288,216,89143,69,0
384,208,89309,1,0
336,120,89476,2,0,B|312:104|256:88|200:104|176:120,1,168.000004005432
256,192,90309,1,0
176,120,90476,1,4
176,120,90810,1,6

248,312,25976,22,0,B|248:342|288:374|360:326|368:286|352:230|318:223,1,219.999993443489
224,200,26476,2,0,B|216:168|232:144|264:112|312:136,1,109.999996721745
320,224,26809,2,0,B|337:254|385:246|423:226|441:190|441:142|401:102|394:115,1,219.999993443489

Makar8000 wrote:

Hello from the challenge thread :3

Sorry if it feels like I am demanding you to change something. I just don't feel like thinking of a way to make it sound like its only a suggestion and not being rude about it, so I will had a "?" at the end if its meant this way and doesn't really need to be changed even if it doesn't make sense grammatically

NOTE: I started this mod in the morning before some of the previous mods were posted. If some things were updated in the previous mods and is not there anymore please ignore. I wanted to help my roommate move-in today lol.

[General]
-Nice theme and SB : D

[Easy] i remaped it....sorry : (
00:10:810 (4,1) - (nazi) make more symmetrical?
00:14:143 (3) - ^?
00:15:809 (4) - ^?
00:21:809 (1) - Would be nice if you could get this to blanket the end of the previous slider. It's fine how it is though. Could use better symmetry I guess but I will tell you right now I might nazi a lot because this difficulty seems great how it is.
00:24:809 (1) - (nazi) Better symmetry (and get rid of the red point at the end too :s) ?
00:27:143 (1) - ^?
-Okay I don't wanna be a nazi modder so I will try to stop pointing these out orz
00:57:143 (2) - Remove finish?
01:01:309 (2) - Shift right so it starts on the white tick and don't forget to fix spacing http://puu.sh/4Ctd
01:02:809 - I don't really think this break fits here. the song is only 1:45 so I think its safe to map here if you want to even though it is Easy.
01:42:143 (2) - (nazi) Blanket the start of the next slider better?
Nice difficulty

[Normal]
-I'll avoid being a symmetrical nazi this time orz but consider making the sliders more symmetrical and stuffz
00:19:476 (5) - (nazi asdf) Copy 00:18:143 (2) - and do a horizontal flip ? i like my super strange slider for this one xD
00:23:476 (5) - Blanket (6)?okay
00:30:809 (3) - Use a copy of 00:29:476 (1) - instead?i want to... but the way i make the points doesn't support it xD ( it got 5 points, and when i rotate it, the slider instantly become a mess)
00:31:809 (4) - Stack under 00:30:476 (2) - ?okay
00:52:476 (5) - Add the custom clap at the start of this slider? It seems weird because you can't really hear the soft hitsoundokay
00:57:143 (6,7) - Don't sure red slider points in these sliders?err...that's made because accident xD, anyway fixed
01:00:476 (3) - Finish?i-im sure i had finish here before....oh well, added xD
01:02:809 - As said before I don't really think this break fits?im confused now : (, when i map this part some modder says strange place to map...but when i remove it i got mod to add it : (, maybe i'll do something about this part when a flying bats told me to do so
01:25:143 (8) - Make this blanket the end of (7) better?umm..no... (because im a bit confused because i change the combo xD)
01:30:143 (7) - Stack with the end of 01:28:476 (5) - okay
01:41:809 (3) - Blanket the next circle better?okay, but it's hard because the slider is short

[Hard]
00:12:476 (2) - Rotate anti-clockwise so it blankets the previous circle? i perfer to continue the zigzag pattern for this one
00:15:643 (2) - (nazi) Please fix the symmetry on this slider. Remove the red point at the end before doing it to make it easier.okay
00:23:309 (1) - Rotate/adjust so it blankets (2) okay
00:25:476 (4) - Rotate/adjust so it blankets (3)okay
00:26:809 (3) - ^ for (2)i think no for this...because it breaks the spacing and pattern
00:27:309 (1) - (nazi) fix so the blanket is better?okay
00:31:310 (1) - Make the body of this slider stretch more so the path is clear. http://puu.sh/4D7Y use copy and paste for the sliders after it?okay
00:34:810 (4) - Blanket (1)?no because spacing and pattern
00:38:476 (6) - Use more slider points so the curve isn't as sharp (or just use a redpoint? that slider...error xD, fixed
00:53:809 (10) - New Combo?i'll take it into my note, since it's a bit ankward because the part hasn't ended yet...but still acceptable
01:02:809 - This break orz
01:18:143 (11) - You could blanket (7), then stack 01:18:809 (2) - on (7) and make it blanket 01:18:643 (1) - changed some

[Insane]
-Slider velocity is a little high ._. ohhhhh.... there are some trick....it's more easier than hard if you know the secret xD....there are some reason i make some of sliders had shaped like doghnut and had a blank parts that has the same shape as the cursor)
00:08:143 (2) - Move this here - http://puu.sh/4D91 ?okay
00:08:809 (2) - Move here - http://puu.sh/4D97 ?okay
00:09:309 (3) - Move here - http://puu.sh/4D9d ?okay
00:09:476 (4) - Move here - http://puu.sh/4D9i ?okay
00:34:809 (6) - Move here - http://puu.sh/4D9t ?okay
00:35:309 (1) - (nazi) one grid down?okay
00:51:476 (7) - If you fix the symmetry and made the curves "bigger" you could stack this under the slider before with (6) in the middle yes, but there a pattern that makes me must make this slider
01:02:809 - This break really shouldn't be here for insane :s

So overall this map just needs better looking sliders, everything else is fine imo. Sorry for all the nazi mods ;-;

Raging Bull wrote:

Hard:
01:22:476 (7) - Totally different slider angle compared to 01:21:143 (3,5). Is it intentional? i forgot to fix it
01:29:476 (3) - Lol okay hold on.
Hmm...this is the best I can come up with. thanks a lot! xD, i really had a hard time stacking it

288,216,89143,69,0
384,208,89309,1,0
336,120,89476,2,0,B|312:104|256:88|200:104|176:120,1,168.000004005432
256,192,90309,1,0
176,120,90476,1,4
176,120,90810,1,6

01:29:476 (3) - Stacks with 01:28:643 (6) and makes 01:30:476 (5,6) - stack perfectly on the slider end.
Whoops. Forgot to make the slider repeat. Do that one please.
It should look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134703. I removed notes in screenshot so its easier to see

Insane:
00:25:976 (1,2,3) - thanks xD

248,312,25976,22,0,B|248:342|288:374|360:326|368:286|352:230|318:223,1,219.999993443489
224,200,26476,2,0,B|216:168|232:144|264:112|312:136,1,109.999996721745
320,224,26809,2,0,B|337:254|385:246|423:226|441:190|441:142|401:102|394:115,1,219.999993443489

I could fix other overlaps but kinda hard too ;_; I tried making your arcs but mine turns out not as round as yours so I'll leave it at that.

64,192,31976,2,0,B|40:232|56:272,1,70,8|0

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- (Nazi) By cutting off the useless transparant dimension in the SB it reduces the size, though this is all up to you. i have cut it...really....there are some glow...so it looks like usless transparency

Looking nice.

[Insane]
-duplicated timeline: 19976 thanks for reminding
-I see that your SV changes from 1.0x to 1.1x from 0:06 to 0:12, but I don't see the reason why. The passion/speed/feeling of the song in these section are just similar, so maybe you can put 1.1x starting from 0:06. the 1.0 is because it's intro...yeah i know the feel is same...but maybe i'll add some easier parts in the begginning
00:11:309 (1) - spacing, left 1 gridokay
00:11:476 (2,3,9,1) - The spacing may look better for these two spacing remaining 0.8x such that spacing between triplets are the same.okay
00:24:643 (1) - remove finish here as you don't put finish in similar situation later and I don't hear any finish here okay
00:25:976 (1,3) - try to stack the ending well it has stacked : (, really....
00:30:643 (3,6) - stack it well so that there'll be less misleading due to coverage by the "300" of (3).it's...really...it's stacked...(or it's me that have hard time stacking it...but really...it's stacked........i think)
00:33:476 (4) - right 1 grid to make it symmetricalokay
00:51:309 (6) - Place around (232,176) okay
01:16:143 (1) - finishokay

Arrangements are quite well.

[Hard]
- some duplicated timelines: 48476, 54643, 57309, 58976, 80976, 84309, 87809, 99643
w-wow... thanks for reminding...i never thought i got this many useless green section...anyway 99643 is 15% volume...so i am not removing it
00:31:976 (3) - minor fix on slider shape that it looks more consistant with other slidersthanks

64,192,31976,2,0,B|40:232|56:272,1,70,8|0

00:39:809 (5,6,7) - left 1 grid looks better and the spacing looks nice. okay

[Normal]
OD+1 ok
- I don't much problems, but it seems that comparing with hard and insane, finish are used much more frequently orz i've been thinking to remaping the sounds xD


-Easy would be fine for me. Just remember to stack the notes well so there would be less misleading.

Magicphoenix wrote:

Yo ! From the Challenge queue, already modded a map of a guy in my group so I'm gunna have a look at urs

[Insane]

00:06:809 (1) - Use this custom finish? http://puu.sh/4Ewc it's....just a bit odd...so i won't use it
00:07:476 (2) - Ctrl + R sorry...but it breaks the flow
00:08:809 (2,4) - Make them more symmetric around (3) okay
00:12:310 (9,1) - Swap New Combo okay
00:14:476 (7) - Remove 1 reverseno...it just feels empty
00:15:476 - Add a note with NC here okay
00:20:143 (1) - The clap here comes totally out of the blue and doesn't fit...remove?changed into finish
00:22:309 (1) - Add finish on slider end okay
00:27:309 (1) - Add finish on start okay
00:29:476 (1) - ^ okay
00:44:143 - Why are the claps suddenly starting here? Use them on the first part of the map as well, I don't even understand the lack of hitsounds in the first part because it's Kiai Time....at least i want something that is different in kiai time from other parts of the map
00:51:309 (6) - Place this note symmetric to (5,7) okay
00:56:143 (3,4,5,6,7) - Remove the whistles forgot to remove it
00:57:643 (1) - Add Finish okay
00:59:477 (1,2) - Move them 1/1 later okay
01:01:476 - Place the notes like this : http://puu.sh/4Exs if you want to follow the vocals.
Place them like this : http://puu.sh/4ExE if you want to map the beats, the current circles follow neither the beats nor the vocals, thus causing 100's or even misses
01:23:143 (5) - Add finish on start i'll think about it later
01:26:476 (4) - Add finish on end ^
01:28:143 (2) - Add finish on start ^
01:33:476 - Same as 01:01:476 okay

The hitsounds in this diff are messed up IMO, you may get someone to mod them all or you fix them yourself, i wouldn't let them in a state like it's now man...i never thought i'll instantly get hardcore mod on the first day this map remaped...anyway thanks....i know the hitsounds are ridiculous.... since i only got pattern modding now i need to work on this hitsound

[Hard]

00:13:809 (1) - Random whistle , remove never thought there are whistles there....
00:19:476 (7) - NC okay
00:28:643 (5) - Replace this with a 1/1 sliderokay
00:29:143 (1) - Remove NC => 00:29:476 (2) - NC hereokay
00:36:143 (1,2,) - Remove the whistlesi thought i already remove it.....
00:44:143 (1) - Remove the clap at startokay
00:48:809 (1) - Remove the finish at startokay
00:48:809 (1) - Remove the clap on endokay
00:49:809 (2) - Remove the clapokay
00:50:809 (1) - Clap on startokay
00:51:476 (2) - Clap on start, remove the one at on the reverse
00:53:809 (5) - NCoh.. you're the second person who said that... okay then
01:21:143 (3,5,7) - Remove the sliderpath-whistlesokay
01:26:809 (1) - Remove whistleokay
01:28:143 (5) - ^okay
01:28:810 (7) - ^okay
01:31:476 (1) - ^okay
01:33:476 - Same as [Insane]okay

[Normal]

00:27:476 (1) - Remove finish & clapokay
00:27:809 (2) - Remove claps on reverse & endokay
00:28:476 (3) - ^okay
00:29:143 (4) - Replace with clapokay
00:31:809 (4) - ^okay
00:41:143 (7) - Remove finishokay
00:46:143 (4) - ^okay
00:46:809 (2) - ^okay
01:00:809 (4) - Replace clap with finish on slider endokay
01:01:809 (5) - Remove Noteokay
01:18:143 (4) - Replace with clapokay
01:20:143 (4) - ^okay
01:20:809 (1) - Replace with finish on slider endokay

[Easy]

The rhythm is really strange on many parts, try to better it really........i haven't test play it......just a bit after i take a rest after remapping you suddenly came xD


This map still needs a lot of modding, especially for the hitsounds.
Try asking an expert to mod them all or work on them for yourself !i know...and im sorry, maybe i take the mod for now...maybe i can get something from it......hard and insane...i have been thinking to remapping the hitsounds...using soft hitsound and custom clap like easy and normal

Makar8000 wrote:

Modding just Easy since it was remapped ^^

I'll 100% avoid nazi modding this time... for reals

[Easy]
00:13:809 (2) - While test playing I hit this slider to early. It doesn't fit the music where it starts imo but that may because of the timeline pattern you use at the beginning. Or I am just a noob at playing easy ._. no... it's just i make the pattern like that mostly they are on white tick(they need to be on red)...that's why many notes that hits earlier because i haven't playtest it xD
00:41:476 (3) - This loop does not have a clear center, which may make it confusing for beginners to follow the path on. Even if you think otherwise, I still think that the slider would look better (not just play better) with a visible center hole. Look at the looping section of this guide. i'll try it tomorrow

No kudosu since I already modded. Nice easy

215,212,27476,22,0,B|181:216|136:204|125:159|135:128,1,140,0|0
216,136,28476,2,0,B|218:103|207:57|162:46|128:48,1,140,8|8
136,128,29476,2,0,B|102:116|56:128|45:173|56:207,1,140,0|0

256,184,41476,2,4,B|384:216|432:64|336:-24|240:64|288:216|416:184,1,420

312,144,80809,54,0,B|288:58|216:24|144:58|120:144,2,280
416,240,84143,2,0,B|392:326|320:360|248:326|224:240,1,280

419,265,10476,2,0,B|490:218|456:144,1,140,0|8
456,144,11143,1,0

198,223,13809,70,0,B|198:183|224:160,1,70,0|8
224,160,14643,2,0,B|154:160,1,70

indyinyou wrote:

i try mod hitsound xD

[normal]

00:21:809 : remove fin / add clap
00:21:976 : remove clap /add fin
00:22:809 : add fin
00:25:476 : ^
00:28:143 : ^
00:38:476 : move clap / add fin
00:39:143 : add clap
00:39:476 : remove clap
00:39:809 : add clap
00:40:143 : remove clap
00:40:476 : add clap
00:40:809 : remove clap
00:54:809 : add fin
01:00:476 : add clap
01:00:809 : remove clap / add fin
added all of them xD
[Hard]

my mod in [Hardsoundtest] oh! that's what i need...thanks a lot! xD...there some part i change like the first part i still follows clap and no clap pattern... and the last half part of half kiai i used 1/1 clap pattern

let`s try to listen

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
I don't understand why 7 combo colors? I suggest maybe using 4 instead. (i need light blue and sky blue for the first part..orange and yellow to match the fiery colored cloud, white for the white BG at the end and start...and dark blue and dark green to match the SB in kiai)
Easy:
Change to tick rate 2. Someone else going to complain for consistency if you don't hehe. (Me :L) not after you see this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135397
I prefer you use hitsounds on every 2 and 4 white ticks. What you're doing is using the clap hitsound on whatever tick you feel like. ;_;
00:12:143 (1,2) - Like these two. These are good placement. but i change it because it doesn't follow anything xD
00:17:476 (1) - Here you add clap to slider end.okay
00:20:143 (2) - Remove this clap hitsound from slider start and end.okay
00:21:809 (1) - Add clap to slider start and endokay
00:23:476 (2) - Add to slider end. i changed that pattern......
etc etc.
I'll check again when you add it correctly.
00:27:476 (1,1) - Tried my best. sorry xD...but that pattern changed because it doesn't follow anything

215,212,27476,22,0,B|181:216|136:204|125:159|135:128,1,140,0|0
216,136,28476,2,0,B|218:103|207:57|162:46|128:48,1,140,8|8
136,128,29476,2,0,B|102:116|56:128|45:173|56:207,1,140,0|0

00:41:476 (3) - Did best as I can. SV is too low for me/slider ends fast for me to make the center clear. If anything just try a wiggle instead next time since it also sounds like it makes sense.okay

256,184,41476,2,4,B|384:216|432:64|336:-24|240:64|288:216|416:184,1,420

00:59:476 (4) - NC here.okay
01:15:476 (1) - Really ugly because kiai starts in the middle of the slider. Just use two sliders instead. okay
01:20:809 (1,2) - okay

312,144,80809,54,0,B|288:58|216:24|144:58|120:144,2,280
416,240,84143,2,0,B|392:326|320:360|248:326|224:240,1,280

01:26:143 (1) - *facepalm* wrong spacing.
01:35:143 (1) - Looks ugly. Why don't you try a blanket? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135358 Only bad thing is that if you do that, you might have to remap/move all notes at the end. It's only 12 seconds so it shouldn't be that bad. okay
Rather unusually easy since you did only sliders, but oh well.

Normal:
Maybe lower AR HP by 1. AR suits the pattern... i think
00:06:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ;_; You used clap hitsound on the wrong tick D: Change it to every 2nd and 4th ticks. Funny thing is that after this part, the claps were correct.okay
00:36:143 (1) - I would map here since spinner seems short.i wonder why i created spinner in that place xD
01:16:143 (1) to 01:34:476 (6) - Ticksound on every 3rd and 1st tick instead. Change it to 2nd and 4th.okay
Seems rather hard due to timeline density. See if you can remove some notes. that's why i hate it when i remaped easy......i must make this easier....maybe i'll make the easy harder if a mat or flying bats tell me about this map's diff spread...(i have the old osb of easy lol)

Hard:
Awwww. Your hitsounds again. Change clap to 2nd and 4th.
00:10:476 (3,4) -

419,265,10476,2,0,B|490:218|456:144,1,140,0|8
456,144,11143,1,0

00:13:809 (1,3) - the slider is gone when i applied that code xD

198,223,13809,70,0,B|198:183|224:160,1,70,0|8
224,160,14643,2,0,B|154:160,1,70

01:21:476 (4) - You can stack it underneath perfectly I believe. I moved it and it worked. it's really hard......i better remaping all these three than must stack perfectly xD....
01:29:476 (3,4,5,6) - Nice! ;D it's from your code

Insane:
00:25:976 (1) - Oh dear. Looks like you moved this and it doesnt stack with 3 anymore ;_;
Seems okay. Though your hitsound doesnt seem consistent with other diffs with your normal whistle now.

No kudosu please Sakura! Got 3 from this map already.

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi again and again and again and again.

It took me this long to realize it was a different SB >_>

Folder:
Blur, cloud1 are over the maximum size of 800x600 for SB images. Reduce it.

No kds. Again I think I have too much from this thread already.

indyinyou wrote:

here for hitsound suggestions [insane] diff

and star


Your message is too short.

no kd for this

360,132,34476,2,8,B|268:72,2,105,8|0|8
272,192,35476,2,8,B|272:272,2,52.5,8|8|8
168,180,36143,2,0,B|232:276|208:340|116:388|32:340|8:276|72:180,1,420,8|8

Tony wrote:

[General]
Nice Storyboard. Looked in the folder and saw that you have all Sb elements there.Suggestion for future maps: Put all SB elements in SB folder. and all lyrics in Lyric folder. You should be more organized then.
done


[Easy]
No circles? That's boring imo n-no... it's not xD

I must tell you that soft finish hitsound is used when you hear cymbal sound on music. i know...but i just can't help to not put a finish in some places xD

00:06:809 (1) - finish at start okay
00:12:143 (1) - finish instead of clap at start . You can hear the cymbal sound in the song.okay
00:15:143 (2) - clap instead of finish at start. You can't hear cymbal sound in the song.okay
00:20:143 (2) - same on end ^^okay

00:21:809 - 00:43:476 - I suggest remapping this part. I don't see the rhythm here (I mean you didn't follow the rhythm correctly..sorry)
i didn't follow the rythm...i follow the vocals in kiai xD...well... maybe i'll ask another modder if this aprt of all part of this map needs some remapping
00:44:143 (1) - finish at start why i always forgot to add finish in that part (i forgot to add in in normal diff last time lol)
00:50:809 (2) - remove that finish from end. You can't hear the cymbal sound in the song.okay
00:54:143 (1) - finish on repeat arrow. You can hear the cymbal sound in the song. okay
00:57:476 (3) - remove finish from end.You can't hear the cymbal sound in the song. n-no...for this part...i use finish on all diffs...really...even there's no cymbal it's just fit


I suggest to remap second kiai section. It's boring and it does not fit
man... when i make it not boring some modder says this is too hard : (...i'll remap it if another modder says so
01:39:143 (2) - finish at end. You can hear the cymbal sound in the song.okay

[Normal]
Rename this diff to Normal+. 4,5 stars ... 4,1....i can make it 4 stars xD....just replace the 00:36:143's slider into spinner and it's becomes 4 star instantly ... i dunno why...but really... i make that slider only and it turned into 4.5 stars

00:36:143 (6) - redesign this slider (make it symmetrical) and move it. I hate that you overlapped with previous slider (silder (5) ). It does not look right imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135690 okay...i fixed the note after that to make the spacing better

The code for (4) , (5) , (6)

360,132,34476,2,8,B|268:72,2,105,8|0|8
272,192,35476,2,8,B|272:272,2,52.5,8|8|8
168,180,36143,2,0,B|232:276|208:340|116:388|32:340|8:276|72:180,1,420,8|8

00:46:809 (2) - ahh damn dat overlapping okayy... fixed
00:48:809 (1) - ahh dat slider... cute right?.......okayyyyyy i'll fix it xD
00:50:810 (3) - same ^^ fixed

............................................................................................................................................................
Same things on hard and Insane. You should check them by yourself...that's how you will gain mapping experience.for hard and insane there are some overlappig and finishes that i make in purpose....but i'll check some of it.. thanks xD

Nyquill wrote:

Am I the only one feeling that Yui looks odd? no..maybe it's because she is in the front....

Mod post reserved, gonna go out for something to eat now. Hopefully I can do this by the end of today ^^.

Alright here I go. Sorry for the slow post btw, I fell asleep on my keyboard yesterday after seeing your request.

[General]

"Copy of YuiHirasawa.png" wut. no one will see that again after next full submit xD..
I'm pretty sure hit indicators need to be 256x256. i don't want to get yelled because of the useless transparency
Quite a lot of sliders in all the diffs look unsymmetrical when they are probably supposed to be. Consider going back and fixing some of those? i know....but...there are too many of them xD (especially on insane)....well... it wasn't noticeable if you play it xD (n-no... im not lazy mapper...it's just too many of unsymmetrycal slider...i use too many point to make it)

[Easy]
i missed this mod last time xD...
0:39:143 (2) - Extend this slider by one beat. Sounds much better. okay
1:26:143 (1,2,3) - Move this combo away from the previous one. Spacing makes it seem close. why i don't see it when i opened the AIMod xD
1:33:476 (2,1) - This change of beat seems sudden. What I'm suggesting is to reduce the length of (2) by 2 beats and and adding a hit circle in it's place at 1:34:809. Up to you. i'll think something. . . i'l lchange it later xD, and i won't add a circle in this diff xD

[Normal]
00:20:143 (6,7) - Move one grid up for it to look nice with (5) the (6) i move it 2 grid..and (7) 1 grid


[Hard]
The claps at the end of this diff were perfect. Why not use this for the other diffs? i think i have use it on the other diff....just the total of notes that make it has a different feel xD
00:29:143 (6,1,2,3,4) - This star... looks bad :/. When I make stars I usually make it on the use the middle line as a reference. Then I rotate it to fit the part where I am supposed to put it. okay..fixed


[Insane]

00:21:476 (1,2,3) - Yeah, especially with a slider speed like that, the first time around I thought these are supposed to be a stream. Try a different spacing. i make that in purpose...it just feels odd to make a jump sliders...or ordinary notes here...maybe i'll do something about it if another modder says so
00:43:143 (9) - Left 1 gridokay
01:01:476 (1,2) - Consider changing this into a shaking slider or a slow slider. i can't make shaking slider xD ( and i can imagine it's a bit ankward to make that slider in the middle of speedy slider)...and for slow slider is't not possible because i already had a 3 different SV.....so i'll leave it like that
01:44:809 (1,3,1) - Might as well make this part symmetrical? Move the first (1) Left 5 grids. (3,1) left 1 grid. okay

[Storyboard]

1:05:143 (Spotlight.png) - This should come in at 1:05:476 in time with the "Taimu" (lol)
it'll be fixed in next full submit xD

Not a lot to complain about. Great Hard diff and a decent Insane. I can't judge easy and normal well but as far as I can tell Normal is good. Easy might need a little bit of work.

Don't have any KD left for a star. But your map looks like its overflowing with them already ^^.

L_P wrote:

YO! i love this song!
star for you
sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

WOW good SB!

[Easy]
00:33:809 (3) - add new combo okay

[Normal]
no comment : )

[Hard]
00:13:809 (1) - add clap at first and remove at finish okay
00:59:143 (4,5) - I think this isn't good w-whyy : (.... i'll take it into my note xD . . i'll change it if there are another modder say something about this part of this map

[Insane]
00:06:809 (1) - add clap at finish ehh. . i forgot to add it last time xD . .okay fixed
01:23:809 (8) - add new combookay okay
01:34:809 (2) - add new combo because this is counfusing object okay

haha5957 wrote:

[Easy]

00:24:143 (2,1,2) - These sounds kinda weird~ i tried to push there back 1 white notes and it sounded better yeah i know. . .last time it was like that xD . . . and it's very confusing because the sudden rythm change, and the pattern is becoming really close which is ugly XD
and there are many parts that sounds much better when pushed back 1 white tick..but since it still makes sense O.O just saying.
00:39:143 (2) - move ending point few grids up..? okay


[Normal]

00:32:476 (1) - remove new combo..? no . . .because if i remove this other modder will make me add it again xD

O.O~

[Hard]
00:45:476 (1) - new combo it might be good if i follow the rythm pattern . . but i follow the vocal here


[Insane]
01:23:809 (1) - new combo oh, i added a new combo in other place xD

[Hard+Insane]
Clapspam on last FUWAFUWA TIME~ zone doesnt sound IMO i overused it in Insane xD






Very nice O.O! bad thing that i can't star cuz i don't hav kudo

val0108 wrote:

ya-

[SB]
lyric1 http://puu.sh/52s1 ”ハート”plz write this if you change it. o-okay xD(good thing image editor these days can flip it easily)
lyric6 delete las word "二" and lyric7 add "二" first.lyric6:"夢の中なら" lyric7:"二人の距離縮められるのにな" okay
chours A3 "お気に入りのうさちゃん抱いて今夜も" okay
chours A4 "オヤスミ♪"okay xD
[Easy]
00:17:476 (1) - Make a clean circle.http://puu.sh/52se okayy
Code: 376,176,17476,22,0,B|463:135|574:263|506:395|357:427|261:299|331:206,1,490,4|0
00:21:809 (1) - put symmetryokay
00:27:809 (1) - re new combo okay
00:31:143 (2) - change http://puu.sh/52sw and,add note 00:33:143 - if you fixed it. i'll keep this way since the whole slider is only consist two white ticks from the beggining and some long slider
00:54:809 - add finish okay

[Normal]
fine.

[Hard]
00:59:809 (5,6) - 2grid right okay

[Insane]
00:07:976 (1,1) - renew combookay
00:12:476 (1) - ^ okay, changed something in this part
01:45:476 (1) - 1grid leftokay


awesome SB xDD

Weezy wrote:

~From modreqs~

Gerneral
- Offset is 1476. Change this and make sure everything is snapped properly. okay, but everything is just snapped by itself xD

Easy
- change tick rate to 2 like every diff.
00:29:809 (1) - Could be made neater. okay
00:39:143 (2) - blanket this better. spacing doesn't support this xD. . .i'll blanket it from beggining if this won't become spacing error

Normal
01:43:143 (3) - Line this up with (1) (Make sure distance snap is off and just go up 1 grid okay

Hard
00:11:143 (4) - Not stacked perfectly okay. . .i'll try fix it. . .is just super hard X(
00:33:477 (4) - Curved weird. Make it neater. okay

Insane
00:28:809 (5) - Not even close to being even and doesn't look right either. Try redoing this slider. okay
00:42:810 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. Fix the spacing here.i-i do that in porpose
01:01:976 (2,3) - Why the sudden increase on space between them? Doesn't really suit it here plus doesn't look right either. Just keep it the same for (1,2,3) and then a jump at (4).okay

Astom wrote:

o/
Some suggestions

[Easy]
-01:44:143 (3) - shorten it at 01:44:809 and add finish at start and end. okay

[Normal]
-00:54:809 (2) - finish at start okay
-01:00:143 (2) - whistle instead of finishokay (but i dunno if i could change it other time cause i don't use whistles here xD
-01:00:476 (3) ---^(if) finishokay
-01:00:809 (4) ---^(if) shorten it at 01:01:143, add a repeat, clap in first beat, finish in second and third. okay
-01:01:976 (5) ---^(if) move to 01:02:143.okay. . .and i change some in this part
-01:16:143 (1) - finish at startokay
-01:33:809 (4) - delete this circleokay
-01:32:809 (3) ---^(if) finish at end.okay
-01:39:809 (1) - finish in repeat instead of clapokay

[Insane]
-01:21:476 (2) - finish at start okay

Nice SB :>
Good luck ~

272,352,82476,2,0,B|336:360|376:308|368:256,2,140,8|0|8

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
fine

[Skin]
hit300k.png and hit300g.png are the same , make little difference ?
add a approachcircle.png plz hmm. . .okay then . . .but. . .i think already add approach circle long time ago X(. . .nvm then... i'll add new one

[Easy]
you use many long slider in this diff , so why not fill the claps using soft-slidertick2.wav ? i know. . .but someone will tell me to remove the claps, because i use claps almost 85% of the song ( because the taiko looks bad . . .well, i don't know much about taiko. . .but it's what happened last time in normal were nearly full of claps : (
00:21:809 (1) - start at 00:21:975
00:24:475 - clap
00:25:809 - ^
00:27:142 - ^
00:28:475 - ^
ok , I ignored all same suggestions after this
01:22:476 (2) -

272,352,82476,2,0,B|336:360|376:308|368:256,2,140,8|0|8

(thanks)

[Normal]
00:21:809 (1,2,3,4) - this kinda to hard for a Normal okay removed note on red tick
00:27:809 (2,3) - kinda confusing here , player may think (2) repeat 1 time more maybe i'll change 2 into normal sliders then
01:00:809 (4) - repeat at 01:01:475 , end at 01:02:142 . delete 01:02:142 (5) , add circle at 01:02:475 okay. . .and i changed some part by changing repeat sliders into sliders xD

[Hard]
00:21:643 (1,2) - not stack plz , this is very confusing , or not use 1.2x ds spacing at least changed into jumps then. . .
00:22:309 (3,4) - (3) repeat , (4) not repeat is better imo it's just. . .the pattern becoming more hard to predict(and somewhat a bit confusing)
01:17:976 (4,5) - slider from 01:17:975 to 01:18:309 , circle at 01:18:475 okay
01:23:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - kinda suddenly , but it is fine

[Insane]
fine

nice map
good luck

1. 00:12:976 (3) - This slider is bad. The reason is, there is nothing in the music that would be this long. Hearing the drum hit on the slider tick can also be confusing because you expect this slider to follow something, and instead it's not doing it right. You should split this into a slider+circle or a repeating slider which is shorter. See 00:13:476 (4,5), this is doing it right, so you should do the same or something. My personal opinion is that when you are forced to change the sound of a slider tick to match the music in the highest diff, you're probably doing something wrong.
2. 00:15:643 (2) - Pretty much the same. It's not confusing though, but there is no need to make such a slider, because a shorter one + circle would work better.
3. 00:23:309 (1) - Same thing. Although you could say that this one is following the voice, so it's okay more or less. I still stop pointing out these for now, they are superobvious and I could save some space if you just choose to decline these suggestions.
4. 00:41:476 (6) - You could blanket this better. This looks ugly because it's touching the slider before. Try repositioning the slider points a little, maybe like this. Just less ugly haha.
5. 00:54:143 (4) - New combo. It fits because you follow the voice better.
6. 01:23:809 (1) - Well, this is allowed and it's not really bad, but I think you should keep the same distance like the notes before. 5 grids left and 3 down to fix the spacing, and then you can just rotate it a little so the slider arrow isn't at an awkward position.
7. 01:26:143 (2) - New combo here instead of the previous note, fits the music better because it follows the start of the vocal.
8. 01:29:143 (5) - Also new combo here (and remove from the next slider), follows the voice much better.
9. 01:43:810 (5) - You could place a new combo here because of the following suggestion below, it would make sense then and look good.
10. 01:44:476 (7) & 01:45:143 (3) - Remove these notes if you can. They don't really follow the music. If you really WANT to have them, atleast remove claps, since there is nothing in the music there. (you did it right in hard diff btw)

1. 00:07:143 (2) - Sounds like you forgot a clap.
2. 00:21:642 (1) - I don't like this note because it sounds offbeat. Sure it follows the music, but not entirely, because you would want a note at 00:21:809 as well then. You should map the timeline I suggested (especially cause you did it here 00:20:809 (2)), really alot of stuff in the music you skipped, could make a slider from these 2 notes as well or something.
3. 00:30:893 (7) - Should probably remove this note, there is nothing in the music for it to follow. Considering you don't have such stuff anywhere else, it just looks weird and random.
4. 00:44:643 (2) - This note can be very hard to see because of a previous hitburst. Since this isn't an insane diff, you should probably make it more visible, probably moving it to the right side of the sliders is a good idea.
5. 00:46:143 (7) - This slider is problematic because of few things. First, it tries to follow too many things, which makes the combo awkward since you can't effectively place a new combo here because it starts too soon, and it repeats twice which is okay I guess, but not really necessary. What you can do is map a circle at this spot, and make a small jump to this slider which would repeat only once and start at 00:46:475 instead. When you do this, place the new combo on the slider then. Looks and sounds much better.
6. 01:44:810 (3) - Could place a new combo here to make it more consistent with insane.

1. General: Sliders look ugly. You could make them more pretty without putting almost any effort as well. Few examples: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/149666 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/149667 , etc. Just look at those slider points. Can just use 3, one at the start, one at the end (preferably in the middle of the ending circle) and one in the middle, defining the curve.
2. HPD-1, OD-1. Currently they make normal slightly harder than it should be.
3. 00:48:809 (1) - Finish at the end of the slider, it's in the music as well.
4. 01:34:809 - I am just guessing that claps after here are supposed to be like this. If that's the case, check your Hard and Insane diffs, no custom claps there, and you have them here.
5. 01:44:809 (3) - Could also use a new combo here just like I suggested in hard.

1. 00:21:975 (1) - This slider looks unsnapped. Also you have timingsections over a slidertick which do nothing.
2. 00:23:809 (2,1,2,3,1) - Should probably map every 2nd white tick with a clap on these as well. Sound empty without it.
3. 01:20:809 (1) - Finish at the slider end. It's in the music too.

Index-San wrote:

lolcubes wrote:

Hey there! Answering a request from my queue.

[Insane]:

1. 00:12:976 (3) - This slider is bad. The reason is, there is nothing in the music that would be this long. Hearing the drum hit on the slider tick can also be confusing because you expect this slider to follow something, and instead it's not doing it right. You should split this into a slider+circle or a repeating slider which is shorter. See 00:13:476 (4,5), this is doing it right, so you should do the same or something. My personal opinion is that when you are forced to change the sound of a slider tick to match the music in the highest diff, you're probably doing something wrong. oh. . .fixed . . .(i removed the ticksound), since this part is 1/1 in red tick from the"te" and "to"
2. 00:15:643 (2) - Pretty much the same. It's not confusing though, but there is no need to make such a slider, because a shorter one + circle would work better. it's just im not really good at placing notes, that's why this map consist of fast sliders, and most of this map has long sliders (especially when following vocals) : (, this map had many circle and short sliders last time, i got many issues to fix . . .so i remaped it into this
3. 00:23:309 (1) - Same thing. Although you could say that this one is following the voice, so it's okay more or less. I still stop pointing out these for now, they are superobvious and I could save some space if you just choose to decline these suggestions.
4. 00:41:476 (6) - You could blanket this better. This looks ugly because it's touching the slider before. Try repositioning the slider points a little, maybe like this. Just less ugly haha. okay
5. 00:54:143 (4) - New combo. It fits because you follow the voice better. okay
6. 01:23:809 (1) - Well, this is allowed and it's not really bad, but I think you should keep the same distance like the notes before. 5 grids left and 3 down to fix the spacing, and then you can just rotate it a little so the slider arrow isn't at an awkward position. fixed. . .i didn't notice it xD. . .
7. 01:26:143 (2) - New combo here instead of the previous note, fits the music better because it follows the start of the vocal. okay
8. 01:29:143 (5) - Also new combo here (and remove from the next slider), follows the voice much better. okay
9. 01:43:810 (5) - You could place a new combo here because of the following suggestion below, it would make sense then and look good.okay
10. 01:44:476 (7) & 01:45:143 (3) - Remove these notes if you can. They don't really follow the music. If you really WANT to have them, atleast remove claps, since there is nothing in the music there. (you did it right in hard diff btw) okay

[Hard]:

1. 00:07:143 (2) - Sounds like you forgot a clap. oh. .r-right xD
2. 00:21:642 (1) - I don't like this note because it sounds offbeat. Sure it follows the music, but not entirely, because you would want a note at 00:21:809 as well then. You should map the timeline I suggested (especially cause you did it here 00:20:809 (2)), really alot of stuff in the music you skipped, could make a slider from these 2 notes as well or something. hmm. . .it's not that i want to fololw anything here. . .it's just a random note that i didn't remap last time. . .(it was stacked if i remember correctly). . .i changed the clap into finish hope it's better now . . .and i'll take it into my note and i'll change it if another modder says so (maybe i had said this in last post. . .but i lost my note : (
3. 00:30:893 (7) - Should probably remove this note, there is nothing in the music for it to follow. Considering you don't have such stuff anywhere else, it just looks weird and random. okay
4. 00:44:643 (2) - This note can be very hard to see because of a previous hitburst. Since this isn't an insane diff, you should probably make it more visible, probably moving it to the right side of the sliders is a good idea. okay
5. 00:46:143 (7) - This slider is problematic because of few things. First, it tries to follow too many things, which makes the combo awkward since you can't effectively place a new combo here because it starts too soon, and it repeats twice which is okay I guess, but not really necessary. What you can do is map a circle at this spot, and make a small jump to this slider which would repeat only once and start at 00:46:475 instead. When you do this, place the new combo on the slider then. Looks and sounds much better. hmm . . .you're right. . .remapped this part. . . sorry i didn't take the suggestion : ( . . .it's just i want to follow the notes in the begginning that the placement of the notes is consist in 1/2 . . .and 1/1 for sliders (there are some of 1/1 though)
6. 01:44:810 (3) - Could place a new combo here to make it more consistent with insane.i want to add many claps too but i know that i'll ended up changed it back because taiko

[Normal]:

1. General: Sliders look ugly. You could make them more pretty without putting almost any effort as well. Few examples: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/149666 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/149667 , etc. Just look at those slider points. Can just use 3, one at the start, one at the end (preferably in the middle of the ending circle) and one in the middle, defining the curve. it's my first time making better sliders xD, so it's still looks bad . . .(especially i use 5 points last time, the 4 and some 3 points sliders is when i apply fixes), but it's not really noticeable (well . . .it looks slightly ugly, at least it goes symmetrical with approachcircles)
2. HPD-1, OD-1. Currently they make normal slightly harder than it should be. okay
3. 00:48:809 (1) - Finish at the end of the slider, it's in the music as well. okay
4. 01:34:809 - I am just guessing that claps after here are supposed to be like this. If that's the case, check your Hard and Insane diffs, no custom claps there, and you have them here. fixed
5. 01:44:809 (3) - Could also use a new combo here just like I suggested in hard. okay

[Easy]:

1. 00:21:975 (1) - This slider looks unsnapped. Also you have timingsections over a slidertick which do nothing. hmm. . .i think it's already snapped. . .and i forgot to remove the timingsections xD
2. 00:23:809 (2,1,2,3,1) - Should probably map every 2nd white tick with a clap on these as well. Sound empty without it. i know(i want to add it too). . .it's just someone will make me change it again because the taiko looks bad : (
3. 01:20:809 (1) - Finish at the slider end. It's in the music too.okay

Folder looks clean and the SB doesn't go above 5x load so I guess everything else is fine.
I didn't want to nazi the hitsounds in easy, but they could use more work, every 2nd white tick to have a clap where possible is a really good idea and I didn't like the switch to every first and 3rd tick under kiai. I guess it's not that bad, but I just didn't like it.
i want to add many claps too but i know that i'll ended up changed it back because taiko

Decent mapset and good luck!

thanks for the mod

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lastBG.png",320,240
 F,0,76143,76809,0,1
 M,0,76143,94809,435,205,196,199
 F,0,76809,94809,1

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lastBG.png",320,240
 F,0,76143,76809,0.5,0
 S,0,76143,76809,1.768,2.5 

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 4,87,179
Combo4 : 243,232,1
Combo5 : 12,0,240
Combo6 : 255,150,0
Combo7 : 1,182,197
-> SliderBorder : (redvalue),(greenvalue),(bluevalue) <-

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

[Storyboard]
-> Lots of SB elements (especially the lyrics) contain unnecessary transparency it's necessary xD. . .i know many modder have said this. . .but it's because i added outer glow in lyrics (the glow didn't show, so it's like some unecessary transparency)
-> "lastBG.png" should start move at 76143 : oh right. . .i didn't notice it

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lastBG.png",320,240
 F,0,76143,76809,0,1
 M,0,76143,94809,435,205,196,199
 F,0,76809,94809,1

-> And to emphasize the lastBG effect, maybe try adding this code above cloud4.png : okay!, thanks xD

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lastBG.png",320,240
 F,0,76143,76809,0.5,0
 S,0,76143,76809,1.768,2.5 

[General]
-> If you have a custom skin, you must have a custom sliderborder color. This could be done by manually editing the .osu file:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 4,87,179
Combo4 : 243,232,1
Combo5 : 12,0,240
Combo6 : 255,150,0
Combo7 : 1,182,197
-> SliderBorder : (redvalue),(greenvalue),(bluevalue) <-

okay
-> Preview time sounds late, 44000 sounds better imo hmm. . .okay . . (i don't know if unsnapped preview point is a problem or not)

[Easy]
00:17:476 (1) - I think using custom clap as slidertick here is too noisy. Maybe try using default slidertick with 100% volume? okay, ,but i'll make it 75%)
00:21:975 (1) - No need to snap this slider to 1/4 (: ehh. .it's . . .accident xD
00:33:475 (x) - The finish sound definitely goes here, not on the start of 00:33:809 (1) fixed
00:45:476 (2) - The clap should be on the repeat okay
00:57:476 (3) - Make the slider's end doesn't touch (2)? okay
01:01:476 (2) - Repeating this slider and adding a note at 01:02:809 (x) would be much more beginner-friendly imo umm, i think for the repeat slider + single note is harder than 2 slider . . .and i don't want to make a single circle in this diff xD
01:15:476 (1,2) - Crescendo here? umm .. increasing (more like growing) in volume rite? xD
01:20:809 (1) - ... Why finish and clap and the same time >< uhh. . it's because . . .accident xD, fixed. . . .
01:39:143 (2) - I found this slider broke the rhythm (1/1 - 1/1 - 1/1 - 3/2 - 1/1 - 1/1 etc), maybe change this into a single note followed by 1/1 slider after it i'll keep it like this, since i don't want a single circle on this diff : (

[Normal]
-> Definitely a Normal+ for me orz
00:20:143 (6) - Use a custom slidertick here? umm. . no, because i think it's strange for the vocals still say "fuuu"
00:25:143 (2) - Slightly curve this upward for flow? okay
00:33:143 (2) - Again, finish and clap at the same time is not necessary fixed . . .it's accident again xD
00:35:476 (5) - No need to clap on the slider's start okay
00:50:143 (2) - Why not in the center? fixed
00:55:476 (3,5,1) - These three are too clustering imo fixed (hope it's better now)
01:25:143 (4) - Clap on slider start, finish on slider end okay
01:40:809 (2) - ...the last waypoint doesn't have to be linear >< fixed xD

[Hard]
00:21:976 (2) - Why not just CTRL+H from (3)? okay
00:48:809 (1) - Uh.. I personally found the slider's shape is weird >< changed into notes xD
00:50:143 (4) - Whistle here instead of clap? okay
01:02:809 (4) - Two grids left? okay

[Insane]
-> HP Drain +1 ? okay
00:12:976 (3) - Sounds forced imo, three 1/2 notes will do better here yeah, i maybe forcing too many things in this diff. . .but i want to make it follow vocals as much as possible . . .
00:33:809 (5) - Start the New Combo here umm. . .i use vocal as new combos . . .so i didn't change it : (
00:42:810 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing could be tricky here (even with AR8), I suggest manual-stack them like 00:21:476 (1,2,3) okay
00:48:309 (5) - This jump is quite unexpected >< uhh. . i'll change it if there are another modder say something about this part
01:15:643 (2,3,4,...) - Crescendo here? okay
01:26:476 (3) - Uh... Spacing error? i do that in purpose
01:44:809 (1,1) - No need to new combo spam here imo many people told me that it's better like this : (

Great map!
Good luck ~

phonic wrote:

Mod


-Insane-

00:21:142 (3) A speed change is necessary; is NC, if necessary okay
00:21:475 (1) I must not change repeated blows and the placement that seem to be wrong hmm. . .maybe i'll just fix the placement then
01:22:809 (4) NC? last time there was a new combo. . but some modder told me to remove it : (
01:36:475 (6) NC? i know the pattern looks more neat . . . .but the NC is following vocals : ( . . .so i didn't change it
01:36 809 (1) Do you see it neatly when you make RNC? ^
01:38:475 (5) NC umm no . . .since the notes after this follow the old new combo : (
01:44:309 (2) I must not change the placement that space is strange? umm. .okayy . . .

-Hard-

HP+1? i know . . .but the NC is following vocals : ( . . .so i didn't change it

It was a good map

-Normal-

00:37:809 note add umm . .no since it'll confuse the players because that long slider is following the vocals
00:38:142 ^ ^
00:51:809 (3) NC no . .: (, because i didn't use new combo for pattern in this diff too (it follows vocal)


I think that all degree of difficulty Break is long? some modder says it's strange to map the part that i use for break


An SB was wonderful!!

Louis Cyphre wrote:

difference between your normal and easy is Great. Add difficulty between them or remap Normal difficulty and make it easier.

Shiirn wrote:

General
isn't this the TV-size version? correct me if i'm wrong, not up to date on my k-on umm. . yes. .(TV size is short version right?) . . changed the title now
00:44:064 - SB load gets extremely high here and drops my fps quite a noticeable amount. the best thing i can do is recuding the time 6.x SB load : ( (it's only 00:43:975 to 00:44:309 now, around 1 white tick)
a constant load of 4.3x is...
generally kind of bad, try to find a way to optimize it by not having so much on the screen at once (combining the band members all into one image, maybe?) okay. . i've done my best. . it's become 3.8 now (the file name is full.png and full2.png)

Easy
no problems

Normal
kind of hard for a normal
00:23:475 (4) - you use slidersounds for this slider but not the other ones (00:24:475 (1)) - why? because the clap sound only occur every 2 ticks (there are no circles at this time ( this part suits the slider well imo ) so i need to force the clap sound by using slidersounds)

Hard
no problems

Insane
I generally hate circular mapping, but this is very nice. Good job.
I could nazi the sliders but i won't.
00:25:976 (1,2) - stack correctly done. . . i think . . .(it's pretty hard to stack these 2 )


Decent overall!

TakamuraRin wrote:

Hi~
Mod from #modreqs
Fuwa - Fuwa ti~ime!

[General]

Please recheck all difficulty, because Kiai time isn't same, but should be.
i've rechecked. . and it seems there are no problem with Kiai's. . all diff' kiai starts and ends at same time

Incorrect combo placement in all difficulties.
Please read this rules. v

Combo should to change:
Every 4th white tick in timeline (if you use 4/4 Time signature in your timing) = ever big white tick. But you don't considered at mapping this beatmap. So sad. Some big white ticks under finish of sliders.
New spacing, start jumping.
Start kiai.
Change sliders speed.

Recheck all difficulties with this rules, please. If you need help - just write to me.
the combo is following vocals(if you notice the storyboard, the subtitle follows the new combo placement) and the flow of the song

[Insane]

00:09:476 (2) - 1 cell down ( Grid lvl1. ) umm. . i goes over the line. . so i can't move it 1 grid down : (
00:13:476 (4) - not pretty slider. May be linear? i just.. .not goes well with other slider on this part
00:17:643 (1) - last slider mount move on 1 cell to the left. (Grid lvl 1. ) i think it's fina as is
00:18:309 (3) - too not pretty. May be 00:17:976 (2) + rotate by 115° on Clockwise? So pretty, i think.okay
00:22:309 (1) - Unsymmetrical slider. May be use linear? Or rotate slider by 30° on Anti-Clockwise and move 3rd slider mount on 1 cell to the up. (Grid lvl 1. ) And put in place. fixed. . symmetrical now. . and im not rotating it. . since it's a blanket with (3)
00:24:809 (2,3,4) - Ehhh, so ugly. May be such is better?i make that in purpose : D, have to admit it's ugly. . but i love to see how it plays with auto play

SPOILER

00:27:809 (2) - ^ If you accept with me just copy (4) slider.
00:33:976 (1,2,3) - Why change spacing? No-no. fixed
00:35:309 (1,4) - Unsymmetrical sliders. v it's symmetrycal, just move it 1 grid (grid lv3) and it'll be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/224063

SPOILER

00:52:143 (1) - Not pretty slider. May be . . . ( 00:51:476 (7) + Ctrl+J + Ctrl+H. )

SPOILER

okay
00:54:475 - Add finish.okay
01:41:143 (6) - too not pretty slider. May be move middle slider mount on 5 cell to the up and 1 cell to the left? It should look like this.(Grid lvl 1. ) vokay

SPOILER

01:43:810 (1) - eeeeh. May be move first slider mount on 2 cell to the right and 1 cell to the down? (Grid lvl 1. )
01:44:809 (1) - ^ If you agree with me in previous comment - just use Ctrl+H and rotate by 90° on Clockwise.
01:44:809 (1,1) - NC spamming. Delete second new combo. okay


[Hard]

00:12:476 (2) - So bad slider. Go symmetrical? okay
00:22:642 (4) - Delete finish on start of slider and add on finish of this slider. it just. . seems kinda off
00:22:642 (4) - Spamming finish. No-no. So loud and ugly. umm. . you just tell me to add finish on the end of this slider
00:36:143 (1) - Why middle slider mount here? it's what they call accident x D
00:47:476 (4) - Baka slider. May be move third slider mount on 2 cell to the left and 2 cell to the up? (Grid lvl 1. ) fixed
01:25:476 (2,3,2,4,1) - Uh, very loud. Delete some finishes, please. maybe i'll decrease the volume
01:32:810 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^ okay
01:45:475 (1) - Delete new combo.okay

[Normal]

00:09:142 (1) - Move slider on 1 cell to the left and 1 cell to the up (Grid lvl 2. ) (Spacing fail. ) okay
00:14:476 (4) - Spacing fail. umm. . 0.97 and 0.99 is no problem i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/224073
00:16:475 (2) - ^i don't see any problem with this too : ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/224074
00:18:143 (2) - ^ ^
00:18:143 (2) - ^^

Please recheck this diffuclty with your distance snap, because some object disagree with him.
0.1 - 0.4 is not a problem imo, and it doesn't mave any AIMod problem
00:46:809 - miss a bit.
01:26:143 (1) - Ugly slider. Linear is better, i thinkokay
01:32:809 (3) - ^ May be . . . v (4th mount slider move on 2 cell to the left, second mound slider move on 2 cell to the down and 1 cell to the left. ) (Grid lvl 2. )okay

SPOILER

01:45:476 (1) - Delete new combo. okay
01:45:809 (1) - Add finish?okay

[Easy]

00:22:809 (2) - Move slider on 1 cell to the up. (Spacing fail. ) okay
00:27:142 (1) - Spacing fail.okay
00:31:809 (4) - ^okay
00:33:142 (2) - ^okay

Please recheck this diffuclty with your distance snap, because some object disagree with him.

00:06:809 (1) - Add Finish?okay, i forgot to add finish last time lol
00:20:475 (4) - extend slider to 00:21:475. Because rhythm in this difficulty isn't vocal. i was thinking like that too . . but it just kinda off. . and confusing
00:33:475 (3) - Add finish on start of slider?okay
00:43:475 (1) - Delete finish on start of this slider and add on finish of slider. (Spacing fail, by the way. ) it seems off if i remove the finish
00:48:809 (1) - Add finish on finish of slider?okay
00:50:809 (3,4,5,6,7) - Change rhythm in easy? No-no. Change it. By the way, you can't use combo more than 5 in easy difficulty. Change it too. okay
01:16:142 (3) - Add finish on start of slider?okay
01:27:809 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same cases as in 00:50:809.okay
01:44:142 (1,1,1) - NC spamming. Delete last two NC.okay
01:45:475 (1) - Add finish.okay

That's all. Goodluck!