shikyu wrote:

M4M~ some suggestions

[General]
so much unsnapped timing, fix it ok

[Normal]
00:20:002 (2) - add clap at slider's end
00:21:139 (3) - add clap at slider's start to keep consistence
00:54:548 (1) - RNC, this note isn't jump or placed at stanza fixed
01:00:026 (3) - 1 grid up, so (4) can stacked at (2) properly fixed
01:03:663 (1,2,3,4) - (3) overlapped by (2), I suggest this: changed pattern
01:26:163 (4) - remove clap at slider's start, sounds weird fixed some hitsounds

[Insane]
00:05:588 (3) - delete note, this part doesn't fit with three notes stream removed already
00:15:798 (X) - add note here no, it doesn't fit
00:16:707 (4) - delete this note no, but it fit the music

overall good, that's all

spboxer3 wrote:

在offset可以用負的前提下~offset不該擺在note的後面 这个应该没问题吧~? 第一个NOTE都是slider

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- There're some unsnapped time sections, make sure that they works properly and the current situation is expected hitsound effect. ok
- tag BL D: 少于3个字母的tag word是搜不到结果的~

[Insane]
Start kiai at 00:58:663 same as other diff fixed
00:07:509 (2) - broken slider end fixed
00:06:379 (4) - stack一起不好看 這樣 fixed
00:14:320 (4) - remove clap 背景音里面有个明显的鼓声的 (5)也是~
00:20:684 (1,2,3) - sudden jump without any notice from the song =/ 咦。。我觉得这里跳很合适的..特别是一个小停顿之后=.=
00:40:911 (4,5,1) - 把(4,5,1)向下放 (1)做問號的點之類的?个人觉得不用了吧 因为那个大大的slider已经足够了 感觉不用再刻意去弄个点出来 D:
00:43:639 (3) - broken slider end fixed
00:58:411 (1) - broken slider end fixed


[Normal]
沒大問題 可是一堆whistle放在非高音的地方怪怪的 要不要修一下 嗯 是有点奇怪.. 改了几处

DarknessAngel wrote:

你幫過我很多忙
於是我主動來給你MOD了XD 感激不尽..! XD

Normal

1. 00:03:216 (5) - 這裡聽起來很違和啊，我覺得這樣的節奏更好的(別看排列) 嗯,好. 换了别的 差不多的节奏 前后都调整了下~
2. 00:13:639 (1,2) - 去掉NC，然後在2加個 不了 现在这样也挺好的
3. 00:30:457 (5) - 這whistle不太好呢，刪掉如何？ fixed
4. 00:30:911 (6) - 這slider的尾部少了什麼0.0 加了个稍轻的clap
5. 00:57:957 (2) - finish換成clap比較好聽 fixed
6. 01:10:708 (1,3) - 把這個whistle移到 (3) 這個slider的尾部 fixed
7. 01:22:299 (3) - 把slider的尾端的clap去掉 fixed

Insane

1. 00:03:894 (2) - 這個節奏不符合啊，改成這樣吧(排列僅供參考) 其实差不多吧~ 也为了不和前面重复了
2. 00:14:320 (4) - 跟[00:12:957 (3)]的頭疊在一起 没太大必要
3. 00:23:184 (2,3) - 在它們的頭上加whistle，因為你後面是這樣子的 fixed
4. 00:38:411 (3) - 這頭上不加個whistle感覺音效有點空 ~ ww fixed
5. 00:57:275 (1,1) - 這種放置NC的方法跟Kiiwa很像呢，可是我不覺得這兩個有必要加NC，你們有些放法其實都濫用的，就算是為了好看也不能亂加，NC是為了加血還有幫助判斷用的，看你要不要跟Kiiwa說看看這個問題 我也知道.. 这个暂且保留吧
6. 01:19:344 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 老實說，連續兩個的whistle不是很好聽... fixed 各自去掉一个= =
7. 01:27:526 (1) - 在[01:27:526]的地方加一條音量很低的綠線，因為這球滑動的時候感覺有點吵ww，乾脆你把最後一條綠線移到這吧，這樣好多了 fixed 在之中加了一个30%的过度

good song ~
and good luck ~
S.T.A.R ！

1. 00:58:639 - why the first kiai starts here? Make the section with kiai-time here please 00:58:411 - :<

1. 00:12:730 (5) - whistle to the end?

1. 00:07:509 (1) - nc?
2. 01:05:481 (4) - finish to the end
3. 01:24:799 (3) - finish to the beginning

1. 00:00:506 (T) - volume up, to make finish audible
2. 00:00:280 (1,1) - ugly D:
3. 01:08:435 (2) - ^ >< try to make something like this:
   
4. 01:24:003 (1,1) - move the first (1) further D:
5. 01:27:299 (x) - add a note?

1. 01:00:253 (5) - finish?
2. 01:02:072 (6) - ^
3. 01:14:799 (3) - ^
4. 01:16:617 (3) - ^

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hai, BL desu! D:

[General]

1. 00:58:639 - why the first kiai starts here? Make the section with kiai-time here please 00:58:411 - :< fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:07:509 (1) - nc? fixed, also NCed 00:03:216 (1)
2. 01:05:481 (4) - finish to the end fixed
3. 01:24:799 (3) - finish to the beginning fixed

Kiiwa's reply here if you wanna know.
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[Insane]

1. 01:00:253 (5) - finish?this way is kinda loud finish imo.. so sorry to those four.
2. 01:02:072 (6) - ^
3. 01:14:799 (3) - ^
4. 01:16:617 (3) - ^

DarknessAngel wrote:

你幫過我很多忙
於是我主動來給你MOD了XD

[notice]

Luka's Easy

1. 00:07:509 (3) - add finish ? fixed
2. 00:08:184 (4,1,2) - add new combo on (4)。remove new combo on (1)。add new combo on (2) 按重音走吧
3. 01:01:390 (1) - acoording [01:16:617],you need to add finish on the slider's tail 不需要:3 按照节奏上来说这里的clap应该就在slidertick上
4. 01:03:208 (1) - according [01:18:435],add finish on the slider's tail,please^
5. 01:08:890 (3) - add new combofixed
6. 01:24:799 (2,3,4) - add finish on (2,3),remove finish on (4) 23加了fin
7. 01:26:390 (3,4) - I think adding a slider at [01:25:708] and end at [01:26:390] instead can be better to play现在这样也不错啦

Reiji-RJ wrote:

[Luca's Easy]

1. 00:12:730 (5) - whistle to the end?nope

eikkaleyd wrote:

[Luka's Easy]
00.32.275 (3) 我觉得朝下会比较好看差不多啦
00.57.275 (3,4,1) 试试这样
fixed
01.05.935 加个圈或者让slider变长吧？后面的节奏听起来会怪怪的

Megurine Luka wrote:

[notice]

Luka's Easy

1. 01:01:390 (1) - acoording [01:16:617],you need to add finish on the slider's tail 不需要:3 按照节奏上来说这里的clap应该就在slidertick上 我不懂你在說什麼，我說的是slider的尾巴喔
2. 01:26:390 (3,4) - I think adding a slider at [01:25:708] and end at [01:26:390] instead can be better to play现在这样也不错啦 新手不會喜歡這樣的排法

Neptunus wrote:

来了
我不知道现在 Slider tick rate 是否要全难度保持一致，问问吧，如果是的话前俩难度得改改 可以不同的~


Normal:
00:01:861 (3) - 这个slider好像没卡上节奏也没卡上vocal，后面几个都卡上了或vocal或节奏，这个没有，建议改改
你看这样行不行，虽然和日语连贯不符，但是能卡上vocal：找不到更好的方法了.. 你的建议 感觉一开始就出现1/4 slider 有点不合适。

Insane:
先赞一个，这diff做的真好 谢谢哈~
00:03:216 (1,2,3) - 这个为啥不和前面的样式统一？现在这样可是一下子让连贯性变味了 之前也人说过这里，但是我觉得完全一样的话有点重复了，现在这个的节奏还是一样的~
00:28:639 (1,2,3) - 这三个，我上次也得到了类似的提示，就是这三个slider末尾消音（S,5%）因为其实结尾时没有vocal的，不消音的话反而影响了这三个slider想要达到的扣vocal的效果 好 用了30%,几乎听不见的.

NICE~

KingsAL2 wrote:

Its so GAY D:

==Insane==
-- Combo Problem --
00:13:866 (2) - NC this (Distance changed) And remove 00:15:911 (1) NCed this: 00:14:093 (1)
-- Sound --
00:49:093 (4) - Missing clap 故意的
01:04:572 (2-2nd) - Also add clap will be better? 2-2nd 什么意思?没懂
-- Spacing --
00:29:093 (2,3,4) - Make those spacing be the smae are safety.no,
-- Other(S) --

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

Normal
00:56:820 (1) - It's kinda too soon from spinner for normal diff If easy, i would agree, but it's a normal. Furthermore, I put the slider following the spinner in the center, so this may help imo.
00:58:411 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider


Kiiwa's Hard She has no access to the osu website now, so i told her your mod and tell you her reply now.
00:00:731 (1) - Don't make head slider is silenced, because it'll be confusing for players, after hit the previous object growing volume here.
00:07:957 (1) - I can't hear the hitsound on this object. Consider to add the volume? fixed
00:58:411 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider fixed
01:27:640 (1) - This sliderpath is overlapped by hitbursts, which means it's confusing if this is a slider or not fixed


Insane
00:07:509 (2) - Unsnapped tail slider fixed
00:58:411 (1) - ^ fixed
01:21:390 (2,3) - Sudden jumps can makes player go confusing not sudden, like this one : 00:20:684 (1,2) -
01:27:526 (1) - Sudden slow slider can makes player go confusing this fits the vocal, and i make it curved so that players will not miss or break 1 combo because of the slow down.


Good luck~

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1. 00:55:911 (2) - Add whistle to the top of slider.
2. 00:57:730 (4) - This note should be 00:57:754. In addition, how about adding clap to both of top and end?
3. 01:24:799 (2,3,4) - I think it's better to change (2,3) or (3,4) to a slider. It's easier to newbie.

1. 00:09:548 (1) - Remove new combo.
2. 00:11:366 (3) - Add new combo.
3. 00:13:639 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:15:002 (3) - Add new combo.
5. 00:57:981 (2) - It's better not to stack it with slidertail because it's a bit hard for normal player to read this rhythm.
6. 01:26:844 (1,2,3,4) - I think player will be confused since the vocal start at 01:26:617. If you change (1,2,3) to a repeat slider, hitting them will be easier imo.

• 
  Your pattern of formation is well considered. Nice. But speaking of some notes, reading them is a bit hard because of their stacking.

1. 00:06:379 (2) - It's not so good idea that using silent note here. Since player cannot hear the hitsound of it, it's kinda hard to follow the music.
2. 00:40:457 (1) - Try Ctrl+R. I think the flow will be better.
3. 01:03:208 (1) - It's hard to read the top of this slider because it's under the slidertrack. Player will misread that it's placed at x:412, y:332. If you can, I recommend you to move it somewhere else.
4. 01:05:253 (2) - How about adding clap to this note too? It sounds better to me.
5. 01:05:935 (T) - Remove this green line.
6. 01:15:140 (2,3,2) - These note are fine though, when playing, their formation are broken a bit due to stack leniency. So it's better to change the pattern imo.
7. 01:24:003 (1,1) - Player will confused by this rhythm. Maybe player will think there is 1/8-beat-time here.
8. 01:27:602 (1) - I think this note shouldn't start in 1/3 beat.

1. 00:00:280 (1,2) - Yes, these notes follow the vocal well. But, once how about trying the pattern below? If you use it, you will be able to put finish on the slider
   
2. 00:04:120 (T) - Remove this green line.
3. 00:07:509 (2) - The end of slider is not snapped. Please resnap it.
4. 00:43:184 (1,2,3) - Since these notes are hidden under sliderstack, it's a bit hard to read them. I recommend you to move them somewhere else.
5. 00:44:889 (2,3) - Hmm, I was kinda confused by this rhythm. To follow the music, a note should be added at 00:44:775.
6. 00:47:729 (T) - Remove this green line.
7. 00:49:093 (4) - Add whistle.
8. 00:52:275 (2) - ^
9. 01:18:435 (1) - Remove new combo.
10. 01:19:344 (3) - Add new combo.
11. 01:19:799 (1) - Remove new combo.
12. 01:25:708 (T) - Remove this green line.
13. 01:27:526 (4) - The shape is not so beautiful. How about the one below?
    

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  Your video has audio data. (It's silence though)
  
  Please remove audio data and full-submit. fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:09:548 (1) - Remove new combo.
2. 00:11:366 (3) - Add new combo.
3. 00:13:639 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:15:002 (3) - Add new combo. NC problem is all fixed
5. 00:57:981 (2) - It's better not to stack it with slidertail because it's a bit hard for normal player to read this rhythm. put it near by now
6. 01:26:844 (1,2,3,4) - I think player will be confused since the vocal start at 01:26:617. If you change (1,2,3) to a repeat slider, hitting them will be easier imo. I'd like to follow the drum here, so I want to keep this if possible. T.T

[Insane]

• All fixed except blue lines.

1. 00:00:280 (1,2) - Yes, these notes follow the vocal well. But, once how about trying the pattern below? If you use it, you will be able to put finish on the slider This is a little strange rhythm for me, so I had to use what I'm using now even though I had to give up finish sound.
   
2. 00:04:120 (T) - Remove this green line.
3. 00:07:509 (2) - The end of slider is not snapped. Please resnap it.
4. 00:43:184 (1,2,3) - Since these notes are hidden under sliderstack, it's a bit hard to read them. I recommend you to move them somewhere else.
5. 00:44:889 (2,3) - Hmm, I was kinda confused by this rhythm. To follow the music, a note should be added at 00:44:775. You're right, hmm.. but I'm trying to folllow that bass(?) sound and it is consistent with 00:46:820 (3,4) and 00:47:616 (1,2). So I'm gonna keep it.
6. 00:47:729 (T) - Remove this green line.
7. 00:49:093 (4) - Add whistle.
8. 00:52:275 (2) - ^
9. 01:18:435 (1) - Remove new combo.
10. 01:19:344 (3) - Add new combo.
11. 01:19:799 (1) - Remove new combo.
12. 01:25:708 (T) - Remove this green line.
13. 01:27:526 (4) - The shape is not so beautiful. How about the one below? I mean not to have a symmetrical shape here. But stiil thanks for the advice.
    

Overall good map! and I like this song.
But it still needs some works. Ok, I will.
Star for now, good luck!

Thanks for the mod and the nice star~!!

• General

1. Kiiwa's Hard打起来好别扭……看了Suzully的mod，感觉差不多能提的就这些，主要还是overlap很严重，这个难度我就跳过了
2. 视频太高清了，严重影响到我看自动君（打倒是没问题，很奇怪……）要不要考虑正式版的做成小视频，另外再捆绑一个高清的视频包，把链接放在creator's words里
   
   Insane
3. 00:43:184 (1,2) - 建议这里跟前一个(2)的结尾做成三角形，因为之前那个问号把白线上的鼓声给忽略了，而且现在(1)本身这个地方是没有音的，做为一个多出来的note，还被掩盖在下面，打起来很痛苦啊（其实我是希望把(1)删掉的）
4. 01:07:185 (3,4,5) - 这个(5)也是多出来的note，但是后面01:07:640这个蓝线又是下一句歌词的开始，我觉得做成01:09:344 (1,2,3)这样比较好，而且把01:07:185 (3)删掉
5. 01:27:526 (1) - 这个好扭曲
   
   Normal
6. 00:41:820 (3,4) - 这里按白线放就不好听了
   
   
   Luka's Easy
7. 00:10:911 (2) - 在前面那个红线放一个1/2slider
8. 00:41:366 (1) - 好丑

cmn_891127 wrote:

[list]General
[*]Kiiwa's Hard打起来好别扭……看了Suzully的mod，感觉差不多能提的就这些，主要还是overlap很严重，这个难度我就跳过了 ok
[*]视频太高清了，严重影响到我看自动君（打倒是没问题，很奇怪……）要不要考虑正式版的做成小视频，另外再捆绑一个高清的视频包，把链接放在creator's words里 hmm..这个嘛 不想再去麻烦人家搞视频了..况且打起来不卡的话~

Insane
[*]00:43:184 (1,2) - 建议这里跟前一个(2)的结尾做成三角形，因为之前那个问号把白线上的鼓声给忽略了，而且现在(1)本身这个地方是没有音的，做为一个多出来的note，还被掩盖在下面，打起来很痛苦啊（其实我是希望把(1)删掉的） 那个1,2是我特意加上去的,怎么说呢，有点往前推的感觉，还加了clap... 至于三角形，其实没想那么多，00:43:184 (1,2,3) - 只想到了把这个摆成流线型....
[*]01:07:185 (3,4,5) - 这个(5)也是多出来的note，但是后面01:07:640这个蓝线又是下一句歌词的开始，我觉得做成01:09:344 (1,2,3)这样比较好，而且把01:07:185 (3)删掉 其实这个5也是通过别人mod加的note... 和后面节奏一样是不错 但是我还是想变化一下比较好，不加的话又感觉空了，所以综合起来还是这样 lol
[*]01:27:526 (1) - 这个好扭曲 故意的= =

Normal
[*]00:41:820 (3,4) - 这里按白线放就不好听了 这里比较倾向于00:41:820 (3) - 这个长音~


就这个样子……

S h i a wrote:

[overall]
Audio lead-in 统一为2000 好
已经那么多mod了 我给的都是些nazi和建议了

[Normal]
00:55:002 (1) - spinner提前至00:54:775 (1) - ？ 不了 有点抢的感觉

[Insane]
00:25:684 (5) - nazi 让空隙好看一点 fixed
01:20:254 (7) - ^ fixed
01:27:526 (1) - 再拖圆一点？ xD 故意的= =

Seems good to go now. Good luck.

Lizbeth wrote:

Hellow~~~ hi~
/late np.. actually, i'm so surprised to see your mod.

Why not use slider tick 2 in easy and normal too? ok.

Insane
I recommend to add a spinner to vary the scores of this diff I try not to use one on purpose... lol

I've made some changes in this diff:
- Add notes on 00:32:048 (1) and 00:32:616 (3).

Normal
00:56:820 (1) – New combo bug, add it manually fixed

Luka
Should have lower slider velocity than normal. Luka can't play osu now, so I will fix something for her and I get her permission.
00:00:280 (1) - Start this slider on big white tick and shorten by half beat, I think sounds better
00:02:087 (1) - ^
00:03:894 (1) - ^
00:05:701 (1) - ^ hmm.. but I think how she gives has the same rhythm as 00:00:280 (1,2,1,2,3) - in Insane. So they're fine~
01:20:253 (1,2) - Turn this two into a slider nice! also gave a NC to 01:21:617 (5)

Oh and and…. Add toejamms to tags ;^;? Sniff baka kiiwa lol ok, added.

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi~~ S h i o n hello~ Frost

From my mod queue (You don't need to follow all of my mod because it just be a suggestion)

Luka's Easy Since Luka is busy, so I fix the diff instead of her.
01:10:708 (3) - add whistle ? (accent with vocal) nope

move these green line to be same as blue line and last white line all fixed.

SPOILER

00:59:888 > 59913
01:00:115 > 60140
01:01:706 > 61731
01:01:933 > 61958
01:03:524 > 63549
01:03:751 > 63776
01:05:342 > 65367
01:05:570 > 65594
01:12:161 > 72185
01:12:388 > 72413
01:22:615 > 82640
01:22:842 > 82867
01:28:183 > 88208

Normal
00:56:820 (1) - I hear clash sound so add finish at the start of slider ? :3 nope

move these green line all fixed.

SPOILER

01:22:956 > 82981
01:24:774 > 84799
01:27:501 > 87526
01:28:183 > 88208

Insane
00:04:120 (3) - add finish at the start of slider ? It should have one, but I don't add one on notes before this because of the rhythm, so I devcide not to add one for the consistency.
00:10:911 (2) - move to x:193 y:311 for complete stacking It already shows x0.01 now, so this doesn't matter. We don't have to make them completely stacked.
00:20:570 (1) - move to x:323 y:159 ^
00:41:593 (1) - move to x:327 y:130 ^
00:54:775 (2) - add finish at the end of the slider ? (I hear clash sound :S)
01:19:572 (3) - add clap for better sound imo
01:23:435 (4) - add clap ^ Sorry, they sounds kind of loud to me.

move these green line All fixed.

SPOILER

01:27:518 > 87526
01:27:753 > 87754
01:28:200 > 88208

that's all

Good map and fun to play

I don't know my computer is error and see your map wrong green line or not -_-? My bad... but really thanks for checking them carefully~!

Star XD and Good luck