I wanna give you 10 kds for thisApricot wrote:
Red = You NEED to change.
Orange = You should change.
Black = If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.
Blue = Suggestion/nazi.
[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.
You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.
GeneralEasy
- Difficulties need to be in a consecutive order such as Normal-Hard-Insane.
- -3~5ms is better for me.
Hard
Insane
- 00:21:844 (2,3) - isn't perfectly stack to the previous slider.
- 00:14:260 (5) - Why you are using different distance snap here? in Insane difficulty, it's fine. but this difficulty is a Hard. it will confuse a non-insane players. but, it is not unrankable issues... probably... no need to fix if you don't want. it's your choice. (same for similar instances)
- 00:26:563 (1) - isn't perfectly stack to the previous slider.
- 00:48:473 (2,3,4) - they're looked slightly weird imo. make a straight line from endpoint of the previous slider.
- 00:58:249 (7) - NC
- 01:11:563 (3) - start new combo here. i know this newcombo is following to the lyrics.. but should fix it for more readable.
- 02:21:844 (3) - start new combo here
- 00:04:653 (5) - add whistle.
- 00:16:957 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider.
- 00:17:462 (5) - remove whistle from end of the sldier.
- 00:18:474 (2) - add whistle.
- 00:19:653 (6) - add whistle to start of the slider.
- 00:20:159 (7) - remove whistle from end of the sldier.
- 00:25:047 (5) - add whistle to start of the slider.
- 00:27:743 (5) - add whistle to start of the slider.
- 00:28:249 (6) - remove whistle from end of the sldier.
- 00:29:260 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider.
- 00:30:440 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider.
- 00:30:945 (5) - add whistle
- 00:36:339 (6) - add clap? (same for similar instances)
- 00:37:350 (3) - add whistle to start of the slider.
- 00:42:406 (1,2,3,4) - I am not a fan of this placements... replace them like this? so it makes a good flow imo.
- 01:00:440 (2) - stack to 00:58:923 (2)? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206909
- 00:59:934 (1) - RNC
- 01:00:946 (3) - NC
- 01:02:631 (1) - Ctrl+Shift+R, -30.
- 01:21:170 (5) - NC
- 01:21:844 (1) - RNC
- 01:22:519 (3) - NC
- 01:32:631 (1) - Why it isn't parallel to previous slider?
- 01:56:732 (1) - it is not perfectly stack to previous slider.
- 02:11:732 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206918
- 02:28:417 (4) - What is this anti-jump? should fix it.
- 02:41:901 (4,1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206920 ?
- 02:42:069 (1) - RNC
some sliders are looked slightly weird. here's list of them.
no need to fix if you don't want.
but small changes make a big difference to how your map looks.SPOILER
- 00:38:698 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206897
- 00:41:732 (6) - Copy and Paste from the previous slider.
- 00:36:844 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206902
- 00:44:429 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206904 and (3) is not perfectly stack to this slider. atleast you need to fix it.
- 00:56:901 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206906
- 00:58:923 (2) - 1grid down the endpoint.
- 01:04:485 (5) -
- 01:09:710 (3) -
- 01:20:159 (3) -
- 01:59:934 (6) -
- 02:05:328 (2) -
- 02:23:024 (4) -
Thank you Apricot. all fixed excpt 00:36:339 (6) - add clap
hard is waiting on baca