这样啊 那我可以做hard吗
好的 thanksL_P wrote:
这样啊 那我可以做hard吗
Thank you for modding!!kokoroanime wrote:
Hello. Mod this beatmap. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/123212&m=0 (Please ignore the insane mod, it's currently remaking...)That's the best I can do.
- ~General~
You really have to use full submission because I don't see the background yet.
~Normal~
00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
00:04:361 (1) - ^
00:05:983 (1) - Add finish at the start and end.
00:07:604 (3) - Add the finish at the start and the second reverse.
~Icsa3eger~
00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
00:04:361 (1) - ^
00:06:388 (2) - ^
00:07:199 (4) - ^
00:09:226 (5) - ^
Thank you and good luck.
shikyu wrote:
Ignore this post. done
Thank you for modding~~athiota33 wrote:
Hi
Anyway,sorry for spamming this tread.I always use wrong user ==" like that post *point to shikyu's post*
I'm really sorry...><
[Normal]
Its to long for normal diff i guess?
00:17:739 (4) - Remove whistle it's ok to me..
00:31:321 (1) - Don't make it jump done.
00:56:658 (3) - Remove whistle ^^
01:05:577 (5) - NC? done.
[Icsa3egr]
00:09:226 (5) - NC? done.
00:10:239 (1) - RNC? done.
00:18:145 (1) - Delete note. feels empty without it
00:18:348 (5) - NC? naw
00:18:956 (1) - RNC? ^
00:03:550 (1) - ^ ..what's the point
00:05:172 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:902 (1) - ^ ^
02:02:942 (1) - ^ done.
02:03:348 (7) - NC? done.
02:51:388 (9) - ^ um, as I'm drawing something, I'd prefer they're in the same color.
That's all~
Good luck xD~
thanks~~L_P wrote:
haha here
lol meowIz-Ko wrote:
this is a strange song to me o.o thinking this http://youtu.be/LCaGprY51aY
The diffs is all right imo, but that meow disturbing me xD
No_Gu wrote:
request from my queue
首页看不到BG.试试full下
3m-4m - 2diff
[normal]
00:02:740 (1,1,1) - 结尾删finish。很吵 ok~
01:05:780 (2) - 换个spinner no
01:18:753 (1) - 删NC ok
01:27:064 (2) - 开头的clap换成finish。第二个折返clap。第三个折返删clap ok
01:28:483 (4) - 删clap ok
02:03:956 (2) - 换个spinner no!!
02:40:442 (1) - 删NC ok
02:42:064 (1) - ^ ok
02:59:496 (1) - 开头finish ok
[insane]
00:10:848 (1) - 删NC 故意的
00:12:469 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:010 (1) - ^ ??
00:23:821 (3) - NC ????
00:24:631 (1) - 删NC ^
00:25:442 (3) - NC ^
00:51:388 (5) - ^ no
01:21:794 (5) - 顶HPbar fixed
01:22:199 (6) - NC ok
01:24:226 (7) - ^ ok
01:41:658 (10) - NC I like this style www
01:42:469 (1) - 删NC ^
01:43:280 (3) - NC this??? what is this
02:23:618 (4) - x248 y296 ok
02:51:388 (9) - NC 这段明显是故意的好么......
Thanks~~Kert wrote:
This song is hypnotizing
[Icsa3egr]
01:46:929 (2) - How about moving to 01:46:827 and extending the slider to 01:47:131?
Same for the next one ok, fixed
And btw. How about making those "meow" sliders have some unique shape and not the regular one? It will be a lot better I thought of many shapes, but no one fits T.T
[Normal]
01:05:780 (2) - I think it could be better to extend it to 01:07:604 It's strange in Edit maybe, but when playing it it's OK because there is a break
Thank you for modding!!Suzully wrote:
Thank you for mod request~
[Normal]
AR seems too high. At least -1 please? I think AR5 is ok, I checked many Normal
maps, and about 1/2 (or 1/3?) of them are AR5, others are AR4[Icsa3egr]
- 00:02:740 (1) - Add finish. I don't like the finish sound at the beginning..
- 00:05:983 (1,2) - ^ ok
- 00:39:226 (3,4) - Remove (4), then add a repeat at (3). That's better imo. But
it doesn't follow the vocal...= =- 00:40:848 (1) - Add finish at the end. ok
- 00:48:145 (2) - Replace clap with finish. ok
- 00:54:023 (1) - Add finish at the end. ok
- 01:01:321 (2) - I think it's better to avoid the stack. I think the stack is
ok- 01:39:226 (1) - Add finish at the end. ok
- 01:53:010 (2) - ^ at the start. ok
- 02:20:577 (2) - ^ ok
- 02:29:496 (1) - Too near from (4). You must change the spacing. ok
- 02:33:550 (3) - Add finish at the start. ok
- 02:57:875 (1) - ^
It's hard to read some notes due to random spacing.
If you can put notes with good spacing, the mapset will become much better!
>w<Sweet song<3
- 00:02:740 (1) - Add finish here. nawww
- 00:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - It's better to put finish at (1,3) instead of (2,4).
ok~- 00:07:604 (1) - Add finish. ok~
- 00:08:415 (1) - ^ ok~
- 00:11:861 (1) - Oh...too high SV for me. 1.5x SV makes enough good effect imo.
lol I don't want to change this- 00:16:523 (4) - Remove whistle. ok~
- 00:24:226 (5) - Add clap. ok~
- 00:28:685 (2) - Replace clap with finish. ok~
- 01:03:753 (1) - Add clap at the repeat. not ok~
- 01:04:361 (2) - ^ not ok~
- 01:10:239 (1) - Same as above. >w<
- 01:14:091 (2) - Replace whistle with finish. ok~
- 01:26:861 (2) - Add finish at the repeat. ok~
- 01:35:780 (6) - Replace whistle with clap? It's same as previous one. ok~
- 01:43:280 (3,4,5) - Looks crowded. Move (5) further a bit? no change = =
- 01:46:523 (1,2) - It's kinda hard to read them. Combine them to a slider?
?????- 01:47:334 (3,4) - ^ ^
- 02:20:172 (1,2,3) - Move them right by some grids? Current formation is too near from
02:20:577 (1). ok- 02:31:726 (1) - Too near from (7). that one is ok I think~
- 02:55:645 (1) - Same as above. >w<
- 03:04:360 (1) - Add finish. ok
- 03:05:171 (1) - ^ ok
- 03:05:982 (1,2,1,2) - I recommend you to replace whistle with finish at some notes of
them. I like this style www
Good luck!
Thank you for modding ^v^Heatherfield wrote:
aiaiclala fans
club presents
[Icsa3egr]
音效的思路很混乱,特别是有的clap比较吵.其实还不如舍掉大部分哨子换24clap简单省事有效. = = 话说我当时做这个图的时候不知道24clap 不然可能就那么加了 现在还是算了...
如果还是坚持用normal whistle的话建议着力削减clap的成分.
另外就是排版过于黏糊,new combo的地方把objects移的更远一点,打起来更清爽.要么就直接stack起来,半
近不远的这种style不大适合这歌.特别是有的地方排的,前一个pattern打出的300还没消失,附近或半重叠
的位置又出现了新的note, 估计是改sv的原因= = 一开始是3.0 因为太快了就改成2.4 然后直接rescale了一下
这样也影响你后面pattern的表现力. 表现力什么的...
节奏还不错,下面详细mod下.
00:20:172 (5) - add note ok
00:29:902 (1) - 增加距离 ok
00:44:091 (1) - ^ no
00:45:712 (1) - ^ ok
00:57:064 (1) - ^ ok
01:23:212 (1) - ^ ok
02:15:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议换成更清爽的3/4pattern,其实没必要一直跟那个啪啪啪 啪啪啪 啪啪
啪的鼓,有的地方光跟跟vocal也好的. 我觉得这个pattern挺好的啊= = 至于啪啪啪嘛...... = =lll
02:50:577 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - strange pattern,排的也不好看,在保持你原有思
路的基础上我建议这样 这让我怎么摆... 最后两个圈加了个nc lol
其实觉得全改成circle还好点 = =
[Normal]
sv太高了,由于没有easy,这个diff显得过难了点 sv什么的... 我想说这个= =
谢谢modding <3eikkaleyd wrote:
:) From Anshi and eikka's Modding queue :)
[Normal]
感觉拖条速度和AR偏快,还有圈子希望能改成最大的,作为最简单的DIFF考虑一下? normal难度 AR5算很常见了吧... sv什么的感觉还好, 这图bpm不高...
01.02.739 (4)节奏有点乱,感觉下一个(1)反应不过来,最好把(4)和slider放近一些 滑条判定比较松, 这个没关系的ww
02.18.348 (1,2)找不到节奏,最好改成一个slider也许会好读一些 slider要往哪里滑呢,,, = =
[Icsa3egr]
00.11.861 (1)这个slider鬼畜成这样真的没问题么(不过出现了很多次应该没问题吧。。【扶额 lol
00.36.185 (1)本身就是3+1连打之后,再放一个note在这个位置会出现读图问题 = =个人感觉还好啊w
00.42.672 (1)在这个蓝色(1)之前加个note 好的~
Good luck~
Thx for moddingChewin wrote:
General:Normal:
- For the BG I found this: http://puu.sh/9mXB this is the cut v. http://puu.sh/9mXu = = um... let me think about it, cool BG anyways
- Rename the "L_Ps hard" in "L_Ps Hard"
Icsa3egr:
- AR-1
- CS Large I don't like the circle too large... = =
- 00:07:604 (3) - Improve the shape: http://puu.sh/9mY4 2nd waypoint at x128 y288, 3rd x208 y288 and last x236 y236 ok
- 00:11:658 Add circle
- 00:27:469 Add a slider 1/2
- 00:34:158 Add circle
- 01:25:848 Add slider 1/2
- 02:04:361 Spinner? OAO I don't want to add more notes because this is 2.99 stars already... don't want to go over 3 ww
- This map is so "empty".. Add something that fits the song D:
Good luck
- 00:03:550 (1) - No new combo = = why, what's the point
- 00:05:171 (1) - ^
- 00:14:091 (1) - distance snap it? it will go to the other side? = =
- 01:40:848 (4) - new combo, 'cause you use it on the next triplet. ok
- 01:52:199 Map here o.o This is the most important piece of the song lol [color]...... = = I think the most important part is "meow" so naw wwwwwwww[/color]
- 03:03:144 (2,3,4) - distrance snap [color]1.5x scaled[/color]
Thanks for modding~M a n a wrote:
[Normal]
I think 1,50 Slider tick rate is too hard for normal diff... it's ok I think
00:13:483 (2) - Don't mix all hitsound. Its noisy? meow
00:28:077 (1) - Distance is too close... It's ok, for the last combo has already faded out
01:14:091 (2) - Finish instead of clap at the begining? don't sound good lol
01:16:118 (2) - Remove finish ? = =
01:40:848 (2) - Add clap? naw www
01:41:658 (3) - ^ added finish
03:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - Don't mix all hitsound. I like this style www
[Isca3egr]
00:16:118~00:18:753 - Why there's no hitsound? added a whistle
01:14:091 (2) - I don't if this slider overlap the sliderbody (3),Move it some where? nawwwww
01:14:496 (3) - Remove finish at the begining. yay ok
01:16:118 (5) - Add clap? ok
01:29:091 (4) - ^ whistle is better
01:36:185 (1) - Too close with (6),move it somewhere. naww
01:40:037 (1) - Add finish at the begining? no
02:05:983 (3) - Add finish? ok
02:27:064 (1) - Add finish at the begining? no
02:33:550 (4) - ^ no
03:05:983 (1,2,1,2) - Finish instead of whistle? I like whistle
Thats all~
Good Luck
Suzully wrote:
[L_Ps Hard]
Rename to "L_P's Hard". lol i like L_Psum...i know, this is to satisfy some troublesome MATs... i think you know what i mean
- 02:35:172 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too difficult as hard diff... not really.....i made FC and my rank is 25000
- 03:05:577 (4) - The repeat is hidden by combo burst. That's is now unrankable so you have to change the pattern.
其實我並不怎麼在乎NC...那只是爲了方便看而已的東西Heatherfield wrote:
[L_Ps hard]
OD+1 lol no
00:21:591 (1,2,3,4) - spacing um
00:45:712 (1) - ends at 00:46:352
if you are adding NC by vocal, then just do it all the time, the current pattern is so messed up
...不胜枚举,后面不挑了,自己重新整理一下NC的思路吧 um...我會好好反省的(真的嗎?)
03:05:577 (4) - this kind of trap is NOT interesting to play 我也知道,這是預備給mat噴的
eikkaleyd wrote:
[L_Ps hard]
02.37.406 (2)减少一次reserve 哦忘了!但是那不叫reserve,叫repeat.reserve是預備的意思
02.42.672 (3-7)这种距离很大的连打不应该出现在H难度里面的,请把每个NOTE的距离缩小 吶呐呐。。。
Chewin wrote:
General:
[*]Rename the "L_Ps hard" in "L_Ps Hard"[/list] oh sure...
L_Ps hard:
changed everything
[*]Good map :3 youre right XD[/list]
DOne CDFA's modM a n a wrote:
[Normal]
[L_P's Hard]SPOILER02:36:185 (8) - NC? (if you accept this RNC at 02:36:794) um...changed the NC system
Overall nice :)
Thanks for modding~CDFA wrote:
Overall:
Your combo colors kinda don't fit the background. lol
Insane:
00:11:962 - Hello unfitting sped-up slider I think it fits well
01:10:502 - ^ ^
01:41:658 (4) - Needs moar symmetry. My best suggestion is to use a large grid size, and make symmetrical sliders like that >:3~ sure
01:52:199 - Kinda random for a break o-o 0v0
02:49:767 (4) - NC oh right
02:51:388 (6) - ^ lol no
02:55:645 (1) - WHY MUST YOU COME BACK TO HAUNT ME >w<
Normal:
00:21:591 (1) - Not moe! >w<
00:26:253 (4) - ^ Symmetry! fixed
00:34:564 (1) - ^ fixed
00:51:388 (2) - ^ fixed? = =
00:54:023 (1) - ^ I think this one fits lol
Mostly your sliders kinda piss me off, but I just pointed out the most noticable. I like the background though. Moe >w<~.
Thanks for modding~razorleaf wrote:
Mod your map (via Mod queue Request with High Priority)
General
1. No Kiai Time? Recommendation : 02:33:550 - 02:46:523 only 13 seconds? = = that's almost none. Maybe you got the feeling like me too, this song is either no kiai or all kiai 0.0 I've seen many songs with no kiai or just 1 second fountain only, so I guess it's fine.
2. Combo Colour doens't match with background. which color? hard/insane are different 0.0
3. Set Bookmark / Preview Point there is one preview point already? for bookmarks they are not necessary I think
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02:33:550 (3) - New Combo different from the next one? = =
02:17:739 (4) - Unstack naw www
02:43:685 (3) - Unstack naw www
03:05:983 (1) 'til 03:07:402 - Change to Spinner (Too plain if you keep the circle) imo 2 secons spinner is too short for newbies
Icsa3egr
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HD : +1 NOOOOOOO
OD: -1 but OD should = AR-2? = =
00:11:861 (1) - Too fast. @_@ no change @_@ (lol)
00:23:415 (2) - Unstack sounds reasonable 0.0 but I don't know where to put it, so didn't change
01:10:239 (1) - Too Fast. no change @_@ (lol)
02:55:645 (1) - Too Fast. no change @_@ (lol)
Give More Break. This is very hard. I think it's easy enough, I can pass it with rank B, and I'm#35000
__________________________________________
Keep Going [CSGA]Ar3sgice! Good enough, but for Icsa3egr, I'm very confuse with it, and it's very hard
So that's all of my mod. Hope you enjoy
48,208,7604,2,0,B|64:236|112:256|160:236|176:208,3,150
razorleaf wrote:
L_P's Hard
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00:57:064 (3) - End of Slider, give Whistle and Clap no whistle!
01:03:145 (2) - Move to X:304, 336 for Constant Spacing 1.19x cool
01:20:172 - Reverse -> Give Whistle nah
01:23:415 (4) - Starts Slider -> Give Whistle nah
03:07:199 (6) - Make it a crumpled Slider.(If you want) ok
Download: Hatsuki Yura x Tsukiko - Jewel Cat ([CSGA]Ar3sgice) [L_Ps Hard].osukosiga wrote:
hi~ L_P hi kosiga D:
[L_Ps Hard] ⇒ L_P ' s Hard i like L_Ps T.T
- 00:34:361 (2) - spacing too far. I think that DS1.0x is better ok
- 01:03:550 (4) - use DS 1.1x ? did some adjustment
- 02:38:719 (2) - spacing too close. When it is same DS because rhythm is different, I am confused youre right
- 03:05:577 (4) - unrankable.lol When reverse hides, do not see it by a hitburst hehehe i will only change it when MAT founds it, just to see which one mod detail enough
152,248,72469,5,0
228,304,72672,1,8
324,304,72875,1,0
400,248,73077,1,4
kosiga wrote:
[General]ok
- Song folder - remove osb file
[Normal][Icsa3egr]
- CZ -1 (Please lower it than hard ><;) large circle don't look nice
- 00:07:604 (3) - more beautiful curve ↓ try
48,208,7604,2,0,B|64:236|112:256|160:236|176:208,3,150thanks- 00:15:104 (1) - use 00:14:091 (3) - copy (Ctrl+C,V,H,<) yea
- 00:18:348 (1) - spacing too far (0.88x) fixed
- 00:32:334 (2) - 1/1beat stack. The beginner is confused to be different from other stack in rhythm. plz not stack look approach circles... = = and even if they read wrong they can still get a 50, for OD is so low
- 00:37:199 (2) - spacing too far (0.87x) move x168,y172 and plz follow after remade the slider
- 00:45:712 (3) - ^ (0.88x) I think 2/1 is ok... = =
- 00:57:267 (1) - ^ (1.35x) fixed
- 01:01:321 (2) - not stack plz >< . difficult for a beginner fixed
- 01:05:780 (2) - change repeat slider ? 01:05:780~01:07:402 ( repeat part 01:06:591) this is fine, before a break = =
- 01:26:456 (1) - spacing too far (0.89x) I think 3/1 is ok... = =
- 01:45:712 (1) - ^ (0.87x)
- 01:49:767 (2) - spacing too close (0.6x) fixed
- 01:51:388 (1) - kick slider. difficult for a beginner. change two slider. I think this is fine, they can do it
- 02:27:064 (2) - same 00:32:334 ?
- 03:03:956 (4) - spacing too far (0.91x) fixed
- 03:04:361 (1,2) - very difficult for a beginner. remove one repeat. follow the music...
Good luck ~
- HD+1 "noooooooooo" = =
- 00:46:321 - add circle no music?
- 01:48:348 (6,7) - move tick. remove 6 circle. and 01:48:550&01:48:753 add circle I don't understand... - -lll
roxkyuubiforever wrote:
Hmm... Only a few detales~Normal
00:40:848(1) - Doesn't matter how many times I listen to it, I always think that you make something similtar to what you did at 00:44:091. Slider hitting the white(00:40:848), blue(00:41:152) and red(00:41:456) ticks of the timeline, then a note 1/2 after.
It's not a major error but I reeeally would like to see you change this part. On the rest of the song, the sequence 1/1 notes is smooth and easy to read. But here it doesn't really fit... Yes it doesn't fit vocal, but the problem is if I di it like this, the next 2 sliders will sound bad because they don't follow vocal either. (and 00:42:469 is the same...) = = and I don't want to follow all the vocal here so I can lower the star rating. = =
01:00:510(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part feels funny. Here is one idea: first, start the first (2) to 1/2 later(01:01:523) and make it end at 01:01:929. Then move the second (1) to 1/2 later(01:03:145) and end it at 01:03:550. And finally make the second (2) start at 01:03:956 and end it at 01:04:361. This way, the gameplay doesn't really follow the voice but it's nicier to play. changed
01:05:780(2) - Should end at 01:07:604. Sounds really bad the way that is now.
01:39:226(1) - Same as 00:40:848. didn't change = =
Art4873tr87t3gi gsnsf;; >w<
00:11:861(1) - Totally unecessary speed up. It's not only weird, it also plays bad. Please, remove it. no change lol
01:10:239(1) - ^ ^
02:55:645(1) - ^ ^
New Combos really annoy me... Imagine how bad would it be to play it on Tag... >.< oh
Good luck :]
12BARRY21 wrote:
Request from my queue.
[Normal]Clap的位置很奇怪阿...=w= =w=
- 00:15:104 (1) - 拉好點~ fixed
- 01:00:104 - Add a note no
- 01:05:780 (2) - 改spinner? 到01:07:604 no
- 01:23:821 (2) - Clap yes
- 01:24:834 (5) - 縮短到01:25:239就好 然後在01:25:442 & 01:25:848 & 01:26:050 加note no
- 01:37:199 (2) - Clap yes
- 01:48:956 (1) - ^ 加了finish
- 01:58:685 - Add a note no
- 02:01:118 (2) - Remove Clap yes
- 02:01:523 (3) - Clap yes
- 02:02:334 (1) - ^ yes
- 02:04:361 ~ 02:06:185 - 太空了吧...加個spinner? 或加些note? 我觉得挺好的
- 02:23:010 (1) - Clap no
- 02:23:821 - ^ no
- 02:51:185 (2) - 改spinner 到02:53:010 no
- 02:53:010 ~ 02:55:442 - 加點音吧= = break...
[Icsa3egr]音效位置很奇怪!! =w=
- 00:11:861 (1) - lol........不要這樣= = no change lol
- 01:10:239 (1) - ^ no change lol
- 02:55:645 (1) - ^ no change lol
- 02:59:496 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這邊擺好點吧...間距可以愈來愈大 Slider拉好點...... 不是很理解怎么越变越大... = =
Slider拉好點= =" = ="
Good Luck!!
12BARRY21 wrote:
[L_Ps Hard]
- 00:11:861 (2) - 尾部對到(1)的尾部!! 看起来是故意的, 没改
- 00:11:861 (2) - Add a note ?
- 00:57:064 (3) - Clap 感觉很奇怪... 也没改
- 00:57:672 (4) - Remove Clap
- 01:05:577 (8) - 頭尾對調? 改掉了
- 01:12:469 (1,2,3,4) - 沒排好.. 這樣吧 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/191829
152,248,72469,5,0找code麻烦不改了w 看起来没差别
228,304,72672,1,8
324,304,72875,1,0
400,248,73077,1,4- 01:51:388 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 02:35:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太擠了吧.. 空气人美 不改w
- 03:04:361 (1,2,3,4) - 尾部都沒對到0.0 skip for mat www
Thanks for modding~ update tomorrowMiya wrote:
Hi, it's time to mod your map
Generalmaybe L_Ps combo 1/2/4 for all diffs is ok... = = let me think about it
- I think offset 2750 is better. When i play with your offset i got 30% miss timed hits and 10ms average early. When i test with the new offset i got around 15-25% misstimed hits and got 0-5ms average early. (Well, i mod your map with your offset instead.) maybe need more checking... = = the result is so random
- How about adding a kiai time here?
nice suggestion!! added
- 1st kiai time : 00:41:658-00:54:631
- 2nd kiai time : 01:40:037-01:53:010
- 3rd kiai time : 02:20:577-02:33:550
- For tags, i think you should remove 'a' and 'la' since osu can't search character below 2 character. Oh yes, how about adding nyan into tags? sure!
- Maybe saving again your BG in jpg file in photoshop with correct resolution and full submit again will solve your thumbnail problem
- All difficulty must have same combo color. L_P's diff and your diff has different combo color. Fix that.
NormalL_Ps Hard << Fix this diff name, it should L_P's Hard he likes it this way ^^
- I think hitsound pattern here need more work. It's not consistent imo. oohhh.
- 00:02:740 (1) - Well, you should add a finish here at the startpoint to make consistent for finish rythim later.
- 00:04:361 (1) - ^same as above, add finish at the startpoint. I used to agree with this, but it sounds bad. = =
- 00:09:226 (1) - Same add a finish here, but it is for closing your previous finish rythim.
- 00:13:483 (2) - A finish sound here is awkward. You should remove it. no u meow
- 00:15:104 (1) - A finish sound at the endpoint is nice and fit the song nicely.
- 00:16:929 (4) - Remove whistle from the endpoint or change it into clap. It's not consistent at all, and strange if it's just exist one whistle sound only in the rythim. You don't want to add more circle right? Since it can increase the star rating. added moar whistles, maybe nicer
- 00:28:685 (2) - Instead of clap, it will be more better to add a finish sound here. no, the current one sounds nice with the next clap.
- 00:32:739 (3) - Remove finish sound here at the endpoint. It sounds awkward. ok
- 00:39:834 (4) - Same as above, remove finish sound here. ok
- 00:48:956 (3) - Remove finish sound from the startpoint. It's not consistent with finish rythim before. ok
- 01:14:091 (2) - Change clap sound in the startpoint into clap. Finish is better than clap here. inconsistent
- 01:15:510 (2) - Remove finish sound at the endpoint here. It's awkward. Also it's not consistent with your previous rythim. Or changing it into whistle to make consistent with your next rythim. ok
- 01:28:483 (4) - Delete finish here at the endpoint, same reason as above. If you're not adding a whistle before, you should delete whistle here. ok
- 01:46:523 (2,3,4,5) - Suddenly there's a clap pattern is sound strange. You should remove the clap pattern. Or add a clap pattern in your previous rythim. ok
- 02:10:645 (1) - Remove clap at the startpoint and endpoint too. It's not consistent. changed to some whistles >v<
- 02:38:415 (5) - A finish sound here doesn't fit the song at all. Instead adding a finish at this note : 02:40:037 (3) is more better. ok
Ar3sgice
- 00:11:861 (2) - Make it stack with 1 endpoint? It will be more nice too see imo. Oh yes to stack this don't use any grid snaping and distance snaping. looks like intentional, didn't change
- 00:44:902 (1) - I think you should add a finish sound with 66% volume at this spinnder endpoint. It will be more better to hear. no
- 00:46:929 (1) - If you follow suggestion above, remove clap here since it will make finish rythim not good to hear.
- 01:47:334 (2) - This slider is not blanket properly, make it like this > http://puu.sh/9TmK made symmetrical
- 02:09:226 (1) - I wonder why there are no finish sound here. You forgot? The background music clearly support for finish sound. added
- 02:38:618 - Adding a note here will make flow and polarity more better. no change... = =
- 02:58:685 (1) - I strongly suggest you add a finish sound here. It will be better to hear.
Well, that's all from me. Wow, you have so many star spam in this map. o.o lol
- 00:03:956 (2) - Little weird shape slider. Making a common arc slider is better > http://puu.sh/9Tkx made symmetrical
- 00:28:685 (2) - Since in your previous rythim there's a finish rythim, it will good to change clap into finish here at the startpoint to make a closing for that rythim. no
- 00:48:145 (1) - Finish is definitely better than clap here. inconsistent
- 00:52:604 (10) - Awkwakrd finish sound. I think you should remove it. ok
- 02:28:685 (7) - Add a whistle here at the startpoint to make the whistle pattern more consistent. ok
Bye and Good Luck ^^