
02:03:994 (1) - quita el new combo, y agregalo en la nota siguiente Listo

True Love
Me sigue pareciendo un poco difícil, te dare unos cuantos consejos, tu decides si seguirlos o no para hacerlo mas fácil
00:29:593 (3,4) - elimina estas dos notas Ok
00:35:450 (1) - Elimina el slider y pon una nota aquí: 00:35:794 Listo
00:37:517 (6,1) - Elimina este tipo de stacks que están tan separados en el time line, no estan mal, pero para un Easy es muy confuso. Listo
00:58:878 (3,4) - Igual aquí Ok
01:22:995 (2,3) - Igual Ok
01:46:423 (4) - Elimina esta nota Listo
01:49:869 (6) - Elimina esta nota Listo

Es todo por ahora

Lizbeth wrote:

Una ultima cosa, opino lo mismo que Shiirn sobre ese intro tan largo. Estaría bien si agregas un aviso de que es un long intro, o haces algo creativo con algunas imagenes.

EDIT: Bubbled

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bien [teA]!! Felicitaciones y suerte a la hora del rank

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello, let's see

General:
- Difficulties name's don't seem to make a lot of sense between each other. If you can find better names that would be cool but if you can't is fine too.
I suggest using: No Love > Weak Love > Strong Love > Intense Love You're right
Those names work both backward and forward on the intensity scale because since the song is about love becoming a lie you can do intense love first then go backwards or if you want to keep the current relation that's fine too ^^

SB:
- greys.png, love.png and light.png have some stuff around them, clean them up ? I cleaned i think they are right

Skin:
- Missing spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin. You can make these 1x1 png images. I created the images not 1x1 (whit template skin)
- Missing pause-back, pause-continue, pause-retry Same here

True Love:
- 00:35:794 >> I think it would be confusing for players if you place it between (4,5) also new combo Done
- 01:19:894 >> Silence the spinner ? 10% Done
- 01:46:423 >> Add a note with clap, it feels kinda empty Done
- 01:50:213 >> Make the tail end face (2) for a smoother transition Done

Weak Love:
- 00:37:173 >> New combo ? Done
- 01:02:323 >> Add a repeat ? Done
- 01:05:080 >> Move it down instead ? I mean form a V instead of a ^ Done, ( whit other fix)
- 01:15:588 (2,3) >> Move the tail of (2) to x:328 y:264 and the end of (3) to x:384 y:328. I know very nazi but it looks better, optional so if you don't want to move it, is ok Done
- 01:18:861 >> A 1/1 slider works better here Done
- 01:38:499 (5,6) >> I doesn't look like the notes are spaced equally as other previous notes Done
- 02:11:229 >> Add a repeat ? Done
- 02:13:986 (1,2,3) >> Form a ^ with these Done, ( whit other fix)

Hard Love:
- 00:39:757 >> I think these note is an extra note, it means is not necessarily needed and does not contribute very much so maybe delete it Done
- 01:19:722 >> The finish is a bit too much ... a whistle would sound better ^^ Also remove the read slider point and curve the slider betterDone
- Really nice and smooth ^^ Thanks

Intense Love:
- 01:19:722 >> Same as Hard Love Done
- 01:29:369 >> Extra note, delete it ? Done
- 01:36:432 >> This sound better to me Done

- 02:28:801 >> Remove finishDone

* Pretty good! popping for now, call me back after the fixes ^^

• 
  Skin:

1. Veo que forzaste el Slider Border, pero no lo hiciste de la forma correcta.
   
   Ese espacio que está marcado no debe estar ahí, sino osu! no reconoce el código y por consiguiente, es como si no estuviera. La forma correcta de hacerlo es la siguiente:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,255,128
   Combo2 : 255,128,128
   Combo3 : 128,128,255
   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

narakucrimson wrote:

Hola! Voy a tener que poppear la burbuja por lo siguiente:

[General]

• 
  Skin:

1. Veo que forzaste el Slider Border, pero no lo hiciste de la forma correcta.
   
   Ese espacio que está marcado no debe estar ahí, sino osu! no reconoce el código y por consiguiente, es como si no estuviera. La forma correcta de hacerlo es la siguiente:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,255,128
   Combo2 : 255,128,128
   Combo3 : 128,128,255
   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

Gracias !!

Todo lo demás parece estar bien (voy a tener que hacer un double check, pero de todas formas es un buen pronóstico!).
Llamame cuando hayas terminado de arreglar eso! Nos vemos!

Lizbeth wrote:

Felicidades<3

Muchisimas gracias en verdad !!

terametis wrote:

Congratz

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

congrats~

NewRulerNA wrote:

Congratulations~

-Sekai- wrote:

gretz for your first map ranked >w<

Miya wrote:

Hey, congratz

Tony wrote:

[Te][Amoooooooooooo] congrats :3