atk1992 wrote:

vivicat's Easy

绿线的问题：很多绿线都提前了半拍放，最好把他们都snap到下一个有NOTE的地方。
00:55:384 - 无意义绿线
02:32:462 - ^

鉴于类似 http://puu.sh/bBpf 和 http://puu.sh/bBpw 这样的东西太多，就直接当没看见了。（准确地说我连看见 http://puu.sh/bBrA 这样拉出格的都觉得不太舒服OTL。）
建议Grid开2或者3把一些部分用心排一下

其他没什么好挑的

y u c a's Hard

hmm...its better to change these timing sections like http://puu.sh/bBdt to http://puu.sh/bBdY I think.

00:21:844 (2,3) - did't stacked well
02:43:417 (1,2) - just advice, shorten these 2 sliders to follow the lyric would be fun to play, and add a note at 02:45:271 if you have changed the sliders
02:52:855 (4,5,6,7,8) - did you mean http://puu.sh/bBjX ?
02:57:069 - unnecessary timing section

nice rhythm but quite readily style, just like you put the stuffs into the map without thinking, so I won't mod this diff seriously too, sorry.

Insane

绿线。。你们仨习惯怎么凑一块去了0.0

00:42:406 (1) - 删掉重放，让它让它自动snap到上个SLIDER的尾巴上，其他有不少同样的地方也是
01:36:002 (2) - 个人喜欢加一个NOTE然后SPIN往后拖一点，现在这样也挺好。
01:38:193 (break) 看图， http://puu.sh/bBu4 改成 http://puu.sh/bBuo
02:19:485 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏改成 http://puu.sh/bBwc 怎么样
02:43:417 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉说不上来的软绵绵的，最后一段直到结尾感觉节奏和排列都没怎么想
02:54:204 - 02:56:226 坑爹尾加break有箭头提示，可有效防止1分

没KD，给我我射还你xD
nice song & good luck

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. 0字节的normal-sliderslider有可能会造成读取lag, 用这个空白音
   [attachment=2:ae505]normal-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:ae505]
2. baca难度的offset有问题, 打开osu文件, 在[TimingPoints]下面第一排, 这样一段code
   

   945.676966292135,674.157303370787,4,2,1,50,1,0

   把945.676966292135改成946
3. tag不加个baca?

Insane

1. 01:32:631 (1) - 这个slider被300的hitburst挡到了大部分路径, 耍的时候有可能影响判断, 建议把这个slider朝上或者朝右[attachment=1:ae505]0.jpg[/attachment:ae505]
2. 01:59:934 (6,7,8,1) - 这一串看起也有点糟糕, 我个人是不太喜欢note太扎堆, 比较难看, 可以试下这种, 这个样子打起就很顺
   

   232,80,119934,2,0,B|271:63|271:17,2,65,4|0|4
   176,24,120440,1,0
   232,80,120608,1,0
   176,24,120777,5,0

   [attachment=0:ae505]1.jpg[/attachment:ae505]

最先看到Thinking of you我以为是Katy Perry那首, 那首也好听
其他莫得啥, 改好了再找我就是

Breeze wrote:

Another Nishino kano fun map
Bubbled

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

The files "sb/b1.jpg" and "sb/b2.png" shouldn't exceed the dimension of 800x600, since used for storyboarding. Please make sure to resize them and to do a full submission after that.

Just that, difficulties are fine.

tieff wrote:

Lovely map. :3
S h i a, I love you.

_Knightmare wrote:

Who's the girl in the pic? ^-^