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Chocopikel
Thanks for mod request~

[General]
E H I...? Diff has the rule that it must consecutive
How about changing Easy into Normal?
or make normal newly

[vivicat's Easy]
02:00:946 (4) - New combo
02:01:620 (1) - Remove new combo
02:31:957 (5) - New combo...?
02:47:463 (2) - This slider is hidden by previous notes (02:45:440 (3)), it's kinda puzzled
02:54:204 (1) - Remove new combo
02:56:227 (2) - New combo

[y u c a's hard]
Change into y u c a's Hard from y u c a's hard
HP Drain -2
OD -1
Hardにしては高すぎかと
01:08:698 (7) - New combo
02:41:395 (7) - ^
曲に合ってないstackが多いので見直したほうがいいかと思います


[Insane]
00:40:215 (4) - The repeat of this slider is hidden by previous notes (00:38:698 (3))
01:35:328 (1) - End of slider at 01:35:833
02:14:429 (1) - Remove new combo
02:13:754 (1) - Could you space it in a better way? It looks weird right now
02:24:541 (1) - ^

Since there are many spaces looks weird of all diffs, add something
Nice song!!
Good luck!! ;)
Mikkuri
in game pm >_<

[General]
offset is 946. move heavy beat to 1619 please xD
Disable Countdown :?

[vivicat's Easy]
-change to [Normal] ? it's hard than [Easy] i think lol. when you change, try this difficult > http://puu.sh/bAXJ
-it hasn't any spinner. add them some!
  1. 00:41:395 (3,4,5) - change these note to slider with return?
  2. 00:54:878 (4) - remove nc
  3. 01:15:777 (2) - add finish tail
  4. 01:24:204 (x) - add note with finish
  5. 01:26:901 (3) - add finish
  6. 01:29:597 (4) - add note with finish
  7. 01:32:294 (3) - add finish
  8. 02:00:946 (4) - nc
  9. 02:01:620 (5) - remove nc
[y u c a's hard] << 0.0 it's [y u c a's Hard] change h -> H lol
-HP drain-1
-OD-1
  1. 00:09:541 - lol why it has custom hitsound 2? & green line are overlap :p http://puu.sh/bB2L
  2. 01:08:698 (7) - nc
  3. 01:28:586 (3) - add clap head
  4. 01:38:698 - try to pull break here
  5. 02:41:058 (6) - nc
  6. 02:47:462 (4) - remove finish (i suggest you to split slider & add sound finish on 02:47:799)
  7. 02:48:810 (1) - add finish
[Insane]
-HP drain-1
  1. 00:01:451 (2) - make it uncircle with (3) better :D
  2. 00:06:844 (2) - ^
  3. 00:22:519 (3) - add clap & whistle
  4. 00:15:103 (1) - nc
  5. 00:16:114 (3) - remove nc
  6. 00:26:226 (7) - nc
  7. 00:26:563 (1) - remove nc
  8. 00:31:283 (1) - add whsitle & 00:33:642 (1) - remove whistle head
  9. 01:38:698 - try to pull break here
  10. 00:41:732 (6) - add whistle head
  11. 00:46:451 (4) - add clap tail
  12. 00:52:181 (6) - add whistle tail
  13. 00:38:193 (1) - remove nc
  14. 00:48:642 (1) - ^
  15. 01:12:743 (1) - spacing
  16. 01:29:260 (1) - remove nc
  17. 01:36:002 (1) - add whistle
  18. just suggestion to add whistle hitsound lol
    01:50:496 (2) - add whistle
    01:51:339 (4) - ^ tail
    01:53:193 (1) - ^
    01:54:541 (5) - ^ head
    01:55:889 (2) - ^
    01:56:732 (1) - ^ tail
    02:01:283 (3) - ^ head
    02:02:631 (3) - ^ head
    02:03:642 (1) - ^ tail
    02:05:328 (2) - ^ head
    02:06:339 (1) - ^ tail
    i don't sure about whistle. it has between 00:12:406 - 01:38:024 but it don't has between 01:49:485 - 02:54:204 o.o
  19. 02:08:361 (1) - whistle
  20. 02:14:429 (1) - remove nc
  21. 02:36:002 (2) - move middle grid 1 grid left look better imo
I like Nishino Kana songs. Star anyway ~~ :D
wule
vivicat's Easy
绿线的问题:很多绿线都提前了半拍放,最好把他们都snap到下一个有NOTE的地方。
00:55:384 - 无意义绿线
02:32:462 - ^

鉴于类似 http://puu.sh/bBpfhttp://puu.sh/bBpw 这样的东西太多,就直接当没看见了。(准确地说我连看见 http://puu.sh/bBrA 这样拉出格的都觉得不太舒服OTL。)
建议Grid开2或者3把一些部分用心排一下

其他没什么好挑的

y u c a's Hard
hmm...its better to change these timing sections like http://puu.sh/bBdt to http://puu.sh/bBdY I think.

00:21:844 (2,3) - did't stacked well
02:43:417 (1,2) - just advice, shorten these 2 sliders to follow the lyric would be fun to play, and add a note at 02:45:271 if you have changed the sliders
02:52:855 (4,5,6,7,8) - did you mean http://puu.sh/bBjX ?
02:57:069 - unnecessary timing section

nice rhythm but quite readily style, just like you put the stuffs into the map without thinking, so I won't mod this diff seriously too, sorry.

Insane
绿线。。你们仨习惯怎么凑一块去了0.0

00:42:406 (1) - 删掉重放,让它让它自动snap到上个SLIDER的尾巴上,其他有不少同样的地方也是
01:36:002 (2) - 个人喜欢加一个NOTE然后SPIN往后拖一点,现在这样也挺好。
01:38:193 (break) 看图, http://puu.sh/bBu4 改成 http://puu.sh/bBuo
02:19:485 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏改成 http://puu.sh/bBwc 怎么样
02:43:417 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉说不上来的软绵绵的,最后一段直到结尾感觉节奏和排列都没怎么想
02:54:204 - 02:56:226 坑爹尾加break有箭头提示,可有效防止1分


没KD,给我我射还你xD
nice song & good luck :oops:
y u c a

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

[y u c a's hard] << 0.0 it's [y u c a's Hard] change h -> H lol
-HP drain-1
-OD-1
LOL why i put so high my bad fix
  1. 00:09:541 - lol why it has custom hitsound 2? & green line are overlap :p http://puu.sh/bB2L because if use default finich,slider side is alittle noisy so im using SC2
  2. 01:08:698 (7) - ncfix
  3. 01:28:586 (3) - add clap headoops fix
  4. 01:38:698 - try to pull break here D:?
  5. 02:41:058 (6) - nc fix
  6. 02:47:462 (4) - remove finish (i suggest you to split slider & add sound finish on 02:47:799) uhm no
  7. 02:48:810 (1) - add finishfix

y u c a's Hard
hmm...its better to change these timing sections like http://puu.sh/bBdt to http://puu.sh/bBdY I think.

00:21:844 (2,3) - did't stacked well
02:43:417 (1,2) - just advice, shorten these 2 sliders to follow the lyric would be fun to play, and add a note at 02:45:271 if you have changed the sliders
02:52:855 (4,5,6,7,8) - did you mean http://puu.sh/bBjX ?
02:57:069 - unnecessary timing section fix

nice rhythm but quite readily style, just like you put the stuffs into the map without thinking, so I won't mod this diff seriously too, sorry.

。。。。。

tyyyy mod

Download: Nishino Kana - Thinking of you (S h i a) [y u c a's Hard].osu
Sumisola
Your mapset comfort me . Your hitsound motivate me . It's a nice map .Really a nice map . S h i a , you are such a brilliant mapper . ^ ^
phonic
Hi, S h i a. y u c a. vivicat.

As your request from irc.


General

  1. AudioLeadIn: 1500?

Insane

  1. 00:15:103 (7,8) - :o
  2. 00:17:462 (5) - x:184 y:152?
  3. 00:42:406 (1) - x:247 y:133?
  4. 01:53:193 (1) - x:214 y:129?
  5. 01:57:575 (2) - x:208 y:160?

y u c a's Hard

  1. 02:16:114 (x) - add note?
  2. 02:42:406 (9) - add new combo
  3. 02:43:417 (1) - remove new combo

vivicat's Easy

  1. 02:31:957 (5) - add new combo?
  2. 02:32:631 (1) - remove new combo

very good song
Topic Starter
S h i a
easy and baca's hard is waiting on creater's response

Insane fixed most of it. thank you guys.
Apricot
Red = You NEED to change.
Orange = You should change.
Black = If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.
Blue = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.


General
  1. Difficulties need to be in a consecutive order such as Normal-Hard-Insane.
  2. -3~5ms is better for me.
Easy
  • ;)
Hard
  1. 00:21:844 (2,3) - isn't perfectly stack to the previous slider.
  2. 00:14:260 (5) - Why you are using different distance snap here? in Insane difficulty, it's fine. but this difficulty is a Hard. it will confuse a non-insane players. but, it is not unrankable issues... probably... no need to fix if you don't want. it's your choice. (same for similar instances)
  3. 00:26:563 (1) - isn't perfectly stack to the previous slider.
  4. 00:48:473 (2,3,4) - they're looked slightly weird imo. make a straight line from endpoint of the previous slider.
  5. 00:58:249 (7) - NC
  6. 01:11:563 (3) - start new combo here. i know this newcombo is following to the lyrics.. but should fix it for more readable.
  7. 02:21:844 (3) - start new combo here
Insane
  1. 00:04:653 (5) - add whistle.
  2. 00:16:957 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  3. 00:17:462 (5) - remove whistle from end of the sldier.
  4. 00:18:474 (2) - add whistle.
  5. 00:19:653 (6) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  6. 00:20:159 (7) - remove whistle from end of the sldier.
  7. 00:25:047 (5) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  8. 00:27:743 (5) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  9. 00:28:249 (6) - remove whistle from end of the sldier.
  10. 00:29:260 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  11. 00:30:440 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  12. 00:30:945 (5) - add whistle
  13. 00:36:339 (6) - add clap? (same for similar instances)
  14. 00:37:350 (3) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  15. 00:42:406 (1,2,3,4) - I am not a fan of this placements... replace them like this? so it makes a good flow imo.
  16. 01:00:440 (2) - stack to 00:58:923 (2)? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206909
  17. 00:59:934 (1) - RNC
  18. 01:00:946 (3) - NC
  19. 01:02:631 (1) - Ctrl+Shift+R, -30.
  20. 01:21:170 (5) - NC
  21. 01:21:844 (1) - RNC
  22. 01:22:519 (3) - NC
  23. 01:32:631 (1) - Why it isn't parallel to previous slider?
  24. 01:56:732 (1) - it is not perfectly stack to previous slider.
  25. 02:11:732 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206918
  26. 02:28:417 (4) - What is this anti-jump? should fix it.
  27. 02:41:901 (4,1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206920 ?
  28. 02:42:069 (1) - RNC

    some sliders are looked slightly weird. here's list of them.
    no need to fix if you don't want.
    but small changes make a big difference to how your map looks.
    SPOILER
    1. 00:38:698 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206897
    2. 00:41:732 (6) - Copy and Paste from the previous slider.
    3. 00:36:844 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206902
    4. 00:44:429 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206904 and (3) is not perfectly stack to this slider. atleast you need to fix it.
    5. 00:56:901 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206906
    6. 00:58:923 (2) - 1grid down the endpoint.
    7. 01:04:485 (5) -
    8. 01:09:710 (3) -
    9. 01:20:159 (3) -
    10. 01:59:934 (6) -
    11. 02:05:328 (2) -
    12. 02:23:024 (4) -
Topic Starter
S h i a

Apricot wrote:

Red = You NEED to change.
Orange = You should change.
Black = If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.
Blue = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.


General
  1. Difficulties need to be in a consecutive order such as Normal-Hard-Insane.
  2. -3~5ms is better for me.
Easy
  • ;)
Hard
  1. 00:21:844 (2,3) - isn't perfectly stack to the previous slider.
  2. 00:14:260 (5) - Why you are using different distance snap here? in Insane difficulty, it's fine. but this difficulty is a Hard. it will confuse a non-insane players. but, it is not unrankable issues... probably... no need to fix if you don't want. it's your choice. (same for similar instances)
  3. 00:26:563 (1) - isn't perfectly stack to the previous slider.
  4. 00:48:473 (2,3,4) - they're looked slightly weird imo. make a straight line from endpoint of the previous slider.
  5. 00:58:249 (7) - NC
  6. 01:11:563 (3) - start new combo here. i know this newcombo is following to the lyrics.. but should fix it for more readable.
  7. 02:21:844 (3) - start new combo here
Insane
  1. 00:04:653 (5) - add whistle.
  2. 00:16:957 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  3. 00:17:462 (5) - remove whistle from end of the sldier.
  4. 00:18:474 (2) - add whistle.
  5. 00:19:653 (6) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  6. 00:20:159 (7) - remove whistle from end of the sldier.
  7. 00:25:047 (5) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  8. 00:27:743 (5) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  9. 00:28:249 (6) - remove whistle from end of the sldier.
  10. 00:29:260 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  11. 00:30:440 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  12. 00:30:945 (5) - add whistle
  13. 00:36:339 (6) - add clap? (same for similar instances)
  14. 00:37:350 (3) - add whistle to start of the slider.
  15. 00:42:406 (1,2,3,4) - I am not a fan of this placements... replace them like this? so it makes a good flow imo.
  16. 01:00:440 (2) - stack to 00:58:923 (2)? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206909
  17. 00:59:934 (1) - RNC
  18. 01:00:946 (3) - NC
  19. 01:02:631 (1) - Ctrl+Shift+R, -30.
  20. 01:21:170 (5) - NC
  21. 01:21:844 (1) - RNC
  22. 01:22:519 (3) - NC
  23. 01:32:631 (1) - Why it isn't parallel to previous slider?
  24. 01:56:732 (1) - it is not perfectly stack to previous slider.
  25. 02:11:732 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206918
  26. 02:28:417 (4) - What is this anti-jump? should fix it.
  27. 02:41:901 (4,1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206920 ?
  28. 02:42:069 (1) - RNC

    some sliders are looked slightly weird. here's list of them.
    no need to fix if you don't want.
    but small changes make a big difference to how your map looks.
    SPOILER
    1. 00:38:698 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206897
    2. 00:41:732 (6) - Copy and Paste from the previous slider.
    3. 00:36:844 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206902
    4. 00:44:429 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206904 and (3) is not perfectly stack to this slider. atleast you need to fix it.
    5. 00:56:901 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206906
    6. 00:58:923 (2) - 1grid down the endpoint.
    7. 01:04:485 (5) -
    8. 01:09:710 (3) -
    9. 01:20:159 (3) -
    10. 01:59:934 (6) -
    11. 02:05:328 (2) -
    12. 02:23:024 (4) -
I wanna give you 10 kds for this :D

Thank you Apricot. all fixed excpt 00:36:339 (6) - add clap

hard is waiting on baca
Topic Starter
S h i a

atk1992 wrote:

vivicat's Easy
绿线的问题:很多绿线都提前了半拍放,最好把他们都snap到下一个有NOTE的地方。
00:55:384 - 无意义绿线
02:32:462 - ^

鉴于类似 http://puu.sh/bBpfhttp://puu.sh/bBpw 这样的东西太多,就直接当没看见了。(准确地说我连看见 http://puu.sh/bBrA 这样拉出格的都觉得不太舒服OTL。)
建议Grid开2或者3把一些部分用心排一下

其他没什么好挑的

y u c a's Hard
hmm...its better to change these timing sections like http://puu.sh/bBdt to http://puu.sh/bBdY I think.

00:21:844 (2,3) - did't stacked well
02:43:417 (1,2) - just advice, shorten these 2 sliders to follow the lyric would be fun to play, and add a note at 02:45:271 if you have changed the sliders
02:52:855 (4,5,6,7,8) - did you mean http://puu.sh/bBjX ?
02:57:069 - unnecessary timing section

nice rhythm but quite readily style, just like you put the stuffs into the map without thinking, so I won't mod this diff seriously too, sorry.

Insane
绿线。。你们仨习惯怎么凑一块去了0.0

00:42:406 (1) - 删掉重放,让它让它自动snap到上个SLIDER的尾巴上,其他有不少同样的地方也是
01:36:002 (2) - 个人喜欢加一个NOTE然后SPIN往后拖一点,现在这样也挺好。
01:38:193 (break) 看图, http://puu.sh/bBu4 改成 http://puu.sh/bBuo
02:19:485 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏改成 http://puu.sh/bBwc 怎么样
02:43:417 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉说不上来的软绵绵的,最后一段直到结尾感觉节奏和排列都没怎么想
02:54:204 - 02:56:226 坑爹尾加break有箭头提示,可有效防止1分


没KD,给我我射还你xD
nice song & good luck :oops:
谢谢 很有用
y u c a
almost fixed ty mod phonic and Apricot
Download: Nishino Kana - Thinking of you (S h i a) [y u c a's Hard].osu

Edit: typro Orz...
Breeze
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. 0字节的normal-sliderslider有可能会造成读取lag, 用这个空白音
    Download: normal-sliderslide.rar
  2. baca难度的offset有问题, 打开osu文件, 在[TimingPoints]下面第一排, 这样一段code
    945.676966292135,674.157303370787,4,2,1,50,1,0
    把945.676966292135改成946
  3. tag不加个baca?

Insane

  1. 01:32:631 (1) - 这个slider被300的hitburst挡到了大部分路径, 耍的时候有可能影响判断, 建议把这个slider朝上或者朝右
  2. 01:59:934 (6,7,8,1) - 这一串看起也有点糟糕, 我个人是不太喜欢note太扎堆, 比较难看, 可以试下这种, 这个样子打起就很顺
    232,80,119934,2,0,B|271:63|271:17,2,65,4|0|4
    176,24,120440,1,0
    232,80,120608,1,0
    176,24,120777,5,0

最先看到Thinking of you我以为是Katy Perry那首, 那首也好听
其他莫得啥, 改好了再找我就是


Topic Starter
S h i a

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. 0字节的normal-sliderslider有可能会造成读取lag, 用这个空白音
    [attachment=2:ae505]normal-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:ae505]
  2. baca难度的offset有问题, 打开osu文件, 在[TimingPoints]下面第一排, 这样一段code
    945.676966292135,674.157303370787,4,2,1,50,1,0
    把945.676966292135改成946
  3. tag不加个baca?

Insane

  1. 01:32:631 (1) - 这个slider被300的hitburst挡到了大部分路径, 耍的时候有可能影响判断, 建议把这个slider朝上或者朝右[attachment=1:ae505]0.jpg[/attachment:ae505]
  2. 01:59:934 (6,7,8,1) - 这一串看起也有点糟糕, 我个人是不太喜欢note太扎堆, 比较难看, 可以试下这种, 这个样子打起就很顺
    232,80,119934,2,0,B|271:63|271:17,2,65,4|0|4
    176,24,120440,1,0
    232,80,120608,1,0
    176,24,120777,5,0
    [attachment=0:ae505]1.jpg[/attachment:ae505]

最先看到Thinking of you我以为是Katy Perry那首, 那首也好听
其他莫得啥, 改好了再找我就是
要得嘛。 谢谢。
Breeze
Another Nishino kano fun map :D
Bubbled
Topic Starter
S h i a

Breeze wrote:

Another Nishino kano fun map :D
Bubbled
要得。 :)
phonic
ranked gogo~
wule
泡了恭喜
Andrea
[General]

The files "sb/b1.jpg" and "sb/b2.png" shouldn't exceed the dimension of 800x600, since used for storyboarding. Please make sure to resize them and to do a full submission after that.

Just that, difficulties are fine.
Topic Starter
S h i a

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

The files "sb/b1.jpg" and "sb/b2.png" shouldn't exceed the dimension of 800x600, since used for storyboarding. Please make sure to resize them and to do a full submission after that.

Just that, difficulties are fine.

:oops: Well. storyboarding is for testing.i'm new to it, it's not looking good after size change. so i deleted them all,FIXED
and Insane diff
01:58:417 (3,5) a little clap hitsounds fixe & a little fix on 02:01:620 slider.

thank you very much osuplayer111
Andrea
Looks good now.

Ranked~
Topic Starter
S h i a
thank you sir :D
y u c a
omedeto :)

你nani sore sig................
phonic
omedetoooooo!!
No_Gu
哇._.
xsrsbsns
Grats~! :D
Nymph
这个歌好听=A=
Breeze
啧, 内涵
akrolsmir
I swear, you're stealing all of the Kantoku BGs I wanted to use.

Grats on rank tho.
wule
Ayakura Mei
真的很好听....
Axey
=3=
Sumisola
congrats~
Faust
Excellent map.

I'll be thinking of you ;)
Topic Starter
S h i a
Thank you all. :D
Dino99
Gratz!!~~~
Nice map!!~
AIR315
Congratz~

8-)
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Gratz =w=
Colin Hou
T T
tieff
Lovely map. :3
S h i a, I love you.
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S h i a

tieff wrote:

Lovely map. :3
S h i a, I love you.
love you too.<3
:D
I wish I could join osu a little earlier.
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