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[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Aki_Kannabi wrote:

关于02:50:567 - 这里!!我听了几次!他这里是应该放5连比较合适!!
no kds
嗯那个确实是5连, 但是多加个滑条摆得好看点也没关系嘛。 >.<
Bobo_old
Yo, ok gonna try get these mods done faster.

-Normal-

00:14:091 (1) - Delete new combo. Take the 2nd slider point, drag it down 4 grids. Take the 3rd slider point, drag it up 9 grids.
01:01:321 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:03:753 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:15:307 (3) - Start the new combo here.
01:18:753 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:21:794 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:27:064 (2) - Left 2 grids.
01:31:726 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:44:091 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177453 ?
01:51:388 (1) - Delete new combo. 5 grids down, 1 left.
01:59:699 (1) - Delete new combo.
02:01:523 (1) - Delete new combo.
02:03:956 (1) - Delete new combo.
02:17:334 (3,4) - Stack with the endpoint of (2)?
02:18:348 (1,2) - Move this so that it doesn't overlap with the (2) in the previous combo.
02:50:983 (1,2) - Delete new combo.
02:57:267 (1) - Delete new combo.
03:04:361 (1) - Delete new combo.
03:05:172 (1) - Delete new combo.

-Icsa3egr-

00:12:875 (2) - Stack with the endpoint?
00:35:375 (5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177457 ?
00:36:185 (1) - Move this so that it doesn't go under the previous combo.
00:36:996 (5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177460 ?
00:59:902 (3,4) - Idk how to explain this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177462
01:30:307 (2,3) - Turn this into a slider like (4)?
01:41:253 (13,14,15) - Why not space these like the previous two streams?
02:04:665 (7,8) - Looks better if you just stack them.
02:32:942 (1) - Too close to the previous combo.
02:59:192 (4,5) - Stack with the endpoint of (3).

Nice map, Icsa3egr diff needs a bit of work.
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Bobo wrote:

Yo, ok gonna try get these mods done faster. so fast ;)

-Normal-

00:14:091 (1) - Delete new combo. Take the 2nd slider point, drag it down 4 grids. Take the 3rd slider point, drag it up 9 grids. wow looks great
01:01:321 (1) - Delete new combo. thanks
01:03:753 (1) - Delete new combo.thanks
01:15:307 (3) - Start the new combo here. thanks
01:18:753 (1) - Delete new combo. thanks
01:21:794 (1) - Delete new combo. thanks
01:27:064 (2) - Left 2 grids. left 1 is ok
01:31:726 (1) - Delete new combo. thanks
01:44:091 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177453 ? thanks~~
01:51:388 (1) - Delete new combo. 5 grids down, 1 left. ?? this
01:59:699 (1) - Delete new combo. thanks
02:01:523 (1) - Delete new combo. thanks
02:03:956 (1) - Delete new combo. thanks
02:17:334 (3,4) - Stack with the endpoint of (2)? um no
02:18:348 (1,2) - Move this so that it doesn't overlap with the (2) in the previous combo. doesn't overlap in play mode... plus where can I move it...
02:50:983 (1,2) - Delete new combo. not...
02:57:267 (1) - Delete new combo. no, it's because that 'meow'
03:04:361 (1) - Delete new combo....
03:05:172 (1) - Delete new combo.thanks~

-Icsa3egr-

00:12:875 (2) - Stack with the endpoint? what no
00:35:375 (5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177457 ? sure why not
00:36:185 (1) - Move this so that it doesn't go under the previous combo. ^
00:36:996 (5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177460 ? ^
00:59:902 (3,4) - Idk how to explain this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177462 naw...
01:30:307 (2,3) - Turn this into a slider like (4)? good
01:41:253 (13,14,15) - Why not space these like the previous two streams? sure..
02:04:665 (7,8) - Looks better if you just stack them. no it doesn't... I think
02:32:942 (1) - Too close to the previous combo. reversed the previous combo
02:59:192 (4,5) - Stack with the endpoint of (3). ok~

Nice map, Icsa3egr diff needs a bit of work. <3
phonic
Hello~ :)

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[General]

  1. How about already adding a combo color one color?
[Icsa3egr]

  1. 00:11:861 (1) - Is BPM change necessary?
  2. 00:16:929 (5) - add new combo?
  3. 00:39:226 (6) - ^
  4. 00:40:239 (11) - I see the one that I repeated neatly
  5. 00:41:658 (1) - Firstly it is finish
  6. 00:53:010 (1) - add finish?
  7. 01:10:239 (1) - Is BPM change necessary?
  8. 01:40:442 (7) - add new combo
  9. 01:51:388 (1) - add finish?
  10. 02:21:794 (7) - add new combo?
  11. 02:31:929 (2) - add finish?
  12. 02:38:212 (9) - add new combo?
  13. 02:50:577 (6) - ^
  14. 02:52:199 (14) - ^
  15. 02:55:645 (1) - Is BPM change necessary?
  16. 02:56:253 (2) - add new combo
[Normal]

  1. AR-1?
  2. There are few sound charge accounts, and a map is lacking
  3. I do not have in particular any problem. I am sorry in simple Mod :o

fight~
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

phonic wrote:

Hello~ :)

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[General]

  1. How about already adding a combo color one color?
I think 2 colors are OK since it's Hatsuki Yura x Tsukiko, 2 people...

[Icsa3egr]

  1. 00:11:861 (1) - Is BPM change necessary? yes ;)
  2. 00:16:929 (5) - add new combo? ok~~
  3. 00:39:226 (6) - ^ ok~~
  4. 00:40:239 (11) - I see the one that I repeated neatly ok~~
  5. 00:41:658 (1) - Firstly it is finish ok~~
  6. 00:53:010 (1) - add finish? ok~~
  7. 01:10:239 (1) - Is BPM change necessary? yes~ ;)
  8. 01:40:442 (7) - add new combo ok~~
  9. 01:51:388 (1) - add finish? ok~~
  10. 02:21:794 (7) - add new combo? ok~~
  11. 02:31:929 (2) - add finish? ok~~
  12. 02:38:212 (9) - add new combo? ok~~
  13. 02:50:577 (6) - ^ ... I prefer this part is the same color.
  14. 02:52:199 (14) - ^ ^
  15. 02:55:645 (1) - Is BPM change necessary? yes~ ;)
  16. 02:56:253 (2) - add new combo ok~~
[Normal]

  1. AR-1? I think AR5 is ok for a normal...
  2. There are few sound charge accounts, and a map is lacking um...
  3. I do not have in particular any problem. I am sorry in simple Mod :o :)

fight~
Thank you~~

update tomorrow
L_P
hihi L_P's mod queue
all suggestion, cause the map is good
hitsounds 有点太单调?
um。。。我个人喜欢你的图!不知为何没人Star?(好吝啬哦

insane
um...我觉得这个diff好像不够难(as for insane) 做hard又有太过快的slider velocity?不如改个名字,如meow或者什么的?

00:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing even bigger
00:13:483 (1) - make it a slider end at next white tick
eh? you speak chinese?
00:18:753 (4) - 这里加多一个note,然后让他跟前面三个形成四边形,next slider stack with it
00:38:821 (5) - 做向前面一样,三个note 的
00:42:773 (4) - add a note, stack with the slider
00:52:807 (11) - 加多一个plz不然感觉怪怪的
01:06:388 (1) - 加spinner?
02:13:685 (4) - 加note在正中央?
02:29:496 (1,2,3) - dont make notes for rhythm like that...make a slider with repeat
02:58:483 (3) - teehee make it nicer
你没有放 kiai time????why??

normal
00:21:591 (1) - 拆成一个note一个slider
01:05:780 (6) - 结束的地方怪怪的
01:41:253 (3) - 需要再弯曲一点,不然跟前面的不搭
02:30:712 (2) - 这里太空了,加slider or notes
02:51:388 (1) - spinner

才两个diff啊 强烈建议再加 hard 或者 更上一楼的insane.
还有不要spam star 二十多就够了 = =
itankn
我被你的星星震精了- -!
YTYuyu
sorry about the delay

Normal:
00:06:794(2,3) - make the 2 sliders like this http://puu.sh/8oLB or u can make (3) and (2) look alike
00:51:388(2) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8oWy
01:01:321(2) - Aline this to the end of the slider to make it easier for beginners
01:52:401(1,2) - Aline them like this http://puu.sh/8oYQ

Icsa3egr
00:32:739(7) - NC
01:00:915(3,4) - Aline them both to (1) and (2)
01:03:550(4) - Stack it on (2) perfectly
01:20:577(2,3,4,5) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8p0U
02:51:388(9) - NC

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

L_P wrote:

hihi L_P's mod queue
all suggestion, cause the map is good
hitsounds 有点太单调?
um。。。我个人喜欢你的图!不知为何没人Star?(好吝啬哦 估计看我自己+了33个就不想了= =

insane
um...我觉得这个diff好像不够难(as for insane) 做hard又有太过快的slider velocity?不如改个名字,如meow或者什么的?

难度什么的我觉得还好啊... 因为我自己也就刚能过几个ins图 自己觉得还好= =

00:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing even bigger done
00:13:483 (1) - make it a slider end at next white tick I like it this way ^^
eh? you speak chinese? 我说英语的XD
00:18:753 (4) - 这里加多一个note,然后让他跟前面三个形成四边形,next slider stack with it 好的, didn't stack
00:38:821 (5) - 做向前面一样,三个note 的 不好看ww
00:42:773 (4) - add a note, stack with the slider 好的
00:52:807 (11) - 加多一个plz不然感觉怪怪的 不会啊...
01:06:388 (1) - 加spinner? 好的
02:13:685 (4) - 加note在正中央? 不想加ww
02:29:496 (1,2,3) - dont make notes for rhythm like that...make a slider with repeat 好的
02:58:483 (3) - teehee make it nicer 好的
你没有放 kiai time????why?? 感觉不知道放哪里= = 这歌感觉不是全kiai就是没kiai...

normal
00:21:591 (1) - 拆成一个note一个slider 弄弯了slider
01:05:780 (6) - 结束的地方怪怪的 = =
01:41:253 (3) - 需要再弯曲一点,不然跟前面的不搭 好的
02:30:712 (2) - 这里太空了,加slider or notes 简单的空点没关系吧
02:51:388 (1) - spinner = =不想...

才两个diff啊 强烈建议再加 hard 或者 更上一楼的insane. 我在找人做hard GD 因为感觉图里有GD好看...
还有不要spam star 二十多就够了 = = noooooooooooooo
thanks for modding~

itankn wrote:

我被你的星星震精了- -!
- - 这个嘛......

Byakugan249 wrote:

sorry about the delay ^.^

Normal:
00:06:794(2,3) - make the 2 sliders like this http://puu.sh/8oLB or u can make (3) and (2) look alike ok
00:51:388(2) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8oWy ok
01:01:321(2) - Aline this to the end of the slider to make it easier for beginners ok
01:52:401(1,2) - Aline them like this http://puu.sh/8oYQ ok

Icsa3egr
00:32:739(7) - NC ok
01:00:915(3,4) - Aline them both to (1) and (2) naw...
01:03:550(4) - Stack it on (2) perfectly I like it this way =o=
01:20:577(2,3,4,5) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8p0U ok~
02:51:388(9) - NC I prefer this section is the same color so it looks better ^^

this is the best i can do. GL :D Thanks~~ >.<
Thank you~~

update tomorrow
L_P
这样啊 那我可以做hard吗
DerekMcD
Hello. Mod this beatmap. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/123212&m=0 (Please ignore the insane mod, it's currently remaking...)

  • ~General~

    You really have to use full submission because I don't see the background yet.

    ~Normal~

    00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
    00:04:361 (1) - ^
    00:05:983 (1) - Add finish at the start and end.
    00:07:604 (3) - Add the finish at the start and the second reverse.

    ~Icsa3eger~
    00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
    00:04:361 (1) - ^
    00:06:388 (2) - ^
    00:07:199 (4) - ^
    00:09:226 (5) - ^
That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

L_P wrote:

这样啊 那我可以做hard吗
好的 thanks
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. Mod this beatmap. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/123212&m=0 (Please ignore the insane mod, it's currently remaking...)

  • ~General~

    You really have to use full submission because I don't see the background yet.

    ~Normal~

    00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
    00:04:361 (1) - ^
    00:05:983 (1) - Add finish at the start and end.
    00:07:604 (3) - Add the finish at the start and the second reverse.

    ~Icsa3eger~
    00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
    00:04:361 (1) - ^
    00:06:388 (2) - ^
    00:07:199 (4) - ^
    00:09:226 (5) - ^
That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
Thank you for modding!!
shikyu
Ignore this post.
athiota33
Hi :D
Anyway,sorry for spamming this tread.I always use wrong user ==" like that post *point to shikyu's post*
I'm really sorry...><

[Normal]
Its to long for normal diff i guess?

00:17:739 (4) - Remove whistle
00:31:321 (1) - Don't make it jump
00:56:658 (3) - Remove whistle
01:05:577 (5) - NC?

[Icsa3egr]

00:09:226 (5) - NC?
00:10:239 (1) - RNC?
00:18:145 (1) - Delete note.
00:18:348 (5) - NC?
00:18:956 (1) - RNC?
00:03:550 (1) - ^
00:05:172 (1) - ^
00:29:902 (1) - ^
02:02:942 (1) - ^
02:03:348 (7) - NC?
02:51:388 (9) - ^

That's all~
Good luck xD~
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

shikyu wrote:

Ignore this post. done

athiota33 wrote:

Hi :D
Anyway,sorry for spamming this tread.I always use wrong user ==" like that post *point to shikyu's post*
I'm really sorry...><

[Normal]
Its to long for normal diff i guess?

00:17:739 (4) - Remove whistle it's ok to me..
00:31:321 (1) - Don't make it jump done.
00:56:658 (3) - Remove whistle ^^
01:05:577 (5) - NC? done.

[Icsa3egr]

00:09:226 (5) - NC? done.
00:10:239 (1) - RNC? done.
00:18:145 (1) - Delete note. feels empty without it
00:18:348 (5) - NC? naw
00:18:956 (1) - RNC? ^
00:03:550 (1) - ^ ..what's the point
00:05:172 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:902 (1) - ^ ^
02:02:942 (1) - ^ done.
02:03:348 (7) - NC? done.
02:51:388 (9) - ^ um, as I'm drawing something, I'd prefer they're in the same color.

That's all~
Good luck xD~
Thank you for modding~~
L_P
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

L_P wrote:

haha here
thanks~~
IzzyWuff
this is a strange song to me o.o thinking this http://youtu.be/LCaGprY51aY

The diffs is all right imo, but that meow disturbing me xD
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Iz-Ko wrote:

this is a strange song to me o.o thinking this http://youtu.be/LCaGprY51aY

The diffs is all right imo, but that meow disturbing me xD
lol meow
No_Gu
request from my queue

首页看不到BG.试试full下

3m-4m - 2diff

[normal]
00:02:740 (1,1,1) - 结尾删finish。很吵
01:05:780 (2) - 换个spinner
01:18:753 (1) - 删NC
01:27:064 (2) - 开头的clap换成finish。第二个折返clap。第三个折返删clap
01:28:483 (4) - 删clap
02:03:956 (2) - 换个spinner
02:40:442 (1) - 删NC
02:42:064 (1) - ^
02:59:496 (1) - 开头finish

[insane]
00:10:848 (1) - 删NC
00:12:469 (1) - ^
00:23:010 (1) - ^
00:23:821 (3) - NC
00:24:631 (1) - 删NC
00:25:442 (3) - NC
00:51:388 (5) - ^
01:21:794 (5) - 顶HPbar
01:22:199 (6) - NC
01:24:226 (7) - ^
01:41:658 (10) - NC
01:42:469 (1) - 删NC
01:43:280 (3) - NC
02:23:618 (4) - x248 y296
02:51:388 (9) - NC
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

首页看不到BG.试试full下

3m-4m - 2diff

[normal]
00:02:740 (1,1,1) - 结尾删finish。很吵 ok~
01:05:780 (2) - 换个spinner no
01:18:753 (1) - 删NC ok
01:27:064 (2) - 开头的clap换成finish。第二个折返clap。第三个折返删clap ok
01:28:483 (4) - 删clap ok
02:03:956 (2) - 换个spinner no!!
02:40:442 (1) - 删NC ok
02:42:064 (1) - ^ ok
02:59:496 (1) - 开头finish ok

[insane]
00:10:848 (1) - 删NC 故意的
00:12:469 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:010 (1) - ^ ??
00:23:821 (3) - NC ????
00:24:631 (1) - 删NC ^
00:25:442 (3) - NC ^
00:51:388 (5) - ^ no
01:21:794 (5) - 顶HPbar fixed
01:22:199 (6) - NC ok
01:24:226 (7) - ^ ok
01:41:658 (10) - NC I like this style www
01:42:469 (1) - 删NC ^
01:43:280 (3) - NC this??? what is this
02:23:618 (4) - x248 y296 ok
02:51:388 (9) - NC 这段明显是故意的好么......
Kert
This song is hypnotizing

[Icsa3egr]
01:46:929 (2) - How about moving to 01:46:827 and extending the slider to 01:47:131?
Same for the next one

And btw. How about making those "meow" sliders have some unique shape and not the regular one? It will be a lot better

[L_Ps Hard]
00:11:861 (2) - You can't see that it's fast at all, because of the overlap D: Also I think it's too fast for a Hard diff anyway
01:10:239 (1) - If you still want to leave it as it is, make a unique shape too, please D:
01:23:212 - Starting from here clap hitsounds sound weird and unconsistent (claps are no more on white ticks) :< I like variety too, but this is a little unexpected. Try just using whistles or add additional claps sometimes
03:05:577 (4) - lol megatrap :D You can't see a reverse arrow
If it was your intention to make it a trap, maybe it's okay then :D

[Normal]
01:05:780 (2) - I think it could be better to extend it to 01:07:604
L_P
yeah Kert, that was a trap....
changed other things

Download: Hatsuki Yura x Tsukiko - Jewel Cat ([CSGA]Ar3sgice) [L_Ps hard].osu
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Kert wrote:

This song is hypnotizing

[Icsa3egr]
01:46:929 (2) - How about moving to 01:46:827 and extending the slider to 01:47:131?
Same for the next one ok, fixed

And btw. How about making those "meow" sliders have some unique shape and not the regular one? It will be a lot better I thought of many shapes, but no one fits T.T

[Normal]
01:05:780 (2) - I think it could be better to extend it to 01:07:604 It's strange in Edit maybe, but when playing it it's OK because there is a break
Thanks~~
Suzully
Thank you for mod request~

[Normal]

  • AR seems too high. At least -1 please?
  1. 00:02:740 (1) - Add finish.
  2. 00:05:983 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:39:226 (3,4) - Remove (4), then add a repeat at (3). That's better imo.
  4. 00:40:848 (1) - Add finish at the end.
  5. 00:48:145 (2) - Replace clap with finish.
  6. 00:54:023 (1) - Add finish at the end.
  7. 01:01:321 (2) - I think it's better to avoid the stack.
  8. 01:39:226 (1) - Add finish at the end.
  9. 01:53:010 (2) - ^ at the start.
  10. 02:20:577 (2) - ^
  11. 02:29:496 (1) - Too near from (4). You must change the spacing.
  12. 02:33:550 (3) - Add finish at the start.
  13. 02:57:875 (1) - ^
[L_Ps Hard]

  • Rename to "L_P's Hard".
  1. 00:02:740 (1) - Add finish.
  2. 00:11:861 (2) - Add clap at the end.
  3. 00:15:712 (3) - Add finish.
  4. 00:17:131 (3) - Stack it perfectly with (1).
  5. 00:28:685 (3) - Add finish at the start.
  6. 00:44:902 (1,1) - I recommend you to combine them to ONE spinner.
  7. 00:48:145 (3) - Add finish at the start.
  8. 00:54:631 (2) - ^
  9. 01:02:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you want to spread the spacing like this, you should use grid level 4. Current formation looks weird.
  10. 01:27:064 (1) - Add finish at the start.
  11. 01:33:753 (3,4,5,6) - Why don't you use soft sound as well as previous same pattern?
  12. 01:35:374 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  13. 01:51:388 (1) - Add finish.
  14. 02:35:172 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too difficult as hard diff...
  15. 03:05:577 (4) - The repeat is hidden by combo burst. That's is now unrankable so you have to change the pattern.
[Icsa3egr]

  • It's hard to read some notes due to random spacing.
    If you can put notes with good spacing, the mapset will become much better! :D
  1. 00:02:740 (1) - Add finish here.
  2. 00:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - It's better to put finish at (1,3) instead of (2,4).
  3. 00:07:604 (1) - Add finish.
  4. 00:08:415 (1) - ^
  5. 00:11:861 (1) - Oh...too high SV for me. 1.5x SV makes enough good effect imo.
  6. 00:16:523 (4) - Remove whistle.
  7. 00:24:226 (5) - Add clap.
  8. 00:28:685 (2) - Replace clap with finish.
  9. 01:03:753 (1) - Add clap at the repeat.
  10. 01:04:361 (2) - ^
  11. 01:10:239 (1) - Same as above.
  12. 01:14:091 (2) - Replace whistle with finish.
  13. 01:26:861 (2) - Add finish at the repeat.
  14. 01:35:780 (6) - Replace whistle with clap? It's same as previous one.
  15. 01:43:280 (3,4,5) - Looks crowded. Move (5) further a bit?
  16. 01:46:523 (1,2) - It's kinda hard to read them. Combine them to a slider?
  17. 01:47:334 (3,4) - ^
  18. 02:20:172 (1,2,3) - Move them right by some grids? Current formation is too near from 02:20:577 (1).
  19. 02:31:726 (1) - Too near from (7).
  20. 02:55:645 (1) - Same as above.
  21. 03:04:360 (1) - Add finish.
  22. 03:05:171 (1) - ^
  23. 03:05:982 (1,2,1,2) - I recommend you to replace whistle with finish at some notes of them.
Sweet song<3
Good luck! :)
Heatherfield
aiaiclala fans club presents
[Icsa3egr]
音效的思路很混乱,特别是有的clap比较吵.其实还不如舍掉大部分哨子换24clap简单省事有效.
如果还是坚持用normal whistle的话建议着力削减clap的成分.
另外就是排版过于黏糊,new combo的地方把objects移的更远一点,打起来更清爽.要么就直接stack起来,半近不远的这种style不大适合这歌.特别是有的地方排的,前一个pattern打出的300还没消失,附近或半重叠的位置又出现了新的note,这样也影响你后面pattern的表现力.
节奏还不错,下面详细mod下.
00:20:172 (5) - add note
00:29:902 (1) - 增加距离
00:44:091 (1) - ^
00:45:712 (1) - ^
00:57:064 (1) - ^
01:23:212 (1) - ^
02:15:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议换成更清爽的3/4pattern,其实没必要一直跟那个啪啪啪 啪啪啪 啪啪啪的鼓,有的地方光跟跟vocal也好的.
02:50:577 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - strange pattern,排的也不好看,在保持你原有思路的基础上我建议这样
其实觉得全改成circle还好点
[L_Ps hard]
OD+1
00:21:591 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:45:712 (1) - ends at 00:46:352
if you are adding NC by vocal, then just do it all the time, the current pattern is so messed up
00:49:767 (1) - remove NC
00:50:577 (2) - NC
01:33:753 (3,4,5,6) - why not use the hitsound pattern like here 00:35:375 (3,4,5,6) - i think it's great
01:59:699 (3) - NC
02:01:321 (3) - NC
02:17:334 (1) - remove NC
02:19:767 (4) - NC
02:24:631 (1) - remove NC
02:24:631 (1) - ^
02:28:685 (1) - ^
02:29:496 (9) - NC
02:41:050 (5) - ^
02:42:064 (1) - remove NC
...不胜枚举,后面不挑了,自己重新整理一下NC的思路吧
03:05:577 (4) - this kind of trap is NOT interesting to play
[Normal]
sv太高了,由于没有easy,这个diff显得过难了点
eikkaleyd
:) From Anshi and eikka's Modding queue

[Normal]
感觉拖条速度和AR偏快,还有圈子希望能改成最大的,作为最简单的DIFF考虑一下?
01.02.739 (4)节奏有点乱,感觉下一个(1)反应不过来,最好把(4)和slider放近一些
02.18.348 (1,2)找不到节奏,最好改成一个slider也许会好读一些

[L_Ps hard]
00.45.712 个人很反对这种很短的spin连续放……
02.33.145 (2,3,4)这三个连打不要和(1)叠在一起,会看不清
02.37.406 (2)减少一次reserve
02.42.672 (3-7)这种距离很大的连打不应该出现在H难度里面的,请把每个NOTE的距离缩小

[Icsa3egr]
00.11.861 (1)这个slider鬼畜成这样真的没问题么(不过出现了很多次应该没问题吧。。【扶额
00.36.185 (1)本身就是3+1连打之后,再放一个note在这个位置会出现读图问题
00.42.672 (1)在这个蓝色(1)之前加个note

Good luck~
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for mod request~

[Normal]

  • AR seems too high. At least -1 please? I think AR5 is ok, I checked many Normal

    maps, and about 1/2 (or 1/3?) of them are AR5, others are AR4
  1. 00:02:740 (1) - Add finish. I don't like the finish sound at the beginning..

  2. 00:05:983 (1,2) - ^ ok
  3. 00:39:226 (3,4) - Remove (4), then add a repeat at (3). That's better imo. But

    it doesn't follow the vocal...= =
  4. 00:40:848 (1) - Add finish at the end. ok
  5. 00:48:145 (2) - Replace clap with finish. ok
  6. 00:54:023 (1) - Add finish at the end. ok
  7. 01:01:321 (2) - I think it's better to avoid the stack. I think the stack is

    ok
  8. 01:39:226 (1) - Add finish at the end. ok
  9. 01:53:010 (2) - ^ at the start. ok
  10. 02:20:577 (2) - ^ ok
  11. 02:29:496 (1) - Too near from (4). You must change the spacing. ok
  12. 02:33:550 (3) - Add finish at the start. ok
  13. 02:57:875 (1) - ^
[Icsa3egr]

  • It's hard to read some notes due to random spacing.
    If you can put notes with good spacing, the mapset will become much better! :D

    >w<
  1. 00:02:740 (1) - Add finish here. nawww
  2. 00:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - It's better to put finish at (1,3) instead of (2,4).

    ok~
  3. 00:07:604 (1) - Add finish. ok~
  4. 00:08:415 (1) - ^ ok~
  5. 00:11:861 (1) - Oh...too high SV for me. 1.5x SV makes enough good effect imo.

    lol I don't want to change this
  6. 00:16:523 (4) - Remove whistle. ok~
  7. 00:24:226 (5) - Add clap. ok~
  8. 00:28:685 (2) - Replace clap with finish. ok~
  9. 01:03:753 (1) - Add clap at the repeat. not ok~
  10. 01:04:361 (2) - ^ not ok~
  11. 01:10:239 (1) - Same as above. >w<
  12. 01:14:091 (2) - Replace whistle with finish. ok~
  13. 01:26:861 (2) - Add finish at the repeat. ok~
  14. 01:35:780 (6) - Replace whistle with clap? It's same as previous one. ok~

  15. 01:43:280 (3,4,5) - Looks crowded. Move (5) further a bit? no change = =

  16. 01:46:523 (1,2) - It's kinda hard to read them. Combine them to a slider?

    ?????
  17. 01:47:334 (3,4) - ^ ^
  18. 02:20:172 (1,2,3) - Move them right by some grids? Current formation is too near from

    02:20:577 (1). ok
  19. 02:31:726 (1) - Too near from (7). that one is ok I think~
  20. 02:55:645 (1) - Same as above. >w<
  21. 03:04:360 (1) - Add finish. ok
  22. 03:05:171 (1) - ^ ok
  23. 03:05:982 (1,2,1,2) - I recommend you to replace whistle with finish at some notes of

    them. I like this style www
Sweet song<3
Good luck! :)
Thank you for modding!!


Heatherfield wrote:

aiaiclala fans

club presents
[Icsa3egr]
音效的思路很混乱,特别是有的clap比较吵.其实还不如舍掉大部分哨子换24clap简单省事有效. = = 话说我当时做这个图的时候不知道24clap 不然可能就那么加了 现在还是算了...
如果还是坚持用normal whistle的话建议着力削减clap的成分.
另外就是排版过于黏糊,new combo的地方把objects移的更远一点,打起来更清爽.要么就直接stack起来,半

近不远的这种style不大适合这歌.特别是有的地方排的,前一个pattern打出的300还没消失,附近或半重叠

的位置又出现了新的note, 估计是改sv的原因= = 一开始是3.0 因为太快了就改成2.4 然后直接rescale了一下

这样也影响你后面pattern的表现力. 表现力什么的...
节奏还不错,下面详细mod下.
00:20:172 (5) - add note ok
00:29:902 (1) - 增加距离 ok
00:44:091 (1) - ^ no
00:45:712 (1) - ^ ok
00:57:064 (1) - ^ ok
01:23:212 (1) - ^ ok
02:15:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议换成更清爽的3/4pattern,其实没必要一直跟那个啪啪啪 啪啪啪 啪啪

啪的鼓,有的地方光跟跟vocal也好的. 我觉得这个pattern挺好的啊= = 至于啪啪啪嘛...... = =lll
02:50:577 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - strange pattern,排的也不好看,在保持你原有思

路的基础上我建议这样 这让我怎么摆... 最后两个圈加了个nc lol
其实觉得全改成circle还好点 = =

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sv太高了,由于没有easy,这个diff显得过难了点 sv什么的... 我想说这个= =
Thank you for modding ^v^

eikkaleyd wrote:

:) From Anshi and eikka's Modding queue :)

[Normal]
感觉拖条速度和AR偏快,还有圈子希望能改成最大的,作为最简单的DIFF考虑一下? normal难度 AR5算很常见了吧... sv什么的感觉还好, 这图bpm不高...
01.02.739 (4)节奏有点乱,感觉下一个(1)反应不过来,最好把(4)和slider放近一些 滑条判定比较松, 这个没关系的ww
02.18.348 (1,2)找不到节奏,最好改成一个slider也许会好读一些 slider要往哪里滑呢,,, = = :)

[Icsa3egr]
00.11.861 (1)这个slider鬼畜成这样真的没问题么(不过出现了很多次应该没问题吧。。【扶额 lol
00.36.185 (1)本身就是3+1连打之后,再放一个note在这个位置会出现读图问题 = =个人感觉还好啊w
00.42.672 (1)在这个蓝色(1)之前加个note 好的~

Good luck~
谢谢modding <3

update tomorrow
Chewin
General:
  1. For the BG I found this: http://puu.sh/9mXB this is the cut v. http://puu.sh/9mXu
  2. Rename the "L_Ps hard" in "L_Ps Hard"
Normal:
  1. AR-1
  2. CS Large
  3. 00:07:604 (3) - Improve the shape: http://puu.sh/9mY4 2nd waypoint at x128 y288, 3rd x208 y288 and last x236 y236
  4. 00:11:658 Add circle
  5. 00:27:469 Add a slider 1/2
  6. 00:34:158 Add circle
  7. 01:25:848 Add slider 1/2
  8. 02:04:361 Spinner?
  9. This map is so "empty".. Add something that fits the song D:
L_Ps hard:
  1. 00:17:131 (3) - Overlap it with slider http://puu.sh/9mZW
  2. 00:44:902 (1,1) - Use 1 spinner or make something here. 2 spinners are so hard lol
  3. 01:13:483 (6) - 2nd waypoint 1 grid left
  4. 02:07:807 (2,4) - 1 grid down
  5. 02:45:712 (6) - 2nd waypoint 1 grid left
  6. Good map :3
Icsa3egr:
  1. 00:03:550 (1) - No new combo
  2. 00:05:171 (1) - ^
  3. 00:14:091 (1) - distance snap it?
  4. 01:40:848 (4) - new combo, 'cause you use it on the next triplet.
  5. 01:52:199 Map here o.o This is the most important piece of the song lol
  6. 03:03:144 (2,3,4) - distrance snap
Good luck :D
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Chewin wrote:

General:
  1. For the BG I found this: http://puu.sh/9mXB this is the cut v. http://puu.sh/9mXu = = um... let me think about it, cool BG anyways
  2. Rename the "L_Ps hard" in "L_Ps Hard"
Normal:
  1. AR-1
  2. CS Large I don't like the circle too large... = =
  3. 00:07:604 (3) - Improve the shape: http://puu.sh/9mY4 2nd waypoint at x128 y288, 3rd x208 y288 and last x236 y236 ok
  4. 00:11:658 Add circle
  5. 00:27:469 Add a slider 1/2
  6. 00:34:158 Add circle
  7. 01:25:848 Add slider 1/2
  8. 02:04:361 Spinner? OAO I don't want to add more notes because this is 2.99 stars already... don't want to go over 3 ww
  9. This map is so "empty".. Add something that fits the song D:
Icsa3egr:
  1. 00:03:550 (1) - No new combo = = why, what's the point
  2. 00:05:171 (1) - ^
  3. 00:14:091 (1) - distance snap it? it will go to the other side? = =
  4. 01:40:848 (4) - new combo, 'cause you use it on the next triplet. ok
  5. 01:52:199 Map here o.o This is the most important piece of the song lol [color]...... = = I think the most important part is "meow" so naw wwwwwwww[/color]
  6. 03:03:144 (2,3,4) - distrance snap [color]1.5x scaled[/color]
Good luck :D
Thx for modding
M a n a
[Normal]

SPOILER
I think 1,50 Slider tick rate is too hard for normal diff...
00:13:483 (2) - Don't mix all hitsound. Its noisy?
00:28:077 (1) - Distance is too close...
01:14:091 (2) - Finish instead of clap at the begining?
01:16:118 (2) - Remove finish
01:40:848 (2) - Add clap?
01:41:658 (3) - ^
03:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - Don't mix all hitsound.

[L_P's Hard]

SPOILER
02:36:185 (8) - NC? (if you accept this RNC at 02:36:794)
Overall nice :)

[Isca3egr]

SPOILER
00:16:118~00:18:753 - Why there's no hitsound?
01:14:091 (2) - I don't if this slider overlap the sliderbody (3),Move it some where?
01:14:496 (3) - Remove finish at the begining.
01:16:118 (5) - Add clap?
01:29:091 (4) - ^
01:36:185 (1) - Too close with (6),move it somewhere.
01:40:037 (1) - Add finish at the begining?
02:05:983 (3) - Add finish?
02:27:064 (1) - Add finish at the begining?
02:33:550 (4) - ^
03:05:983 (1,2,1,2) - Finish instead of whistle?

Thats all~
Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

M a n a wrote:

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I think 1,50 Slider tick rate is too hard for normal diff... it's ok I think
00:13:483 (2) - Don't mix all hitsound. Its noisy? meow
00:28:077 (1) - Distance is too close... It's ok, for the last combo has already faded out
01:14:091 (2) - Finish instead of clap at the begining? don't sound good lol
01:16:118 (2) - Remove finish ? = =
01:40:848 (2) - Add clap? naw www
01:41:658 (3) - ^ added finish
03:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - Don't mix all hitsound. I like this style www

[Isca3egr]

00:16:118~00:18:753 - Why there's no hitsound? added a whistle
01:14:091 (2) - I don't if this slider overlap the sliderbody (3),Move it some where? nawwwww
01:14:496 (3) - Remove finish at the begining. yay ok
01:16:118 (5) - Add clap? ok
01:29:091 (4) - ^ whistle is better
01:36:185 (1) - Too close with (6),move it somewhere. naww
01:40:037 (1) - Add finish at the begining? no
02:05:983 (3) - Add finish? ok
02:27:064 (1) - Add finish at the begining? no
02:33:550 (4) - ^ no
03:05:983 (1,2,1,2) - Finish instead of whistle? I like whistle

Thats all~
Good Luck :)
Thanks for modding~
Shohei Ohtani
Overall:
Your combo colors kinda don't fit the background.

Insane:
00:11:962 - Hello unfitting sped-up slider
01:10:502 - ^
01:41:658 (4) - Needs moar symmetry. My best suggestion is to use a large grid size, and make symmetrical sliders like that >:3~
01:52:199 - Kinda random for a break o-o
02:49:767 (4) - NC
02:51:388 (6) - ^
02:55:645 (1) - WHY MUST YOU COME BACK TO HAUNT ME

Hard:
00:51:388 (3) - Unsymmetrical D:. Here's how it looks turned 45 degrees~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189248 .
03:05:577 (4) - Hidden Repeat!~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189252

Normal:
00:21:591 (1) - Not moe!
00:26:253 (4) - ^ Symmetry!
00:34:564 (1) - ^
00:51:388 (2) - ^
00:54:023 (1) - ^

Mostly your sliders kinda piss me off, but I just pointed out the most noticable. I like the background though. Moe >w<~.
L_P
YAAAAA!!! i was slackin....and now AHHHHH!!!
fixed all except

Suzully wrote:

[L_Ps Hard]

  • Rename to "L_P's Hard". lol i like L_Ps
  1. 02:35:172 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too difficult as hard diff... not really.....i made FC and my rank is 25000
  2. 03:05:577 (4) - The repeat is hidden by combo burst. That's is now unrankable so you have to change the pattern.
um...i know, this is to satisfy some troublesome MATs... i think you know what i mean

Heatherfield wrote:

[L_Ps hard]
OD+1 lol no
00:21:591 (1,2,3,4) - spacing um
00:45:712 (1) - ends at 00:46:352
if you are adding NC by vocal, then just do it all the time, the current pattern is so messed up
...不胜枚举,后面不挑了,自己重新整理一下NC的思路吧 um...我會好好反省的(真的嗎?)
03:05:577 (4) - this kind of trap is NOT interesting to play 我也知道,這是預備給mat噴的
其實我並不怎麼在乎NC...那只是爲了方便看而已的東西

eikkaleyd wrote:

[L_Ps hard]
02.37.406 (2)减少一次reserve 哦忘了!但是那不叫reserve,叫repeat.reserve是預備的意思
02.42.672 (3-7)这种距离很大的连打不应该出现在H难度里面的,请把每个NOTE的距离缩小 吶呐呐。。。

Chewin wrote:

General:
[*]Rename the "L_Ps hard" in "L_Ps Hard"[/list] oh sure...
L_Ps hard:
changed everything
[*]Good map :3 youre right XD[/list]

M a n a wrote:

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[L_P's Hard]
SPOILER
02:36:185 (8) - NC? (if you accept this RNC at 02:36:794) um...changed the NC system
Overall nice :) :)
DOne CDFA's mod

ok all done.....and btw, plz help me to change it to "L_Ps Hard"

Download: Hatsuki Yura x Tsukiko - Jewel Cat ([CSGA]Ar3sgice) [L_Ps hard].osu
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

CDFA wrote:

Overall:
Your combo colors kinda don't fit the background. lol

Insane:
00:11:962 - Hello unfitting sped-up slider I think it fits well
01:10:502 - ^ ^
01:41:658 (4) - Needs moar symmetry. My best suggestion is to use a large grid size, and make symmetrical sliders like that >:3~ sure
01:52:199 - Kinda random for a break o-o 0v0
02:49:767 (4) - NC oh right
02:51:388 (6) - ^ lol no
02:55:645 (1) - WHY MUST YOU COME BACK TO HAUNT ME >w<

Normal:
00:21:591 (1) - Not moe! >w<
00:26:253 (4) - ^ Symmetry! fixed
00:34:564 (1) - ^ fixed
00:51:388 (2) - ^ fixed? = =
00:54:023 (1) - ^ I think this one fits lol

Mostly your sliders kinda piss me off, but I just pointed out the most noticable. I like the background though. Moe >w<~.
Thanks for modding~
Drazors
Mod your map (via Mod queue Request with High Priority)

General
1. No Kiai Time? Recommendation : 02:33:550 - 02:46:523
2. Combo Colour doens't match with background.
3. Set Bookmark / Preview Point

Normal
-------------------
02:33:550 (3) - New Combo
02:17:739 (4) - Unstack
02:43:685 (3) - Unstack
03:05:983 (1) 'til 03:07:402 - Change to Spinner (Too plain if you keep the circle)

L_P's Hard
-------------------
00:57:064 (3) - End of Slider, give Whistle and Clap
01:03:145 (2) - Move to X:304, 336 for Constant Spacing 1.19x
01:20:172 - Reverse -> Give Whistle
01:23:415 (4) - Starts Slider -> Give Whistle
03:07:199 (6) - Make it a crumpled Slider.(If you want)

Icsa3egr
-------------------
HD : +1
OD: -1
00:11:861 (1) - Too fast. @_@
00:23:415 (2) - Unstack
01:10:239 (1) - Too Fast.
02:55:645 (1) - Too Fast.
Give More Break. This is very hard.

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Keep Going [CSGA]Ar3sgice! Good enough, but for Icsa3egr, I'm very confuse with it, and it's very hard :oops:
So that's all of my mod. Hope you enjoy
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

razorleaf wrote:

Mod your map (via Mod queue Request with High Priority)

General
1. No Kiai Time? Recommendation : 02:33:550 - 02:46:523 only 13 seconds? = = that's almost none. Maybe you got the feeling like me too, this song is either no kiai or all kiai 0.0 I've seen many songs with no kiai or just 1 second fountain only, so I guess it's fine.
2. Combo Colour doens't match with background. which color? hard/insane are different 0.0
3. Set Bookmark / Preview Point there is one preview point already? for bookmarks they are not necessary I think

Normal
-------------------
02:33:550 (3) - New Combo different from the next one? = =
02:17:739 (4) - Unstack naw www
02:43:685 (3) - Unstack naw www
03:05:983 (1) 'til 03:07:402 - Change to Spinner (Too plain if you keep the circle) imo 2 secons spinner is too short for newbies

Icsa3egr
-------------------
HD : +1 NOOOOOOO
OD: -1 but OD should = AR-2? = =
00:11:861 (1) - Too fast. @_@ no change @_@ (lol)
00:23:415 (2) - Unstack sounds reasonable 0.0 but I don't know where to put it, so didn't change
01:10:239 (1) - Too Fast. no change @_@ (lol)
02:55:645 (1) - Too Fast. no change @_@ (lol)
Give More Break. This is very hard. I think it's easy enough, I can pass it with rank B, and I'm#35000

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Keep Going [CSGA]Ar3sgice! Good enough, but for Icsa3egr, I'm very confuse with it, and it's very hard :oops:
So that's all of my mod. Hope you enjoy
Thanks for modding~
kosiga
hi~

form my queue

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song folder - remove osb file
[Normal]
  1. CZ -1 (Please lower it than hard ><;)
  2. 00:07:604 (3) - more beautiful curve ↓ try
    48,208,7604,2,0,B|64:236|112:256|160:236|176:208,3,150
  3. 00:15:104 (1) - use 00:14:091 (3) - copy (Ctrl+C,V,H,<)
  4. 00:18:348 (1) - spacing too far (0.88x)
  5. 00:32:334 (2) - 1/1beat stack. The beginner is confused to be different from other stack in rhythm. plz not stack
  6. 00:37:199 (2) - spacing too far (0.87x) move x168,y172 and plz follow after
  7. 00:45:712 (3) - ^ (0.88x)
  8. 00:57:267 (1) - ^ (1.35x)
  9. 01:01:321 (2) - not stack plz >< . difficult for a beginner
  10. 01:05:780 (2) - change repeat slider ? 01:05:780~01:07:402 ( repeat part 01:06:591)
  11. 01:26:456 (1) - spacing too far (0.89x)
  12. 01:45:712 (1) - ^ (0.87x)
  13. 01:49:767 (2) - spacing too close (0.6x)
  14. 01:51:388 (1) - kick slider. difficult for a beginner. change two slider.
  15. 02:27:064 (2) - same 00:32:334
  16. 03:03:956 (4) - spacing too far (0.91x)
  17. 03:04:361 (1,2) - very difficult for a beginner. :( remove one repeat. http://puu.sh/9Hqo
hi~ L_P :)
[L_Ps Hard] ⇒ L_P ' s Hard
  1. 00:34:361 (2) - spacing too far. I think that DS1.0x is better
  2. 01:03:550 (4) - use DS 1.1x ?
  3. 02:38:719 (2) - spacing too close. When it is same DS because rhythm is different, I am confused >:(
  4. 03:05:577 (4) - unrankable.lol When reverse hides, do not see it by a hitburst
[Icsa3egr]
  1. HD+1
  2. 00:46:321 - add circle
  3. 01:48:348 (6,7) - move tick. remove 6 circle. and 01:48:550&01:48:753 add circle
Good luck ~ :)
GabrielRKF
Hmm... Only a few detales~


Normal

00:40:848(1) - Doesn't matter how many times I listen to it, I always think that you make something similtar to what you did at 00:44:091. Slider hitting the white(00:40:848), blue(00:41:152) and red(00:41:456) ticks of the timeline, then a note 1/2 after.
It's not a major error but I reeeally would like to see you change this part. On the rest of the song, the sequence 1/1 notes is smooth and easy to read. But here it doesn't really fit...

01:00:510(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part feels funny. Here is one idea: first, start the first (2) to 1/2 later(01:01:523) and make it end at 01:01:929. Then move the second (1) to 1/2 later(01:03:145) and end it at 01:03:550. And finally make the second (2) start at 01:03:956 and end it at 01:04:361. This way, the gameplay doesn't really follow the voice but it's nicier to play.

01:05:780(2) - Should end at 01:07:604. Sounds really bad the way that is now.

01:39:226(1) - Same as 00:40:848.

Hard

01:10:239(1) - Sounds bad. Please, end it at 01:10:442(1/2 earlier)

01:10:848(1) - No need for New Combo here.

02:38:415(1,2) - Wrong spacing. Makes read the timing wrong.

02:57:875(1,2,3,4) - Note places can be improved. Copy the (1), paste at the (2)'s time and press Ctrl + <. Do the same with the other 2 notes left.

03:05:577(4) - Impossible to read. Take of the reversion or change the pattern.

Art4873tr87t3gi gsnsf;;

00:11:861(1) - Totally unecessary speed up. It's not only weird, it also plays bad. Please, remove it.

01:10:239(1) - ^

02:55:645(1) - ^

New Combos really annoy me... Imagine how bad would it be to play it on Tag...

Good luck :]

ps.: Sorry if there is anything similar to what the person above me told. This time I didn't read the other mods ):
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